Vandy's Creation:JTHJ (Poetry) *New4/12*pg41 - Page 26

Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice

Di ☺️ 🤗

Ok I'm like this now after the Dil Ibadat VM...



Getting back to the compliments

The prelude music and the scenes put in there 👍🏼

Loved the jerk of Raghav's head right at beat change at the start... then came the eye locking section with the serene music playing behind.. and then Raghav in the black vest!!!☺️ with the love of his life... taking it to a level higher with the notes changing to a sensuous mode at the precise time!!

The start of "Mujhko De Tu Mit Jaane...Dil Mil Jaane" with the Raghavi curtain scene
and so true Raghavi ke dil Khudse hi mil rahe the so .. bang on👍🏼

The "Kyu Hai Yeh Itna Fasla" made me go.. Sahi mein practically dekho to sirf Curtain ka fasla tha😆 but Siya really needs to reach out if she sees a future with him!!!😳

"Lamhe Yeh Phir Naa Aane...Tu Mujh Pe Khudko De Loota" saw Raghav pleading her to hold on to the ☺️ moments.. scene selection... 👍🏼

Siya opening her eyes at "Tujhe Tujhse Tod Loo" and their eye lock at "Kahi Khudse Jod Loo"... had me thinking so true... the eyes have always been their way of connecting...
"Mere Jism O Jaan Main Aa Teri Khusboo Odh Loo"... all i can say is ☺️

"Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo"... So true his breath is so in sync with hers that one gasp from her gives his heart a major flip!!!... the scenes ... i can help but go the La Paaro style again!! Isshhh!!!!☺️

"Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu".. now this scene was so perfect in every term cause that particular raasta was when they were in threat of life and yet he held her in the protective arms of his.

In the interlude music do I need to say that u nailed it by using that shot of Raghav behind the curtain with the glossy effect!!!... Di aap to maar hi daaloge!!!
The slow slide of the curtain to reveal Raghav went so well with the beats and so did the slight movement of his thumb over her hands

"Bahoon Main De Bas Jaane"... with Raghav holding on to her so dearly and "Sine Main De Chhup Jaane" with Siya pressing her head against his chest as if to hide away from the whole world.... and then the Longing query Tujh Bin Main Jaaunga Kaha???? with him contemplating with his eyes closed.. 👏

"Tujhse He Mujhe Ko Paane Yaado K Woh Nazrane..Ek Jinpe Haq Ho Bas Mera".. now this too was shown with the apt scene.. he was collecting the memories which she would gift him before departing... and those memories would be his and only his forever!!!

"Teri Yaado Main Rahoo...Tere Khwabo Main Jagoo " .. with Siya remebering him the minute her eyes closed..
"Mujhe Doondhe Jab Koi"... with her opening her eyes to find him beside her "Teri Aankho Main Milu"... so true again.. Raghav is not only beside her but rather just within her eyes... loved that the came panned from Siya to Raghav at the apt timing 👏

"Chahe Joho Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu"... here i loved the way their walk was in sync each step they took was so so so with togetherness!!!

The last Dil Ibadat.. looked so much like a plead from Raghav to Siya that when the last bit of singing went like the soft lalala .. Even Siya had to give in to listen to his heartbeats and reach out.

Di you left me breathless there!!!

Before I go the sair of Lalala land ☺️.. here's me ... Buuurrrp!!!! (sorry!!! 😳... brunch ab jaake hazam hua!!!!...
what with me licking the plate u served it on and leaving it shining as new 😆)

So here's me sending this warm 🤗 your way.

Originally posted by: komal jagdesh

wow sneha what a feedback yar :)

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