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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ~ Disha ~

Hey Evryone,

OMG you all are so sweet.....i didnt even write that part properly..!!!!😳😳😳
Thanks guys,....well i am actually planning to start a FF in mid-Nov early-Dec, just thinking of the storyline😊😊!!!.....And i still think i need to improve my writing skills so yeh😳!!
But thanks for all ur encouragement 😃....! and WOW everyone is doing a gr8 job...and Komal..wow....u just took the story in the direction i had hoped fr.👏👏👏..and i just love the way u write👏👏👏...i'll let out a secret 😉....i'm an avid reader of ur RM FF in the FF section😳😳😳!..U r truly gifted....👏
Fantastic job everyone.....👏

Okay i almost died laughing... so u DO read it. lol. way to comment dude! even after my constant pleads to silent readers to COMMENT. thanks for the compliment, and now that ur secret is out, i'll start sending u a pm again, and i better see a comment from u. 😉😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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k... no one continued, so i'll do it.
Next morning, Rahul was the one to wake up first... slowly he opened his eyes and took in his surroundings and lastly... Muskaan. At first he tried to get his thoughts together and reflected back at last night. Nothing out of the ordinary happened. He looked down at his chest and realized that he was holding on to something... Something soft and delicate... Muskaan's hand was resting on his heart... still.
His eyes fell on her face instantly. She was fast asleep, and even though he could imagine how uncomfortable she must've been sleeping in the position that she was in, and on top of that, having her whole arm outstretched like that... yet even with all of that, she had a very deep, captivating smile on her face leaving Rahul completely mesmerized. Very slowly, he moved her hand and gently set it down on the bed. After which, he himself, went off to freshen up.
That was enough to get Muskaan to wake up. She slowly lifted her head off of the bed rest and opened her eyes... the first thought that came to her mind... Rahul.
Muskaan- Rahul?
She panicked... where did he go? She was sure he had been anything but comfortable last night, and on top of that, the cold had been biting at his back.
Muskaan- Rahul? Kahaan chala gaya? Rahul???
As Muskaan was looking around the room, a firm hand took hold of her shoulder... Muskaan jumped.
Rahul- (strange expression) Muskaan... kya hua? Idhar udhar kise dhoond rahi hai?
Muskaan hit him on his chest and instantly wrapped her arms around him...
Muskaan- Oye! Tujhe kya bimaari hai baar baar ghayab hone ki? Kahaan gaya tha. Eik toh yeh jaggah itni ajeeb hai uppar se tu subha subha ghayab hogaya bhoot ki tarhaan. Tujhe apni biwi ki koi fikar hai ki nahi?
Rahul's breath caught... all the while he was trying to get her to calm down. He didn't understand what the big deal was. Can't a guy use the washroom? But the fact that she had just called herself his wife... whoa! Time out!!!
Turns out Rahul wasn't the only one who was caught off-guard by her sudden outburst... "Haiye rabba ji! Yeh main kya bole jaa rhi hoon???"
Rahul- (sensing her awkwardness) Muskaan relax. Main fresh hone gaya tha. Aur waise bhi tu so rahi thi issiliye...
Muskaan- (she separates from him) Fresh hone gaya tha?
Rahul- Ab har kaam tere se poochke karoonga? Kuch kaam aise bhi hote hain jiski permission nahi li jaati. Jaise ke yeh... (lifts his pinky)
Muskaan- Chi! Mujhe koi interest nahi hai tere... (makes a disgusted face) personal kaam ke baare mein sun ne ka.
Rahul- Haan toh pooch kyun rahi thi?
Muskaan- Tu naa... bhaar mein jaa!
Rahul turns from her after giving her a disapproving "hmph" and thinks to himself "Pooch toh aise rahi hai jaise sach mein meri voti ho." It was starting to get a bit stuffy in the room and it was making him uncomfortable...
Rahul- Oye sun.
Muskaan- Kya hai?
Rahul- Woh... raat ko tune khidki bandh kyun ki thi. Tujhe bola tha naa ki kamre mein garmi hojaayegi.
Muskaan- Hone de. Raat ko sardi mein marrne se toh achha hai ki garmi mein soyein. Eik toh poori raat kaamp raha tha... bimaar padh sakta tha. Thank you kehne ki bijaaye mujhe hi sunaa raha hai. Gadha!
Rahul- (smiles and holds hjer by the shoulders) Sun.
Muskaan- Ab kya hai?
Rahul- Thanks.
Saying so... he leaned over and gave her a slight kiss on the cheek and walked out with a naughty smile leaving behin a very dazed Muskaan with a silly smile on her face...
Komz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Okay i almost died laughing... so u DO read it. lol. way to comment dude! even after my constant pleads to silent readers to COMMENT. thanks for the compliment, and now that ur secret is out, i'll start sending u a pm again, and i better see a comment from u. 😉😛

lol.....wel actualy i just started reading it about 2 weeks ago😳😳....am tryna catch up on the story ...so i didnt read any of ur pleas😆...hehe!!!...My plan was to just go back and read from the beginning and then cmment....but if it means so much to u willl start commenting whenever possible...also pls excuse me coz of my daily commitments it has been hard fr me to go back and forth and catch up on ur FF but i will do it whenever possible!!!!.....😃😃😃.......sorry fr nt cmmenting till today😳😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ayi Haiye Komal....tussi ne toh hosh uda diye.....chalo....i'll continue....sorry guys i wont be as good as Komal but will try to do what i can!
After Rahul walked off Muskaan just kept staring slightly confused as to what just happend but blushing immensely.
Muskaan(hits herself on the head): Pagal....
After getting freshned up Muskaan heads towards the kitchen. Rahul, Atul and Armaan were already at the table. Muskaan saw Atul reading the paper. Armaan looking around looking for someone (Ridzi..lol) and Rahul looking straight towards her. He looked at her so sweetly, his eyes saying a million things. Muskaan got so flushed that she smiled, put a strand of her hair behind her ear and walked into the kitchen.
Anjali (in kitchen): Good Morning Mrs. Muskaan Garewal....
Muskaan smiled so intently, suddenly this name seemed to have so much meaning to it. It had become much more than just a name for Muskaan.
Muskaan: Good Morning Dr. Anjali Gupta....kya ban raha hain? and Ridz kahan hain?
Anjali: Well Ridzi doodh lene gayi hain.... aati hogi! Well Atul ke liye cheese toast sandwich, Armaan ke liye omlette, Mere liye cereal, Ridzi ke liye toast, aur tumhare pati dev ke liye...,(pauses).actually Rahul ko paranthe chahiye the....lekin...mere paranthe insaanon ke khane kke layak nahin hain....(Anjali starts giggling)
Muskaan(suddenly becomes hyper): MAIN BANA DOONGI.....(realises she was screaming) ...Sorry (speaking slowly) mera matlab mujhe banana aate hain.....main bana deti hoon...Rahul ke liye!
Anjali: Aye Haiye....haan haan kyun nahi.....apne husband ke liye banane mein kya sharam...aao aao! Khoob pyaar se banana ....OK?
Muskaan gives Anjali a death stare...hehe...and Anjali just puts her hands in the air as if surrendering and gets back to her work. Muskaan wanting to do anything that makes Rahul happy goes on to make his breakfast.
After Ridz returns and everything is prepared . All the girls come to sit. Anjali grabs a seat. When Muskaan looked, Atul was sitting next to Rahul ... Anjali sees her expression and quickly understands.
Anjali: Umm Atull...tum yahan kyun nahi beth te...(poiting to a seat next to hers)....Yahan haawaa achi aati hain?
Armaan(confused): Champ ko subah subah hawe ki kya zaroorat hain?
Anjali now gives Armaan a cold stare and through her eyes points out to Muskaan and Rahul. and Armaan understands.
Armaan: Oh acha acha...haan haan..champ ja hawaa khale....yh hawaa yahan roz roz nahi aati!
Atul is more than happy to be seated next to Anjali and jumps onto the spot! Muskaan sits down next to Rahul both still smiling at each other.
Rahul: Hey wow..paranthe kisne banaye...Definitely not Anji..Ridz tumne??
Ridzi : Nahi toh....main khud do minute pehle ayi hoon!...
Anjali: Arey Rahul.....Jab sawaal ka jawab tumhare paas baitha ho toh fir poochne ki kya zaroorat.
Armaan and Atul both in a mood to tease them go...
"Ooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhh.....toh Muskaan ne banaye hain"
Armaan:Hayeeeeee main sadke jawan .....
(everyone giggles ....RM are just smilling )
Everyone starts eating.....Rahul looks at Muskaan for a sec and then goes on to eat. Everyones eating and talking. Rahul is eating too...but Muskaan is waiting fr a response as to how they tasted! But seeing that Rahul wasnt gonna say a word she slowly tapped him and asked.
Muskaan: Ummm...woh,.,.woh....breakfast kaisa hain!
Rahul: Hmmm....not bad!...But theres room for imprvement.
Muskaan is shocked to her wits end...:Kyaaaaaaa????? (slolwly)oh ok....teekh hain. (shes taken aback but thinks that maybe they werent as good as she thought)
Muskaan just turns away and plays around with her breakfast nibbling only once or twice...clearly upset by Rahul's response. After everyone finishes...they all get up to leave fr the kitchen. Muskaan doesnt realise that the others were going and is still playing with her food. Rahul looks at her, smiles to himself and grabs her wrist surprsing her and then pulls her towards him so that they;re faces are just 2 inches apart. He slowly bends in and goes close to Muskaan;s ear. He slowly moves his hand and with his fingers places her hair behind her ear.
Rahul: Itna badiyah breakfast zindagi mein pehli baar kiya hain!..Thanks............aur..............aur...........(Muskaan is just flushed and closes her eyes).......tussi aaj vade sone lag rahe ho!
Someone calls out from the kitchen. "MUSKAAN"
Rahul and Muskaan immediatly get away from each other. Muskaan is smiling so much......her eyes and lowered....she slowly whispers
"Thanks".....and quickly rushes to the kitchen.
Rahul(placing his hand on his heart): Hayeeee yaar.....yeh muskaan (referring to both Muskaans name and her smile) ek din meri jaan lejayegi!
Edited by ~ Disha ~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
Disha meri jaan! u comment whenever u finish reading. i'll wait patiently! Coming to the part.... WOW! Waaaaaay better than mine. i made an attempt... u put in a good effort! super!!!! awsome! rocking!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
OMG!!!
This is sooo awesome..
I couldn't read earlier because of my exams but read all now and it is just heartblowing!!!
Seriously, all of you are amazing and i am sooooo happy that we have this weekend fun with RM!!
Thnx Hiba!!!!!!🤗

Disha: Mindblwng updates! the antakshari one was the best! Loving it!
Parathe!! awww.....

"Muskaan doesnt realise that the others were going and is still playing with her food. Rahul looks at her, smiles to himself and grabs her wrist surprsing her and then pulls her towards him so that they;re faces are just 2 inches apart. He slowly bends in and goes close to Muskaan;s ear. He slowly moves his hand and with his fingers places her hair behind her ear. "
😍

Komal: I have run out of words now, amazing, awesome, mindblowing, superb, what else..idk..I have to read a dictionary now!
His expression softened and finally it seemed as if he was beginning to adjust to the temperature... Muskaan admired his defined features and smiled at the inncocent look he had on his face. His fair complexion was luminescent in the milky light of the moon that was streaming in through the window. It was a relief that they had the best view of the beach from their room. So what if it was freezing cold at night...
🤪

Aiman: aww.....😳
He takes off his jacket and puts it over muskaan's sleeping body. When he lays the jacket over muski's arm... Muskaan takes out her hands, pulls the jacket more on her body and moves to her right.. unknowingly grabbing Rahul's hand in her arms ... and there BACKGROUND SCORE 😍starts playing. and once again... an EYELOCK.. with only Rahul looking at Muski.. lol..
😆
For a second i was like eyelock? but she was sleeping and then rahul looking at her! 😆
Another awesome update.!!

Munnaza: very cute! thnx for starting👏 and i love how rahul is very authorative in a caring way! aww..!

Good Job everyone 👍🏼
I would continue but maybe next time .... gtg to bed rt now...
But continue soon ppl!!!
❤️ Mitsy

Edited by mits002 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
OMG ... SUPERB
UR SO AWSOME !!!👏
PLZZZZZZZ CARRY ON... ur like a PRO at this...
plz plz plz carry on soon
can't get enough of it😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
omg! this is the best weekend with rm!
komz and disha you guys are amazing yaar!
disha - i cant wait to read your own fanfic...
now someone continue... komal why dont you?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
hey its a dmg weekend again people. someone continue this wonderful story pleeeeease!!!!
sonia
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40

hey guys!...It was really great!!...you guys were simply superb!...

Ok even i wldnt mind ryttn.....i am tryn for de next part....hope u dunt mind..
Tina!!
Edited by cool~~gal - 16 years ago

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