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Posted: 17 years ago
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guys its my 1st attempt

so plzzzzz dont bash me

its open 2 all i mean anyone can continue it

i m staring from the part where shashank called padma in his cabin

shashank:padma riddhima ko samjhao.wo aisi nai thi.us ladke armaan malik ke waje se ridz badal rahi hai.hospitals ke rules tod rahi hai aur aj to had hi ho gayi maine unhe canteen mein dekha.wo use malish kar rahi thi wo bhi sabke samne😔😔

padma:aap galat samaj rahe hai.wo sirf uski madat kar rahi hogi.dost hai uski.shayad armaan thak gaya hoga isliye wo uski help kar rahi thi.aap plz gussa mat hoyiye.

shashank:main kuch galat nai samaj raha,aj kal armaan bht hi badal gaya hai.achanak sanjeevani chod ke chale jana,phir wapis ana that 2 wid tatoos.phir fight and all its disgusting😔

padma:aapke mann mein armaan ke liye itni karwahat kyun aa gayi.yaad kariye wo din jab riddhima ko kisis apne ki zarurat thi tab wo tha uske saath.

uske pehle patient ke death ke baad wo tha uske saath(assume she knows abt it),adoption ke baare mein pata chalne ke baadh wo tha uske saath,mere operation ke waqt wo tha uske saath.jab jab riddhima ko uski zarurat thi wo uske saath tha ek bht ache dost ki tarah usne hamesha uski madat ki hai to aap kyun use galat samaj rahe hai.

main janti hoon armaan kuch dino se upset tha isliye uska kaam mein man nai tha magar ab to woh kam kar raha hai aur wo nhi pure mann ke saath aur yeh sab aap mane ya nai riddhima ke waje se hua hai.wo dono bht ache dost hai aur ap plz ab kuch galat mat sochiye armaan ke baare mein.

shashnk thinks abt it and then realises that he was wrong

shashank:shayad tum sahi keh rahi ho magar phir bhi ek baar riddhima se baat karlo akhir tum ma ho uski.

padma:teek hai

meanwhile in the canteen the same scene happens which we hav seen

armaan: to aj se ghulami khatam dr.riddhima shashank gupta.

he gets up and starts going out of the canteen when suddenly.....................

plzzzz tell me how it was it was my 1st attempt so plzz forgive me for my mistakes.

if anyone feels 2 continue then ur free 2 do 😊😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ nice yaar
do continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks chalo kisi ne to kuch kaha
warna mujhe lag raha tha ki bht bura hai 😭 😭

koi continue karna chahta hai toh kar sakta hai
😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice one

yakin har rishte ki buniyaad hota hain ,
tut jaaye agar to judna mushkil hota hain ,
kehna aasan hain humain yakin nahi hain tumpe,
lekin dard is cheez ka be-panah hota hain.
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey shalika wow yaar nce yaar
ny 1 cn cont good yaar 1st u cont plzzzzzzzz
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i would hav luved 2
bt now next scene u all must hav guessed is the dance scene and i really don know how 2 write it.
plzzzzzzzzzz koi aur continue karo warna main to sab kuch spoil kar dungi and i also hav 2 go for lunch

so plz koi continue kardo
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yaar i cnt cont now cz i am goi now fr my tution nd cme bck in evening srrry lz koi or cont kardo......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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well i wud also like 2 join but abhi koi aur continue kardo plzz then i will continue coz ryt now m nt gettin nethin up in my mind 2 ryt....itz lyk totally blank 🤢 like likhun toh kya likhun? šŸ˜† plzz sm11 continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey shalika...cant i also be a part of thz ff??
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammyfan_pragati

hey shalika...cant i also be a part of thz ff??

of course yaar

yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai

its open 2 all anyone can become a part of it

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