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Posted: 13 years ago
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~ Lose everything, and you might still live, get it all back,
but lose hope and you're long dead ~

No reason to smile
Yes, I know.
But don't you worry
It wont always be so.

Times are hard
But believe me you,
Its never too late
We'll start anew.

If you just have faith
And a little hope,
Nothing's tough
You'll never elope.

To make them see
We'll find a way.
Win their hearts,
Make everything okay.

That day I'll say,
"Din't I tell you ?
One day we'll see
All our dreams come true" ❤️


This is THE first poem I ever wrote (by myself ofcourse, varna teacher ke ishaare pe kai likhhni padi thi 😆) and it somehow went well with the current track - Sia's past, pain, lost hope, lost faith in life, more recently : her worries about Mrs.Singh's reaction to the fake marriage etc. etc. 😛 And Raghav always seems to calm her down..Just an attempt describing their situation, what Raghav wants to tell Sia 😳
Edited by Monu_Deewani - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sis ... sab se pehle 🤗

Ab iski baari 👏

Next 👍🏼

Ok now getting back to te commenting part of it... 😉


Loved it!!! ... Awesome!!!... Perfect example of using simple words and yet making the point.

It looks as if we are reading Raghav's mind... His thoughts are portrayed... bang on!!!

I can see Raghav pacifying Siya with these words... so back to Lalala Land

Keep writing dear... pretty please!!!

Aur haan... iske liye siggie kyun nahi banaya????😕

And before this turns out into an essay... ye le 🤗
Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome... loved it 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice


Sis ... sab se pehle 🤗

Ab iski baari 👏

Next 👍🏼

Ok now getting back to te commenting part of it... 😉


Loved it!!! ... Awesome!!!... Perfect example of using simple words and yet making the point.

It looks as if we are reading Raghav's mind... His thoughts are portrayed... bang on!!!

I can see Raghav pacifying Siya with these words... so back to Lalala Land

Keep writing dear... pretty please!!!

Aur haan... iske liye siggie kyun nahi banaya????😕

And before this turns out into an essay... ye le 🤗


Dii !! 🤗

Thanks 😳

I love you 🤗
And your comment ❤️
Will try to keep writing.. 😊
For now, Check your PM 😉
I've written 4 lines on Raghav ☺️
His entry part...The very start..
I'm PMing it to you now for comments 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's a lovely poem Monu. 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Keep rocking withh yoour ppoeems <33
Edited by ..Amira.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you Sri, Amira, harshad_lover91 !! 🤗
Edited by Monu_Deewani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it dear...good one 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you tweety, komal, dinki ! 🤗


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