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Posted: 16 years ago
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arghhh nooo Mits!!...doesn't matter...we're all waiting for you eagerly...please rewrite!!...I'm selfish I know...=D
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oho mits woooooowwwwwwwwwwwieeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!

Toooooooooooo coooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllll gr8 work !!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey awesome part mits, so nice of u to re-write.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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anyone continuing........

oh no i already posted .... plz continue 4m my one
Edited by ramusk - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ramusk i think u should continue.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was AMAZING MITS!!!....I've just realised all our strengths...some are good with intensity...some with comedy....some with drama...somewith overall good story....and together we make an awesome fanfic....
i was going to continue...but I'm sure Ramusk is...i'll just continue after...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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recap:Muski is at the bac of rahul n he comes close to her in the changing room....

he comes so close to her that her heart starts pounding faster ..... he is inches away just then she shouts Hello Dr.Kirti ..........

Rahul immmediately turns bac n finds thr is no Dr kirti around them and muski on the othe hand laughs her heart out in her usual way........(sorry to spoil the moment)

he gives a stern look n goes away....

All the intens gather around nurse stn for the briefing.....

Muski in a flirting manner comes n stands besides rahul n doing her nakhra's n rahul giving WATEVER kinda look.........

Rahul n muskaan both r assigned duties in gen ward.....

Just then wen they r abt to resume duties ... rahul asks sister lovely the case file n after taking he turns bac n finds muski still thr..

Note: i think i am poor in writing thiss scene)

Rahul tries to go from thr but she keeps blocking his way.... i think u ppl can imagine wat i wanted to tel....

rahul pushes her hard and goes awayy from thr... she also follows.......

in the gen ward they r treating Nana....

Rahul is busy looking into the file and muski comes n stands bhind him lookin into his file...

Ra:muskaan dekh tu mujhe kaam karne de plzzzzzz...........

Mu:oh to tu kam kar raha hai rahul plz tu mujhe sikhana ki kam kaise karte hain.......

Nana:Yeh kya ho raha hai............ Billi choohe ko manane mein laga hua hain....

Muski laughs in her own usual way ..............

It was not that nice i dint know how to end though but plz comment on it
Edited by ramusk - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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actualluy i wanted to write more but my dad came n scolded me thats its already late n i shud sleep so hope u likd it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I am back. You guys have been doing great!
Mits, ramusk and shrina... you guys rock!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Muskaan followed Rahul about all day...pushing him...poking him...teasing him...annoying him...stealing things....until Rahul reached breaking point! It was coming to 11pm...he was tired and Muskaan had the world's energy in her...
M:ay kankhajure....nimbu ko choos liya kya?? aisa moo kyun bana rakha hai??...tujhe hoowa kya??

Rahul couldn't take it...was she just indenial of what happened the other night....or was she intentionally trying to get a reaction?? whatever it was Rahul wasn't going to take it silently...he grabbed hold of her wrist making her drop her pen and folder from the shock and pulled her towards the fire escape.
Teh fire escape had no lights and the only light shining through was that from a roof top window was the moonlight emanating through...

Muskaan and Rahul stumbled through and he backed her up against the wall (had to get back Mits' scene...sorry) and held both her wrists towards the wall so tight that she couldn't move....staring directly at he r he whispered..
R:"Mujhe kya hoowa hai Muskaan??...Tum jaana chahti ho??
Muskaan nodded but his weight on hers didn't let her breathe let alone speak...could he feel her heart beating on his??

R: Mein tumse naraz bhi nahi re sakta....har din mein apne aap se jhagar ta hoon...har din mein keta hoon aapne aap se ke mein tumhare kareeb nahi aaoonga...mein tere saath baath nahi karoonga...mein tumko...........choonga........nahin....mein aapne aap se lar kar thak gaya Muskaan...

Muskaan really couldn't breathe....her heart was beating faster and faster...the butterflies in her stomach were escalating higher and higher...and his weight on her was making her hot.

Muskaan answered huskily which surprised Rahul who was used to her persistently loud voice..

M: Tho kyun lar te ho...aapne aap se??

There were so many questions she wanted to ask but her brain and mouth werent coordinating and that was all she could manage to come out with...

R: To mein tumhare kareeb aaooon?

Muskaan skipped a beat...but without thinking she nodded.

Rahul let go of her now sweetly aching hands and slipped his hands around her waist...slowly...firmly....Muskaan inhaled.

R: Tum mana nahi karongi?

Muskaan couldnt even if she wanted to....she shook her head.

R: Mein tumko choo?

Muskaan paused....she didnt care if this was right or wrong any more....she wrapped her arms around him...shocking Rahul to the core and nodded.
Rahul kissed her on the cheek...moving further down to her neck Muskaan shivered and relaxed into his arms...he breathed down onto her neck and gripped her waist closer to his.
His hands moulded on to her hips and Muskaan lost all conscio- *BEEP BEEP BEEP*

Muskaan reached for her cell in her back pocket but where rahul had held her wrists there were bleeding scrapes...Rahul seeing this guiltily reached into her back pocket...

Sorry it took so long guys...lacked inspiration....hope it was worth the wait.


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