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A/N: Brief clarification. Every single one of my episode feedbacks has never been anything but inclusive, has never left out the importance of any one character. I provide constructive critique/feedback -- it's the entire purpose of my feedbacks.
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Good episode tonight.
There wasn't much story progression, again, but because the writers keep the characters, the character interaction, and the flow consistent, one can bear with a slow night. In fact, I just wanted to emphasize one thing before the pros/cons and that's how the writers have done awesome damage control over the past few days.
Comparing the episodes now to the episodes just over a week back, it's obvious how the writers have worked hard on amending for character cracks/inconsistency, flow, and one of the most important things -- the dialogues. Something that I appreciate a lot. Just note how the dialogues delivered by every character on the show seem deeper, well-scripted, as if the dialogue writers put a lot of thought behind them.
This is the fantastic standard of the show that makes it worth watching -- when characters and dialogues and flow come together with mindblowing performances and a solid script.
Moving on...
>> Pros:
1) V accuses Sia of sleeping with Raghav
Could he stoop any lower? Yes. He hasn't reached the lowest depth of kaminapan yet, is my take on it. If he could rape his own wife and beat up his own mother, then I suppose it shouldn't surprise anyone that he'd accuse Sia of sleeping with Raghav.
I quite enjoyed KVB's performance in this scene though. The way that he threw himself on her bed, pulling the sheets as if he'd be able to smell their sin or something.
V disgusted me. He disgusted Sia too -- as was evident from her expression and how she shoved his hands away from her skin. I had spiders tap-dancing on mine. I loved how she yelled at him that Raghav was her friend and that he wouldn't understand what a friend is. She didn't need to explain anything to him. Who was he to point fingers at her? The same man who shamelessly flirted with an escort [even spent the night with her -- though she'd been tied and gagged only], romanced Priya, flirted with Komal and Taashu...
Did I leave anyone out?
I liked how they showed Raghav's growing anger to every word that came out of V's mouth.
2) V is about to electrocute Sia when Raghav shuts the power down
First, I quite enjoyed how Raghav got more and more agitated, frustrated, standing in the bathroom, not knowing what V was doing and listening to his dirty talk. The control that Raghav displayed tonight was commendable. For someone who -- as V claims -- thinks with the heart rather than with the mind, Raghav contradicted V's theory by shutting down the power rather than bursting into the room to smash V's face in.
Goes to show how little V has understood Raghav so far. He's not just an emotional bundle -- he's rational as well. Sharp. He doesn't only think with his heart, but combines the two in action.
3) Sia crumbles from the psychological strain of V's torture
A human reaction. She wouldn't have been human if she'd pretended like almost getting electrocuted hadn't touched her at all. That was emotionally draining. Waiting for him to electrocute her, waiting for the pain to arrive, having to pretend calm and bravery where she just wanted to run.
I loved her provocative smile when he turned back to mock her after the failed torture. It showed the amount of strength Sia possesses and what the actress is capable of. Just fantastic performance by Sriti. I liked that she didn't sob, but just let out that one cry and trembled from the strain of it all.
I'm glad that there was no self-pity.
4) Raghav asks Sia to take the kasam back
This was such a sweet and funny sequence. I loved HarshSri's chemistry here. They were just flawless together. Like I've said before, it's the give-and-take relationship between the two of them that translates on-screen, because they play to and with each other, focusing on each other's characters as much as their own. It's not just "I do my part, you do yours". No, there's a teamwork here and it makes their fabulously hot chemistry even better.
Returning to the scene, I loved how frustrated and pissed Raghav was -- all but begging her to take back the kasam so that he could beat V up. The fact that the writers made it a point to show how bound Raghav felt by the kasam conveyed his immense respect and loyalty to Sia. In return, Sia's trust in him only strenghtened, seeing him struggle with the need to punch V, but holding back because he promised her something.
Fantastic delivery of dialogues on both fronts -- especially the way that Raghav kept trying to bargain with Sia [1 hour, 30 minutes, 15 minutes, 5 minutes?]. It was hilarious. Brilliant scene.
5) Raghav promises Sia to stick close
I liked how he said this. Casually, but reassuringly. For some reason I heard the lyrics of "aas paas hai Khudah" in my head when he said it.
But I think that Sia needed the reassurance that she wasn't alone.
6) V is frustrated with Gayatri and finds Raghav's footprints outside the house
His comment on how Raghav was the son of the house and not him made me laugh in a harsh manner, because he manipulated his way into the family and wanted the spot of a trusted son just so he could play them all however he saw fit. Refusing to take any kind of responsibility for his own actions is something that characterizes V's persona.
Anyhow, he found the footprints and suspected Raghav was in the house. Now he won't give up until he finds him.
7) V searches the house for Raghav and frightens Krish
First thing, I found it incredibly disturbing how V trespassed, wandering into private rooms where the women of the house slept. That was crossing boundaries. Which is much like a second nature to V. But what made no sense to me was how Sia didn't lock her door and windows, knowing V was in the house and dying to assault her again. I found that a bit of a blooper, and it should probably be in the cons section, but oh well.
Second thing, he freaked me out with the Devil expression he made to scare Krish. Man, I swear. He looked like the Devil and I can't believe Krish could go back to sleep after that.
8) Raghav seeks out his mother in her room and apologizes
This was a much awaited scene, and I'm relieved that the writers kept it in mind. The last thing I want is for them to neglect significant relationships. But they reassured me tonight when they showed Raghav sneaking into his mother's room, perching on her bed as she slept, and talking to her.
It was a beautiful scene. Harshad's performance was fantastic. For one thing, I loved the way that his hand hovered above her leg/feet, wanting to touch, but not wanting to risk it. Their relationship has come a long way. Whereas it used to be strained, tense, with both being equally stubborn and Raghav constantly feeling that he didn't as much as have the right to call Gayatri his mother -- now he reaches out to her without hesitation, allowing himself to need her.
Something else that I found perfect in this scene was how Raghav was emotional, but his tears didn't come. It showed us how well Harshad can emote without having to show the tears in his eyes. I could still hear the light vibration in his voice, see the muscles contract in his face, as he fought to control the emotions inside of him -- especially at the sight of his mother's tear-tracked cheek.
I would've loved it if they'd shown that Gayatri sensed his presence and woke up -- only to find no one there. It would've completed the connection between mother and son since the relationship/bond between Raghav and Gayatri is one that stands apart from others. I just needed that final touch to the scene -- Gayatri sensing him.
The best part was when Raghav asked her to believe in his innocence, in her son. It was more important to him than anything else. This cord between Raghav and Gayatri is one that I find both beautiful and dangerous -- dangerous because Raghav is prepared to do whatever it takes for her happiness, even if this should include losing himself in the very process. I wonder how far he'd go to be the perfect son, to become another Dev for her.
9) V obsessed with his "remarriage" and Raghav's whereabouts
Something that occurred to me during this scene is how V is obsessed with the "remarry" idea of his because he believes that it'll put him back in control. It'll be his ascension. Like the last time when he burned down Jahnvi's childhood home and took the pheres with her on his back, blessing [read:cursing] her, and elevating himself. That's what this is about.
It's not about Jahnvi. Never was. It's about him.
Note how he has set the date for their remarriage. Six days from now. Why six days from now? Why not tomorrow? Why not today? Because he needs to feel that he is in control of it all. That even God can't interfere with what he's got planned. That he writes his very own destiny and everyone else's too.
What bothers him is that he's essentially feeling out of control. Sia doesn't react to any of his torture, emotional or physical. Raghav's whereabouts are unknown. Gayatry refuses to dance to his tune. What exactly is in the palm of his hand?
10) V uses Krish to find Raghav
When he pinched Krish's cheek and forced him to nod, I wanted to smack V. That aside, I found it interesting how the writers once again showed us just quickly V switches from the more or less murderous version of himself to "I'm your favorite uncle, remember?" I was a bit disappointed with the way Krish fell for his tricks again -- given that Krish is not like the other kids his age -- but I chose to overlook it for now. Mainly because Krish did refuse to play with V twice.
I'll give the kid points for that.
I doubt that V understands the connection between Raghav and Krish, though. He just heard Komal talk about Krish knowing all of Raghav's hiding places and decided to give it a shot -- most probably out of desperation. He's running out of time.
11) The Joker?
I wonder if the card in V's hand and his new avatar in the precap was inspired from KVB's fascination with the Joker. I've noticed how they've been taking V's character down a path that seems to lead more and more toward psychopathy a la Joker version. And this might actually prove an interesting twist to his character which had become sadly repetitive. But as we all know, the Joker was a destructive character of the supervillain-ish kind. I'm very curious as to what the writers have planned for V in the future.
Will losing his sanity become part of his punishment?
>> Cons:
1) Krish refuses to play, but then plays along anyway?
Hm. Having shown him as uniquely perceptive and Team Raghav, I found it strange that he agreed to play because of a magic trick.
2) Komal's suspicions gone
I'm a bit disappointed on this front. Komal was shown as observative. She was shown as suspecting something being off about V, yet tonight she was all smiles and okay with him. I guess that I'd just hoped for some character development of her as well. Her being just somewhat uncomfortable leaving Krish alone with V would've done the job.
Considering how she noticed his odd behavior over the past few weeks, it's rather weird that she isn't becoming more suspicious or at least withdrawing from him now.
3) Taashu still nowhere in sight
Where is she? Seriously. She's only ever sleeping on the show.
4) Bit too much suspense, but not beyond unbearable yet
Scenes were dragged with a bit too much suspense tonight, but it wasn't unbearable and there was flow, no rushed sequences, which made it okay for me. I can understand that there has to be one or two filler episodes now and then.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesum analysis ANA...lemme say, widout ur analysis i really feel incomplete, it really completes d excitement of watching the episode.

Once again good episode.
Best part was RAGHAV apologising 2 gayatri...dat shows,dis man is a true one 4m heart, who always tries 2 walk in d path of truth nd dignity nd never fails 2 agree if he himself is wrong. A very beautifuil scene. HC was exceptionally good...undoubtedly we r sucker of his emotional scenes, becos he can convey dem so well...it really makes u feel sad at d end of d scene 4 his character.
Again i was proud of SIA 4 dominating over RPS.🤣...jokes apart...can i say i m just luving d SIA's nakhreys nd scoldings 2 RAGHAV...😍
it was indeed hillarious d way he kept arguing 4m 60 mins to 5 mins, nd she was firm, she dint permit..awww RAGHAV's face, he dint kno hw 2 make it...SIA knows dat unless her word RPS wudnt break his promise nd thus she used it.🤣..luved d whole scene...
luved it more wen RAGHAV says dat he will wait 4 d day she permits him , omigod, i was jumping dat means one day really RAGHAV will beat Viraaj blue nd black, m so eager 2 watch it.
This whole scene showed hw madly nd badly RAGHAV luves nd respects her, her each word has so much importance 4 him dat he cannot even step 4ward by ignoring dem...i luv RAGHAV.
nd den later d way he assures her dat i m here only,will b hiding near u..awww...😍


ANA, can i say, dat i luved d CVs 4 showing dat Viraaj blamed RAGHAV nd SIA 2 have sexual affair...dats all he is...he is all wid SIA's body...such a sicko...at 1st he goes nd tells her dat she slept wid anodder man, ndd den cums 2 her room nd tells her dat i will touch u, kiss u, in short once again rape u aftr RAGHAV leaves???...All he is obsessed is who slept wid SIA, who touched her where, wat if they touched her where he had did...seriouisly, Viraaj looks ewww, talks, eww nd thinks ewww...he is nothing more dan a lusty creep 4 me esp aftr yesterday's episode...
Edited by harshu.sundas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I like reading ur analysis, ana
Mind you if I ever skip some epis thn these are the only threads whch makes me watch them
and if atall anyone has problem with some of your points thn am sure thy can post here giving a valid reason like how we all do coz ultimate aim of this thread is to discuss about things
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice to see you back in action Ana🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great Analysis as usual. 👏 It has always been a treat to read it. I m glad that u r continuing it. I know how hard it is for you to put it up and hence I really appreciate it. Its not a cup of tea for everyone (including me) to give out such feedback with minutest detailing. Love you for this.

Moving on to the epi. I found there was a lot of suspence. I m nt interested watching shoe show so it wud b great if it is minimized. Overall it was a good epi.

Pros

1) Ugghh!!! This man always make me feel disgusted. Seriously, I love to hate him. The language he used for Sia was making me want to slap him hard on his face. I was relieved to find Sia speak confidently on his face that Raghav is her friend.
It was so natural for Raghav to becum restless. He cannot stand anyone misbehave with any women. And here it was abt his own love. Awesom performance by Harshad here.

2) It was good to see that even though R was frustated he didnt loose his wits. Finally one by one, all the plans of Viraj- The 'So-called' Dobrial are failing. *Insert betty's evil laughter*.

3) Sriti was mindblowing here. N that smirk, Oh wait, I hav seen it sumwhere * thinks, thinks, thinks*, Isnt this the smirk we witnessed in the chess promo?? Yeah its that only *jumps with joy*. I loved it wen she was about to giv V a hint bt den somehow managed to wear that smirk. Loved it.

4) A light moment indeed. I wanna thank the writters here. Its indeed great to get a lil light moments here n there. It makes one feel fresh n brings a smile on the face.
HarshSri were commendable. It was significant as well to show how much words Matters to Raghav. He was furious bt didnt went off breaking the kasam. I m glad Sia isnt a dumb soul anymore. She has caught his weak point n knows how to deal with it.

5) A sweet reassurance. He is around her like an angel. 😍

6) Ok It cracked me too. The greatest dobrial now turned electrician. MWHAHAHAAA. I wanna laugh n enjoy whenever he is helpless. Though I thouht that V wont get to kno abt R's whereabouts that soon bt nw I m really excited for Monday coz I m sure something BIIG is gonna happen.

7) I dunno how can anyone sleep so soundly🤔. I really didnt like the fact that all women sleep with their doors open having a stranger in dere house n servants too. Kher, I didnt like it very interesting. I found it repetitiv. Its like the third time V did it. Sia madam was sleeping without being at aware at all.

KB made me laugh here. The i-got-caught expression cracked me. N yash was also cute.

8) It was an emotional scene. HC was grt here as well. U said it all. It was beautiful. Raghav is a man with values. Where V thought that R wont cum to G's room, it was just the opposite . R knows that his mom.is soft at heart n he need to appologize.

9) Now that was to much of V. Bt still watching him confused, gives me saddistic pleasure.

10) This goes to cons section. I found writtrs being unstable with Krish's character.

I wanna giv V a blackeye for giving false hope to the lil kid. He lacks any emotion. Plain Selfish.

11) Hmmm I wanna see mondays epi. Looed like Sia n Viraj had a makeup competitions. Bt Sia did the barbie doll makeup n V ended with the joker one.

Cons

1) Krishs character need stability. Even after R's warning he agrees to play with him. Why?Didnt R told him that V is the bad magician of the story n yet he is falling for his tricks.

2) Komal lost all logic again.

3) I was waiting V to enter her room too. Bt he didnt. Hmm . The actress mustb busy. Mayb.

4) Stated above.

5) Plz new hairstyle for Sia. Straight or Completely curled. Bt no wavy anymore plzz.

6) New montage after the wedding is a must plzz.


That's all from my side. Off to sleep nw😊
Edited by betty123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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First Ana I love you. You made all of us happy by continuing this feedback topic. this topics means a lot to us so plzz never ever stop this. thanks a lot love you.

The episode seems good.

So Res. will comment after watching it

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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all, hats off to the team coz like Ana said, gr8 damage control.. there I was ready to quit the show and here I am now, savoring every bit! gr8 work on the dialogs, thank goodness instead of mere flashbacks n muted dialogs of Sia, we r getting her fullon

Raghav was absolutely correct last night when he told Sia, no one knows how much more RPS is capable of!

Love the contrast they have shown. V would never ask Jahnvi if she was hurt/sad/angry, she could never tell him without getting beaten up. Jahnvi could never stop V from doing something.
Here Raghav respects Sia most of all, trying to cool her down, stopping when she tells him to. Sia can openly tell Raghav, u r not going to hit him 'now'

n yes, Sia lock your doors n windows. you can always let in R when u want :P

Krish has been the witness to V's antics, hope it will come into play sometime...he isn't that dumb to keep falling in V's traps!
I feel the magic trick did it for the kid... but I know, no magic trick can stop him from being with Raghav instead of Viraj.
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Ana Big Hug. 🤗.

Always wait for your thread. We all know that you are not biased at all.

Continue doing it for viewers like us we watched the episode after your feedback so it really help us
Come back with reply after reading it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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And I'm back!!!!

Pros:
  1. This had to happen. Where's there's V, there's bound to be accusations. And plus this accusation was coming due. The best part of this scene was the disgust on Sia's face as if she had finally realized what V was. And Raghav getting mad was icing on the cake.
  2. Raghav would have shown himself had Sia not given the kasam. But he knew that he had to do something. I liked what Raghav did. And V you're wrong: Raghav thinks with both his heart and mind. And that's where you always go wrong.
  3. She's still psychologically scarred. And it'll take a long time for that to go. So thank god that she crumbled. She may put on a brave front, but she still hurts inside. And kudos to Sriti. 👏
  4. It made me want to laugh, cry, and go tense. Raghav and Sia can do that I guess. 😆 And kudos to HarshSri for that lovely scene. I like how you put it "so that he could beat V up". I'm sure he would do a lot more than that. Maybe torturing V the same way V tortured Sia would be a good lesson.
  5. He said that to let her know that her strength was around her and she would always have it.
  6. V finding Raghav...hard chance. Raghav is smart and V won't find him.
  7. That's V's nature Ana. There's no such thing as privacy when V's around. If Sia hadn't given that kasam, then V would be dead right now for doing something like that. I'm still a bit confused about Krish.
  8. Raghav cares about his mother and knows what his mother thinks. He wants to reassure his mother when she's awake, but he can't. But still he does it. And thanks CVs for it. Harshad is a brilliant actor and every scene of his proves it.
  9. V has and always will care about himself. End of story.
  10. I really don't understand Krish, but obviously V using Krish is obvious. Krish knows everything about Raghav and V would use him.
  11. No comments 😆
Cons:
  1. I think he wants to find out more, but I'm not sure.
  2. I think her suspicions are on and off, based on what the CVs like.
  3. Taashu comes, sleeps, or looks around, and disappears.
  4. I didn't really care that much about this.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yaay!! Ana's back...FINALLY!! 😛 😆

Back to the feedback:

Awesome Ana! You hit the bull's eye again 👏

I liked the episode today. It wasn't Outstanding nor horrible, but between. CVs are doing much much much better than before. I wonder if the team changed or something?

I liked how Raghav respected Sia and her qasam and didn't break it without asking her first (he didn't break it at all).

As far as Viraj accusing Sia of having sexual relationship with Raghav...well if a man can rape his wife then I can expect something like that from him. He can't stoop any lower. And he wants to remarry again in six days huh? I'm expecting Sia to DIVORCE him in six days, not remarry him.

Raghav and Gayatri scene was so sweet. Raghav accepted his mistake makes him look like a human! and pure hearted human. I loved that scene and it was my favorite.

Why is Krish still playing with V? I don't know man. I mean he IS a child but he's supposed to be smarter than the average kid...so I don't understand where the CVs are taking Krish at this point.

Taashu has disappeared but why is komal acting normal? I was thinking that too...

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