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Posted: 16 years ago
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Disha, Kajal, that was amazing guys!!!! You both are tooooo good! And Hiba yaar, I was dying for this thing last week! Finally!!!! Continuing!!!
Thinking of what Muskaan wanted to tell him in her drunken state, he smiled and dozed off to sleep on the chair right beside the bed. A while later, Muskaan woke up to use the washroom and without even noticing Rahul sitting there, she left.
After entering back into the room, her first impulse made her look down to the ground to see if Rahul was comfortable... not seeing him there she panicked until her eyes fell on his sleeping figure.
R-M MUSIC!!!!
The wind was blowing and Rahul had his arms crossed over his chest. The slight breeze was stabbing at his back like ice. Muskaan noticed the uneasy expression on his face and quickly ran towards the window. Closing it she went back towards her bed but stopped short right beside Rahul...
His expression softened and finally it seemed as if he was beginning to adjust to the temperature... Muskaan admired his defined features and smiled at the inncocent look he had on his face. His fair complexion was luminescent in the milky light of the moon that was streaming in through the window. It was a relief that they had the best view of the beach from their room. So what if it was freezing cold at night...
Trying to hold back, she gave in and finally reached over and touched his cheek. He was so innocent...
Muskaan had been fighting her feelings and tried to come to terms with the fact that she hated him and couldn't stand him even in a crowd. BUT... who can fight the heart....
As she watched him ever so carefully, she thought to herself...
"Aye paagal... yeh tujhe kya ho raha hai? Kahin tujhe Rahul se... Haiye rabba! Nahi nahi... aisa thodi ho sakta hai... Rahul... Bachpan se jiske saath jhagadti thi, jiski shakal tak dekhna pasand nahi karti thi, aaj usse hi dekh ke mere chehre pe badi si smile aajati hai. Uske saath rehna achha lagta hai. Uski baatein, uski harkatein, uski har baat achhi lagti hai... kya hogaya hai mujhe?"
Tangled in her thoughts, she once again looked at him... intensely. Rahul, adjusting himself in a more comfortable position moved a bit and took Muskaan's hand off his cheek and kissed it lightly before holding it close to his heart...
Muskaan's heart skipped a beat... "Oye, tu chahe jo bhi sochle... tujhe Rahul se pyaar hogaya hai. Iss piddhe se pyaar hogaya hai." She smiled thinking about her now cleared confusion and fell asleep sitting on the edge of the bed with her hand still in Rahul's grip on his heart....
Komz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
someone pleas continue this is greatt!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Ashi: OMG! that was sooo good! i love how ur writing is so descriptive...

@ Namrata_12: u should continue.. i remember in the last weekend u did a great job!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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@Kajal: I'm Komal. lol. but urs is better.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i would continue because i enjoy doing this but right now it has stopped at such a point that i dont want to ruin it and so far you guys are updating it really well but i promise i will update as well
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

@Kajal: I'm Komal. lol. but urs is better.

Hi komal.. im actually aiman.. lol..🤣... srry i didnt ur real name and i was too lazy to type in ashiyuvi4life so i just wrote ashi..
thank you but mine isnt better.. urs is 😊.
Edited by kajaalrox - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yes it is going great. someone please write more...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Evryone,
OMG you all are so sweet.....i didnt even write that part properly..!!!!😳😳😳
Thanks guys,....well i am actually planning to start a FF in mid-Nov early-Dec, just thinking of the storyline😊😊!!!.....And i still think i need to improve my writing skills so yeh😳!!
But thanks for all ur encouragement 😃....! and WOW everyone is doing a gr8 job...and Komal..wow....u just took the story in the direction i had hoped fr.👏👏👏..and i just love the way u write👏👏👏...i'll let out a secret 😉....i'm an avid reader of ur RM FF in the FF section😳😳😳!..U r truly gifted....👏
Fantastic job everyone.....👏
Edited by ~ Disha ~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG komi amaaaaaaaaaaazing! 2 gud! mesmerizing!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kajaalrox

Hi komal.. im actually aiman.. lol..🤣... srry i didnt ur real name and i was too lazy to type in ashiyuvi4life so i just wrote ashi..
thank you but mine isnt better.. urs is 😊.

Aiman? so we both have ids that throw ppl offguard. lol. yaar, i write komz at the end of every post for a reason. and still i get ashi that was awsome... or thanx ashi. i'm not ASHI. I may be like her, but not her. Priya Wal is the only one who can do justice to AShi's character. Sorry, Remix moment. 😳
nope. urs was wayyyyy better. but thanx for the comment!

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