Camp Rock~~~~~doing wonders all the way

Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey you, disney lovers...........its Miley_hp here.
You all must have loved the premiere of Camp Rock????



The Jonas Brothers were great and talk about Demi Lovato's versatile voice. Camp Rock 2 will be out soon.
I decided to o something special for my fellow friends on IF.



Here is my ultimate Camp Rock FF. It has got a great plot.
My story has skipped ten years from the movie Camp Rock. The Connect Three, Mitchie Torres, Caitlyn Geller, Tess Tyler, Elle and Peggy Dubre have become successful musicians. All I want you to do is comment on it and read it daily.
HERE I GO.


❤️ Chapter 1❤️

The Connect Three are thrilled, especially Nate. The number one hottie band has achieved success with their album "Monte-Carlo" and are going on an European Music Tour with the Disney Productions, to perform for the Europeans as a part of their publicity campaign.
On the other hand,Nate is thrilled because before leaving for the tour, he wil be engaged to his girlfriend, the new and biggest music producer, Caitlyn Daniels, who will also accompany them for their music tour.
"I wonder where Caitlyn would like to go for our honeymoon. Italy or Paris? where do you expect?" asked Nate, looking at the pamphlet of Europe.
"How am I supposed to know that?" Shane asked, annoyed, who was too busy rehearsing for the shows.
"Maybe she would love to go to Hawaii", proposed Jason.
"But that's at the Pacific Ocean, not within the European Continent", said Nate, stunned.
"Oh......so that is why they have those beautiful beaches there", said Jason, in an awe. Nate ignored him, he always did.
However, Shane continued to play his guitar, but in reality, he was mused in thoughts about someone. "I wonder where Mitchie would have chosed to go? She would have loved to visit Switzerland, she loves mountains."
Then in that precise moment, uncle Brown entered. "You guys ready to ROCK???????????"
"YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" shouted all three of them.
"Then got to the shower and take a bath immediately", instructed uncle Brown.
The three obeyed. Since there were two attached baths, Shane volunteered to be the last on to go. While Nate and Jason were in the shower, uncle Brown took his seat beside Shane.
"You excited about the tour, Shane?" asked uncle Brown.
"Yeah! I am. I've been waiting for such a tour since the time I'd stepped into this profession",replied Shane.
"I knew it, my nephew has the music fever burning inside of him", said uncle Brown and rubbed his hair.
"By the way, who are the ones who'll be accompaning us to this tour?" asked Shane, hoping to get the answer of his question.
"Um....lets see," said uncle Brown, sitting up, "Caitlyn, Tess, Peggy, Elle, Barron and probably, Mitchie."
"PROBABLY?" thought Shane "Can't she even get a month's time out of her busy schedule?" asked Shane.
Uncle Brown had understood this and smiled, "You little fellow!"
"Uncle Brown! I'm not little anymore!" cried Shane "I'm twenty five now! Its high time I should learn how to take care of myself and solve problems for my own", said Shane.
"Yeah! And becoming big means taking a shower before your uncle screams at you!" said Uncle Brown.
Shane obeyed his uncle and went over to take his towel.
Uncle Brown smiled to himself. "That boy would do anything for his love".
Meanwhile, at the Gellar Residence, Caitlyn was trying out all her new clothes for her big night.
"I don't have anything to wear for my engagement night! This is so not right", Caitlyn complained.
Mitchie, who was sitting on her bed and checking out her jewelleries, said in low voice, "You don't have good jewelleries too."
"Thanks! That really helped me out and encouraged me", sneered Caitlyn.
Mitchie laughed and went over and hugged Caitlyn and said, "Ever thought of shopping?"
"I'm not habituated to running around to thousand malls for a perfect dress. I have neverdone this before",siad Caitlyn.
"Well, that's why i'm here", smiled Mitchie.
"You? And shopping?" said caitlyn. "Ever heard of trial rooms, best colour or sparkilng dashes?"
Mitchie hit Caitlyn's arm in a friendly way and said, "I know a lot about shopping. Tess taught me back at Camp Rock."
Caitlyn looked at Mitchie with raised eyebrows and asked, "You still remembered her tips?"
Mitchie had understood where Caitlyn was taking this conversation to. "Look, Caitlyn, whatever happened back then, I surely don't wanna let it happen again. I seriously wanna focus on my music and my career, on my mom and dad and on.........". She stopped.
"....and on Shane Gray", completed Caitlyn.
"Okayyyyy....", pulled Mitchie, smiling. "But I have not heard from him since last month."
"He's probably busy with the tour or maybe with Nate's engagement", said Caitlyn. "And speaking of engagement, we have to leave for the mall right away."
The two friends hurried out of the house. They boarded on Caitlyn's new car and drove rapidly. "I really hope I get something suitable", prayed Caitlyn.
The two got to the mall.
Caitlyn rushed out of the car and was not bothered where the car was going to be parked.
"Caitlyn! Stop! Wait up!" cried Mitchie.
But Caitlyn was too determined to get to the store and buy her dress. "Come on, mitchie! You are too slow", yelled Caitlyn.
Mitchie got out of the car at the parking lot and went to Caitlyn. "Chill Caitlyn! the store won't be closing till the next five hours", said Mitchie.
"I know but.......", Caitlyn did not let herself get to the final point. She pulled Mitchie into the mall.
The 'Springdale' mall was the biggest mall in New York. It had approximately seventy-two stores, including three mega-archades and seven cafes and four multi-cuisine restaurents.
"Let's go to the'Dawn's hot'n' Tell' store. It has got all the bestgowns for wedding occasions", advised Caitlyn.
Dawn's Hot'n'Tell belonged to Madonna Archer, one of the most renowned designer of America. When the two friends got thee, fortunately, it was not so crowded. The helper of the store was posing with a gown in front of the mirror, probably thinkng that she was a supermodel. Mitchie and Caitlyn exchanged looks. Caitlyn cleared her throat and this distracted her attention and she was about to trip and fall.
"Welcome miss...", she stopped and then she realized who they were. "OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its.......its......Caitlyn Gellar and mitchie Torres! I...I.....er.........am your biggest fan............please come inside........try our gowns and dresses", she said and welcomed them inside.
The two went to the wedding colections' section. There were plenty of gowns and dresses. Caitlyn was very confussed about her choice. She simply could not get a clue of which dress she would have to buy. She quickly took ten to fifteen dresses and went inside the trial room. Before closing the door, she turned towards Mitchie and said, "Why don't you but a dress? Something which might impress Shane."
Mitchie smiled and after Caitlyn had closed the door, she figured the idea wasn't bad at all. She knew that Shane's favourite colour was green, so she had to pick up a green dress.
There were plenty of green dresss. At last, she got her favourite. She quickly went inside a trial room and changed. Aftr five minutes, she came out. She wore a green, sleek classic, with a silk flow and a silver sparkling dash around her waist. She looked gorgeous!
Caitlyn came out after some time as well. She wore a red flowing dress, sleeve-less and a tight-fitting silk cloth across her shoulder and a black dash wnt diagonally across her flow.
"You look amazing!" said Mitchie.
"Not as amazing as you", smiled Caitlyn.
They were satisfied.
They went to the counter after changing back to their original outfits.They gathered the money and were in line when suddenly, Caitlyn's cell phone rang. Caitlyn looked at the cell to discover, fortunately, that it was Nate. She excused herself and went to a corner.
"Hello?" she said.
"I went to your house but your step-mom said you are out", said Nate.
"Yeah! I'm at the mall"
"Are you alone?"
"No....Mitchie's with me"
"You could have atleast said that you would go to the mall so I would have brought Shane along with me"
"Look, I'm so sorry.........but the thing is that its related to dresses and stuffs and you won't be so keen to run around the stores like girls do"
"I would.............for you"
"Look.....Mr. I-Will-Do-Anything-For-You.............thisis personal."
"Okay,Okay.......when are we meeting again?"
"Are you busy today?"
"Well.....I was going to go for a promotional but i can always cancel that for you"
"I am not forcing you into it"
"What gives? I'll pick you up at seven. There's a good restaurent opened near the Shrine."
"Oh! And could you please bring Shane along? Mitchie would love to go then"
"Fine........but once we get there, we don't know them"
"Fine with me"
"Love you"
"Love you tones!"
Caitlyn hung up. She went over to tell Mitchie the good news.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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It's pretty good.... but it's Caitlyn Gellar, Tess Tyler and Peggy Dubree.. remember the Final Jam? Ella's last name wasn't mentioned.... i also noticed a few grammar mistakes but it's nothing that you can't fix :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yea, preety good flim i just luv it .
i liked tess, mitchie, shane, mitchie's mom & everyone it's indeed too cool!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yea, great job Miley_hp!! It's a good start...keep going!!! Though I got confused a bit, at the top you wrote Caitlyn Gellar...but then you wrote Caitlyn Daniels. Is that Nate's last name? Just wondering, once again, great job!
Posted: 16 years ago
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Yeah! I got very confussed with the last name of Cailyn............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow so u r writing one too .... all the best .... i m in hurry right nw ... will post my views later after reading ....


edit : wow grt job .. love the plot ..few mistakes like others mentioned ... just fix it .. but i seriously love it and yeh i m ur regular reader .. dnt worry 😉😛
Edited by talkativetaurus - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: talkativetaurus

wow so u r writing one too .... all the best .... i m in hurry right nw ... will post my views later after reading ....


edit : wow grt job .. love the plot ..few mistakes like others mentioned ... just fix it .. but i seriously love it and yeh i m ur regular reader .. dnt worry 😉😛

Thanks a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It's really nice. i like Sane espl here....

Posted: 16 years ago
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Okay guys....here's the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!







❤️Chapter 2❤️

"Are you serious?" asked Mitchie, half-stunned and half-nervous. "But.....but......I'm not ready yet."
"Come'on Mitchie! Don't be spoiled brat! We are going to have a splendid time", said Caitlyn.
mitchie for some odd reason felt a whole lot of bile coming to her mouth, maybe because it was for the hot-dogs she had eaten at the Gellar residence. But she really needed to think about the whole evening program. It was obvious that she did not know how to react when Shane talk to her but she had to do somethig. Her conscience was telling her to face him and talk to him like she did at camp, but her doople-gangler was telling her to stay at home and not face the public humiliation.
"You aren't thinking of staying at home, are you?" asked Caitlyn, with raised eyebrows.
"Ofcourse not!" lied Mitchie. "But what if something bad happens? I mean what if........you konw..."
Caitlyn held Mitchie by the shoulders and said, 'You are not going to back up like this, Mitchie. Shane loves you and you know it. Remember : 'This is real, this is me! I'm exactly where I'msupposed to be now, gonna let the light shine on me!' ?"
Mitchie loved her first composition. She envied it the mostbecause it was this song which made Shane fall in love with her voice. But would she be able to make him fall in love with it again? Especially after ten long years? She felt her heart beating like drums. She heard her inner voice which said, 'Come'on, mitchie, you know you can do it. You are the real me'. YES! She had to. Not for Shane, but for herself.
"Okay! I will. But if only of you lend me you rpair of Italian boots", Said mitchie.
"Deal!" smiled Caitlyn.

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"This is notfair! Why do I have to do the dishes everytime? Can't grandma do it?" yelled a blonde haired, slim and tall-figured girl.
"Honey, you know grandma is ill", said her mother.
"But...but......", said the girl.
"But nothing!" her mother shouted. "You are to do what you are told. Now get to work! And don't forget to dry the dishes as well"
The girl obeyed.
Just as she was about to start, the door bell rang. She igured nobody would volunteered to open it, she had to do it herself.
Standing at the door wearing a blue short dress, was Tess Tyler.
"Hey Janet", Tess said.
"Hi, come in", Janet siad.
"What are you upto? I was wondering if you could manage some time so we could go to the new shopping mall they've opened", siad Tess, keeping her small hand bag at the table.
"Can't, I've got dishes to do", sneered Janet.
"Dishes? Don't you have the maid or your grandma to do those?" Tess asked.
"The maid's got her silly excuses for not showing up and my grandma is sick, as usual"
"That's so unfair of your mom to make you work like that"
"Wow! Thanks supporting me"
"anyways, how's your market plan coming along?"
"Not so well. My boss says that I have done it all wrong though I totally disagree with him'
"Honestly, I think working in a company always seemed quite boring to me"
"But it was because of this company that I got to meet him....."
Janet stopped washing the dishes. She suddenly was lost in thoughts and stared into oblivian.
"You have to forget about him", said Tess. "He's long gone out of your life".
"I know..........but sometimes, I have this strange feeling.....I just canot share it with you........its so strange.......sometimes I really feel that I can't live without him. His curly hair, his voice an eevrything..........its so strange........................"
"Well you have to get over it because you can't get him back", said Tess. "He's someone else's now."
"Huh?" asked Janet.
Tess reahed into her bag and took out the latest edition of the people magazine. She turned to page 5 and showed what was written there.
"See?" said Tess. "Its clearly written here: Nate Daniels, the third member of Connect Three, is getting engaged to Caitlyn Gellar, the new and exceptionally talented music producer of this era".
Tess gave the magazine to Janet. She, with shivering hands, took it from her and read it with her eyes wide open:


"Many of the girls out there may feel very sorry to hear this but they are to loose one of the hottest bachelors in the music world- Nate Daniels. The third member of the music band Connect Three is getting engaged to Caitlyn Gellar, another new and exceptionally talented music producer of this era. The two met at Camp Rock, the most famous musical camp in north America.
The couple decided to get together after Caitlyn achieved success with her debut music album 'There's a place for me', earlier this year. In an interview with us, Nate clearly said, "Caitlyn is a brilliant musician who just wants to produce the best. I am really very happy that she is going to be my fiance and future partner in professional and personal lives. Honestly, I cannot expect anyone better than her." Hope this couple enjoy a great life in future."

Janet looked at Tess with horrified eyes. She felt that the world had totally turned against her.
"How is this possible?" Janet bawled out. "He actually forgot everything about our previous relationship?"
"You two never had any realtionship", said Tes, pointedly. "Remember the time when you told him that you had a crush on him and hope to get together with him, he practically freaked out on you and said that he never loved you just took you to be his good friend. Remember?"
It was true though. Janet Diaro was so taken aback with Nat's beauty that she really felt like being with him. But he did not see her as anyone special in his life.
"You know", Janet said. "it surprises me. Even being so close to so many celebrities through your mother, you still can't get even an inch closer to Shane Gray."
"This is totally different from the current topic", frowned Tes.
"I don't have time to deal with these anymore. I can't go to the mall with you today. See ya!" and saying this Janet continued to do her work again.
Tess figured thta it was no use talking to her in this state of mood. She merely left her with her own tensions and emotions.



Edited by Miley_hp - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
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i'll be updating soon................
Edited by Miley_hp - 16 years ago

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