Weekend With RAHUL MUSKAAN 31 ! * Last Part 30/7*

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surbhi_dmg

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

hey thanks all...will soon write one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!its really encouraging

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APPY

@IshqDewaani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

Mayank looked at Drashti.....
D- Main kuch kahu???

Mayank simply nodded...he knew what she wanted to say...he knew she wanted time & he had not given her......

D- Mayank .....main ...main kehna chhti thi ki....

M- Nahi..plzz kuch mat kaho...i know meri galti hai maine...i am sorry...tujhe waqt chahiye aur main..i am sorry.....Drashti main..woh...mujhe...

D(keeps her finger on his lips)- Shsss....ab hamesha ki tarah khud hi bologe ya mujhe bhi kuch kehne doge.....Mayank...Tune kuch galat nahi kia....

Mayank looked at her in surprise......

D- Mujhe bura nahi laga....jab tu nahi tha na Mayank maine tujhe bahut mis kia.....mujhe bahut gussa aaya bt still i couldnt stop thinking abt u.....Maine bahut koshish ki tujhe bhulane ki bt.....Hum DMg pe phir mile......Jab bhi Muskaan aur Rahul ka koi scene hota main kabhi Muskaan thi hi nahi main hamesha Drishti hi thi......Jab tu show chodke gaya tha mujhe phir laga ki hum shayad ek dusre liye hai hi nahi bt jab tu wapis aaya valentine day ki shoot ke liye main phir jee uthi...tujhe pata hai ki teri v-day ki entry humne sach 14th feb ko shoot ki thi??

M- Ya....

D- Mayank hum jab bhi kareeb aaye hamesha bichad gaye.....main tujhse aaj bhi uthna hi pyaar karti hu jitna pehle karti thi shayad usse jyada bt mujhe daar hai Mayank....

M(takes her hand in his)- Dristi..jab hum saath hai toh kaisa daar???

D(tears)- Tujhe kho dene ka daar hai mayank...main tujhse bahut pyaar karti hu..main tujhe khonaa nahi chahti....

M- Drishti....hum hamesha saath rahenge...

D- nahi.....Hum kabhi saath nahi reh payenge....Mayank tu samjta kyun nahi ki hum ek dusre ke liye hai hi nahi...

M- Tu aisa kyun sochti ahi???

D- Kyunki hum jab bhi mile hai bichne ke liye....

M- Par drishti....

D- Nahi Myaank.......

Itna aacha nahi hai..bt still

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surbhi_dmg

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

drishti could feel wat was mayank going thru..but now she too realised this is it...he is the one she alwys craved for..........

at the moment wat all she wanted was him....physically mentally emotionally....she was happy that she was wid him....but afraid abt wat mayank thought as the future of their relation......separation......

she decided that she ll never go away frm him neither will let him leave her.....she loved her.....

it was d night of submission.night of confession..night of love.....she ws ready to submit herself to him..she was all his....all she wanted was to give the same security feeling to him and she felt it was d rite tym...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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surbhi_dmg

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

she prayed....prayed for the car to open and being wid mayank in the house..n liviing the moment.....

mayank was lost in himself.....
she tried hard to open the door hard.....n prayed simultaneously..n it did open..everything around them wanted them to meet..to melt into one another....and she too was ready for it......

it was raining hard....she cae out..n brought mayank too....mayank had a fake smile on his face..coz he wasnt ready to face the separation that were ultimately going to face...........and for he kissed drishti.......
but drishti was happy she wanted him.....

mayank was in white....since it was raining...his tshirt became transparent.....this added to his looks..he was smoking hot.....
drishti blushed seeing him.........

they went in the hose from peechhe ka darwaza......

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

woww this place seems to be alive again! those parts were soo cute!

great going guys! =)

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sweety

@sweetsugar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

awwwww ...great part guys ☺️☺️

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

Continuing:

Drushti: Rahul woh tu beht... main tere liye coffee bana ke aati hoon.

Mayank: Mayank... Rahul nahin.

Drushti: Ohh haan... sorry woh aadat ho gayi hain tujhe rahul bolane main.

Mayank: lekin abhi main mayank hoon rahul nahin.

Drushti: Haan baba pata hain.

Mayank: Dekh Drushti, Rahul shahid tujhe chod kar chala gaya, lekin mayank kabhi tujhe chod kar nahin jaega.

Drushti was silent, she kept looking down avoiding to meet his gaze.

Drushti: Dekh... tu beht na main abhi aati hoon....

Drushti started to walk away but Mayank held her hand, not letting her go.

Mayank: Mere baat ka jawaab de, rahul chala gaya tha, main nahin, main tujhe kabhi chod kar nahin ja sakta, main bhi jaanta hoon ki tu mujhse kitna pyaar karti hain, phir yeh sab kyun? Dont you trust me?

Drushti: Trust hi toh baat hai mayank, no i cant trust you anymore, rahul ke saath mayank bhi chala gaya tha, muskaan aur drushti main koi farak hi nahin tha, dono bahaut akele ho gaye the, bina kuch kahe tu sirf directors ko yeh keh diya ki tu ja raha hain, tune mere bare main ek baar bhi nahin socha? Us din ke baad i cant trust you anymore, jab man kiya gaya, jab man kyai wapas a gaya, ab phirse jab man chahiye tu phirse chala jayega, aur phirse main bahaut akeli ho jaungi mayank. i cant take this anymore.

Mayank let her hand go and walked towards her, he held both her hands.

Mayank: Kya main akela nahin ho gaya tha jab tu mere saath nahin thi? Tujhe kya lagta hai ki mujhe yeh sab acha lagta hai? Mera koi shauk nahin hai tujhe hurt karne main, bas halat aise the ki....

Drushti: Enough mayank, bahaut ho chuka, agar phirse woh halat a jaenge toh kya hoga? Phirse tu chala jaega na, mera dil todke?

She moved both her hands now and went in the kitchen. Mayank had no idea what to do now, how to convince drushti that he could not live without her, and would never leave her again.

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Hope you all liked it... please comment and someone continue =)

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

Mayank walked in the kitchen, seeing drushti making coffee but also wiping away the tears she had in her eyes.

Mayank: Drushti.... please.... tu ro mat...

Drushti got so startled by his voice, she had no idea he had been standing right behind her. She quickly wiped the tears and turned around.

Drushti: Mai... main.. main kahan ro rahi hoon?

Mayank: Tu mere se toh jhoot nahin bol sakti hai...

Drushti: Mayank... please main thodi der ke liye akela rehna chahti hoon.

Mayank: Please muskaan meri baat toh sun, i really dont mean to hurt you.

Drushti: Just go mayank, pleasee.

Drushti had more tears in her eyes now, she started to run out of the kitchen but Mayank held her so tight, there was no esccape for her.

Drushti: Owww Mayank.. please mujhe chod, oww you are hurting me.

Mayank: Please ek baar meri baat sun.

Drushti: Main kuch nahin suna chahti!

Mayank: Please...

He had gotten tears in his eyes also, he was asking so sweetly she could no say no.

Mayank: Drush... main tujhse pyaar karta hoon, i love you. Main kabhi soch bhi nahin sakta tujhe phirse chod ne ko. Please believe me, shaadi karna chahta hoon tujhse, i cant live without you.

Drushti wanted to believe all he was saying, but it was still hard for her.

Mayank: Main jaanta hoon ke ek baar tujhe chod ke chala gaya isiliye tujhe lag raha hai ki main phirse chala jaunga, lekin aisa nahin hoga, ek baar galti ki hai maine, dobara nahin karunga, i swear.

Mayank started wiping all her tears from her face.

Mayank: I promise ke yeh aanson tumhare aankhon main phir kabhi nahin aaenge.

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There guys i felt like writing another part so i wrote.. but i stopped there because i dunno if you all want drushti to forgive him so easily... so if you want her to then you can just continue. its all up to the next writer..

Someone please continue soon =)

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surbhi_dmg

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Posted: 16 years ago

#69

continuing.......

a part of drishti was wanting mayank inside him...a part of her was reluctant yet in love to accept him.....confusion was taking over love......

mayank too was thinking abt how to make her trust him..he knew that going away was a mistake but the circumstances weren't in his control......but now when he is here...he couldnt let go drishti just like that........

the air that night had smthing in it........it was love....the crave to get each other..yet confusion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

both dint know wat the night had iin store for them.....may be smthing both craved for yet were denying,,,,,passion for each other............ 😳

drishti made the coffee.........and got him towel too.....
he removed his shirt......and drishti too was wet.....things around them were bringing them close....yet they were denying the closeness.........

mayank knew..this was it..it was today or never.....he went near her.........
( i m havng goosebumps thinking of the next scene) 😳 😳

she knew he was coming towards her...but for some reason was not able to go away from him..infact she wanted him as close as possible..she wanted him inside her.......

mayank held her hands...a part of drishti was reminding her off d separation she faced..but she couldnt bear the proximity...she gave herself in.....she was not able to revolt.....