Love triangle would've been better

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I'm writing this as I'm not very happy with the way the story is proceeding. When the news of the show first surfaced, it was mentioned that it is going to be a 'matured' love story. What they're showing right now is far from being that. It has become a comedy show.

I know most of you will not agree with me. I'm just putting forth my opinion without being biased to any particular actor or character. I would've liked the creatives to show Teni falling for Parth than this new guy's story because the former totally makes sense. Falling for someone doesn't always mean you want to marry that person or be with him. Teni has never ever had the care and love of a man(father, boyfriend, husband, brother, etc) who could make her feel secure.
Parth is the first man who's so protective for her. Teni has seen his chivalry and gentlemanly nature and that could make her LIKE him.They NEEDN'T sleep together for the lady to fall for him. What I'm trying to say is that in this way they could've easily given us a genuinely mature and serious love triangle. They could've utilised these three acting stalwarts. If the creatives were capable, we would've got the most DILCHASP rishta on our show.

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MIKELA thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ai Detto Tutta la verit qui . Io aspetto ancora il triangolo amoroso. Vorrei vedere una bella storia d'amore tra Parth e Teni ❤️Sono i miei favoriti ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tm, it would have been acceptable if Teni was shown, a silent admirer of Parth. This could be digested realising the nobility in Parth's character, any girl could get awestruck.
But showcasing Teni falling for Parth, would cause a furore. Also this could badly wound Shourvari. She would repent deeply in heart but knowing the woman she is, her soul would have sighed, but wouldn't utter a word of dismay to Parth for he was the one who wanted Teni as their surrogate.
Mature story could have been, Teni having tender feeling for Parth but locking it in her heart forever. With her love she could have tried to comfort PaRi's life, handing over the baby, for free and and bid adieu to them. Her deed could not be termed as a sacrifice, for Parth is a married man and Teni knowingly developed love for him. Nevertheless her effort could have displayed her maturity and sensibility of the highest level. Also, the respect for her could have increased manifold.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I would never want a triangle wat so ever
First thing the show is showing a very sensitive issue called surrogacy..
No matter what ever circumstances teni was in before and whatever circumstance parth and teni decided to go for surrogacy..having the surrogate mother develop feeling for the father of the child gives out a very wrong message
Secondly...teni isnt getting love only from parth here..shorvari is also looking after her..so the question about developing feelings for parth shudnt come..(maybe it is that way in the movie..however in the movie priety's character slept with salman so that was natural to come up) tats not the case here
In the beginning of the show and the promos...they never showed teni developing any feelings for parth or there was not a promo focusing on parth and teni relation alone...
We still have no idea what this fourth entry story is bound to look like..so asking it to be a triangular love story doesnt seem very good imo
Moreover the term mature relationship is used here..they should maybe focus on how the matured couple deal with their loss and not show shorvari as a mere care taker of teni..if there is someone who has actually siffered the most..its shorvari..first she had to bear the hatred of the family..the death of her child...then not being able to concieve..and the pressure from her MIL who gave her deadlines to get pregnant..she even was ready to let her husband sleep with another woman due to her helplessness.. i would not want her to suffer again...its not just teni who has suffered in life...when they said mature love story it must have been about how a couple deal with their loss of their child..how they deal with surrogacy..how they deal with their family in this and most important of all what relationship they should have with the surrogate mother..they dont have to show a love triangle to prove that parth shorvari's love story is mature...they should maybe show how their love for each other made them face every difficulty that came their way and how they came out successfully

But CV's wont really care what we want..they will show what they want to show..
I wont be surprised if they land up showing third angle after all..because off late they have no idea themselves as to what they are upto...
that will be the last day of me watching the show if they show special bonding of parth teni...even parth shorvari wont attract me backto the show if that happens 😕
Edited by Shambavishivam - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shambavishivam

I would never want a triangle wat so ever
First thing the show is showing a very sensitive issue called surrogacy..
No matter what ever circumstances teni was in before and whatever circumstance parth and teni decided to go for surrogacy..having the surrogate mother develop feeling for the father of the child gives out a very wrong message
Secondly...teni isnt getting love only from parth here..shorvari is also looking after her..so the question about developing feelings for parth shudnt come..(maybe it is that way in the movie..however in the movie priety's character slept with salman so that was natural to come up) tats not the case here
In the beginning of the show and the promos...they never showed teni developing any feelings for parth or there was not a promo focusing on parth and teni relation alone...
We still have no idea what this fourth entry story is bound to look like..so asking it to be a triangular love story doesnt seem very good imo
Moreover the term mature relationship is used here..they should maybe focus on how the matured couple deal with their loss and not show shorvari as a mere care taker of teni..if there is someone who has actually siffered the most..its shorvari..first she had to bear the hatred of the family..the death of her child...then not being able to concieve..and the pressure from her MIL who gave her deadlines to get pregnant..she even was ready to let her husband sleep with another woman due to her helplessness.. i would not want her to suffer again...its not just teni who has suffered in life...when they said mature love story it must have been about how a couple deal with their loss of their child..how they deal with surrogacy..how they deal with their family in this and most important of all what relationship they should have with the surrogate mother..they dont have to show a love triangle to prove that parth shorvari's love story is mature...

But CV's wont really care what we want..they will show what they want to show..
I wont be surprised if they land up showing third angle after all..because off late they have no idea themselves as to what they are upto...
that will be the last day of me watching the show if they show special bonding of parth teni...even parth shorvari wont attract me backto the show if that happens 😕



U have echoed my thoughts

Just to add to this

Teni is a surrogate and can only be the other lead not the only main lead wher story in PaRi life ends as soon as the kid is born let's not show surrogacy in any other way coz tat wld never make sense practically


People may say I am being heartless towards teni but tat is the biggest reality all tat care and concern is for tat baby in her rented womb not for teni.

The person who actually cares for teni is shor so y not ask for a lesbian love story here it wld add a new dimension all together
Edited by jyothi_cool - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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teni falling for parth is strict - no.. no...
she know how much parth and shorvari love each other --
why should she fall for him?? she might accept him as friend or brotherly figure but not as lover...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajh

teni falling for parth is strict - no.. no...

she know how much parth and shorvari love each other --
why should she fall for him?? she might accept him as friend or brotherly figure but not as lover...



Exactly..even if she develops feelings..she is bound to have an heartbreak at the end again knowing very well how much parth and shorvari love each other..and how she can never get to live her life with the person she loves..teni will again be hurt in life for no fault of hers...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So well said rajh and shambhavi teni is shown as a women with principles she would never fall in love with a married man
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I would have liked ANY other story than the current cartoon show that they are showing.

I agree that there could have been a much more mature story with the three characters alone, without a fourth angle, even with Teni developing a soft corner in her heart for Parth. I find it much better, the way they handled it in the movie (barring the physical relationship part). There Preity Zinta's character was shown craving for the love, care and adulation, and at the end she was shown falling for the guy, but she kept it to herself because she was not someone who will destroy anyone else's life.. Neither there was any feeling from the guy for her. They didn't even show any of the two ladies negative. It was just a tender feeling that the girl developed for the guy who showed her another side of world which she would have never seen otherwise.

I agree with you that love doesn't necessarily mean marrying to that person or having that kind of feeling.. It doesn't also mean that it will hurt you if you don't get it in return.. They could have shown Teni being silent admirer of Parth..And for that, it is not necessary that there will be any special kind of relationship between Parth and Teni. Because we have seen umpteen number of times that Parth can never give that special place in his life to anyone else than Shorvori.. Though I do not want to endorse any illicit relationships here, there come such situations in real life where one can fall for a married person, and it can make a good story if handled sensibly..

So, I will say it need not be exactly a love triangle/love story, but it isn't an impossible thing that Teni develops tender feelings for Parth, because he is the first nice man whom she has seen in her life.. Ofcourse Shorvori is equally nice to her, but she shares a different kind of relationship with her, both being women.. And it need not end like the movie, they could have introduced a man in Teni's life at later stage.. They could have shown Teni becoming independent in her life with help of Parth and Shorvori.. It could have been a more interesting, complicated relationship without hurting any of the three character's feelings, had they handled it sensibly. And all this irrespective of surrogacy angle..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _goofyCat_

I would have liked ANY other story than the current cartoon show that they are showing.

I agree that there could have been a much more mature story with the three characters alone, without a fourth angle, even with Teni developing a soft corner in her heart for Parth. I find it much better, the way they handled it in the movie (barring the physical relationship part). There Preity Zinta's character was shown craving for the love, care and adulation, and at the end she was shown falling for the guy, but she kept it to herself because she was not someone who will destroy anyone else's life.. Neither there was any feeling from the guy for her. They didn't even show any of the two ladies negative. It was just a tender feeling that the girl developed for the guy who showed her another side of world which she would have never seen otherwise.

I agree with you that love doesn't necessarily mean marrying to that person or having that kind of feeling.. It doesn't also mean that it will hurt you if you don't get it in return.. They could have shown Teni being silent admirer of Parth..And for that, it is not necessary that there will be any special kind of relationship between Parth and Teni. Because we have seen umpteen number of times that Parth can never give that special place in his life to anyone else than Shorvori.. Though I do not want to endorse any illicit relationships here, there come such situations in real life where one can fall for a married person, and it can make a good story if handled sensibly..

So, I will say it need not be exactly a love triangle/love story, but it isn't an impossible thing that Teni develops tender feelings for Parth, because he is the first nice man whom she has seen in her life.. Ofcourse Shorvori is equally nice to her, but she shares a different kind of relationship with her, both being women.. And it need not end like the movie, they could have introduced a man in Teni's life at later stage.. They could have shown Teni becoming independent in her life with help of Parth and Shorvori.. It could have been a more interesting, complicated relationship without hurting any of the three character's feelings, had they handled it sensibly. And all this irrespective of surrogacy angle..

BRILLIANT post Rashmi! 👏
You penned down my exact thoughts and now I don't think I need to reply to any of the posts because you've already done that in this single post👍🏼

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