A UNIIQUE LOVE $TORY - (chapter11pg9)

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Jasmin

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Posted: 14 years ago

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That's was very intrestingg waiting for the next chapter

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Thanks ALOT! I'm Going to update right away 😊..

Kastur p.o.v

Okay you're stuck in a locked car, with a stranger. You have nothing to defend yourself with, while the stranger has a gun. He want's to kidnap you and ransom you back to your parents. How are you meant to feel? Scared? Even.. terrified?

Not me..

"Hey can you pass me the toffee popcorn"?

My kidnapper, the guy who was still nameless, glanced at me unbelieveingly.

"You finished the chocolate already? That was meant to last a month or so"

Whenever I'm stressed, I eat. And I talk all the time, which might be no problem here - because this nameless kidnapper isn't even listening to me - Or was he but weren't even answering me. That's rude actually, I always talk back to someone who talk's to me. But no he isn't even interessted, what is wrong with him.. He is actually cute looking, with his black hair, and light brown eyes - but this seriousness is scaring me. "What's your name, by the way "? He looked at me and disaprovingly.

"My name is none of your business" he said with a angry look on his face like if he is getting annoyed.

Gosh he is a rude man, main kya karoon? I'm hungry and every chocolate their was is eaten. I feel like sleeping, but am scared too, I don't want to show him that I'm scared of him, he was looking at me like he was an amature of what he was doing, he didn't look like any normal kidnapper, how would I know of these kidnappers, but I could see in his eyes - that something is really serious and he had never done this before. I was scared but still I thought, that this guy can never be a killer. But how could I know, I have never been held costage before. It's getting really cold, and this mean idiot is still driving, where are we going? OMG who will give medicines to granny, I know it's nothing big, but still... she would cry her eyes out when she finds out I have been kidnapped. The kidnapper looked at me, there was something about his eyes, I couldn't look back, they were soo deep and sad. He kept looking on me, even though he was driving.

" look at the road when you drive, we could DIE if you drive like that"

He looked at me quiet embaressed about I indirectly said that he was staring at me, he looked away with a sigh. He didn't even answer me back. Why the hell is he so silent, It scares me really much, when people are soo silent. It reminds me of the time I was a child, but that's another story. Suddenly I saw the radio, so i tuned it on - and their was the song from Dabang. "Munni badnam hoi"

"Omg, this is my favorite song" I said smiling big at Mr nameless kidnapper,

"What is your favorite song" I looked at him, and he gave me a glare then FINALLY said something

" SHUT UP, you should be afraid of me, I got a gun in my hand - I could shoot you right now" and pointed the gun on my head. I wasn't even terrified of him shooting me, because that wouldnt be happendning - kidnappers doesn't shoot before they get the money from the family. But somehow he made me shut up, I looked up and was tired because we had been driving for hours now.

" Are you lost" I said, with a cute smile on my face - he didn't answer back, instead he kept driving. how could he be so kharoos? I mean I'm quite funny, and cute why aren't he getting affected my charm?? Okay I'm over-thinking it. I'll just wait until my dad pays the ransom, and then I can go home.

I had no idea where we were going and, I don't think Mr kidnapper did either.

Whatever I thought. Just enjoy life while it lasts.

I closed my eyes and leant my head against the cool glass.

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When I woke up, I saw I was in a small house, there was no nothing inside - plus uff the smell it was disgusting, i was on this handmade bed, I mean I have never in my life even seen these bed's, plus this disgusting smell - where is it coming from ? I'm alone here, maybe I could run - I went towards the door, and tried to open it. But I had no chance to open the door, uff.. why did I sleep in the car - I could've run after he stopped the car. I could hear some steps coming from the door, so I ran to the bed or what you can call that thingy, and layed down to pretend that I was sleeping. I heard the door opening. I closed my eyes. The kidnapper came and he had food with him, I could smell it, my eyes were smiling from inside because I was soo damn hungry. I opened my eyes and there he was sitting on the bed away from me.

" Khana kha lo" He said looking at me still with the same look

I smiled because I LOVE food. so I just ran to it, and began eating it like some pig.

"I'm soo hungry i said with my food in my mouth"

He had some smile on his face, OMG MR GRUMBY HAD A SMILE ON HIS FACE.. OMG HE HAD A CUTE SMILE, I never thought that he could smile.. I thought he was some mad idiot. But now he could smile..

"So aap smile bhi kar saktey hai" while i was eating with a smile on my face

"Yeah, but you talk alot" He smiled again

OMG I can't believe it, he smiled yet again - I felt like it was some kind of christmas.

"So why did you kidnap me"?

His smile was gone after a second and he looked serious like he just remembered that he had kidnapped me and the sadness in his eyes.

" Just eat and get it finished with, I'll call your dad tomorrow, and then we both would be free from each others" he said and gasped.. then he sat on his chair, and closed his eyes.

I Hope you guys really liked it, :) :) Pls comment or like it

and thank alot for liking it, and if you guys doesn't like something than please let me know

I will be updating right away I get the your likes and comments.

Thanks :)

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sreyap92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

wow totally different and cute!!! do update!!!

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Zara

@Miss 911

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Aww thanx guys!! I'm soo happy that you guys likes it,

Shivu01 - Thanx - & if you have any idea pls tell me further on it.

Silky_harshad - aww, Thanks - I'm updating because of you guys likes it :) :) Keep commenting pls..

Harshu.sundas - Yes I had this in my mind for a while now, so I'm glad you liked it.

Sreyap92 - Awww.. I'm glad that you like it, If there is something you don't like about then do tell.. because I appericiate comments and critics.

I'll soon update.. I'm begining now..

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Zara

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Posted: 14 years ago

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CHAPTER (3)

Kastur's p.o.v

Uff why can't I sleep?? this charpayi (bed) is soo hard. And look at this kharoos .. Mr nameless is sleeping so peacefully, like there is no tomorrow, he might might be cold - he is shivering, bechara.. uff why am I concern about him .. he is the one who kidnapped me.. wait he is sleeping, I can run away from here.. YES GOOD IDEA kastur, tapping myself on my shoulder.. Then I silenty blanket off me - which I think the guy put on me when I fell asleep, how cute.

Maybe I should give him the blanket, so he doesn't get cold... NO, Uff dumbo kastur tu pagal ho gayi hai kya, woh uth jayega our phir main bhaag nahi payo gi.. Yaad kar usne tujhe kidnap kiya hay, tera dost nahin hain. I then quitely take the blanket aside, and walks towards the door, and tries to open the main door, but it's locked, as I thought!! ..

Ab main kya keron obviously woh pagal to nahi hoga keh door ko open hi rakhey.. hmm abb?.., kahan pe hogi keys.. I look around me, And I see that the keys are in Mr. Kidnapper's pocket .. I try to walk slowly to over to him, and slowly slide my hands inside his pants, and with my fingers I try to take the keys.. Uff bohat tight hein, ab main kaise nikaloon ki - aghar zoor se nikala tu woh kharoos uth jayega.

I take a deep breath inside out, and then get down on my knees and try slowly to take the keys. My fingers are almost in, I look up towards the guy .. Uff kitna cute lagta hay sote hoye.. but back to my work.. araam se main nikalne lagti hoon keh I feel his hand on my hand, it shocks me and when I look up, and he is still sleeping, but he put his hand by accident.. i gasp of relief, then I take my other hand on his hand and slowly put it aside, then I silenty and carefully try again to take the keys.. FINALLY! I got them I smile really much, I get up and slowly turn around!!! THEN...

"Kya kar rahi hoo??" I hear mr. kidnapper standing up, I have my back towards him. SHIT SHIT SHIT, what should I do now.. I hear the steps going infront of me..I'm now infront of him.. he look's at me

" I asked what are you doing?"

My heart is beating like hell, I got caught up. What should I do, RUN? Uff.. I can't do that, I can't run right now.. he will catch me. I then get an idea..

"Main kaha hoon?"

The kidnapper looks at me like he is confused plus he is half asleep so isn't getting anything.. Then he sees the keys in my fist. He get close to me and takes the keys out of my hands..

" Yeh kya hai? Were you trying to run away??" He says with an smirk on his face.

" Ohhh, mujhay nahi patah, ohhh I think I was sleep walking, I did that very often when I was little soo"

He looked at me like he didn't believe me

" AHAN, so in your sleep's you took the keys huh??? he said " With a *I-know-what-you-do look

" It can happend, maybe you gave me the keys???" I tried to confuse him.. like I seriously didn't know what was happening

he came close to me, really close.. I got scared if he would do anything and then all of a sudden he said

" don't try to act smart, now GO TO SLEEP!!!"

Any other girl would've shut up, but I didn't he couldn't just yell at me and think I would listen to his crap.

"I didn't do anything wrong, your the one who kidnapped me, stop yelling pls! I hate when people yell, I'm right here infront of you so talk politely!! I'm an human JUST like YOU!" and had an offended look infront of him.

He was shocked of my behavior, because obviously he had an gun in his hand - every girl would've been scared but I'm not like any girl! DUMBASS!!

He took the keys and went down to his chair and sat there with his closed eyes.

"go to sleep" he said while his eyes were closed.

I went to the bed and tried to close my eyes, but I couldn't fall asleep.

" What's the time" I asked bravely, even though I knew his mood was really bad.

He looked at his watch

" It's 3.20 am, now pls go to sleep" he said

I tried to go to sleep, but I just couldn't - their were soo many mosquitoes.

" Mujhay neend nahi aarahi" I said with a sigh in the end

He looked up and said " I don't care now go to sleep!!"

"Arrey main kaha na neend nahi aarahi, meri nanni mere saath soti thi, I can't sleep alone!!" I said with teary eyes, because I missed my granny.

He looked at me with guilty look, and said " I'm sorry, I shouldn't have yelled at you"

I was really surprise of his answer, he apologized to me.. the guy who barely smiles apologized to me?

"It's okay, bare bare shehroun main aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehti hai" I smiled when I said that, because it was a famous dialouge from (Dilwale dulhaniya le jayege)

He had an smile on his face.. and then he said calmy " So jayo, if the plan goes as I want then you will be home by tomorrow"

I then looked at him, he had those sad eyes again - like he is back to the reality, I don't know why he kidnapped me, he might need some money - but for what? What is soo important, Jo bhi hai .. maghar itna bura lagta nahi hai.. I smiled thinking of him .. then I took the courage to ask him

" What's your name?"

He didn't respond, but I knew he wasn't sleeping, so I said..

" Mujhay neend nahi aarahi hai, Mr ? Rohan ? Dev? Abdul ? " I tried my names because I thought I might get lucky and guess correct.

He stil didn't answer me, but I could hear him sighed.

I continued " Rahul, sanjay, Nikhil, Antony, Simon, Laxmi" I laughed because I found myself funny..

He didn't laugh instead he said " Aghar main apna naam batao ga, to can u be quiet and go to sleep?"

"Ummm... Okay challo theek hai tell me what's you name?"

"It's Mohan, my name is Mohan"

"Ohhh, you look like a mohan aswell I said, so what's ur age?"

He looked like me like it was unbeliveble for me to ask him such things..

" U said you would keep quiet after I told you my name, pls now let me sleep and go to sleep urself, tomorrow is going to be a long day" He sighed, and closed his eyes.

"Okay, Goodnight"

I couldn't sleep, but Mohan now I know his name.. let's see what happeneds tomorrow.

I hope you guys liked this update :) It's a long update this time 😊😊

Best regards,

Ps. Pls comment and like my update.

Edited by Miss 911 - 14 years ago

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Neha

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Posted: 14 years ago

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It was simply superb dear 👍🏼 the lovestory of Mr. Nameless Kidnapper n Miss Chatterbox is gonna be fun 🤣 🤣 update soon...

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@IrikaLovesKMH

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Awesome story i love it

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

I really like the way you are building up the characters😳.. Loving the chatterbox Kastur and Chup chap sa Mohan.. haayee what should I say about him? *sigh*☺️ I wish if he would kidnap me😍🤣 The story is shaping up perfectly👏.. Waiting for the love story to begin😉.. Hats off to your writing style⭐️.. Update soon! 😊 Not only soon but super fast cuz I'm getting impatient😆.. Fantastic update once again! 👏

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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Zara

@Miss 911

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: silky_harshad
It was simply superb dear 👍🏼 the lovestory of Mr. Nameless Kidnapper n Miss Chatterbox is gonna be fun 🤣 🤣 update soon...

😆😆 lol, I'm trying to make him a serious though guy of a look 😉.. And Thank you very much for liking it, I'm going to update as soon as possible.. will be on it in a minute..

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Zara

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: IrikaLovesKMH
Awesome story i love it

😊😊😊 Thanx honey - I'm trying my best to make an good update for you all.. And please gimme good info's on what you guys things how it should be further on..

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