Weekend With RAHUL MUSKAAN 31 ! * Last Part 30/7* - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
good part Imane
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Drashti: main ....voh....Mayank...... mujhey plz thoda waqt do ...jis tarah se tum mera dil tod kar gaye ho tum nahi jante ki kitni mushilkil se maine apne app ko sambhala hai...ab main koi bhi faisla emotions mein aa kar nahi karna chahti ......
Mayank: theek hai !!!take your time Drashti ..main bhi nahi chahta hu ki tum koi galat faisla karo ......
(after few sec of silence looking striaght into her eyes) chahey tumhara jawab "haan" ho ya "na" ho i just want u to knw (silence agian for few secs ).......I Love you!!!!and i always will.....(breaking eye contacting ...not facing her now ) main nahi janta ki humarey kismat mein kya likha hai ,main nahi janta ki tum meri kismat mein ho ya nahi ..humara future chahey kuch bhi ho Drashti..... main tumhe ek dost k roop main nahi khona chahta ...main tumhe bata nahi sakta hu ...u mean a lot to me !!!!
Drashti : Dont worry Mayank ! hum humesha achey dost raheyga ....i promise
Mayank (smiles slightly his eyes clearly reflecting his love for her) : bye , will c u 2morow at the sets ...takecare
Drashti : Bye ,u too
The next morning
the director is explaining the scene to MD
Directors: ok so this is after rahul has refused to muskaan ...and muskaan after returning to her house is in total BREAK DOWN situation after having her trust broken over rahul for the second time ..she is out of control and rahul reaches there on time!!!
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sorry ppl wanted to write more but have to go now ...someone else cont ...i couldnt explain the last part properly ..hope u all understood
i kept writing Muskaan instead of Drashti lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
great part tina, imane and saba..👏

thnx Tina for revealing d secret behind his abrupt departure and

Imane and Saba for moving d story on...
👍🏼
Edited by rapi_c - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
thanks Rapi and Deepali
Edited by sweetsugar - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
Gr8 gng guys!!....jus cme ol for a while...nd read the last few parts...super!!...though i m nt xactly free heres my quick part...cant control myself frm writin...lolz!!
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The creative is explaining the scene to Mayank and Drashti
CREATIVE - - So as per the scene Muskaan gets home and is all shattered that Rahul said theres no place in his life for her..
She weeps and weeps...
Rahul realizes that what he has done is wrong...he shouldnt have spoken to drashti like that.......and he goes to her place to try and sort out things.....
And then he explains the rest of the scene to them..
The shot is ready....a call is sent for MAYANK AND DRASHTI !!
LIGHTS CAMERA ACTION !!
Rahul - Muskaan...main janta hoon maine tujhse bahut rudely baat kiya magar
Muskaan cuts him off. ..
Muskaan-Teri purani aadat hain Rahul......tu aisa hi hain...pagal thi main jo tujh par dusri baar bharosa kiya.....tu bharosey ke layak nahi hain..
He just looked into her eyes......
He felt as if Drashti was speaking those words to Mayank.....
CUTT
Dir - What was that mayank?...tumhara dialogue kaun bolega?
Mayank-Sorry....umm dusra take lete hain..
Dir- Please !!
LIGHTS CAMERA ACTION !!
Muskaan -Tu bharosey ke layak nahi hain..
Rahul- Shayad tu sahi keh rahi....main bharosey ke layak nahi hoon....kab kise kahan chodh jaaon...pata nahi chalega....tu sahi hain muskaan....tu sahi hain.....aur iss liye main chatha hoon ki tum ....tum mujhse durr raho.....apni zindagi barbad mat karo....
Muskaan-Zindagi toh tune meri barbaad kar hi di hain.....isse zyada kya karega?
Rahul stood silently watching her as per the scene...he dint need the glycerine......tears flew down automatically.......
Muskaan was supposed to be angry while rahul was supposed to be guilty..
Muskaan-Abb yahan khadey khadey kya kar raha hain....chala jaa yahan se...bhagwan ke liye mujhse durr ho jao rahul...tumhara pass hokar bhi pass na hona mujhe acha nahi lagta...ya tu hamesha ke liye raho ya phir hamesha ke liye chaley jao......iss tarah mujhe tang mat karo..
Rahul-Nahi karonga.....tujhe tang nahi karonga muskaan....chala jaonga.....tere ghar se ...teri zindagi se aur ek din is duniya se bhi....
Her eyes were filled with tears......they just looked at each other...
Dir- Cut !!
Dir-I like the improvisation...really super!!........there wasnt an eye lock in the script ....Drahti was supposed to turn her head in anger even though he spoke of death by the script....but it looks better if there are tears in her eyes....super scene guys!!....good job!!
Mayank and drashti gave a fake smile.....there wasnt any improvisation...they were just carried away by the moment....for once they forgot that they were rahul and muskaan...those emotions came straight from mayank and drashti !
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
mind-blowing, especially d dialogues as rahul-muskaan.. fab job, tina!! 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
haila tina!!!! superb yaar ...someone cont soon..its going gr8
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
hayye...uff..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
its going amazing...guys...luv u all..its simply superb.....!!!!!!!!!!!
cld v hv sm close ..like really close scenes between them..!!?!?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
-after the shoots were over ...
Dir- ok guys !!!pack up for today
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Karan- finally the day is over! chalo guys will c u 2morrow!

Jenny - karan..would u mind giving me a lift ! pankit and sunaina already left .........and

Karan - .....no jenny i wont mind offcourse not come along!

Karan is abt to leave when

Drashti - karan could u plz drop me home too

Karan - oh drashti i would have loved to but its raining really bad and ur house is on the other route ..ab..wait ..Mayank s house also falls on the same route ..i will tell him to drop u by

Drashti dint want to face him now for some reason ...she felt uncomfortable by the thought of being alone with him for some time

Drashti - aaa... no karan ....i will manage ..i will take a auto....before she could complete.....

Mayank - hey guys ready to leave

Karan - haan gud u came ...could u plz drop drashti home

Mayank - yeah yeah ofcourse ...lets go drashti

Drashti (not willing to but yet willing to) - Hmmm

all leave
Mayank opens the door for her..makes her sit in the car and pulls the gear

Mayank - aah!! it was a hectic day!

Drashti - yes

they dint speak anthing for a few mins ..mayank then decided to break the silence and to lighten the mood

Mayank- maine suna u opted for a auto over my car to drop u back home ...itni bhi khatara nahi hai meri gaddi!!hain?

Drashti - aaaa..voh ... nahi asi baat nahi hai!!!

Mayank (sensing some tension) - chill yaar main bus mazaak kar raha tha !!

by tat time they reach to Drashti s place

Drashti - byeee ..c u 2morow (is abt to get down the car but stops)

Mayank - Drashti!!!........maine tumse kha tha na k i dont want to loose u as a frnd at any cost ...plz dont feel uncomfortable around me ...

Drashti - mayank aisi baat nahi hai ...

Mayank (looking straight into her eyes) - Nahi drashti ...aisi hi toh baat hai ...ur eyes can never lie to me!

Drasthi *sighs* - i was just disturbed a lil

Mayank (angry on himself) - meri wajah se na.!!!..............shit damm it...y do i always end up hurting u???

Drashti - nahi mayank its not coz of u ...woh aaj shoot par ...acha woh sab chordo ...ab andar chalo coffee pi lo ...u will enjoy drinking coffee in this rain

MAyank - nahi ...ab kafi time ho gaya hai ...tum jao

Drashti -hmmm ..main dekh rahi hu merey haath ki coffee piney se dar rahey ho tum

mayank (smiling ) -aisa thodi na hai

Drashti - toh phir chalo

Mayank - acha ok i give up...chalo

Drashti and mayank happily try to open the door but


Drasthi - lock kholo Mayank

Mayank- lock khula hai drashti ...theek se darwaza kholo

Drashti (trying hard to open the door) - nahi khul raha hai...

Mayank - uffo ..wait let me try ....he bends towards her side to open her door for her .....he tries hard and while trying their head clash....they look into each others eyes for few mins and then they realize that they are very close to each other

Drushti (breaking the eyelock) - aaa ...ek kaam karo tum bahar se khol do

Mayank - OK (mayank tries to open his door but in vain)....shit mera bhi nahi khul raha hai ...i guess barish k wajah se jam ho gaya hai

Drashti - what ??ab kya karegey
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Edited by sweetsugar - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
Wow, great part... 👏 u know my favorite scene, na?😉

now someone continue with next part... plzz 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Saba it was MINDBLWOING, FANTASTIC.....👏 👏 👏

HAYEEEEEEEE Its ranning....😍 pls whoever is going to continue pls pls pls add sum*HOT* SCENE PLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS 😳 😳 😳 PLSSSSSSS😳 😳

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