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Posted: 13 years ago

I'm liking this idea of a lavish spread... bring it on Di... I'll try to abide by the table manners 😆

The melancholic tune of prelude music somehow sets the mood of this song... and what better way to fathom the emptiness this songs tries to describe than to pick that very shot where u have Sia's welled up eyes and Raghav retracting his steps with a half smile that tries in vain to camouflage the pain in the eyes...and then walking away from his love.

Raghav's intense unwavering gaze at Siya when the track plays "ishq bhi kiya re maula" made me go

"Dar bhi diya re maula"..went so well with the Raghav venting his frustration on the punch bag... loved that last punch with the closeup shot of the hand going bang on with that small change in the beat...Timing I say. 👏

Then we had the singer crooning "Hooo ooo" and all the Raghavians drooling when Raghav went on shaking that wet zulfein of his... especially loved that u kept the shot where we see Raghav through the rippled water coz if one listens carefully the music there has a ripple effect too..even if just for a moment!!! 👍🏼

The same hands which held on to his love when the second time it played "Ishq bhi kiya re maula"...were seeing fighting it out at the onset of "dard..." again.

"Yun to khush raha magar" somehow brought about the helplessness Raghav went through when he was trying to be happy outside while boiling like a hot cauldron inside!!!

Di loved that u emphasized on showing his wounded hand when the track played the rest of the lyrics "kuch reh gaya baaki"... So true... What remains in the end are wounds of emptiness... symbolic I say!!! 👏

"Fakr bhi kiya re maula
Ilm bhi liya re maula
Zindagi jiya magar kuch reh gaya baaki".. Now these lines backed up with the punching bag shots had me visualising Raghav contemplating on his achievements, his knowledge(ilm), his life and yet feeling something amiss!!!.. loved the way at "baki" we had Raghav hitting quite hard... so much so that we had him hold the bag in frustration!!!

Then we had him brace himself against the wall and wash away his turmoil when the track played "Tu nahi dikha re maula...Sab nahin bika re maula"... Pata hai u added that shot for our sweetheart Sun 😆...but then it went so well with the lyrics there. 👍🏼

"Aur jahan ruka wahan pe"...had the awesome shot of faltering Raghav only to be held by Siya...
What made me go is that as"Jaam hai khaali" played the word jaam had Siya emphasized while at khali we had Raghav. 👏

The ending chorus "dam daram daram" was so beautifully portryed by the hospital scene... but what made it pull at the strings of my heart were the Raghavi scene "Aap apni zindagi ki parwah..." and i kept hitting the replay button several times... n i've lost the count 😆... just to hear Raghav say "wahi to kar rah hoon"...

Di as you stated earlier that u are not a big fan of this song ... I would say the same ...but then I happened to see this VM n I must say loved it to the core...

The way I have devoured ur vm bit by bit must have made it quite clear as to how much I enjoyed it!!!... Now that was an appetizer right?... n u know what they do... badhaofy the bhook... 😆

Thank for the wonderful VM Di 🤗

Aur yeh aapke liye :

Itne Vms banaye maula...

Jo har man bhaye re maula;

Fir bhi dil gaye re maula...

Ke kuch reh gaya baaki...

***

Neend bhi na aaye re maula...

Justaju sataye re maula;

Raghavi jab chaye re maula...

Kaun bane saaki??


Word Help: Bhaye = enchant; Justaju= quest; Saaki= one who serves drink , term usually used for loved ones)


Sach di u hav made so many fab vms... yet Raghavi se mann bharta hi nahi


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ummesulaiman

Hi Vandy...

I still haven't caught up on all of your VMs...but I just saw Maula...It's actually very nice.
But OMG...the Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi was outstanding...and you used the female version of the song...which I absolutely love...😛...It was fab...scene selections matched so perfectly with each and every lyric...How do you do it? 👏
Of course I'll be biased and say my favorite one is still Dhadke Jiya...🤔 😆
And I look forward to my latest request being fulfilled soon 😳 ... 😃 {keeping fingers crossed}

hey fatima😊
got ur pm😆😆😆
thanx a lot for commenting...😊
thanx a lot for the lovely comments fatima...
actually work a lot to match the scenes with the lyrics and wen i see ppl appreciating it...
it actually feels very nice😊
u r still after dharke jiya?😆😆
oki then will try and make dil sambhal jaa zaraa ur most fav😉
i am working on a few vms now...(last night's epi just charged me up😆)
will definitely fulfill ur request by next week😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Desi_Girl1991

Di what a VM yaar 👏
It had me in tears 😭

thanku mishti😊
😲😲😲
tears??
yaar toweliya is supposed to make us blush😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Maazz

So far I have only seen your dadke jiya one, but in saying that, I have to admit I have watched it about ten times...a day... Since I found it a few days ago. :D looove that one so I can already say I'll love the others when I get around to watching them :D

thanks a lot maaz...
each comment means a lot to me😊
i had no idea u are a mohur fan too😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: harshu.sundas

ohhh di, i kno m late..

D vm was on my request all of u, thank me nd not di..🤣
By d way, it is awesum di..
ohh, d song nd RPS nd his dard, lubbb it..

better late than never😆😆😆
kamini...stop taking my credit😡
thanku sundas..
glad u liked the vm😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
di one vm on d song saiyyara, too..🤔
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice


I'm liking this idea of a lavish spread... bring it on Di... I'll try to abide by the table manners 😆

The melancholic tune of prelude music somehow sets the mood of this song... and what better way to fathom the emptiness this songs tries to describe than to pick that very shot where u have Sia's welled up eyes and Raghav retracting his steps with a half smile that tries in vain to camouflage the pain in the eyes...and then walking away from his love.

Raghav's intense unwavering gaze at Siya when the track plays "ishq bhi kiya re maula" made me go

"Dar bhi diya re maula"..went so well with the Raghav venting his frustration on the punch bag... loved that last punch with the closeup shot of the hand going bang on with that small change in the beat...Timing I say. 👏

Then we had the singer crooning "Hooo ooo" and all the Raghavians drooling when Raghav went on shaking that wet zulfein of his... especially loved that u kept the shot where we see Raghav through the rippled water coz if one listens carefully the music there has a ripple effect too..even if just for a moment!!! 👍🏼

The same hands which held on to his love when the second time it played "Ishq bhi kiya re maula"...were seeing fighting it out at the onset of "dard..." again.

"Yun to khush raha magar" somehow brought about the helplessness Raghav went through when he was trying to be happy outside while boiling like a hot cauldron inside!!!

Di loved that u emphasized on showing his wounded hand when the track played the rest of the lyrics "kuch reh gaya baaki"... So true... What remains in the end are wounds of emptiness... symbolic I say!!! 👏

"Fakr bhi kiya re maula
Ilm bhi liya re maula
Zindagi jiya magar kuch reh gaya baaki".. Now these lines backed up with the punching bag shots had me visualising Raghav contemplating on his achievements, his knowledge(ilm), his life and yet feeling something amiss!!!.. loved the way at "baki" we had Raghav hitting quite hard... so much so that we had him hold the bag in frustration!!!

Then we had him brace himself against the wall and wash away his turmoil when the track played "Tu nahi dikha re maula...Sab nahin bika re maula"... Pata hai u added that shot for our sweetheart Sun 😆...but then it went so well with the lyrics there. 👍🏼

"Aur jahan ruka wahan pe"...had the awesome shot of faltering Raghav only to be held by Siya...
What made me go is that as"Jaam hai khaali" played the word jaam had Siya emphasized while at khali we had Raghav. 👏

The ending chorus "dam daram daram" was so beautifully portryed by the hospital scene... but what made it pull at the strings of my heart were the Raghavi scene "Aap apni zindagi ki parwah..." and i kept hitting the replay button several times... n i've lost the count 😆... just to hear Raghav say "wahi to kar rah hoon"...

Di as you stated earlier that u are not a big fan of this song ... I would say the same ...but then I happened to see this VM n I must say loved it to the core...

The way I have devoured ur vm bit by bit must have made it quite clear as to how much I enjoyed it!!!... Now that was an appetizer right?... n u know what they do... badhaofy the bhook... 😆

Thank for the wonderful VM Di 🤗

Aur yeh aapke liye :

Itne Vms banaye maula...

Jo har man bhaye re maula;

Fir bhi dil gaye re maula...

Ke kuch reh gaya baaki...

***

Neend bhi na aaye re maula...

Justaju sataye re maula;

Raghavi jab chaye re maula...

Kaun bane saaki??


Word Help: Bhaye = enchant; Justaju= quest; Saaki= one who serves drink , term usually used for loved ones)


Sach di u hav made so many fab vms... yet Raghavi se mann bharta hi nahi


thanku thanku for such wonderful lines😊
and i know a little bit of urdu...
ghazals and jagjit singh's voice are my life...and if i get mirza ghalib in his voice...then nothing can beat it😳
waise...nads bhi hai meri urdu teacher😆😆😆
starters of the lavish spread is on its way😉😉
30 minutes to go😆😆😆
sneha...
i've actually started looking forward to ur comments...
plzz don't stop them...
praises/criticism...
they encourage me a lot...to do better😊
now coming to ur comment...
even i felt the hollowness of the music...and the immediate shot which came to my mind wasa raghav's half smile...he had never felt as hollow in his life...and sia's concern went perfectly with it...glad u understood..😆
that punchbag timing was at the cost of a few shots of angry raghav
i didn't think of the hand wound the way u interpreted it...though i find ur interpretation beautiful⭐️
for me...it was raghav left alone with his pain and wounds...
naa sneha...
that shower shot was for raghav's frustration...
the buttoning shirt shot was for sun😆😆
i don't know i had thought of using the full convo...
but then decided to go with only these two lines coz they created the biggest impact
i am still not a fan...😆😆😆
many the reminder of sunny leonie just spoils my mood😆😆
as i said...starter is on its way😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: harshu.sundas

di one vm on d song saiyyara, too..🤔

saiyyara?
which movie?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -vandy-

saiyyara?

which movie?

ek tha tiger ...di, salllu ki latest dhamaka..😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
here is my starter for the promised lavish spread😆😆😆
short vm on the song tu hee meri shab hai subah hai
hope u guys like it😊😊

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