My Prediction For AR Entry(Part13 link-Pg-33)

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Rai

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Posted: 15 years ago

#181

thankxxxxxxxx sri
awesome part
thanx for the PM
hope riddhima recover soon
hate yuvi because he told shanky about the party
please post the next part soon
hope in the end the person who is talking to armaan is riddhima

Edited by KaJen1 - 15 years ago

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

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Posted: 15 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: arss

Sriiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

I soo love u …… 

After every update that's the first thing I say now.. well lets just say that's my opening line now.. 

Wow soo many thoughts flowing in my head and I have no clue how to frame them today… so bear with the weird sentence formations… 

Well first lemme start with congratulationg u 

On becoming senior member and also completeing a decade of updates.. that's something eh !! what started as a simple prediction turned into a really loved fiction and that's commendable !! 

A round of applause for her please guys… 

Hahahahaha 

And maaam im flattered for that pm and as I said I cant belive my luck on that one hehehe 



Okay coming back to the splendid update.. 

What do u want me to say ??

Each part was perfect and I mean each dialogue each emotion !! 

All I can do is gasp with my mouth open 

*NOTE TO SELF* close mouth.

Coming back to ur update coz I loved it soo much today ill quote the bolded part of ur update-the parts that really hit me- and will give my comments on that.. so rembaa the bolded part is urs and the rest is mine.. 











All staff gathered around shashank…
WARDBOY1: Hum sab aap se maafi mangthe hain Dr.Shashank…
SISTER1: Sorry sir…please Dr.Armaan ko mat nikaliye…
WARDBOY2: We are very sorry Dr.Shashank…
SISTER2:Jee sir ,,,hum doobara kabhi nehi karenge..please sir..
ALL: Please sir…

This scene I thought was a complete take out from dmg

Coz this is how it always happens or rather happened there and u potrayed it like a real life moving shot !!

SHASHANK:Haan..wooh kahin nehi jayenge..…waise mujhe lagtha hain ki sanjeevni ko itne kabil doctor ko khona nehi chahiye…kya kehthe hain…

Oooohh I was really impressed at this one it was dr shanky in true form

He would never let the other staff now what if he had anything against a paticualr person yet he would let the person concerened know that he wasn't too happy with him

All interns looked at themselves and fastly left except atul..afterall he was also intern..
SHASHANK:Dr.Joshi…. aap bhi..
ATUL:Jee ..yes…sir..

Aaaw felt soo bad for atul here that u have no clue..

Atul left only to stop at a distance…
typical atul he would never leave armaan in confusing times like this

KEERTHI: "Welcome back Dr.Armaan" and he smiled faintly to her and she left…

It brought out the fondness she felt for armaan really well and the fact that she always stood by them whenevever possible and adored them was really evident here..

NIKKI: (to herself)Pata nehi…par mujhe kuch toh gadbad lag raha hain…hope armaan theek ho…

The scene reminded me not only of nikki but the whole gang as they always put on a brave face infront of armaan if they thought anything was amiss and they they would wonder about it later..

Whoaaa looks like someone has seen dmg all over again….

Party……..???????The things which all happened in last 2 days which have effected armaans life drastically were all because of this so called "party",and here we hear again about it..

Hahaha I have to say I founf this hilarious to no ends…

I mean armaans reaction was like wow !!

ARMAAN:Thanks again…
KEERTHI: Its late now…I need to go.
ARMAAN:Main aapko chod do…
KEERTHI: No its ok main chali jaungi…welcome back Armaan…

aaawww shows the chivalrious side and the very gentleman personality of armaan.

Aah how I wish I get a guy like him yaa..

Lol going on another track naaa..

I know I know

But just couldn't resist..

ARMAAN:Wooh main…bas aise hi…basketball court pe..
ABHI: Basket ball court…?
NIKKI: Great…how could I forget….. main bhool kaise gayi …..ki tum jab bhi pareshan rehthe ho tho basketball khelthe ho…

Omg srii this was really nice

A surprise

I really never expected this and when I read it I was like wow I never thought of it yet it is soo true
thanks for that really cherished it..

The moment between the whole group of frnds was too long to quote and needless to say you know exactly what im talking about… 

It was really sweet the typical armaan thing of the ticket—the frnds feeling guilty for scolding him yet again scolding him more.. abhi feeling a bit akward.. 

Aaww it was one of the ost adorable moments in ur story and im eagerly waiting for the ridz ka sach to unfold yaaa.. its litrealy keeping me on my toes…. 

Loved the fact that armaans is back in sanjeevni 

And dr mehra hugs and kisses to u hehehe 



Ooooooooohh how can I forget this I loved ur saneevni- a medical boon thing.. it couldn't have been placed well and ur mind was working brilliantly while writring 

Ucaptured moments that took me by surprise and I really love ur story for that reason 

By far this was one of the best updates.. and someone is improving with each update.. 



Im really sorry I took a long time to update my post but was busy with some errands hope the comment will be enough to keep u happy and not angry at me 

Ill hopefully be well on time the for the next one… 

Apologies and love…

Arushi

thanks a lot dear for u lovely comment..as usual which brings a biggggg smile on my face,,,thanks u liked the friendship scenes!!!
no apologies please,,i like to knw u r comment on next one too.i have PM it u..
take care..
sri

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

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Posted: 15 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: arss

oh btw i forgot to add in the earlier one

i really liked the detailed description an imporvemnt frm the earlier ones

and i agree with soph u can really focus on the emotions :D

thanks and yes i will ,,,
and as usual armaan and emotions make me go nuts!!! 😃
but thank u ..will try to improve..
sri

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@RadiantTreasure

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Posted: 15 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: Wild.Aimee

Hi Sri...

Thanks for the PM dear. Now coming to your updates –

The first scene where Anjali was thinking about the past was very touching. It displayed her love towards her little sister in a true sense. Then Armaan calling her... it was very nice to see that Anjali and Armaan are still in touch.

Then the Flashback – Abhi-Nikki operating on Riddhima, Riddhima slipping into Comma... Atul-Muskaan-Kirti treating Armaan, Armaan gaining his memory back. This was a something I never imagined. I mean, after such a painful incident, it was the only Pleasant surprise.

But again, the most painful was when Armaan tried to see Riddhima, and Shashank didn't let him see her. I actually cried while reading that.

What I don't understand is that why does Shashank keeps saying, "Riddhima agar us din tumne Armaan ki baat nahi maani hoti to..." I mean, when did Armaan asked her to do something. I think whatever Riddhima did, was out of hr own wish. Waise bhi wo kab kisi dusre ke kahe pe chalne wali thi...

I loved Armaan's re-entry. I want the exactly same thing to happen in DMG, if only Armaan comes back. The only thing I am not sure about is the way Armaan spoke to Shashank. I mean, he has never ever spoken to him in that way. Not even when he lost his memory. But then, love can change any person.

Armaan's interaction with new Interns was very nice.

I loved the song you choose for AR... Tum se hi... it fitted perfectly in the situation.

You have portrayed New interns very well. I liked the fact that Armaan is all geared up to make things back to normal once again. I am sure he will win. I think Atul will be his greatest support like always. Some sparks have already started building between New Interns. And Yuvi rescued Naina... good.

I like Umar Bhai and Tamanna's interactions as well.

The most pleasant turn was new found bond developing between Armaan-Abhi. Armaan is really naughty. JP is stupidly hilarious. His SUPERMAN dress was really funny... LOL...

I loved this scene a lot –

ARMAAN:Maine kahan na..usse baat mat karo..toh kyun kiya tumne…
ABHI:Arre yaar..sorry..ab se jo tum kahoge main wahin karoonga…promise..
ARMAAN:Toh chalo dekhthe hain…Seedhe baito….(abhi sits straight)..left dekho(he sees left)….right dekho(he sees right)..upar dekho..(he sees up)…naak mein ungli daloo..(and poor abhi,he is not as intelligent as saif ali khan and keeps his hand in his nose) ….(armaan whos seeing is laughing like hell…………….hahahahha!!!!!!!!! )

I means great... The Party song – Kuch khaas hai, reminded me of Movie Mohabbatein. Very sweet.

But what was the truth Nikki was taking about? And why are Atul-Anjie stopping her to reveal it to Armaan? Sid is cute and immature.

I am glad to finally see AA & AN confessing to each other. Hope AN ki bachi hui problem bhi jaldi solve ho jaaye, I mean Jiah. Shashank is always in search of a reason to throw Armaan out of Sanjeevani. It was heartbreaking to see Armaan leaving Sanjeevani... once again.

More than Armaan, I was shocked to see Shashank changing his decision. I loved Mr.Mehra's character. He is a very lively guy. The scene where Armaan was trying to tell his friends that he isn't leaving, was very-very sweet. It truly reminded me of old DMG. The last few lines of the latest update written very appropriately. Armaan's has always respected his work, but now I can see his admiration towards Sanjeevani has grown to further heights.

thanks u liked it and thanks u took time to comment..
i have replied u back!!!
thanks again n yes thanks for suggestions too..will try to improve..
did PM to u my next one!!!do review!!
sri

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krazyboutkaran

@krazyboutkaran

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Posted: 15 years ago

#185

OMG!!!!!!!.....wat ending.....plz cont fast....

nd if possible plz pm me wen u update.....

thx.....:)

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Firyaal Bolaky

@Firyaal

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#186

hey

great update

could not comment coz as a bit busy with work and study

As usual u rocks

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

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Posted: 15 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: KaJen1
thankxxxxxxxx sri
awesome part
thanx for the PM
hope riddhima recover soon
hate yuvi because he told shanky about the party
please post the next part soon
hope in the end the person who is talking to armaan is riddhima

hey thanks u liked it...
and about who talked to armaan is suspense 😉
ok then take care..
bye
sri 😊