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Originally posted by: ammyfan_pragati

waah waah waah geet!!!it was so awesum yaar..i found the part reali funny where armaan sings hum honge kamyaab thanx fr bringing isshhhqqqq haii!!! 😳 ...u r reali gud yaar!!!!!i will cont in 15 mins!!

😳😳thank u hai..btw i dunno ur name?

Originally posted by: geet

😳😳thank u hai..btw i dunno ur name?

my name is pragati!!!nd why dont u cont agn??i wnt be able 2 cont..i cnt think of nytn ryt now..!!!

ok...aage.

shubhu:hi hitler..kaisi ho?

krti:hitler..tum hoge..kitni baar bola hai..bachho ki tarah act karte ho tum bhi...

shubhu:kirti..main ek SENIOR DOC hoon,samjhi.main bachha kaise ho sakta hoon.. 😉

krti:shubhankar..mujjhe surgery pe jaana hai...chalo chhodo mujjhe..

shubhu leaves her and goes smiling..

krti:chhod diya...ek dum paagal hai yeh.. 😉


in th elocker room..

atul:mere locker mein aayee ek nanhi pari..meri barkha..kaisi ho tum?aaj main mummy se milvaunga..

angie coming in with rahul..

rahul:ab yeh kaun hai buddy?

atul:barkha yeh hain tumhari mummy...

rahul:atul..i luv u buddy n all but tu kaisi baatein kar raha hai..yaar..log kya sochenge..

atul:arre jo bhi sochhein...haina anjali?

rahul:anjali..tu anjali ko mummy bol raha tha.?

atul:abe mummy hogi teri..meri toh woh hai sirf anjali...aur barkha ki mummy..

atul gets a pager..stuffs barkha in his locker and says c u later and goes..

anjali :dekha rahul..ab main barkha naam ke plant ki mummy ban gayee hoon..never thought life would come to this...

rahul:life is funny angie..u never know kya ho jaaye...


bas..i cant think nemore.. continue some1
plzz
luv ya

awesum geet now i continue...
an-hmm..very funnyy!!!!(thinks abt AR)

speaking of ar let's go and see what they are doing:
armaan-riddhima dawaii khao
riddhima-nahiin...pehle mujhe maa se milna hai(acting like a total kid)
armi-riddhima...maa surgery mein busy hai..tum bhi toh ek dr ho unki majboori samjho.main hoon na tumhare paas
ridz(get's emotional)-tum mera saath kabhi nahiin chodoge na??
armi-nahiin..kabhi bhi nahiin..and kisses her on the forehead
ridz-armaan i am sorry..sorry tumhare upar shak karne ke liye..sori ki tumhe meri wajaah se sanjeevani se nikaala gaya
armi-woh sab puraani bateein hain!!abhi hum ek nayi zindagi shuro karenge..manzoor?he takes out his hand
ridz-manzoor..and sh gives him her hand
armi kisses it and ridz blush
armi-oyyyeee hoyyee!!

unknown to the fact that anjali was outside witnessing everything said and everything done AR were upto to the usual flirtiness
anjali to herself-kuch to hai in dono ke beech mein!!main pataa lagaa ke hi rahoongi....and she enters the ICU
armaan goes away from riddhima
anji-hi ridzy tum kaisi ho?
ridz-theek hoon..armaan ne mera bahut accha khyal rakha hai
arm-meri dost jo ho tum
an-toh tumne ridz k maaf kar bhi diya?
ar-oh 4get it anjie....woh sab puraani bateein hai!!
an-hmm....waise armaan tum aur ridz dost kabse bangaye?
ar-hum to chale the enemies ban ke jane kahaan dost ban gaye...i mean sumwer dwn our fights we just became friends
an-ohhh.....
ridz-dii...plz jab aap maa ko dekhegengi toh unhe foren yahaan bhej dijiyega!!
an-ya sure..anjie's pager ring and she leaves
ridz-armaan
ar-haan riddhima
ridz-mein sirf maa ko humare rishtey ke baare mein bataana chahti hoon aur kissi ko nahiin..abhi ke liye
ar-(is hapi that riddhima now trusts their love enough to tell her mom)ohk

now sum1 elz cont!!!

i just read all da prts...its very nice..fantastic..
plzz cont soon

ok guyzz me givn this a shot....

anjali alone in locker room....thinking about all the times shes seen armaan and ridhima together...acting weird....
atul enters...singing....:anjali...oh meri manchali....
atul: anjali....anjali...(no response)..lagta hai mere barre me sooch rahi hai...
he nudges her shoulder with his (kuch kuch hota hai style)
anjali: kya kar rahe ho atul???
atul: tum mere barre me soochti ho naaa....to mujhe kuch kuch hota hai...
anjali:puhlease...mein Armaan ke barre mein sooch rahi thi 😡 😡
atul: KYA....KYA....KYA...tum apne daywar...pe nazar...anjali kahan me tumhe apni heroine banna raha tha kahan tum K serial ki vamp banne chali ho... 😭
anjali:oh shut up...ab sunno mujhe tumhari help chaheeyai..
atul:tum bol ke to dekho....jaan hazir hai meri janne jahan....
anjali whispers plan to atul
atul: nahi.....kabhi nahi....
anjali:ATUL...... 😡
atul leaves singing "ishq leta hai kaise imtehaan..."

on roof top
armaan:anjali tumne bullaya
anjali: haan armaan...me tumhara kab se wait kar rahi hoon.....janamoo se..(shes trying to control her laughter...)
armaan:kya???
anjali: haan armaan....aaj mujhe mat rooko...aaj tumne apni saali ko bachaa kar mera dill jeet leeya hai...
armaan:KYA??????
ATUL(hiding behind the door): meri manchali kitni achchee acting karti hai....kya baat hai...
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Veryy cute part d101..I'll continue from here..

Anjali:Haan Armaan..Mainey aapni dil ki feelings bohot chupa li hai...Bas aab aur nahi..
Armaan:Anji...Tum kya keh rahi ho..Mujhay kuch samaj nahi araha..
Anjali:Armaan..I love you Armaan..Mujhse shaadi karoge?..
Armaan:WHAT?!Anjali..Tum..I mean..Mainey hamesha yeh socha tha ke tum Atul se pyar karti ho..Tum mujhse..WHAT??!(All confused)..
Atul(To himself):Woh meray se hi pyar karti hai..Main uska Atul hoon..
Anjali:Nahi..Main sirf tumsey pyar karti hoon..Aur tum bhi mujhse pyar kartey ho..
Armaan:Anjali..Nahi..Main tumsey..I don't love you..
Anjali:Chalo..Tum kisi aur se bhi pyar nahi kartey..Shaadi ke baad pyar hojaye ga..
Armaan:Main kisi aur se pyar karta hoon..
Anjali walks up to him and holds his collar..(Over dramatically)
Anjali:Jhoot..Tum meray elava kisi se pyar nahi kartey...Agar kartey ho..Tho naam kya hai uska..
Armaan:RIDDHIMA!
Armaan realises what he just said but doesn't regret it as Anjali was getting out of control..
Anjali and Atul were both shocked..And then Atul came out from behind...And Anjali couldn't stop laughing..
Atul:Tu ne ithni bari baat chupayi hum sab se..Meray se...Main tera bhai nahi tha?
Armaan was all confused..
Anjali:Mainey tum dono ko 'romance' kartey dekh liya tha..Aur phir yeh plan banaya ke tumharey moun se nikalvaye ge..Saari sachai..
Then there's a silence.Nobody knows what to say..Then suddenly Anjali starts laughing..Atul starts laughing..But then they stop when they see Armaan not laughing..Armaan bursts out with laughter and all laugh..

They go down to see Ridz..Rahul and Muskaan are already in there..
Muskaan:Dekhna Riddhima..Tum bohot jaldi changi hojao gi..
Rahul:Haan Riddhima..
Anjali:Hey guys..
Atul:Hi...Kaysi ho Riddhima..Armaan bhi aaya hai..
Ridz seems confused about why he mentionned Armaan..

Someone else can continue...I will write again InshAllah!

😛 loved the story! cant wait to read more!

hey i read all ur part... i must say its amazing..... i was really enjoyed while reading it.... good job guys..... & thx for ur hard work.... i really appericate that....
thx
Rani

i have been reading everyonces parts n all u guysss rockkkk mindblowinggg 👏 👏 👏 plss continue m waiting 😳