My Prediction For AR Entry(Part13 link-Pg-33) - Page 17

Heeeyyyy Sri

Reserved 😃 Will need to catch up on all 10 parts and will then comment 😊

Hannah Sophiaxx

Originally posted by: sri_4

ohk ..sure will update soon..very soon..ok
its just that i dont have any backups ,when i complete writing and editing,i post it ..
so ,,,u knw na....
anyways will update with 2 days ..ok...dont get bored,have some fun till then....
sri 😊

dont worry
will wait

sri
your writing rocks
so always waiting

lovely...

Originally posted by: HannahF

Heeeyyyy Sri <br><br>Reserved 😃 Will need to catch up on all 10 parts and will then comment 😊<br><br>Hannah Sophiaxx<br>

waiting....
no hurry..take time..they are very looooooongggg...i guess...
sri

Originally posted by: KaJen1

sri
your writing rocks
so always waiting

thanks..yep will post ASAP..and yes will PM u for sure 😊 ok..!!!
sri 😊

Originally posted by: Lalita4

lovely...

the suspense was awesome...

waiting for ur next part....

hey lalitha..long time...
thanks...will be posting ASAP...ok...
take care..
bye 😊
sri 😊

Okay Sri

Here I am- I just couldn't help it!! Last night I read all ten parts!!!! They are actually AWESOME! I don't know why you do not give yourself enough credit, because they actually made me smile after reading

here is my list of points I made in my head so that i could tell you before I went to sleep.

1.Dr Shashank- I absolutely hate hate hate hate this guy. He doesn't even deserve a son-in-law like Armaan. Such a shame he is Riddhimas father. I HATE him. Sorry about the rant, just had to get it out

2. Armaan- Could I love this guy anymore!!!😍 One thing which I find you could improve is by adding Armaans emotions. I feel they have been a little sidelined. It would also attract a lot of readers to see what he is concealing (emotions) inside him. His emotions for Riddhima, and his emotions towards Shashank. The fact that he still calls him sasurjee... Armaan has so much respect for him. Love You Armaan. On the whole though... I cannot believe Armaans friends 'neglected' him. I think atleast Nikita should have gone with him, Riddhima being shot would put Armaan into more depression than anyone else. But the more I read the more I can imagine him.. Thanks so much for that. You should consider script writing. But yess please please please more Armaan!!!!

3. One of the other parts, When Armaan was stopped from leaving I for imagined that it was Riddhima!! Way to keep us hooked 😃

4. Even though Riddhima is in coma, I can still sense her following Armaan as some sort of guardian Angel wherever he goes

5. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE and do add me to your PM list!!! 😃

6. I hope you didn't mind the mini essay 😆




Keep Smiling
Sophxx

Originally posted by: HannahF

Okay Sri <br><br>Here I am- I just couldn't help it!! Last night I read all ten parts!!!! They are actually AWESOME! I don't know why you do not give yourself enough credit, because they actually made me smile after reading <br><br>here is my list of points I made in my head so that i could tell you before I went to sleep.<br><br>1.Dr Shashank- I absolutely hate hate hate hate this guy. He doesn't even deserve a son-in-law like Armaan. Such a shame he is Riddhimas father. I HATE him. Sorry about the rant, just had to get it out<br><br>2. Armaan- Could I love this guy anymore!!!😍 One thing which I find you could improve is by adding Armaans emotions. I feel they have been a little sidelined. It would also attract a lot of readers to see what he is concealing (emotions) inside him. His emotions for Riddhima, and his emotions towards Shashank. The fact that he still calls him sasurjee... Armaan has so much respect for him. Love You Armaan. On the whole though... I cannot believe Armaans friends 'neglected' him. I think atleast Nikita should have gone with him, Riddhima being shot would put Armaan into more depression than anyone else. But the more I read the more I can imagine him.. Thanks so much for that. You should consider script writing. But yess please please please more Armaan!!!!<br><br>3. One of the other parts, When Armaan was stopped from leaving I for imagined that it was Riddhima!! Way to keep us hooked 😃<br><br>4. Even though Riddhima is in coma, I can still sense her following Armaan as some sort of guardian Angel wherever he goes<br><br>5. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE and do add me to your PM list!!! 😃<br><br>6. I hope you didn't mind the mini essay 😆<br><br><br><br><br>Keep Smiling<br>Sophxx<br>

Hey hannah..thanks for the unbaised reply..i really needed it….
Essay…its not long when compared to mine..so no probs………
Yes,I made shashanks character grey..actually more than that…and u will knw more as u go on…
And about what u asked about armaans leaving sanjeevni and no one helping him..its just that he didn't wanted to create any complications to his friends and he left without telling them,, …(u will knw more in future)as already they have many probs..…….and if u remember in one scene nikki asks armaan abt his where abouts,she has tried to find out but couldn't as he changed his place….i felt after such drastic incident armaan needed to be alone….especially as ridhima was far far away from him and he has tried every possible way to get near her..…and also he needed time where he can start afresh again…(by coming to sanjeevni)..yes he really missed his friends and it cud be seen in some of incidents…it has twists which u will see later..not arguing..trying to tell my view…
Yes about armaans emotions I think I shud work more on it (I already said that to arushi),its just I am loosing a grip on his character may be…I will try for sure thanks…as I really gave armaan a title "angel in disguise" and I want to be with it…hope my brain works this time!!!
script writing for DMG-?dear u r 5 parts are way to heavy than my 10 parts!!!
Yes I will PM u and u neednot say please atall,it wud be my pleasure…
Thanks for the effort u have taken and came here and commented…
takecare..
have a great day!!!!!!!!
sri 😊