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Posted: 15 years ago
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@elo...aww thank you *hug*...true they are a greek tragedy...and that's what makes me sad...I hope they have a good ending even if things turn ugly in the middle
@nitica ... aww thanks *hug*...true it may definately (and hopefully) not happen this way but when Yuvi will fall in love...he will give his everything to her
@Tush...thanks *hug*
@ash...thanks *hug*...it is true when Yuvi will be happy...Naina will be broken...that is extremely heart breaking for us fans...but hey we want that...so Yuvi realizes his love for Naina...RS rocks!! :P...ya i do hope as well that they end up together happily (they better or I am coming to India to make them)
@komz...thanks (lol you don't get a hug because you threaten to stalk me :P)...lol kidding :P
@jen...can I go and give Yuvi a hug...you can give Naina a hug :P...lol what do you mean when's the next? gosh woman...
o ya i didn't give you a hug *hug and sticks out her tongue*
@payal...my superman *hug*...lol that's cus I'm off from school (not that would have stopped me from writing anyways :P)...ya she is Nancy Drew...I would be really surprised if she didn't follow them that day
@sofna...lol ya we should be writing ff that are happy...lol i promise to write a fun-filled one...soon...maybe :P...lol well this is a one-shot...i'll complete the other one...but i didn't think this would fit in my other ff...cus in the other one...Yuvi himself told Naina the truth...btw thanks *hug*
@leah...aww thanks *hug*...lol damn it now you sound like Jen...but don't worry i'll attempt another crappy one-shot...lol they are so short!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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1stlyyyyyyyyyyyyy thnk u 4r sharin wid me 😊
n u have written very well 👍🏼
par.............mera UV akela kyun reh gaya🥺
" jaisi karni waisi bharni" ismein se smthin will cum in near future
do make moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee on yuna n do PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

1stlyyyyyyyyyyyyy thnk u 4r sharin wid me 😊

n u have written very well 👍🏼
par.............mera UV akela kyun reh gaya🥺
" jaisi karni waisi bharni" ismein se smthin will cum in near future
do make moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee on yuna n do PM

aww you welcome...lol aren't you my friend... :P i have to share with you
thanks!!...*hug*
well he deserves it after playing with Naina's feelings...but hopefully everything will work out for the better
lol kk...i shall do more writing...it's better than writing 20 page essays :P
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh sumi.. that was beautiful.. i feel for yuvi, but i feel more for naina.. its sad.. but he kinda deserves it too !! *sigh* its really confusing on whose side i am.. i keep on oscillating between the two !!
it was amazing , esp how yuvi shouted out his fear.. that was the most endearing part - my heart actually went out to him for this.. its sad where life takes u.. and we are going to see naina's heart being broked and yuvi;s mission being fullfilled simultaneously !! what a pity !!
oh, n i forgot to add before.. thnks for the PM!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice one Sumi...For once I would like Naina to give Yuvi the now hot now cold treatment. Lets see him suffer through it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@MJ...aww have you become a ping-pong ball now :P...lol kidding..true it is really hard to side with either of them... thanks for liking it *hug*
@anut...lol wouldn't we all love to see Naina giving him a cold treatment (which she did yesterday and that was soooo good)...thanks *hug*
@anwaya...thanks!!! *hug*
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks Javz...lol this was cute as well?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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m having a feeling the CVz r reading ur one-shots....& u very well know why i said that!!
extremely well written beautifu part sumi.it wz sooo emotional,complete contrast to the other one whrere i went all happy while this one left me gloomy cz yuvi initiated a step & wz let down by a shattered naina :( nahi yar jaldi se ek acha happy one shot likho plz sumi...!!
anyways loved his entry,all happy & bright!i went like,
Dr.YUVRAAJ SINGH transformed into Dr.HAPPY SINGH & again into Dr.GRUMPY SINGH & than finally Dr .ANGRY Yuvraaj SINGH ...lol
That last bit reminded me of that scene wen naina just walks away & yuvi calls her bak..but this yell wz agonized rather than his authoritative & commanding tone in that epi... sumi u betta look out! cva r stealing ur scenes!! lol!
loved it dear! keep writing more!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lol I wrote this before the episode...so you're right they stole it...lol or not
you should have read this before the other one...lol you would be happy right now instead of sad
aww thanks for commenting and liking it! *hug*...lol I am trying to write one of Naina being pregnant...still thinking
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ Appy - 😃 😉 😆

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