You, Me aur Hum- Siddhima OS Last part pg 16 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey fary! Your really teasing us by giving us the story in parts!!😆
Cant wait for part 3!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 3rd part shuru karo yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i'm dying to read it................. pls pls pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey luved it....looking for next one......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Faryryryryryryryryryryry, OH - EM - GEE. 😲
I am in short of words of your story telling capability, so I'd just reiterate what others have already said...this is sheer brilliance. The suspense, the drama, the dialogues, the inner thoughts, is all done in a very intricate manner, and I think your OS will only be able to now get us thru the weekend. EEEEEHHHH, so you better please us, or else.....or else, we will be tortured like no other in wait for Monday. Yikes! Ah, I love it when writers capture the essence of characters, and I could so imagine Sid, Riddhima, Armaan act out the way you explicated their plight. Sid's ego line was so him...once he puts his mind to something, he thinks of nothing else then. The 'Yo Basket' bit was genius, and the way she spoke 'Riddhima Modi' was such a pleasant end to a new beginning.
You better continue. 😈
I want to know how Siddhanth will save her and where he takes her away. 😈
Edited by zainab25 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fary😡 you are lucky that i didnt have time to read this until now...and that part 2 was already put up....verna😡😡.....yaar these guys are right...nikammi....after that teasing SBB...then we get a 3 sec clip to try and tide us over for the weekend...and now....YOU....only give me 2 tukdas????😭😭😭(ps this will help set the monsoon for Ridz's car scene😆)

Ok now back to the point....👏
Why have you not written OS earlier??? Itna pyara sa story....i loved ALL of it...yup so much that i cant even pick out a fav for you....there you go...you got the lamba lamba post wali to become speechless...😳😆

But everything that you have written was well described, i could see the scenes before my eyes...and i love how you wrote the story as an episode....i think from now on when the show is dragging i will demand you to write us a OS to tide us over from the kichafying...

k thats it for now...will be back for part 3

pm me plz 😃



Edited by arp04srocks - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
cont soon
add me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
fary di...i am already going crazy waiting for SR rain seq..now for ur ff also..jaldi aao aur continue karo..nahiiin toh! 😡 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome work love it
extremely well written !
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi

Originally posted by: -Fizzylicious-

ok much awaited part 2 is here

Part 2

Riddhima is in her car getting scared as it is very dark and she's scared of darkness. She doesn't know how long it will take till she gets back home. She tries Calling Sid but due to weather she couldn't reach him. She gets out of the car and goes to the dhabba and asks them if she can use their phone the guys gives her sarcastic laugh and tells her the phone is dead. She feels so helpless. At the very moment the thunder strikes she starts shivering because of horror as thunders, lightening always scared her and on top of that she is alone tonight. Perfect night mare. She slowly walks back towards her car gets into it and lock all the doors as she's so scared. She tries calling home once again but still no response she decides to call papa or sanjeevani but still she couldn't reach anyone. On top of that the water started coming inside the car now.

Sid is getting more and more uncomfortable and is very uneasy. He says to himself bhaar main jaye ego zyada kia karegi she'll hang up but I have to call her now. He dials the number but it's unreachable. He then calls JPJ but they tell him that she isn't home yet. This angers Sid and he yells at them and tells them how they can be so irresponsible. She is living with them they should know where she is if she isn't home yet and if they can't figure it out than the least they could've done was to call him and hangs up the phone. He then calls sanjeevani but Sue tells him that Bhabhi was with armaan in bb court but later she left & that she thought that riddhima left for modi house. Now he has no choice but to ask armaan who gets shocked to know that riddhima still didn't reached home. He tries to console sid & tells him she must have gotten busy in some work and do tell me when she's back. But for Sid time has stopped,his whole world seems like crashing. He quickly hoped into his car and started driving like a speedracer. All the images of their closeness starts flashing in front of his eyes, her smile, her shaitani si bhari aankhein, the way she grabbed his collar in the party and demanded for ILU, the way she kept hitting him at the party, all the lovely hugs etc. Time is passing really fast and he's feeling just as helpless as riddhima is in that car. All he wants is Riddhima. Tears start falling from his eyes when he remembers all the times he misbehaved with her and hurt her and her tries of manaoying him. The way she took care of him after the accident etc. He says Tum kahan Ho Riddhima I m sorry for everything Plz come back wherever you are.

Armaan on the other hand is getting worried too . He's in Dilemma if he should go or no? Is it right for him to go and search for riddhima when her husband is already doing so? At the end he decides to go and help sid as friends. & he thinks that at this ime they need him . He leaves the house too. .......




thanks for continuning with the 2nd part

i liked sid said bhaar mein jaya ego, zyda seh zdda mujhe nag karedegi. hahaha

Want to knwo how Sid gets to rids and they reactions

norzar


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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
Continue yaar
Cant wait till see saves her

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