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Originally posted by: Catwoman

BTW there a big Inidan writers comp... please aleast sign up for that Sabi post chk it out...

Love Kat

hey katy di!!!i did check it out..but i am too young for it!!

amazin part

so what nme r u giving this ff pragati?

Originally posted by: swansea

amazin part

so what nme r u giving this ff pragati?

i dnt noe.....why dont u suggest names??i will make a list of all the sugesstions chose the best 3 and start a voting system in this thread!!

names:

1) dono ki love story
2) pyaar mein doob gayye
3) kuch pyaar se pal

ok so guys..thx for all the compliments....luv ya all

here it is

angie is coming to pick up riddhima but it is raining veryy badly and her car stops in between kisi sunsaan jagah pe...

angie to herself :ohhh shit..ab main kya karun??

she tries to call armaan but uska cell nahi lagta....no coverage hai..

obviously..sunsaan jagah and then a guy who looks really friendly stops by in is car..

guy:hey!whats up?car problem?

angie(a bit scared):um..yeah,but i've called a friend,he'll just be coming..

guy:usko takleef mat do..i'll drop u wherever u wanna go?

angie:um...thx but i'll manage.

guy:u sure?

angie:yes.thanks anyways

guy is reluctant to go but leaves anyways,but drives slowly...

10-15 minutes pass..and still no one comes by...and angie is now really scared..and cold too..she tries a few numbers again but koi signal hi nahi hai..

finally she sees an old woman coming by..and she says

angie:suniye...excuse me?

woman:beti...kya hua??

angie:jee meri gaadi kharab ho gayee hai,kya aap bata sakti hain ki yahan aas pass koi mechanic ya koi dukaan hogi ya phie ek phone..

woman:nahi beti...yaahn aisa kuchh nahi hai door door tak kuchh nahi hai.

suddenly there is a light flash ..its lightening and angie jumps out of the car,not caring even if its raining or she will be soaked.

angie:aaaaaaaaaaaahgggggggggg...

but there is no one there...she is shockd and scared,shivering,cold and wet.

a honking sound....

a familiar voice

"excuse me?"

angie seeing its the same car which had earlier stopped...rushes to it..
the guy comes out of the car and before he knows whats happening..angie has thrown herself on him..and is hugging him very tightly...and crying...saying

angie:[plzzz mujjhe mat chhod ke jaao..mujjhe bohot dar lag raha hai..maine jhooth kaha tha..didnt trust u..plzzz dont go..

guy pushes her back really gently,and wipes her tears...then she looks at him

guy:plzz aap roiye mat.aap ko main chhod deta hoon.plzz stop crying..aapki gaadi subha uthwa lenge,ok?right now..plzz sit in the car..

she sits and now in the car..

angie:still shaken...i am soo sorry..woh main usually aisi nahi rehti but..u must think ki main thodi..

guy:nahi,i dont think anything like that..plzz aap dari hui hain.

he stops the car suddenly..

angie:gaadi..gaadi kyun rok di...

guy:trust me..plzz.
he reaches back..angie very scared now..and closes her eyes...

after a moment she opens them again and sees him with a flask...

guy:waise,i hope aapko coffee pasand hai..

he gives some coffee to her..

angie is too shocked to say anything..

guy:whenever i come from work veryy late,main apne liye coffee saath lekar jaata hoon...to stop me from falling asleep behind the wheell..and waise,jin shaking fairies ko main rescue karta hoon..unke liye especially,main ek blanket aur coffee zaroor rakhta hoon so that woh mujjhe pyaar se AMAN keh ke bula sakein...

angie takes coffee from him and smiles..she also accepts the blanket..

angie:waise thanks for the compliment.aman.i am anjali.

they shake hands and he starts the car again...

😳 😳 thoda different tha but injoyed writing it..hope u enjoy reading too..

luv ya all

sorry ki itna lamba ho gyaa... 😕

Originally posted by: geet

sorry ki itna lamba ho gyaa... 😕

ek bhagwaan sabko aapne part ke baare mein complain karne ka fever chad raha hai.....i am not gonna say a word against my parts anymore seriously!!!!!!aur woh edam perfect lenght ka tha...yaar pver here you can write as much as you want...and cuming to ur part..it was nice....but atul ka kya hoga??yeh aman ko side track mein lado!!!!atul bahut cute hai!!AA are perfect for each other....so as i was saying ur part is nice,gud,cool and awesum!!

Originally posted by: ammyfan_pragati

ek bhagwaan sabko aapne part ke baare mein complain karne ka fever chad raha hai.....i am not gonna say a word against my parts anymore seriously!!!!!!aur woh edam perfect lenght ka tha...yaar pver here you can write as much as you want...and cuming to ur part..it was nice....but atul ka kya hoga??yeh aman ko side track mein lado!!!!atul bahut cute hai!!AA are perfect for each other....so as i was saying ur part is nice,gud,cool and awesum!!

hehe.pragu..woh toh formality thi...i thought sab keh rahe hain toh main bhi kahun...

darling...atul toh hero hai apni angie ka..dont wry..i luv him as much as everybody if not more...

aman could u know,fall in luv with angie......but angie nahi..main triangle bana rahi hoon...kinda like debo..minus the young age and short hair...

or...maybe...he's gay...😆😆

chinta mat kar.....😛atul angie forever..ok?

thx for the compli..

Originally posted by: geet

hehe.pragu..woh toh formality thi...i thought sab keh rahe hain toh main bhi kahun...

darling...atul toh hero hai apni angie ka..dont wry..i luv him as much as everybody if not more...

aman could u know,fall in luv with angie......but angie nahi..main triangle bana rahi hoon...kinda like debo..minus the young age and short hair...

or...maybe...he's gay...😆😆

chinta mat kar.....😛atul angie forever..ok?

thx for the compli..

yeaahhh...that d way...AA rock..luv triangles ke bina mazaa kahaaan!!!gay huh??😆😆😆....nooo i dnt wnt ny dmg characters to be gay😆😆....dekha isliye toh main keh rahiin hoon sabko fever chad gaya hai complain karne ka