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hey awesome part u pragati,yachna di ,geet,kesha di,d101(srry dont knw ur name),dhruv lovdddddd it 👏

now i will cont
ridz was confused why atul took armaan name like tht bt didnt said anything
as ar entered he was giving a sweet smile to ridz,ridz also smiled back and their staring session was interrupted by muskaan
mu-oye riddhima dekha mere hero ne tujhe bachaa liye(she stressed on mere which was neither liked my ridz nor ar)
ra-oye bachaa ke kyu bara kaam nahi kiya samjhi tu
mu-oye kankhujure tujhse kisne baat ki
and then rahul and muski's pager ringed
mu-hitler ka bulava aa gaya chal(they went away)
an-kyu ridzi tumne apni behen ko bhi nahi bataya
ridz was shocked and confused
r- kya di?
an-yeh ki tum or armaan ek dusre so bohut pyaar karte ho
at- ha,yaar ridzi tumne anjali ko kyu nahi bataya
ar- srry riddhima inhe pata chal gaya
r gave him an assuring look
r- di woh(blushing)i am srry bt di plzz abhi yeh baat kisi ko mat baatayiga
an-par idz
r- plz di
an- ok
they all got a page
an- ok nye rdz need to go
an,at went and ar also went after giving a flying kiss



srry i know this part was damn boring its very baakwas srry plzzz 😊

it wasnt bakwaas..

😉
but i cant think of nething..

Originally posted by: kesha2412

Armaan is still in the temple prayin. Atul askes a ward boy about armaan
Atul: hey Mahesh.. tune Dr Armaan ko dekha kya?
Mahesh: haan woh ton ganesh mandir mein hain.
Atul (mouth drops open): kya.. Armaan aur mandir. tu pagal ho gaya hain kya. lagta hain tujhe aapni aanken check karaleni chahiye.
Mahesh: Aap bhi kya Dr Atul. maine kudh unhe dekha hainwahan pe aarti ke waqt. (he leaves)
Atul: Armaan aur mandir. zaroor kuch kadbad hain. He goes tot he temple and sees armaan there prayin. yeh ton sach mein yahan hain. hey baghwan aaj suraj kya paschim se ugga hain kya??
He goes to armaan who is onhis knees. taps on armaan's shoulder. Armaan looks up at him then gets up quickly. Atul starts to check armaan's pulse then his temprature.
Araam: champ yaar tu kya kar raha hain. yeh bata Riddima kaisi hain?
Atul: kya??
A: please champ jokes apart. Riddhima kaisi hain? Yaar agar Riddhima ko kuch ho gaya na ton..
Atul: hey hey hey.. Ridz ka operation successful tha. she is now in ICU under observation.
A (looks at ganesh idol): thank you god.. thank you so much. And starts to leave.
Atul: arrre arre Armaan sun.. Dr Shashank tumse milna chahate hain. unhone tumhe apne cabin mein bulaya hain.
Armaan nods then runs to ICU.
In Ridz room - she is still sedated. no one in her room. Armaan enters. he goes and sits next to her bed. looks at all the Iv lines coming out of her arms. slowly removes a strand of hair from her face.
A: Riddhimaaa.. (caresses her cheek) Riddhima pleasee.. main tumhe aaise nahi dekh sakta. please jaldi se thik ho jao. maine jo tumse kaha.. i didnt mean it Riddhima. Mein tumhare bina nahi reh sakta. I love you so much.. tuhe pata nahi ke tum memre liya kya ho. tum meri zandagi ho Riddhima. Ilove you riddhima... i love you.
Armaan kisses her hand. Ridz fingers move. Armaan looks up at her. Ridz calls his name sofly.

Hope you like it guys. some one plz continue,
Love
Kesha

verrry nice kesha..............u r 2 in 1..thye other FF of urs is also very interesting.

hey guys you all are simply great....I read the entire FF in one go... 👏

hmmmmmm....lets c

atul hitting armaan on da shoulder....:yaaar pehli baar mujhe eco-friendly hoonne ka gum hai.. 😭
armaan: kyun kya hua champ???
atul: kahan me dhere dhere apni cycle pe anjali ke dill ki ghanti bajanne ki koshish me lagga tha....aur kahan tu meri hi advice ke petrol se ridz ko ferrari mein ghuma raha tha..
armaan: kya???
atul:kya subhe se kya kya laga rakhaa hai....bahut sarre serial dekh leeyee kya??
atul:(remembering da roof scene) aur yaad rakh...chchotti teri...lambii meri...galat station par mat uttariyo.....

meanwhile ridzzz room...

shashank: beta challo meri dr. keerti se baat ho gayyee hai..(discharge papers in hand)...sabh pack kar lo
ridzz: par dad.....
shashank: haan????
ridz: kuch nahi...woh mein to bas..woh..
shashank still waiting for ridz to finish
ridz: woh dad dii ko to batta diya???
shashank: beta woh armaan ke saath srgery mein hai...usse baad me batta denge...ab chalo..


1/2 hr later armaan comes to room...
its empty......
he turns around...worried....goes to nurse station...anjali n atul there
turns to anjali: ridhima....ridz..(really worried)
atul: (coming between them) abbee salle subeh bataya tha na.....galat station...galat station...
armaan:(finally getting thoughts together) nahi yaar...ridz room me nahi...kahi nahi....
anjali: haan woh to discharge ho gayee..
armaan: kya
atul: phir kya...yaar naya word bol...bore ho gaya

armaan walks off...angry..thinkin...mujhe bataya bhi nahi...takes out his phone..calls...

ridhimas room...mobile rings.....before she can pick up....shashank comes in n takes mobile away...
shashank: no calls only rest...doctors orders...
ridz: but dad...dad sunno to...

shashank walks offf

armaan: huh mera phone nahi utthaya... 😡 😡 😡

next scene----armaan climbing up da pipe
ridzz sees him enter
ridz: armaan, tum yahan??
armaan:wahi to mein keh raha hoon...tum yahan??? 😡
ridz holds her earsn mouths sorry...(ishq leta hai playing in bg..) armaan moves towards her...takes her hands off her ears...holding them..moves closer...kisses her forehead..:missed you 😳 😳
ridz blushes....n suddenly remembers...armaan tum jaaoo dad ghar pe hein...jaaooo..koi dekh lega
armaan:ridhima...tum heroine ho kyaa
ridz: nahi
armaan: mein hero hoon kya???
ridz: (takes her time answring)...nahi
armaan: yeh koi film hai kya (sitting close to her on da bed wrapping his arm around her)
ridz: nahi baba..
armaam: to phir koi kyun dekhega????
ridz: armaaaan (angry voice)
armaan:(moving her hair off her cheek): ridhima
lost in each others eyes
suddenly hear shashank:beta mein khanna laya
ridz: OMG...armaan chuppo
armaan running everywhere
ridz: cupboard..
armaan hides just as shashank enters....

omggggggggggggggggggg geet,pragati,dhruvn,priyanka,d1o1
yaar u guys r simply mindblowng yaar wow wht a wonderful prts u hv writtn nd lvd it d way angie ne sach bulwaya nd armaan ka to chehra dekhne wla tha..............nd all knows abt it...........nd armaan climb upto ridz room nd shashank entr omg lvd tht dialog tum heroin ho,hero hu jst lvd it soooooooooo mc................
u all r chooooooooooooooo chweeeeeeeeeet............luv u allllllllllllll
sum1 plz cont............
luv yachna

thanx yachnaa... 😃 😃

shashank enters with plate of food...sees ridz...beta tum theek to ho...itni pale...paseena bhi aaa raha hai??
ridz: huh...wipes her face...haan haaan papa mujhe kya hoona hai
shashank: nahi rukko me dawaii lata hoon...
(leaves....)

armaan comes out...towards ridz..
ridz: armaan...armaan kya kar rahe ho....dad aate hoonge
armaan keeps coming closer....theres this intensity in his eyes...
ridz getting scared...armaan moves his hand towards her.........
ridz: (melting way...) armaan....closes her eyes...
armaan takes da parantha on da plate....
ridz: huh...opens her eyes to see armaan stuffing his face
armaan: mouth full of food twinkling eyes...:tsk tsk...ridhima kaisee baatein karti ho....sasur jee ghar pe hein... 😉 😉

they hear shashank coming...ridz:armaan...
armaan: haan yaar chup raha hoon....24 hrs mera naam japti rehti hai.....

armaan hides under bed...
shashank enters...gives ridz da meds...:yeh lo beta
ridz takes it..shashank: beta bahut bhook lagi thi kya??
ridz:huh???
shashank:haan...puura parantha....ek min me gayab??
ridz: haan???oh haan dad woh hospital ka khanna bahut kharab tha na...aur nani ke paranthe to mere fav...
shashank sitting down on angie bed...achcha hai...khaaoogi to jald achchi ho jaoogi
ridz:haan..haan..dad

meanwhile....armaan holds her hand from the other side...
ridz:(screams)yeh kya kar rahe ho....
shashank: kya
ridz: mera matlab.....yeh kya kar rahein hein aap....aap khanna nahi khaooogge
shashank: haan haan...takes ridz face in hands...tumne to darrra hi deeya tha...thank god armaan...bahut achcha ladka hai...
armaan: waah sasur jee...kya baat hai...ab to apke paer choone hi paddenge...
n touches his feet...ridz sees his hand...shashank just feels something brush against his feet...
shashank: huh...looks down...
ridz screams: chuuuhhhaaaa..aaaa..dad...chuuuhaaa
shashank:kahan..
ridz:abhi apke paer ke paas...
shashank:rukkoo me marne ke leeyai...jhaduu latta hoon...

shashank leaves...armaan comes out....
ridz: hitting armaan: jaaoooooo
armaan:yaar tumne bataya nahi...
ridz:kya
armaan: tumhare dad jhaduuu bhi maarte hein...
ridz:agar abh nahi gayye naa to juutee bhi marenge...
armaan: fine fine...bye...love you

armaan climbs out....ridz waving...
shashank enters.....
shashank: huh?? ridhima kya kar rahi ho...
ridz:(absent mindedly) bye bol rahi hoon..
shashank: kisssee????
ridz(realizing what she just said): uhhhh....dad chuuuhee ko..
shashank: kya??
ridz: haan dad...woh mene chuuhe ko bhagaa deeya
shashank: kyun???
ridz:woh dad...bahut cute chuuhaa tha naa....

wow yaar don't know ur nme.............
it ws soooo fnnnnnnny i ws laughng ooooo mch.......
realy jst superb chuaaaaaaaaa baht cute chua tha..........
lvly yaar..........
luv yachna

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o gosh it was damn funny i was laughing all the way jharuu nahi joote bhi parenge ridz saying that lol