FF: Holding Your Hands Forever.. Ch16, Pg38

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KhatamKahani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Oh, it's short. I was expecting it to be longer, so I put it off. This is sort of a prologue, I guess. Interesting idea, Bidzy. Keep it up. I'll be reading it.

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: payalHarshiya
oh god its just awsome awsome awsome...such a hearttouching story. N it is indeed d best yaara...
Plz continue soon bidzi. I m desperately waiting 4 next part...
N thanx 4 d pm dear...

Thanks a lot Siddhi. I'm glad that you liked it. Next part will be updated on Tuesday. 😃

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: --Urooj_Khan--
Awsumee Lovely Thank you Bidzy😊

Thanks for your comment. 🤗

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: premeeristry
reserved will comment afte my exams 😊

When will your exams end? BTW waiting for your comment. 😊

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: 786786
Also busy with exams :(

But I would like to say that I LOVE how it's Mohan running after Kastur this time lol and not the girl after the guy. I find it hotter when HC is crying and angry lol and runs after his girl, its so much hotter hahahaaa

thank you, great work :D

Thanks for taking out time to read it even during your exams. 🤗

BTW same pinch. I'm loving HC as Mohan but I always loved him in an angry young man or a true lover image. Thanks to Mr. Prem Juneja 😆 But I don't like to see him crying Anyways, thank you so much once again 🤗

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: likarsh
Oh, it's short. I was expecting it to be longer, so I put it off. This is sort of a prologue, I guess. Interesting idea, Bidzy. Keep it up. I'll be reading it.

Yeap it's a prologue. Thanks a lot, Lik. Will update soon. 🤗

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: azna
This is so good!

Thank you 🤗

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Rani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

OMG is really an injustice like why is it so short 😡

Gosh just when am about to get into the story the chapter ends 💔 is just not done. Please I need the next chapter now it let it be long smooth and slow 😆

I really like it Bidz so continue 👍🏼

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: pyar-ishk
OMG is really an injustice like why is it so short 😡

Gosh just when am about to get into the story the chapter ends 💔 is just not done. Please I need the next chapter now it let it be long smooth and slow 😆

I really like it Bidz so continue 👍🏼

It's short because it's just an introduction part. 😆
I just wanted the suspense to be turned on and I guess, I did it. 😉
Will update the next chapter tomorrow or probably on Tuesday. Depends on my mood! 😆
BTW thanks a lot. 🤗

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago