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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
omg! i bet dis took u ages to type! how much! i hpe ure ok nw! 😆 really nce! fansatic! i loved it! i hpe dis happens in dmg! 😳 cntd sn!!!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hiiiii ananya its jst fabulous,ausumn nd vry vryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nce part we all tht ths happen we all wish ................[SIZE=6

luv yachna 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
hey guys... i thought nobody would bother to read it.......... i wasn't planning to return to this page.... if you guys like it so much... ill try to continue.... thanks alot you guys... love uuu
ananya
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
i can't beleive you guys liked it??? gosh.. thanks guys...... weren't you guys bored reading such a longggggggggggggggggg ff???
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: punk_ananya

i can't beleive you guys liked it??? gosh.. thanks guys...... weren't you guys bored reading such a longggggggggggggggggg ff???

Ananya, how can anyone be bored reading such a great ff.

Sorry only just read it now so my comments are a bit late, hehehe

It was great how you had Ridz trying to make it up to Armaan in this part, in the show its usually the other way round!

When are you next updating, I can hardly wait

Lubna😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: punk_ananya

i can't beleive you guys liked it??? gosh.. thanks guys...... weren't you guys bored reading such a longggggggggggggggggg ff???

how could u say that?? 😆 we love it! You gotta continue... and the longer... THE BETTERR!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Continued….

R – to hell with you… I'm a jerk who still thought you loved me… but it was all just fake…
At that Armaan catches her upper arm in a death grip and brings her closer …
A – do not insult those times… and …
He kisses her right on the lips…
A – I do love you
R – I love you too.
R – toh kya ab tumne mujhe maaf kar diya?
A – itni asaani se nahi. Tumhe saza milegi…
Riddhima looks at him. She knew it was her fault but he's really getting on to her nerves now.
R – kya? Kya karna hoga mujhe?
A – tumhe... tumhee… sabke saamne…
Mujhe… kiss karna hoga…
R – what? Armaan are you crazy??
A – fine toh phir main nahi manungaa… waise galti toh tumne ki hai toh ab uske consequences bhi tumhe bhugatne honge…
R – Armaan par sabke saamne???
A – Agar tum mujhe nahi chahti toh thik hai…
R – Armaan aisi baat nahi hai… lekin…
A – tumhari marzi…
And he starts driving smiling to himself thinking about the fact that now he could tell everyone about their relationship finally and it wouldn't eliminate the possibilities of any further misunderstandings…
A – Riddhima tumhara ghar aa gaya…
R – bye
And got out of the car and walked off without a backward glance…
Armaan felt guilty about putting her in such a tight spot… he decided he was asking for too much.

Next morning in Sanjivani…
He cornered Riddhima as soon everyone was assigned their duties and Dr.Kirti was out of earshot.
A – Riddhima kal ke liye I'm really sorry…
R – she tries to go but he holds her firmly. She turns her face away from him…
R – Armaan I want to make one thing clear. Doosri ladkiyan tumhare liye yeh sab karti hongi lekin main nahi kar sakti toh tum ummeed bhi mat rakhna.
A – nahi Riddhima maine tumse kuch zyada hi maang liya… main bas itna chahta tha ki sab ko humare bare mein pata chal jaye aur kabhi aur koi misunderstanding na ho.
Riddhima turned to face him and poked her finger at his chest in good natured anger which he immensely enjoyed.
R – tum mujhe –poke- bina bataye – poke poke – Muskaan ke saath uske boyfriend ban kar – poke – patila chale gaye… ab tum dekhna – poke poke poke- Mr. Armaan mallik
With that she turned around and stalked off…

In the evening after winding up all his work he walked into the locker room thinking about cornering Riddhima and apologizing again. But she wasn't there…so he went to his locker to retrieve his coat and his cell phone… he'd received a message… it was from Riddhima it said…
Meet me on the basketball court now. It's urgent.
Getting a little tensed he walked to the basketball court hurriedly.
He couldn't see anyone and he walked onto the court…
R – main yahan hoon. She was sitting on the bleachers.
A – tum thik toh ho ?? tumne mujhe yahan kyun bulaya
He said walking upto her…
She stood up and said.
R – turn around...
A – kyun??
R – maine kaha turn around… tumhari saza abhi baaki hai Dr. Armaan
A – he turned around slowly wondering what she was upto…
Riddhima curled her arms around his neck from behind. He was enjoying his "saza"… until she put all her weight on him and hung on to his neck… he stumbled a little but then held her arms and steadied.
A – Riddhima tum kya kar rahi ho…
R – chalo ab court ke us paar tak chalo.
A – Riddhima
R – maine kaha na chalo…
With great difficulty he carries her to the other end…
R – ab kaho kabhi mujhe bina bataye jaoge???
A – Riddhima…
R – chalo ek aur chakkar…
A – Riddhima tumhe pata hai ki tum bhaari ho…
R – chalo Armaan do aur chakkar lagao.
A – Riddhima…
Then after the 3 rounds she asks him again
R – ab bolo ab kabhi mujhe poori baat bina bataye jaoge??
A – nahi Riddhima kabhi nahi… panting a little.
R – chalo 2 chakkar aur lagao…
A – ab kyun ???
R – 4 chakkar jaldi chalo Armaan…
After he completes she asks him
R – ab mujhse kabhi koi baat chupaoge???
A – yeh sab isliye tha…
R – chalo ek aur chakkar…
A – Riddhimaaa…
R – ab bolo mujhse kabhi kuch chupaoge???
A – nahi Riddhima kabhi nahi…
R – chalo ab 2 chakkar aur lagao…
A – riddhimaaa…
R – chalo Armaan
After he's done he jumps off his back…
R – yeh extra kal raat ke liye the…
A – aaaaa… then he looks at her and says
A – toh phir chalo 2 aur laga lo…
R – kyun??
A – kyunki ab main tumhe aur bhi tang karne wala hoon
And starts walking towards her…
She backs away… he stalks her step for step…
Finally she reaches the mesh wire boundare behind the bleachers.
R – Armaan please…
A – ab tumhari baari hai Riddhima… tumhe bhi kuch saza hogi naa….
R – Armaan acha suno…
She walks towards him and entwines her hands around his neck…
He's really baffled about her behaviour and stares at her in puzzlement.
She's sees and opportunity pushes him and runs off…
He runs after her. She reaches the locker room and goes inside relieved that Anjali was there…
She walks casually to her locker and starts sorting some things out..
Armaan comes in running and stops when he sees Anjali…
A – hey angie
Anjali – hey Armaan
Then he walks towards his locker… twisting his back which is sore now.
Anjali – kya hua Armaan
A – aaa… kuch nahi bas aaj kuch zyada kasrat hogayi…
He catches Riddhima laughing secretly and smiles.
Anjali – meri toh aaj night duty hai. Toh Riddhima tum khud ghar chali jaana ohki.
R – haan di.
Then anjali walks out and Armaan sits on the floor massaging his muscles…
R – toh Dr.Armaan dekh liya apni girlfriend se ulajhne ka nateeja…
A – yeh toh main roz roz dekhna chahta hoon
Riddhima blushes and is about to walk away when he catches her and makes her fall on his lap.
He makes her sit in front of him with her back leaning on her broad massive chest and his arms around her… pushing a strand of hair behind her ear and comes closer to it and whispers.
A – waise tum ho bahut bhaari…
R – Armaan
She jerks out of his arms which is really painful to him
A – uhhh…
R – serves you rite… leaning back gently
He smiles seeing that she has minimized her movements so that it doesn't hurt him again.
R – waise bhi yeh sab misunderstanding tumhari hi waje se toh hui thi.
A – acha meri wajah se???
R – aur kya??? Tum hi gaye the na mujhe bina bataye
A – acha who toh tumhi thi na jise mujhpe bharosa nahi tha…
Isse zyada bharosa toh koi bhi ladki karle mujhpar.
R – Achaa toh phir thik hai dhoond lo apne liye doosri ladki.
Disentangling herself from his arms.
A – haan haan toh bahut hai jo mere liye hi jee rahi hain…
R – achaa toh phir thik hai le aao apne liye ek…
And she stalked out of the locker room.
A – Riddhima!
He went out after her and caught up with her and said
A – main tumhe ghar chod raha hoon. Yahin meri wait karo.
R – no thanks mein khud chali jaungi… tum baaki ladkiyon se kyun nahi poochte.
A – Riddhima tum akele ghar nahi jaa rahi aur mujhe is bare mein aur kuch nahi sunna.
With that he went into the parking lot to get his car.
She decided to wait as he was probably right in being protective.
Rahul came up behind her and asked
Rahul - aaiye main aapko drop kar deta hoon
Riddhima – no thanks Rahul I'll manage.
Rahul – come on aap itni raat ko kahan se auto dhoondengi.
Riddhima – nahi Rahul thanks but really I'll manage.
Rahul – ohki but take care. And theres something on your face
He brushed off some dirt off her right cheek.
Rahul – bye
Riddhima – bye
Rahul went to get his car while Armaan drove up beside Armaan.
She got into his car and buckled her seat belt.
She looked at Armaan who was staring fixedly at the road with a grim expression and driving.
R – Armaan kya hua?
A – who Rahul kya bol raha tha???
R – Armaan tum kyun uske peeche padhe ho…
A – maine poocha who kya keh raha slightly raising his voice.
R – Armaan tum mujhpe chilla kyun rahe ho…
A – main chilla nahi raha main bas ek sawal pooch raha… tum uska jawab kyun nahi dena chahti haan Riddhima?
R – Armaan. Bhaad mein jao tumhe jo samajhna hai samajh lo
He remained silent for a while cursing himself for yelling at her like that.
A – Riddhima dekho I'm sorry par who Rahul. Is baar bhi tum uski baton mein aa gayi thi aur tumne mujhpe bharosa nahi kiya bas isliye…
R – bas isliye kya Armaan? Who bas mujhe ride offer kar raha tha aur maine usse kaha ki main khud chali jaungi. Aur jo bhi usne kaha tha who sach tha par maine hi tumhe galat samjha. Meri galti thi Armaan
A – I'm sorry Riddhima.
He lifter her hand and held it…
She blushed a little at that and then smiled…
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
hey guys is it long enough.. i'm sorry it isnt as good as last time.... hey guys you can also put in ur ideas and continue if you guys want to ....
ananya
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Posted: 18 years ago
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mannn..ananyaa...u r tooo good !!!...dis seems soo realistic...u knw..galti par galti n den sorryy...its jus ssoo AR types... 😆 😆 😆
gr8 wrk...bt ya....d endin cud hv bin a bit bttr....(dts wot i think)newys....odrwise....gud job 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
Awwww SOOOOO cutee!! You should make a title for your FF. You're an amazing writer!!

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