ff:Romantic scene 5 Updt pg4 (First Anniversary)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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The bed scene:

Suraj came into the bed room whilst wiping his face with his white towel. He removed the towel and
placed it on the dressing table chair. Suraj looked around the room trying to see where Sandhya was.The clock had just striked 11 and Suraj felt tiried after a long day at work. Suraj started rolling up his sleeves staring at the door. Suraj turned toward the bed and was surprised Sandhya had not come up yet.

He turned toward the mirror to comb his hair with his hands. When a ball of wool touched his foot,Suraj picked it up.He started following the string leading to the terrace.He started rolling the wool making sure
he didn't trip over it. Suraj got to the end of the ball of wool were he saw Sandhya sitting on a small chair holding the end of the wool with knitting needles and some different coloured ball of wool,sleeping.


Suraj stopped to stare at his loving wife.He smiled and said "Sandhya" .Sandhya didnt wake up. Suraj
smiled again and started to collect the wool and needles on her lap.He placed it all on the floor and picked Sandhya up.Suraj stared at Sandhya smiling seeing how beautiful she looked in the moonlight.


Suraj walked to the bed and placed Sandhya on her side of the bed. A strand of hair came towards her face Suraj moved it and placed it behind her ear.Suraj glanced at her one last time before kissing her on the forehead.Suraj turned around to shut the light when Sandhya grabbed his hand.

Suraj turned around,Sandhya had a big cheeky smile on her face."Suraj ji are you not tired" Suraj smiled and said "Sandhya are you still awake,i thought you were sleeping" Sandhya replied "i was but when i heard you say my name my sleep just flew away" Suraj smiled.Sandhya moved up and Suraj lay next to her,he put his arm out on the pillow so Sandhya could sleep on it as a pillow.

Sandhya placed her head on Suraj arm.She looked up at him and smiled romantically. Suraj lay his hand on his stomach,Sandhya held his and rapped her finger round his.Suraj looked down at Sandhya and smiled back.


They both lay in each other arm and feel asleep.Both dreaming about each other :)


Please do comment i am a big DABH fan so i don't mind critisim this is my first ff so it was written badly but the whole time i had Suraja and Sandhya picture in front of me!!!!! if people like these ff i want to write a small,short ff:romantic scenes every Sunday.Please comment or PM any ideas you want written.If you do want me to do this each Sunday please do tell me and if people do,next weeks title will be "ff:romantic scenes 2" and the title will be "Scooter Romance" So stay tuned for next Sunday.
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SAIBALROUTH thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice FF with some sizzling SurYa moments. Loved it. Do continue writing. 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i dont want to be rude na.. but, i think you got a little weird writing skill.. not that im interested in reading this kind of stuffs.. but.. yeah. i was bored, and i had nothing else to do sooo .. 🤢
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was just beautiful! This is the real SurYa! 😳 👏 I loved the way you had pictures describing the scenes! ⭐️ It was sweet and simple! ❤️ Loved how Sandhya held his hand and said that she woke up when she heard him saying her name! That was sooo cute! You are an amazing writer 🤗 please do continue with the next chapter im sure it will be a hit! 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome FF
Beautifull Surya moments
keep writting FF
I loved your idea of adding pics to each scene, it was superb😃
Me waiting for ur next FF "Scooter Romance"
Edited by dunia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautifull FF 👍🏼 looking forward to your next FF 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW!!! It was amazing... Kash ki aisa kuchh serial main bhi dekhne ko milte... Loved the way u used the pictures of them in ur story...👍🏼 Waiting to see how the scooter romance will take place...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You are great dear and it was a lovely surya moment. Keep writing😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice FF! I really liked it!
Can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing,Loved it.Looking forward to Scooter romance

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