Awsommmiiieee intrsting concpt...poor Armaan, jo hua acha nahi hua but den mayb it was 4 best..Ridz leaving him is 4 bettr future...so evrything has chngd, well i luvd da story, nxt chp sooon...i'm guessing Armaan is returning aftr 4yrs as cancer specialist...hopfuly u'll update regulrly & fast mayb 1 update 2days coz i can't wait!!! #PS: btw chng da whole capital writing in normal, its lil weird 2 read with capital & longer chps plz...i don't mean 2 criticz or somthing but u need 2 improve ur writing style, u gonna b more describing the scenes, elaborate da dialougs & emotions dat reading it, reader can visualiz da whole thing...uhav gud concpt, improve writing style u'll do gr8..mayb u sud read odr stories 2 undrstnd da writing style 4m odr writers...well datz all update ASAP as i'm desprtly waiting 4 nxt & pm me plz
Edited by sushi08 - 11 years ago