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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Very nice.You all have an excellent creative spirit you must explore it by writing frequently.Mujhe ek hi cheez parishan karta hain.Hum to likhte rehte hain per CVs ka us per koi asar nahi hota.We ask for a full cake of romance and they give us crumbs.Such wonderful romantic ideas are given by the audience why don't they take it from here. Suraj and Sandhya meet each other every day alone many a times,Could not they manage even a kiss?Shaadi ke itne din baad bhi kuch nahi hua.Kab tak palm chuma, gadda fight aur poncha fight se behlate rahenge?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
amazing FF...please continue...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13

updated :)

Scooter Romance

Sandhya finished off the last of the dishes and went into the kitchen to make tea. The tea was made and everyone was coming from what they were doing. Sandhya placed all the food on Suraj plate in a heart shape.Everyone was at the living room drinking tea when Sandhya realised Suraj hadn't come.Sandhya kept looking at the door then the plate of food, but Suraj didn't come. Sandhya stepped forward,when Bhabo said "Bindini,Meenakshi baby is on its way and we haven't done no preparation,do one thing go out with Suraj and buy some clothes for the baby" Sandhya looked towards the door and smiled,Sandhya smiled and said "Ji Bhabo I will go after I have put all these dishes away".

Sandhya picked up everyones cups and plates and took them to the kitchen.Suraj tea and food was still on the tray.Sandhya placed the dirty dishes to be cleaned and returned to the kitchen.Sandhya placed Suraj tea in a thermostat to keep warm and put his food in a container.She placed the food in a heart shape in the box and put the two thing in a bag. Sandhya cleared everything and ran upstairs to get ready.

Suraj came home with his hands behind his back and took his shoes off.He looked around wondering where Sandhya had gone.Suraj looked outside to make sure she wasn't coming,Sandhya ran down the stairs,grabbed the bag and bumped into Suraj.

Suraj and Sandhya held each other,tight from falling.Sandhya head locked with Suraj neck and shoulder.Suraj head resting on top of Sandhya.None of them realised that there things had fallen on the floor.Sandhya hands slowly went up to his shoulders,Suraj hand and arms wrapped around Sandhya waist.Sandhya eyes were shut tight as she stood in Suraj arms.

Slowly Suraj pulled away from Sandhya making sure she wouldn't see what he had brought for her.Sandhya smiled sweetly and picked up her bag,Suraj picked up his bag and forgot to hide it but Sandhya was too lost in his eyes to even see he had something in his hands.Sandhya said "Suraj ji Bhabo told us to go to the market and get Meenakshi baby some clothes" Suraj smiled and said "ji Sandhya lets go". Suraj and Sandhya went outside to the scooter.Sandhya sat on the scooter and placed the bag on her lap.Suraj smiled and said "Sandhya ji I brought you something" Sandhya looked at the bag,Suraj gave the bag to Sandhya.She took out a book with a picture of her,Suraj,Bhabo and Bhabasa at the front. Sandhya opened the book.Suraj looked at the book then at Sandhya and said "These are all the pictures from Singapoure" She smiled and saw pictures from Singapore like pictures of Bhabasa eating food and Bhabo looking angry, Brandon hugging Bhabo and a Suraj dancing with Sandhya.

Chotu walked passed.Suraj stopped him and said "Chotu can u take this album and put it in our room I will show Bhabo and the family when we come back" Chotu took the book and ran inside the Rathi house.Suraj sat on the scooter and placed his helmet on.Suraj started the scooter and rode off. They were driving on the road when Sandhya heard a noise.Sandhya was puzzled.Suraj looked round and said "I haven't eaten Sandhya ji" and smiled. Sandhya gave him a cheeky smile.

Suraj was looking at the road when a he saw Sandhya hand with a Pakora.Suraj took a bite. "Thank you,Sandhya ji you knew I would be hungry". Sandhya smiled and said "Suraj ji if I don't know who else will know" Sandhya poured a cup of tea and slowly help Suraj drink it. Suraj stopped at a traffic light and said "Sandhya ji dont you want to eat" Sandhya put the cup in the bag and said "I am fine Suraj ji" Suraj looked round put his hand in the bag and took out a small pakora "Sandhya ji have this" Suraj fed Sandhya.

Suraj parked the scooter under the tree.Suraj held his hand out,Sandhya took his hand and climbed off the scooter.The wind blew,Sandhya palu (end of Sandhya sari) flew on Suraj and Sandhya face.They stared in each other eyes,still holding each other's hand.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Home alone

The sun shone beautiful yellow and orange into the rooms of the Rathi house.It had just turned 6 and Sandhya opened her eyes. She rubbed them softly and looked to her left and saw what she loved most.Suraj.He looked so cute whilst sleeping.She edged towards him and slowly kissed him on his forehead.She slowly stepped off the bed,the pillows moved around straight. She went to have a shower.

10 minutes later Suraj woke up but still had his eyes closed.Suraj hugged Sandhya pillow and said "Sandhya,your so soft im scared to hug too tight"Sandhya entered the room and found Suraj hugging her pillow.Sandhya folded her arms and smiled at Suraj as he carried on talking. "Sandhya you should always wear this sari it feels very soft".Sandhya burst out laughing.Suraj opened his eyes and looked around,he saw the pillow in his arms and looked straight at Sandhya. Looking into each other eyes they laughed.


Sandhya started washing the dishes while Bhabo and the rest of the family had tea and breakfast.The phone rang,Bhabo went to answer it.Bhabo came in the hall and said "Everyone listen i forgot Daisa has a small pooja at the Mandir for the ladies and me and Meena beendani will go,Chavi you are going to college,Mohit your going office,Vikram has to go to the stock market to get the sari stock,Suraj is going to the Shop,Chaturi has to get the shopping and Sandhya will have to stay at home,hurry up everyone before we all get late"

Are promos misleading?

Everybody started going to get ready when bhabasa said "what about me Santosh what do i have to do" Bhabo looked around and said "You just go and read the newspaper in the alley and eat you paan thats all your good for"Evereyone started leaving to do the days work.Sandhya carried on washing the dishes when she noticed nobody was there.She smiled to herself and carried on with her work.

Sandhya saw a stain on one of the dish,she started rubbing the dish harder but it was hurting her hand,she carried on rubbing when she saw Suraj hand go ontop of her she looked up and said "Suraj what are you doing her " Suraj smiled and said "Sandhya im doing my life work,helping my wife"



She smiled and let him carry on rubbing the dish. 10 minute later they had finished.Sandhya looked at Suraj and saw he had a black mark on his cheek."Suraj you have" and she thought she would play with him abit."Suraj you have a black mark here"and pointed at his chin,Suraj touched his chin and said "has it gone" she smiled and said "no Suraj its here" she pointed at his forehead.Suraj touched it and said "has it gone now Sandhya" Sandhya smiled and wiped the mark of Suraj face slowly.Suraj and Sandhya looked into each other eyes and hugged each other.


Hope you enjoyed guys and next weeks ff:The ring
Please comment :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
That was sooo sweet! 😳 Loved the humour and Suraj hugging the pillow thinking it is soft soft Sandhya 😉 😳 My favourite bit! 👏 Also, the way they hugged at the end sooo sweet! 😳 Didnt want it to end at all! 😭 Cant wait for the next part! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
nice FF👍🏼
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
wow.nice update.soft sandhya.oh its so cute.y u stopped it plz continue na.next part ring,suraj is gng to propose hir love 2 sandhya.waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Nice... Very nice...!!! 👍🏼 But why didn't you complete home alone...😔
Complete it... Cant wait...!!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The Ring

Suraj and Sandhya were sitting on the bed staring into each other eye. Sandhya had her hands wrapped around Suraj hands. Sandhya and Suraj couldn't take their eyes off each other. Suraj stomached grumbled. Sandhya looked to Suraj stomach and put her hand on his stomach and said "Suraj ji you sound hungry I'll just go and get you something to eat" Sandhya stood up and was getting off the bed Suraj didn't let go of her hand but pulled her towards him. Sandhya fell into Suraj lap. Suraj slowly moved her hair out of her eyes and put them behind her hair. Suraj smiled and whispered in her ear "Sandhya I'm only hungry for you, my stomach rumbled because I blinked" Sandhya smiled and said "Suraj ji people should learn excuses from you, I'll bring your food and will be right back".Sandhya pointed to the corner of the room and said "Suraj ji look at that"Suraj turned round to see what she wanted to show him,Sandhya got up and ran out the door Sandhya shouted "Suraj ji would you like chatni or achaar" Suraj turned round and Sandhya had gone. Suraj smiled.

Suraj lay on the bed looking at the ceiling.He remembered Sandhya smiling when he got through the competition in Delhi,she smiled when they both said "I Love you" and then he remembered her smile when the head inspector placed his uniform cap on Sandhya head.Suraj sat up and imagined it again.Sandhya walked in with a plate full of food and started wondering why Suraj ji was looking so confused and worried. She put the plate on the bed and said "Suraj ji eat something" she touched his hand.Suraj looked at Sandhya and smiled and said "Sandhya only if you eat with me" Sandhya smiled and placed the plate infront Suraj broke a piece of roti and dunked in dhal and fed Sandhya.Sandhya ate it and smiled. Sandhya broke off a piece of roti and dunked it in dhal and fed Suraj. They both staring at each other eye never looking away even when dunking the roti in the dhal.

The next day Suraj was at the shop frying samosa.When he glanced up to the terrace and saw Sandhya putting wet clothes out.Suraj smiled and waved to her to come down.Sandhya nodded and told him to come up.Suraj looked around and shook his head no,and again he waved for her to come down.Sandhya put the last Kurta up to dry and nodded yes.Suraj smiled and went behind the counter to serve a costumer.

Sandhya came downstair trying to put her pallu on her head. Sandhy placed the bucket near the kitchen and headed to for Suraj.Chavi came and stopped Sandhya and said "Bhabi I am really confused can you help me with this question please my first exam is tomorrow please" Sandhya smiled and said "Of course chavi you don't need to beg me I will help you" Chavi headed to her room as Sandhya stood for a few minutes looked at the front door to see if she could see Suraj and headed to Chavi room.Suraj packed his last sweet box and looked at the front door to see if Sandhya was coming.Chavi smiled and said "Thanks Bhabi I understand now it was actually easy" Sandhya smiled and said "Of course just keep using this method and you will never be confused with this topic ever again.Sandhya left when Meena came to the door. Meena looked at Sandhya sari up and down and said "Jetani ji you wear decent sari could you come and help me choose a sari for tomorrow pooja" Sandhya smiled and said "Yes meenakshi lets go" Meenakshi headed for her bedroom whilst Sandhya looked at the front door and frowned.

Suraj looked at the door waiting for sandhya to come.He looked at a box of sweet and Smiled.It was a really big smile.Chotu came and sat next to Suraj and looked at him with a confused face.Then he understood what was happening and why Suraj was smiling at this only box of sweets.Chotu tapped Suraj shoulder and said "Suraj bhaiya Sandhya bhabi likes Jalebi now so why are you going to take laddoo Suraj quickly put down the box and looked at chotu and covered his mouth with his hand. Suraj looked around before saying "Chotu be quite your Bhabi sa could come any minute now2 Chotu smiled and pushed Suraj hand of his mouth "So it is for Bhabi sa,no wonder you have such a big smile" Suraj smiled and said "I gave her laddo because this was the first sweet she ate that I made" Chotu smiled but looked confused and said "When Suraj bhaiya you gave her a different sweet not ladoo" Suraj placed the lid on the box and put it behind the counter and said "Chotu you are getting very noisy now go and do your work before your bhabi sa comes"

Sandhya went into Meenakshi room she saw loads of sari on the bed.Sandhya ran to the one she liked ans gave it to meenakshi and said "Meenakshi i remember Suraj ji wanted me to give him some almonds from the store room,i'll be right back" Sandhya left the room before she could say anything. Sandhya ran to her shoes and left the house.Suraj had just finished serving his last customer. Chotu was leaving with pappuda on the scooter for a order. Suraj looked up and smiled as he saw Sandhya come but then remembered that she was late so pretended to be angry.

Sandhya walked behind the counter and pulled her ears and said "Forgive me Suraj ji" Suraj looked at her and burst out laughing and said "Sandhya i cant be angry at you dont worry come lets sit"

Sandhya sat down Suraj got the box of sweets and sat with Sandhya. Suraj placed the box purposly in front of Sandhya so she would ask if it was for her.Sandhya said "Suraj ji is this for me" Suraj smiled and said yes open it.Snadhy opened it and saw loads of fresh laddoos.Sandhya smiled and looked at Suraj "Suraj ji why have you gifted me lots of laddoo" Suraj smiled back and held Sandhya hand "Sandhya remember the first time you ate my laddoo unintentially because i didnt know it was you,these are for you i know how much you love it.

Sandhya picked up a laddoo and placed it near Suraj mouth,Suraj backed away and said "Sandhya ji these are for you have the first bite tell me how they are made" Sandhya smiled and took a bite "Suraj ji they are beaut..." Sandhy stopped and looked at the half eaten ladoo.Coming out of the ladoo was a ring.Sandhya finished the laddoo in her mouth and said "Suraj ji what is this" Suraj took it out of the laddoo and sai "Sandhya Bhabo chose your engagment ring i didnt have the chance to even buy you one so as a token of my love i want to give a ring from just ME" Sandhya looked him and smiled.Tears were dropping down her face.Suraj wiped the tears and placed the ring on her finger.Sandhy put the box down and hugged Suraj

" Suraj ji WO AYEE NI,I LOVE YOU Suraj ji i love you"



Hope you guys enjoyed

Next ff is called First anniversary

Edited by LakshmiRathore - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Lovely update dear, very much romantic & SurYa simply sizzling in your description. Please continue, I am waiting for more. Nice pictures which gel well with the ff. All in all, nice update dear.

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