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Jaslee Saggi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: mirhacreations
This is SO BEAUTIFUL ❤️
Loved the way you've described each and everything so accurately 👏
but why OS?😭
please make it TS, SS OR FF 😳

AWW Thank you so much. I am so glad that you liked. I think it's really important to write details because then otherwise you cant really visualize the story.

And as to why an OS, i don't really know myself either because there wasn't really a planned out story that i wrote, a scene just came to mind and i penned that down. however i may reconsider and take the story further.

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Jaslee Saggi

@jusschillin

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: __Anjali__
Hey Jasleen 🤗
I was waiting for someone toh write on them so thanks for it
Now I'm going to read it

We're on the same boat here, I was also waiting.

Hope you enjoy reading it :)

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Jaslee Saggi

@jusschillin

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: __Anjali__
Lovesick Rithwik is treat to watch
He's gone case now 😆
Palak is as always so caring and confident
Please continue soon!

Indeed a treat to watch the characters. Will try my best to continue. Thanks for coming by and giving your time to read :)

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__Anjali__

@__Anjali__

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: jusschillin

We're on the same boat here, I was also waiting.
Hope you enjoy reading it :)

enjoyed it
Now waiting for next part

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mirhacreations

@mirhacreations

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: jusschillin

AWW Thank you so much. I am so glad that you liked. I think it's really important to write details because then otherwise you cant really visualize the story.
And as to why an OS, i don't really know myself either because there wasn't really a planned out story that i wrote, a scene just came to mind and i penned that down. however i may reconsider and take the story further.

My pleasure 😊
yeah!that's right. the details are most important thing to visualize & imagine the story and you have written it so well 👏
Do reconsider about taking it further and start a new SS or FF on them 😳😊
Will be waiting to read more from you 😳

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shreya

@ShrePreet18

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Hi Jasleen, thanks for writing this OS, first os on Dil hi toh hai forum.

Very well written, Palak is that strong girl while Rithwik started feeling something something... So cute☺️

Please keep writing, would like to know what happened to their story. 😉

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Jaslee Saggi

@jusschillin

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: mirhacreations

My pleasure 😊
yeah!that's right. the details are most important thing to visualize & imagine the story and you have written it so well 👏
Do reconsider about taking it further and start a new SS or FF on them 😳😊
Will be waiting to read more from you 😳

Thanks dear, the encouragement means a lot.

btw also a huge fan of jia and arsal! absolutely loved suno chanda, couldn't resist mentioning that because of your display picture 😆😆😆

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Jaslee Saggi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ShrePreet18
Hi Jasleen, thanks for writing this OS, first os on Dil hi toh hai forum.
Very well written, Palak is that strong girl while Rithwik started feeling something something... So cute☺️
Please keep writing, would like to know what happened to their story. 😉

Thank you so much! It was quite daunting to be the first one since I wasn't really sure what style of writing people enjoy on this form but I guess I just wanted to give it a try and maybe also break the ice so that we have more stories to read.

It was mean't to be just an OS but I will try and pen down the proceeding story.

Thanks once again.