SR- You Are Mine -One Shot-(2nd update 1st pg) - Page 3

Originally posted by: ka7eela

🤗 🤗 🤗 thank you i am so happy you liked it!😃 ..but the hindi dialogs of SR are a bit of funny don't you think?😆 ..thats because i don't speak Hindi very well although i understand it very well!..maybe few words here and there that i don't comprehend..i could write their dialogs in English but then i feel they wont sound like the SR we know..because basically they don't speak English with each other..so it won't give the same effect when we imagine them in any scene!

Originally posted by: lighteningbuzz

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Nah your fine. Although I did had to read like three times when he said "chalo naha le hum tum." As I couldn't believe that Sid was actually saying that!?! lolz. But, seriously everythings fine the romance was beautifully captured don't worry.I couldn't even tell that "you don't speak hindi that much" as it doesn't look like it from your post. The hindi language was fine no problemz. At least I didn't notice anything wrong. 😛

Originally posted by: ka7eela

😆 😆 you are just being sweet

Originally posted by: ka7eela

hey friends this is a sequel of my other one shot..if you haven't read it yet here is the

link: SR-I belong To You-one shot

anyways..i have just wrote this!..to cheer up my beautiful SR friends..i will complete it in another time ..hope you guys like it😳

Hey CVs, get her on your creative team NOW!👏 Kamaal kar dia!⭐️

Originally posted by: Mars35913062

<font color="#993300">Hey CVs, get her on your creative team NOW!👏 Kamaal kar dia!⭐️</font>

Originally posted by: ka7eela

aww buzzy thank you sweets😳 ...but i was told to by someone in this forum that its very hard to understand!

Originally posted by: lighteningbuzz

OMG..... tht was so beautiful & romantic. I'm blushing even know...☺️ !

Originally posted by: lucky__me

<font color="#ff9900" size="3">OMG..... tht was so beautiful & romantic. I'm blushing even know...☺️!

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