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Soaps1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

I am tired of bad direction, poor execution of Raghav Sia scenes and editing, exactly what did they try and do to Raghav's voice in confession scene? i seriously don't feel like saying anything else about the episode

Just want to add talent is something even bad direction, editing and execution can't hold back ... HC and Sriti keep proving that time and again!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Beautiful feedback ANA..
CVs finally, did a much better job dan d last week..

I luved d whole RaghavI moment, wish it wud b a longer one..But it was epic, nd no complains, atleast 4 three mins i saw RaghavI drowning in2 each oders arms...
RAGHAV's eyes were vulnerable, nd aww d way he scolded sia 4 cuming here, i luved it...
i luved d forehead touching nd d holding each oders face, HarshSri really nailed each bit.

Now i just hope 2nites episode, the CVs don mess up it again, nd allow RAGHAV's scenes 2 play out fully, his nager, his breakdown, everything, i wana see his each bloody reaction, plsss...

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bestserialviewe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

its crime not to post on ur feedbacks 😛... thanks ana for such a beautiful analysis.. SB team sud be proud of u as u rip apart every scene and analyse and provide just the right info...ok here comes my POV

1. i get to know tat u also liked LTL ..aahhh i just loved this soap as long as MR was there...must must say htat through out that soap focus was always on duttu bav's expressions they don't miss a scene..remeber the scene where he winces when he was abt to get nakku from anna and then stops after his sis stops him... man without camera work u can never appreciate an actors ability to perform...and also the scene where he questions nakku abt saying NO to the wedding...

so strange in few episodes with SB i find it absoultely amazing, one thing i defnetely say abt this channel is there promos are awesum and gives goosebumps... but then why actuals fail to capture the same intensity...

2. aaah i just wish i just wish the dialogues wud have been gud between raghav and sia...his dialogues and camera focus on V's expressions...its wat made V gr8 right...why fail tat when u r doing imp episodes???involving raghav and sia??

3.harshad is such a gr8 actor and u r misusing him without proper dialogues...

4. i just jumped with joy the way sia slapped him not once but twice..."haath uta ne se soow baar sochna..mai jhanvi nahi hu"..must say sriti just very very commendable job...if sriti really did fall from the stairs without using a double ..must bow to this lady..the camera angle was gr8 here...

this show is unique and story line is unique..cast is perfect what needs to be improved is editing bit and then camera work and bit of heartiness while shooting raghav and sia's scenes..

hey ely did i say tat i loved the first clip of urs...😃..gosh will just love if sia also did the same...

i have a strong feeling that ur feedback is heard..u know why when i was brwosing through ur archive of feedbacks u requested for new montage with equal images of raghav and sia and then it was granted ..wat say???👏

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shruthiR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

That was some really great analysis there!👏 Usually while watching a show I never really give much importance to the technicalities of it but now I think I should after reading this post.

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vandana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

lovely feedback ely...

i agree totally with ur camera angle thing...

they need to focus more on raghav...

one more thing is that the dialogues given during the confession...

it sure needed more meaningful dialogues...and wats with the bg music??

its so loud at times that u can't make out wat raghavii were saying!

for me the highlight of the epi was raghav's reaction as he sees sia passing out...

it was done superbly by harshad...

the hug was

i simply loved the intensity of the hug...which went in sync for their need for each other...

it was awesome!

one thing that i simply loved abt this epi was sia's slap to v...

her fight against him...and how she was not able to match upto his physical strength...

i loved how the cvs focussed on this detailing...that once or twice sia can give v a lesson of his life...but physically she is no match...she needs help...

i loved how this aspect made sia's character so real...so very like any of us...

wen we face such situations...we might be brave put up a brave face...punch the abuser once...

but wen it comes to an actual fight situation where matching up physically is needed...one definitely needs help...

unless of course the girl is a wrestler or a karate champ...which thank god sia is not😆😆

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sara rafeek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Saraella
I have learn about camera angles but I never gave importance to editing and camera angles because If I do then I would not be able to tolerate any indian tv show!
Khair The episode was mindblowing if we put the camera angles and mainly editing aside.
Today for me Its surely SJ who stole the show. No one can play jhanvi/sia role better than Sriti. this girl is outstanding. cant find enough words to praise her. shes the best. love how Sia slap V. these are the slaps which I really call slaps. I love sia character development and her hatred towards viraj and the love towards raghav. awesome scene loved it.
And now cming to my most most fav scene which is raghaVI confession. just too tooo good. An epic scene. HarshSri are an epic couple and a couple in millions. This is my most most most most fav raghaVI scene till date. Loved how they hold their each other faces haaaye their lips were so close and then loved how they hug each other and kuch bol na tune. beautiful scene loved it.
V stab sia. I loved SJ expressions here and how raghav said I wont let you leave. loved loved HC SJ here.
No comments about cops. they are useless

Beautiful episode loved it.

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Soaps1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Sara i disagree shows do have great camera angles in fact even this show does when it comes to V and i do see some people talking about influence and all of an actor around the forum but for me its simply non-professionalism on part of the CVs, directors and editors if they can do it for V and his scenes why not for the rest? If for a second we even believe channel or someone or the other influences the show, then coming under that influence is also their non-professionalism. Its the team that has to care about its show as a whole and if they don't only they are to be blamed and no one else, in my opinion!!! In the end its Anshuman the writer Abhivanjayna the CV and XYZ director, editor and cameramen, who are at fault because no one can influence you unless you let them!!!

As for channel it can only influence them to show more of Viraj, it can't influence them to shoot Raghav Sia scenes badly or write pathetic script or screen play can it?

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lakshmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

what an in detail feed back @ana hon...you are great!!👏

1] i commend the way SJ grasped the want of the charechter in the scene where sia was struggling to get up after the tumbling down fall from stairs..i know in some shows they show people die from that fall and what not...and acc to standard action reaction seq..she should have broken leg or arm atleast..but at present directing she got..she did a very commendable act!! that particular struggle to hoist herself up was so so touche-of reality to me!!⭐️

2] the slipping and sliding of her due to that carpet (😡) added a tinge of reality to her act..and over all credibility of that shot...👏

3]i felt that when ragahav approached sia after beating her ex...he was all consumed with the fear and fikar of her well being..and as a lead upto the all too awesome confession his throat was thick with emotion..constricted..anybody in that position who would be feeling thousands of unnamed emotions would sound a bit squeaky when they try to talk😳 ...and hence that little off in his voice..and i felt it was a clever and awesome inclusion of HC's voice modulation skills!! 👏

4] the slap by sia ... yep the backhand one..was such a natural reaction..i mean nobody would change there place and ready there hand to hit straight hand...and that slap looked so real cos the lead up to it was convincing from her side!...and when usually a backhand slap is meted out..it affects the ego of the receiver big time!!😆

5]the twitching of raghav's hand every single time sia was being hit...the restlessness..and the lead up to the opening of his eyes..i mean the time lapse..(just not jumping up right away)..was all so different and lend a tinge of reality too...all though the feelings and circumstance might be a bit fantasical.(Hc made me invent a word though😆.)but there are known cases of telepathic connect between two deeply involved people!! and hence that shot too stole the show!

the exact verdict of mine..is your first sentence in the previous day's feedback dear..."HC stole the show"👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I luved, it wen, d way SIA gradually slipped away 4m RAGHAV's grip aftr d stab, nd RAGHAV 4 dat sec was completely shocked, he was muttering dat SIA Ap plss mere saath rahiye.🥺..aww...nd his voice had becum numb... d reaction was really fab..HC man once again u did it.👏
i just hope 2nite they do justice wid RAGHAV's reaction, plsss...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: dsdsb.addict
- How did Sia's room end up downstairs? Ok I suppose its possible for 2 rooms to have same decor. The blue prints of this house have shuffled around in my head nth number of times - its really annoying. 😕
- Raghav just left Viraj there after strangling him?
- Also - its probably best left for tomorrow, but I would think if your lady love is stabbed & dying your first thought would be to save her life & have someone else deal with the villain ...but anyway that's just me.

Harshad was brilliant in this scene too, but the pitch of his voice during the first few lines made me giggle.

Point #1: I agree. I have no clue if all rooms look alike or if they somehow ended upstairs during the fight, which I don't think they did since they were in the kitchen. But then, when it comes to this show and recent bloopers -- anything is possible.

Point #2: The flow was missing. From his beating V in the room, choking him, to when he ran to Sia and they embraced each other. Between the two sequences, a connecting shot or link was missing.

Point #3: For once, I felt like Raghav was in character during a stressful situation. During the scene in which he found Taashu [post sexual assault], his reaction wasn't right for his character. Raghav wouldn't have known how to deal with Taashu's mess, so he would've tried to run after V instead. Sia's insistent call should've stopped him, forced him to handle his sister's vulnerable situation.

But with Sia, I felt he did exactly what his character would've done. He wasn't in shock as much as he refused to believe the reality of the situation -- that Sia had been stabbed, that she was slipping away. Then his initial reaction would be to kill V because that is real, because that is something he can deal with. It's how he fixes things. If he can somehow kill V for stabbing her, then she might not die, then none of this might be real. The situation will somehow be reversed.

Only it won't. He'll be wasting precious time and he won't realize it until Sia's screams his name and he sees her lying there in a blood pool, really sees her. And then he will most probably forget everything, even V, and try to save her.

It's not beneficial to anyone that he'd react like this -- but it's definitely Raghav to react like this. When someone he loves is hurt, his initial reaction is always a subconscious attempt at avoiding to accept what has happened even though he realizes the truth and tries to deal with it by damaging the one who damaged his loved one.

I probably made no sense

Btw, totally agree on the pitch of his voice. Bad sound work. Plus... was his voice dubbed during the whole scene or something?

Edited by Elysia - 13 years ago