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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey the first part md introduction wad superb do add me too 😊
waiting for next update do update soon
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Part 2

V: Armaan baby, kya hua, kaha khoye hue ho?

Tina, Armaan ki recently girlfriend, usko itna khoye hue kuch pareshan ho gayi...ha wo janti hai ke armaanek bohot hi khadoos insaan hai aur bohot hi pathar dil...lekin phirbhi ...afteralll Tinna ki khubsoorti ka to koi bhi mukabla nahi hai ...to armaan uske samne kisi aur khayalo me kaise ghum ho sakta hai.

A: Get out Tina!

T: What...Armaan tumhe pata bhi hai ke tum kya keh rahe ho?

A: I said get out! Mujhe aur gussa mat dilao tina...nahi to tum janti hi ho ke me kya kar sakta hu...now get the hell out of my room

Tina armaan ke room se rote hue bhag gayi...aur armaan apni chair me jake baith gaya

Armaans POV:

5 saal ho gayi lekin me aaj bhi usko nahi bhula paya...pata nahi kya jadu tha usme...lekinme aaj bhi usko chah ke bhi nahi apne khayalo se nikal paya...Wo zindagi ke kuch haseen pal me mar ke bhi nahi bhul sakta...aur wo raat...us raat ko mujhe mera pyaar mila...meri zindagi...meri riddhima...Ab wo pata nahi ke wo kaha hoegi...kya pata ke wo to ab mujhe bhul bhi chuki hoegi...ho sakta hai ke uski shaadi ho chuki ho...ur uske baache bhi ho...at least wo khush to hogi...aur me...me to aaj bhi usiki yaado me zinda hu...ha mana ke hamescha mere saath koi new girl hoti hai...lekin wo bhi sirf isliye kyunki mujhe uske khayalo me se nikalna hota hai...I know ke sabko lagta hai ke me ek casanova hu...lekin aaj tak mene apni limits nahi cross ki...kyunke chahe kuch bhi ho jaye...par armaan pe to sirf uski riddhima ka hi haq rehega na...mana ke wo kisi aur ki ho chuki hogi...lekin me apne dil ka kya karu...ma aaj bhi khuda ko maaf nahi kar paya...jab se wo mujhse dur hui hai ...mera to khuda pe bharosa hi uth gaya...kaha kaha nahi dhunda maine usko...apni riddhima ko lekin wo mujhe nahi mili...aaj tak nahi mili...me tumke khona nahi chahta tha riddhima...par me kya karu...agar uss din papa ka phone nahi aata to me kabhi nahi jaata...lekin me tumko kaise bato...plzz wapis aa jao riddhima...tumhara armaan tumhare bina nahi reh payega...

In khayalo ke saath armaan ko khud bhi nahi pata chala ke uski aankh kab lag gayi...wo ussi chair pe so gaya...yehi armaan ki roz ki routine thi...har roz ek new girl...jinke saath wo sirf time spend karta tha ...lekin apni limits kabhi cross nahi ki...aaj tak sab ko lagta hai ke armaan sirf ek matlabi insaan hai...kisi ki bhi feelings ke bare me care nahi karte...lekin aaj tak koi bhi uss armaan ko nahi janta...jo apne pyaar ke liye apni zindagi bhi deneko tayaar hai...aur na hi armaan kisi ko bhi apni haqeeqat batana chahta hai...usko koi farq nahi parta ke log uske bare me kya soochte hai...usko sirf ek ki sooch se farq parta hai...le wo to us ke aap pas kahi nahi hai...

Next day

Armaan apne office ke liye nikal raha tha...ke uski secretary ka msg aaya uske mobile pe...

Sms: sir we got an appointment in the company u wanted...they are very pleased to do a contract with us...if u wish i can book the tickets for tomrrow morning flight to nottingham...


Armaans reply: book the tickets for today for me and arjun my PA...and do it fast

Armaan got back to his room and packed his bags...since he lost riddhima...he had just one passion...his family business...and after that his drinks...he didn't knew if he would have survived without the drinks...maybe not...there is no one in armaan family...he is left alone...after his dad died 5 years back...sometimes he feels so lonely...but what can he do...there is nothing in his hands...he came out of his thought as his mobile beeped gain...

Sms: Sir, your flight is in 2 hours

Armaan was sitting in the departure room and was waiting for his flight announcement. Usko aisa lag raha the ke jaise wo kisi apne se bohot jaldi mile wala hai...par wo kaun hai...ek tarahe se uska dil khush bhi tha aur pareshan hi...puri flight ke douran armaan bas riddhima ke khayalo me hi khoya raha aur kisi dusre ko koi importance nahi di...Nottingham ke airport pe land hote waqt usko aisa ehsaas hua jaise ke wo riddhima ke bohot kareeb hai...itne saalo ke baad usko phirse wohi feelings feel hui...

ARMAANS POV

me janta hu riddhima ke ab tum mujhko kabhi nahi milogi...lekin me tumko chah ke bhi nahi bhul sakta...u will always remain in my heart...i was am and will always be in love with you

in armaans room in the hotel

armaan riddhima ki pic dekh raha hota hai ke uski aankho se ansu nikalte hai...usko saath me bitaye hue pal yaad aate hai.

(I think this song suits very well here...please listen to it...its from Farhan Saeed...Roiyaan)

Khawabon ne hi,
Dil dukhaya ankhon ka,

Hathon mein hay,

Dard juda hy hathon ka...2x

(armaan imagines riddhima near him and starts dancing with her)

Sath chala jo mere bas woh
Tera saya thaa,

Sadiyon tujh ko chaha bas,

Do pal ko paya thaa..!

(he closed his eyes and then opened them...but then riddhima was not around him...she was vanished)

Roiyaan royiaan ankhiyan royia,
Aansuon ke bina ...Royia,

Roiyaan royiaan ankhiyan royia,

Aansuon ke bina... Royia...2x

(he wanted to cry bt no tears were coming out...he looked everywhere but he couldn't find riddhima anywhere)

Sans chal toh rahi thi,
Theek se,

Tu ne pathar rakh diye,

Larkhra kar girre,

Seeny mein,

Dard hone laga jeene mein,

Mazza aane laga peene mein,

Peete pite, peete pite..!

(armaan took out his whisky bottle and stared drinking...he emptied the whole bottle)

Roiyaan royiaan ankhiyan royia,
Aansuon ke bina ...Royia,

Roiyaan royiaan ankhiyan royia,

Aansuon ke bina... Royia...2x

Zameen pe chalte chalte,
Tum chand ban gaye,
'
Hum khade hay wahi,

The jahan se chale,

(armaan was fully drunk and imagined riddhima again...she sitting next to him...and he was behaving like a little kid...he didn't want to let her go)

Dekha hathon mein kahin,
Tum door tak nahi,

Kiyu khenchi be-matlab ki lakeeren,
Tu bata,
Is baat pe ladte ladte,
Aye khuda.. !

(again riddhima vanished infront his eyes...he moved out to the balcony to get fresh air...he just hated his fate...just riddhimas imagines were left over)

Roiyaan royiaan ankhiyan royia,
Aansuon ke bina ...Royia,

Roiyaan royiaan ankhiyan royia,

Aansuon ke bina... Royia...2x

Naina paani mang de, naina paani mang de,
Haaayyyee...Naina paani mang de !!

(armaan didnt know when he felt asleep in the balcony)

Next day

Armaan woke up in the balcony...and his head was aching...he wasn't sure what happened last night...but he was sure...it must happened the same like every night...he would imagine riddhima and then when she will vanish away...he will get drunk to see her again...

armaan riddhima ke pic se baate kar raha hota hai apne hotel room me baith ke to achanak se usko uska PA room me knock karke kehta hai

PA: Sir the meeting is in 1 hour...i think we should leave in a half hour to the company

A: Yes Arjun...u go and make sure that everything is ready...i don't want to see any mistakes...i will come soon...am I clear

PA: Yes sir.

Arjun waha se chala jata hai aur armaan phirse apne khayalo me kho jata hai...

Armaan entered the company and he smelt riddhimas fragrance...the same fragrance in which he loves to lose his sense...he wasn't sure why he was feeling like that...he was getting scared of the feelings...he pushed the thoughts aside and entered the conference room...the CEO of the company was already inside...

CEO: Mr. Mallik...its a pleasure to have u here

A: The pleasure is all mine...can we start the meeting

CEO: yes sure...i was just waitng for emply who is the head of this project...she will represent it to u...she is on her way...

A: Do u know I am very strict when it comes on time...I don't think it makes a god impression when some random employs are late...however...i am going to the washroom...when I will be back...I want to see ur so called employ ready for the presentation...else u can forget the deal...did I made myself clear

CEO: yes sir

Armaan left the room to use the washroom...he was thinking how useless this people are...they are not particular on time...i hate these kind of people...

He was heading back to the conference room...as Arjun all of a sudden came in front of him...

PA: sorry sir...I was just looking for you...

A: get inside the room...i am coming in a minute...



i really hope that u liked it...and i matched ur expectations :)
if not then i am really sorry 😕😕


lots of love AMNA 😳😳


anyone who wants a pm please put me in ur buddy list...thanks 😃😃


Part 3

Edited by Amna_xd - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Arey dnt say sry yaar
It was awesome amna
Pehle toh i thought ke Arey ye kya part toh ridhima ke paas endhue tha na
Then jab i started reading further toh mujhe laga ke ohhh aise pahuncha armaan ridhima ki company tak
It was osome yaar
Update soon please
Wants to see AR reaction when they met each other after whole 5 yrs
Continue soon 😊

With love
HUMERA
Edited by SGROVER_WINGET - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice story. Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey ...
Superb part. .
Waiting for next update !
Continue soon...
And please pm me ! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3

Arjun stepped inside the room and saw Riddhima was looking at him with mixed expressions...she looked happy, relieved and at the same time disappointed...Riddhima finished her preparations and walked over to Arjun

R: Mr. Mallik...its nice to meet you...my name is Riddhima and I will be leading this project...its an honor for or company to work with your company

Arjun: Miss Riddhima...i think u misunderstood something...I am not Mr. Mallik...I am his PA...Mr. Mallik will be her at any moment...oh here he is...

Riddhima turned around and was shocked to no limits...Armaan was standing in front of her...the Armaan Mallik...her Armaan...her first and last love...the person who showered her with lots of love and then snatched everything from her...betrayed her and left her all alone in this cruel world...the person was standing right in front of her...she couldn't believe her fate...

Here Armaan was feeling the same like Riddhima...he saw her after 5 whole years finally...now he got his achievement after waiting for so long...he wanted to take her in a rib crushing hug...but he had to control himself...he tried to read her expressions but he couldn't figure out anything...all king of emotions were playing on her face...now he know why he felt so good here...why he felt that riddhima was near him...finally he got all his answers...


Armaan moved forward to riddhima...he wanted to talk to her...to touch her...to take her in his arms...even riddhima moves forward to him...they both were inches away from each other as suddenly the door opened and riddhimas boss came in...he saw the both and moved to them

B: Mr. Mallik may I introduce u to miss Riddhima...she is leading this project and will be always at ur service...and riddhima this is Mr. Armaan Mallik...the owner of AR Company


A: Riddhima...?

Armaan wanted to know her surname...he wanted to know if she is married or if she is still waiting for him...he spoke her name with such an authority...that shiver run down riddhimas spine...

R: Riddhima...just Riddhima...it's nice to meet u Mr. Mallik.

Riddhima talked to him in a cold tone...he wasn't surprised at all...he knew that this must me coming...

A: The pleasure is all mine

R: If u don't mind Mr. Mallik...can we start the conference?

A: With pleasure Miss Riddhima

Riddhima moved to the front and started with her presentation...all the while armaan was just looking at her with intensity in his eyes

Armaans POV

akhir tum mujhe mil hi gayi riddhima...kitna dhunda maine tume...me bata nahi sakta ke har ek pal jo mene tujhare bina guzara hai wo kitni badi saza thi meri liye...har roz ek nai mout marta tha me...lekin ab bas...ab tum aagai hoo...mujhe mil gayi ho...ab me tumhe kahi nah jane dunga...bilkul bhi nah badli tum... aaj bhi bilkul ki bilkul waisi hi ho jaisi thi...lekin tumhari aanko me mujhe ek kami nazar aati hai...wo sparkle nahi hai...jinke saath tum aur bhi khoobsurat dikhti ho...mujhe aaj bhi in aankho me apne liye pyaar nazar aata hai riddhima...me janta hu ke jo mene kiya uske baad tum mujhse nafrat karna chahti ho...lekin me tumhare dil ko tumse zyaada janta hu...tum chah ke bhi mujhse nafrat nahi kar paougi...lekin isliye take tumhara ego hurt na ho...tum sari koshish karogi...mujhse nafrat karne ki liya...mujhe hurt karne ke liye...lekin shayad tum apne armaan ko nahi jantii...wo jo bhi chahta hai...wo usko milke hi rehta hai...aur ab mera sab se bada aim to tum hi ho riddhima...aur me tumko har hal me apna ke rahunga...ab hum dono ke beech me kabhi koi nahi aa sakta...khud khuda bhi nahi

ufff tumhari yeh gusse se bhari badi badi aankhe...kya kahu...aaj bhi me inme kho sakta hu...tumhe saach me khuda ne bohot fursat se banaya hai aur wo bhi sirf mere liye...sirf tumhare armaan ke liye riddhima...soon to be Mrs. Riddhima Armaan Mallik

Riddhima moved forward to armaan and sits opposite him and started looking at him...everyone in the room was looking at her...she bent to armaan and kissed him on his forehead...then on his eyes...on his nose...she was inches away from his lips...suddenly she felt shame and stood up...she wanted to go back...armaan held her hand and stood up...he walked to her...he moved as close as he could...no air could pass away between them...he held her head and closed his eyes and moves forward to kiss her...he was just inches away from her...

R: MR. Mallik...what I am trying to say is...

Armaan came out of his daydream and looked shocked at riddhima...now he realized that he was just daydreaming

armaan knew which affect he has on riddhima...she always melted whenever he looked at her with such an intensity...and exactly that was happening...riddhima was felling hell nervous...she knew that armaan was just looking at her...he wasn't concentrating at the presentation at all...he was too busy at observing her...she didn't liked it at all...every time when she turned back them armaan was looking in her eyes...she just hoped that this will end soon...she couldn't tolerate it anymore...she has to go out of the room...Finally when she finished her presentation she turned around and asked armaan in a formal way but with a cold tone

R: So Mr. Mallik...did u liked it? Will you accept the deal?

A: No Miss Riddhima...

R: Excuse me??

Riddhima was hell shocked...how can he not liked the presentation...she worked on it more than 2 moths...but still he didn't liked it??

R: May I know the reason Mr. Mallik

A: I didn't like it Miss Riddhima because I LOVE it...and I really mean what I say...I LOVED it...

Armaan looked in her eyes and did not even blinked for a second...he could see the shocked face of riddhima...She knew that he meant her with that...

A: I would be more than happy to do the contract with u...and u Riddhima...

R: Thank you Mr. Mallik...we promise we won't let u down...now please excuse me...I have to go to my cabin

Before Armaan could say anything...riddhima ran to her cabin...


Here armaan looked at the boss and said

A: Now the deal is fix...and I really hope that I didn't make a mistake by selecting your company

B: Thank you so much Mr. Mallik...we won't let u down...we promise...

A: I want Miss Riddhima to handle this personally...no other employ...am I clear?

B: Yes of course...Riddhima will be more than happy to handle it

A: Arjun...get the paper ready...now excuse me...i have to talk to Miss Riddhima about some information...where is her cabin?

B: The secretary will tell u Mr. Mallik

Armaan also left the conference room and head toward Riddhimas cabin...in front of her cabin...he heard her crying...he couldn't understand what she was saying...but it was paining him to hear her sobs



Riddima got into her cabin and started crying...

R: Kyu armaan...kyu aaye tum mere samne...me tumkko bhul jana chahti thi...phir kyu aaye ho tum...yeh dekhne ke kya me tumhare bina zinda hu ya mar gayi...kash ke me mar gayi hoti armaan...mujhe zindagi me aaj se pehle kabhi itna dukh nahi hua jitna aaj hua hai tumko dekh ke...bohot dard ho raha hai armaan...bohot dard ho raha hai...me nahi janti ke allah miya aisa kyu kar rahe hai...lekin me sirf itna janti hu ke tumhare wapis ane se mujhe kahi zyaada dard hua hai...itna to tab bbhi nahi hua tha hab tum bina kuch kahe mujhe chod ke chale gaye the...kyu aaye ho tum wapis armaan...mere me himmat nah hai ke me tumhara samna kar pao...aur na hi itni himmat ke tumhare samne hote hue bhi tumse dor rahu...ye kaise ruswayi hai armaan...mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha

Riddhima went to her table and took Sarah's pic and started crying more loudly...then she heard a knock on her door...she quickly wiped her tears and put Sarah pic back in the drawer

R: come in

Armaan came inside her cabin...and saw her red eyes...he knew she had cried...wasn't she happy to see him?

A: Riddhima tum...

Riddhima shot her head in the air looked at him in disbelief...what was he doing here...shouldn't he be with her boss right now...why the hell is he standing in front of her? Riddhima controlled her emotions and tried to act professionally

R: Mr. Mallik you here? Shouldn't you be with my boss right now and discussing about the deal?

A: let it be my problem riddhima...first of all tell me why were u crying?

R: Mr. Mallik I think you should leave now...my boss must be looking for you now...

A: Riddhima stop this drama and tell me straightly why the hell were u crying...did something happened...or did I say something wrong

R: Please Mr. Mallik...don't embarrass me...I was not crying...it's just something went into my eyes...i was just trying to get it out...I am sorry to ask but can u tell me why you are here...do u need any information about the presentation?

Armaan was by now fuming in anger...how the hell can she ignore him like that and what does she mean by calling me all the time MR. MALLIK?? Armaan closed her door and moved toward her

R: Mr. Mallik what r u doing?

Armaan didn't answered and just moved further in her direction...Riddhima was getting tensed and start moving back...

R: Mr. Mallik please stop...i said stop..

But armaan didn't listened...he had waited enough...he wanted to take riddhima in his arms and wanted to vanish all her problems...he moved further...now riddhima was pinned between him and the wall

R: Mr. Mallik if u won't move away I swear I will shout...and I mean it

Riddhima was getting tensed time by time...because she know that armaan was affecting her but she wont get weak this time...armaan grabbed her by the shoulders...he pulled her toward him so that ho air could pass by...

R: Mr. Mallik what are...

A: Shut up riddhima...just shut up...

He put his hand on her mouth and got more closer to her...there was no space for air to pass by...riddhima was losing her control and she knew it...He was looking hell dangerous with his bloodshot eyes


i hope that u liked it.😳😳

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lots of love AMNA ❤️


Part 4

Edited by Amna_xd - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsume part amna...
loved it...
love the way armaan showed his right on riddhima...
hope AR could back as one soon :)

bye
tc:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome part loved it
Finally armaan and ridhima met eachother
Excited for next part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Thanks a lot for the pm

Comment for part 2
Armaan to yaha tough kind guy hai...
Then what is that cosenova fasinco...
ohoio yeh kahani me kya ho rhi hai
I mean its all just misunderstanding
i mean actual me hua kya thi...?????
really the song suits perfect
like it

Comment for part 3
i was thinking armaan hi hogi that new one
Here to arjun comes & riddhima misunderstood..
their emotions described so well
& that dream sequence i loved it whole
then armaan's comment about the presentation was superb
then their interaction at office cabin..
i thought wo log baat karle tab shayed problem thodi si kam ho jaye
suspense me chod di yaar
Ab kya hogi,...

Update super soon...

& last but not the least



Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Awesome man
Too gud
Perfectly written
Waiting for the next part
Sooo gud yaar
😊
Edited by SGROVER_WINGET - 10 years ago

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