||OS: A Filmy Confession.. Pg #15|| - Page 2

Originally posted by: Bidz_cutegal

Aigght this is the only way I can get through this.

Lazily, Mohan was pacing around in his house after he woke up from his deep slumber. He was surprised. Like every morning, Kastur didn't bring him coffee. Where was she? He wondered, and just then, he felt his phone in his pocket vibrating. 'Itni subha kiska phone hai?', This early int he morning, who is phoning? he said sleepily and picked up the call.

'Hello,'

'Apni patni ko dhund raha hai?' Can you find your wife?

Terror and fear took over Mohan as he heard that voice. He was speechless! How did he know what he was doing? He thought.

'Teri patni mere paas hai. Issi waqt tisri installment ke paise lekar aaja aur apni patni ko leke jaa.' Your wife is with me. At this time ...three installments of money...today...and you can take your wife❓

'Dekhiye, maine kaha toh tha ki aap ko aap ke paise de dunga, phir aap ne Kastur ko kyu kidnap kiya hai? Aap ka matlab mujhse hai naa, uss ko kyu taqleef de rahe hai?' Look, I told you that I'll give you back your money, then why did you kidnap kastur. Your issue is with me (but I don't get why matlab is used), why trouble her?

'Kyuki woh aab teri patni hai, samjha? Jyada hoshiyari mat karna aur paise lekar aaja.' Because she's your wife. Don't get smart and bring the money here.

'Theek hai, par usse kuch mat karna, please don't do anything--' Theek hai, but don't do anything to her ... well he repeats it in English anyway. 😆

Before Mohan could say anything, the call was disconnected. Lines of worries appeared on his forehead and his eyes expressed guilt and fear of loosing the one whom, recently, he felt like his own. A month passed after his marriage with Kastur and during this time, he didn't even realize when his heart desired to show her affection. 'I have to save her anyhow,' he said to himself restlessly and rushed outside the house.

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'Mauka doon? Taaki aap phir se mujhse jhoot bole? Phir se mujhe dhoka de? Mohan, mujh mein aap ka dhoka sehene ki himmat aur nahi hai. Issi liye please, mujhe saafai dene ki koi zarurat nahi hai.'- Will give you a chance, really? Again you'll lie to me, again you'll betray me, right? Mohan, I don't have the strength to tolerate your betrayal. For this, please don't try to give me any explanation.

'Aur haan, aap fikar mat kijiye, main kisi se aap ki shikaayat nahi karungi aur yeh ghar chod kar bhi nahi jayungi, kyuki agar main chali gayi toh Pradeep bhai se aap ko jo finance ki help mil rahi hai, woh kaise milegi? Haina? So aap chinta mat kijiye.' - And yeah, don't worry. Neither I'm gonna complain about you nor I'll leave this house, because if I leave, how will you get the finance from Pradeep bro? Right? So just don't worry.

'Kastur, please I'm sorry. Main janta hoon ki maine bohot badi galti ki hai. Par main kya karta? I was helpless. Please try to understand me,' - Kastur, please I'm sorry. I know that I'm at fault. But what could I do? I was helpless. Please try to understand me.

'Ek bar apni problems mujhe kehekar toh dekha hota.. aap ke liye main aise hi aapse shaadi kar leti. Maafi maangna aur phir shaadi ka prastaav rakhna, yeh sab nataak karne ki kya zarurat thi?'- You should have shared your problems with me for once... for you, I'd have married you anyways. Apologizing and then proposing, what was the need of all this drama?

'Main darr gaya tha. Please mujhe maaf kardo and believe me, maafi maangna naatak nahi tha, par haan, tumse sach chupaaya, iss ke liye main aaj tak guilty feel kar raha hoon, par mere pas aur koi raasta nahi tha,' - I was scared. Please forgive me and believe me, apologizing wasn't fake, but yeap, I hid the truth from you, for this, till today I'm feeling guilty but I didn't have any choice.

, 'Agli bar apni saari problems mujhse share karenge, chahe koi bhi baat ho. Waada kijiye mujhse.' - Next time you'll share all your problems with me, no matter what happens. Promise me!

'I promise! Aur yeh bhi promise karta hoon ki aakhri saas tak main humare rishte ko puri honesty ke saath nibhaayunga.'- I promise! And I also promise that till my last breath, I'll be honest in our relationship.

'Kastur, I know ki tumhare liye mujhpe phir se vishwaas karna mushkil hoga, par iss bar sach mein, main humare rishte ko dil se nibhaayunga. Koshish karunga ki koi bhul naa ho. Main yeh toh nahi janta ki main tumse pyaar karta hoon ki nahi, par haan, yeh zarur janta hoon ki, mera dil tumhe apna maan chuka hai, aur iss ki vajaah sirf ek hi hai, mere liye tumhara pyaar aur vishwaas. Thank you, Kastur. Thank you so much for being there for me!' - Kastur, I know that it'll be hard for you to have faith in me, but this time truly, I'm gonna be true in our relationship. I'll try not to make any mistake. I don't know if I love you or not, but yeah, I know that my heart has considered you dear, and there's only one reason behind this, which is, your love and trust for me. Thank you, Kastur. Thank you so much for being there for me.

'Main humesha aap ke saath hoon.. humesha!' - I'll be always there for you...always!

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Lekin means "but"...the translations of rest of the dialogues you find out are absolutely right...hope all things are cleared now! waiting to read your reviews😳😳

Originally posted by: likarsh

LOL. hahaah i was still in my attempt to figure out the rest of the dialouges and you've finished it. Thanks, I'm off to read.

Yeah I know lekin means but. :)

I was asking about lekar. I just figured it out, I think. It means bring, no?

'Teri patni mere paas hai. Issi waqt tisri installment ke paise lekar aaja aur apni patni ko leke jaa

'Kyuki woh aab teri patni hai, samjha? Jyada hoshiyari mat karna aur paise lekar aaja.

Anyway I'm off to read.

Originally posted by: likarsh

So sweet. I love the dialogue especially where he says he doesn't know if it's love or not. So true.

And this actually might be how Kastur finds out about Mohan. So kudos, 👏 I had wondered before how Kastur would find out, and I can totally see Kastur finding out this way on the show. .

I can actually see them saying some version of those dialouges since they are pretty honest. Mohan apologizing but at the same time saying he had no other way, Kastur peeved and angry, but also still willing to stick by him.

The best part about this. You wrote this a month ago.; And MohUr are already progressing in a somewhat similar manner.

Now I'm totally looking forward to a Raat Ka Nasha OS.

I gotta hand it to those who write all the OS, snippets and such. I hated creative writing. Hated it. 😆

Originally posted by: likarsh

You don't have to write it in English, you can write it in Hindi. Especially if you prefer writing it in Hindi, and yeah it does bring out the feelings and dialogues better as that's the setting. So writing it in English would negatively affect your works.

Don't worry about me. I did get the gist of it even without the translation. I don't get the EXACT meanings all the time, but the gist yeah.