Palak/Rithwik OS - Dil diyaan Gallan

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey ya'll. Hope everyone is doing great. I haven't really posted much on this forum so I'll tell you a bit about myself. I am Jasleen, 18 years old, from Australia. Dil Hi Toh Hai is my escape from school work and tensions. I was waiting for someone to write something about our dearest Rithwik and Palak but since no one has I thought I'd write a little something. It's not a very long one shot, but I really wanted to start something even if it was short and sweet. Hope you all like it. Just one request please don't post this elsewhere :)

SO HERE IT GOES!!!


It's been one month and eleven days since Palak has entered my life, and all this time I was forcing myself to hate and her and believe that she is just like every other girl on this planet. But she's not. Why? Why does she have to be different? Why can't she be like the rest of them and just use me and leave? But no, she has to be all nice, respectful and she also doesn't give a damn about my bank balance. Why god why?

First I thought it's just a facade, she possibly can't be so realistic and mature unlike the other girls, but she proved me wrong every single time. She said to my face that she isn't interested in me. Which girl has ever given up the opportunity to be with Rithwik Noon even if it's just for one night? But no, of course she has to be different. And now I am confused as hell because for the first time ever I actually like spending time with her and talking to her. She is so intelligent and well-spoken and doesn't utter even a word of bullshit. I just love that about her. Oh f***k it, I really like her man. Anybody will fall for her though, she is so beautiful and charismatic. I would never tell her that though. Ughhh I sound like a 16 year old, crushing on a girl. What have you done to me Palak?

A knock on my bedroom door took me out of thoughts. "Come in, I said annoyingly. The door slowly opened as if the person was scared to come inside. Who could it be, my mum and my sisters never hesitate to come to my room, so then who is it?

I didn't bother getting up to see who it is and just stayed under the duvet, but that's when I heard HER voice and I forgot about the world I was living in. "Rithwik, it's me Palak. Have you been okay? You haven't come to the office for the past three days so I thought I'd come and see". She spoke with so much concern in her voice like she genuinely was worried for me. But how could I tell her the truth that I am trying to avoid her because she makes me go crazy. How do I tell her that I don't want to get addicted to her? Otherwise how will I survive when she leaves? Because let's face it, Palak is a really ambitious person and she is not working for Noon Biotics for the rest of her life.

"I... um..." I I stuttered trying to find a response. Seeing my hesitancy she continued talking while walking closer to my side of the bed, "even though you have been working from home, it has been so difficult to work in the office. No body to eat my home made food with, no body to work out with". I smirked at her comment and pulled her onto my bed. Her face was so close to mine that I could hear her shallow breathes. She looked into my eyes and smiled shyly, not that I would ever think oh her as the shy type. "Oh so you missed me? I said teasingly. "Of course I missed you and so did everyone else", she said confidently while releasing her arm from my grip.

I was awestruck by the amount of confidence in this girl. She didn't think twice before saying that she missed me, if I was in her place it would take me a million years to say that. I was still in my thoughts when she said "I am going to go Rithwik, you seem perfectly fine to me, see you in the office tomorrow?" she asked smartly. Me being the love sick fool, gave her the answer she desired, "yup see you in the office, goodnight Palak. "Goodnight she replied and left my room.

I have to tell her how I feel towards her, because my heart aches to not be close to her and not call her mine. Well she is mine, she just doesn't know it yet. Soon Dr. Palak very soon I will tell you how I feel and hopefully that day I can make you very happy.




Hope you enjoyed the short saga :)

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_khushi09_ thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey that's very nice
I loved it.
So Rithwik still didn't say anything about his feelings.
Plz write more, would love to read it :))
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey Jasleen. Welcome to forum.
Please continue. It was really good..our lovesick Ricky and as usual the smart Palku...


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice one...
I think in actual Rithwik would realise the love first...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is SO BEAUTIFUL ❤️
Loved the way you've described each and everything so accurately 👏
but why OS?😭
please make it TS, SS OR FF 😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: --CrazyMe--

Hey that's very nice

I loved it.
So Rithwik still didn't say anything about his feelings.
Plz write more, would love to read it :))


Hey, thank you so much, I am really glad you liked it. Will love to continue it, just need to plan out what happens next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey Jasleen 🤗
I was waiting for someone toh write on them so thanks for it
Now I'm going to read it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arjuhi_dreamer

Hey Jasleen. Welcome to forum.

Please continue. It was really good..our lovesick Ricky and as usual the smart Palku...



Thank you so much dear, I am pleased to know you liked it. Will try my best to try and continue it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanvig_02

Nice one...

I think in actual Rithwik would realise the love first...


Thank you dear. I also think the same, it just makes it 10 times more interesting if the guy realises first because these days its always girls falling first.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovesick Rithwik is treat to watch
He's gone case now 😆
Palak is as always so caring and confident
Please continue soon!

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