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Manju

@MJV2

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Brilliant Shobhana 👍🏼
Part 4. ...perfect DBC..typical SURYA 😳 Happy that sandy realised the important of their relationship 👍🏼
Part 5...Suraj turning romantic 😳 😳 . Precap... 😲 DBC ka side effect 😆 😆
SURYA... never get enough of them...pls post ur nxt part soon 😉

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thala

@thala

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

shobi iam liking this equal to the show

wow superb yaar

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S Shobhana

@slodkagila

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

@ Manju - Thanks SURYA SURYA we are sailing on the same boat😉

@ Akka - Thank u - Loving it equal to DABH 😛 Thank u i'm humbled by ur comments😊

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Deebz

@Deebz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Shobhana, You are making all dabhians' dreams come true. Bhabho's real feelings explained, Sandhya talking to Ankita, getting inspiration from a real Police officer, the perfect dbc and now, uh oh, is she pregnant?

Very well written, reads perfectly as a screen play. Cvs can just pick this up and run with it.

Edited - The best part, Sandhya loves Suraj more than he loves her! That is what I am waiting to see.😊

Edited by Deebz - 12 years ago

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Diya_DB

@Diya_DB

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Sissy!!! 🤗 You made my day!!! 😃 This is PERFECT!!!! ⭐️

Part 2: Suraj expanding his business👍🏼 Really well scripted!!!

Part 3: Sooo glad you brought Ankur-Ankita to the plot!!! Loved the convo between Ankita and Sandhya!!! It's perfect👏!!! I feel CVs will also do something on similar lines!!!

Part 4: SaRun conversation 👏 SurYa conversation 👏👏👏 Wish you were part of the CVs coz this is just perfect ⭐️⭐️⭐️ You've narrated it very well 👏 No disappointment at all 😉

Part 5: I liked it a lot!!!😃 Sandhya coming 2nd; SurYa all playful and comfortable; and most important - story moving forward⭐️ About precap: Is Sandhya pregnant?😳

Part 6: Can't wait for it 😃

This is a masterpiece Sissy ⭐️ The pace is wonderful, the bonding of RP is appreciable, there is attention to detail like showing segments of Bhabho-Emily, etc etc...👏 Your stories have truly justified the title👏 Keep writing 👍🏼

Edited by Diya_DB - 12 years ago

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S Shobhana

@slodkagila

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

@ sissy thank u so much Waiting for ur Siggy😉

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Diya_DB

@Diya_DB

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Sissy!!!!!! Here's your siggy!!!!!! Hope you like it 😳

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-Liebe-

@-Liebe-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

perfect siggy for soapu's ff..diya..lovely one...

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Diya_DB

@Diya_DB

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: udnis
perfect siggy for soapu's ff..diya..lovely one...

Her FF is perfect ⭐️ So my siggy has to justify it na 😉

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UMDU

@UMDU

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Wow, so many romantic moments with a hint of pregnancy in the end.👏. Aisa humare DABH creatives kyon nahi soch paate...😡 Can't they take ideas from the forum and judging our mood give us a story based on that...Excellent work Shobana.👍🏼

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