FF: Chalenge Hum Saath Saath Last part on pg 20

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UMDU

@UMDU

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Super duper hit movie. Yes as Bharati said I felt like watching a movie. You have done an excellent job. Accept my compliments. It has everything that I always want to see in DABH. Waiting for the CVs to take note. One or two things they did copy from you. I am observing that with a hawk's eye. God bless you Beta. May you write many more such FF.⭐️

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Arooj

@aroojakhtar

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

well written ... SUPERB JOB!!!!

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Deebz

@Deebz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Excellent job Shobhana!👏👏👏 Emotional but still happy ending!

Wonderful FF. SurYa are perfectly portrayed. Thanks for making Bhabo behave the way she really wants to behave but does not on the show. Yay for Chotu too!

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S Shobhana

@slodkagila

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

@ Bharti ka Thank u so much. Hope to write some OS😛

@ Ami - Thank u for commenting😃

@ Manju di Thank u😛

@ Uma ji thanku for supporting me & advising me & correcting my mistakes😃

@arrooj akthar - thank u😛

@Deebz ji Thank u so much😛

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-Liebe-

@-Liebe-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

shobana...brilliant ff 👏and ending was perfect...wt i want to see in dabh,u just gave it in ur ff...so i want cvz to show more than ur ff...but they will use some scenes from ur ff...also post ur ff oh SS ph fb...they should to read this to knw how dabh member s have same talents like them...

i hope u will come up with another ff on surya...this time i want to see surya in different story,situation but characters remains to be same..as they r diya baati na...

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Sarayu_Devi

@Sarayu_Devi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Wonderful FF Shobhana!!👏👏👏

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alexxa

@alexxa

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Great work, Shobhana_dabh! I have enjoyed your ff very much. Thank you! It shows that you put a lot of effort in it! Congrats!

I remember my first visit days on IF, while reading threads, I have found out that for Sandhya to become IPS it means separation for SurYa! As I couldn't ever imagine a relationship to work, when the two involved are away from each other, most of the time, at that moment I could only see a sad end for SurYa; the couple I grew so fond of in such a short time! I felt sad though I was continuously saying to myself it is "just" a show!

Just wanted to say that your ff made me think of that moment and thought it would have been so good to read it at that point!...To relief my "sadness" 😊