21st July Written Update

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys!
Arre yaar meh kya kahoon???
Kya moosebaat! Kya pereshaanee!!!

Firstly my bloody internet connection wasnt working๐Ÿ˜ก
Secondly I am dying๐Ÿคข Cramps. God. I can say that here right? I mean its only girls and if there are guys reading this then they wont know what Im talking about๐Ÿ˜†
Thirdly my family is GONE THANK GOD!!!
Yes my family is fun yes I love them but honestly you guys try staying with twenty of them in one house for a WEEK its a bloody nightmare
I have my bed abck!!! and my CHOCOLATE!!! AND PEPSI!!!! THANK YOU ALLAH!!!!
Ahem.
ONWITH THE UPDATE!!!!

RECAP:
DharamVeer Shera FOUND KHAZANA!!!!
Maharaj wanting to keep Messiah away from Dharam๐Ÿคข
Agni and Malik went somewhere else to look for the treasure cause they thought they came to the wrong place๐Ÿ˜†
When Dharam and Shera touched the Khazana the place started falling apart Like Indiana Jones๐Ÿ˜†
Sheras Baba and RamJaane are keeping watch๐Ÿ˜•
While the place is falling apart Sheras Baba started screaming for her๐Ÿ˜• and DharamVeer heard!
Dharam got out but fainted


AND NOW...

We start off where we left off๐Ÿ˜›
Shera comes running behind Dharam and as she gets out the door she sees Her Baba๐Ÿ˜ฒ Shes like What-The-Heck?!๐Ÿ˜• Her Baba starts screaming for her again *hits head annoyed* and Shera looks back to Veer who is hurt and cant come! Shes torn between Veer and her Baba!๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰ WHATS SHE GONNA DO?!
๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Gee I wonder? ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Will she choose Bachelor No1? Dakoo Sardaar? Piratelike and Evil? Yet caring too? In iit for the money? Wants to be RICH RICH FILTHY STINKING RICH!!! Has a lovely cave for a home that needs a womans touch and an army of Dakoos?
Or Bachelor No2? Rajkumar? Hot? Handsome? Rich? Sweet? Caring? Possesive? Hot? Brave? Great smile? Drop Dead Gorgeous? Did we mention Hot?

Bachelor1 calls for her again! Desperately!!!
Bachelor2 tells her to go!!! Save yourself!!! *swoon*

And Shera goes for................... BACHELOR NO2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CHOCOLATES FOR EVERYBODY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Shera runs back the door closes behind her! Baba is shocked๐Ÿ˜ฒ Veer is shocked๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Veer: ANANYA! MERI BAAT MANO!!! JAO YAHAN SAY!!! LEAVE ME!!! GO!!!!
Ananya grabs Veers hand!!!!๐Ÿ˜‰ but the SKY IS FALLING PEOPLE!!!! So Veer pulls Ananya away from danger and they both fall to the ground! WHOOO!!! And can I just say this has got to be one of the most romantic scenes ever? Even with the ceiling falling down Veer and Ananya still have time for an eyelock session๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
Whoo... *Fans herself and eats chocolate*
Veer however realises whats going on๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜† an looks around and gets up. Awww *disappointed* and hes angry with Shera! And Shera is upset!๐Ÿ˜ญ Becharee!
Veer ignores her and goes to the entrance to call Dharam who is unconscious but finally wakes up Dharam realises Veer isnt with him and panicking calls for him Veer hears him calling and yells back!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Dharam tells him not to worry he'll go for help!!!๐Ÿ˜› Good for you Dharam!!! Give VeerShera some alone time!!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ So Dharam goes and Baba who is watching from his hideout tells Ram Jaane to help him cause lets face it his daughter is in there. Alone. With Veer. Na jaane kya kya ho gah??? *wink wink nudge nudge*
Ahem. Sorry.

Ok back to Veer and Ananya๐Ÿ˜ƒ Veer walks away from Ananya- wait what? Wheres the Romance damn it! Ok calm down Aisha just wait it'll get better๐Ÿ˜‰
Ok Veer walks away from Ananya and she follows him (obviously who wouldnt?) and shes calling him and he isnt listening and then-
Veer: KYU????

Woah. I think I just got scared. Kya ghussa yaaro... poor Ananya...

Veer: Kya kiya yeh saab?
Ananya: Just listen to me just once Veer! I'll explain-
Veer: What will you explain? What you wanted to do you've done havent you?
Ananya: *looks uncomfortable* Veer... I did this all only-
Veer: I told you to go with Dharam! Then why did you purposefully come back?!

Wait. Sorry. What?๐Ÿ˜• He.... doesnt know??? That Shera is Shera???

Ananya *confused like me* sits down beside Veer and says: What are you just angry about the fact that I came back here and didnt go with Dharam?
Veer looks at her and says: What do you mean just this? You think this is a small matter? Do you have to do your own thing for everything? I told you to get out but No! Instead you always have to do the opposite! If you went with Dharam at least you could have helped him a little! You stuck here with me what did that get you Ananya? (Veer are you stupid or just blind?๐Ÿ˜• HELLO!?)
And then he looks at her waiting for an answer. He doesnt get one. Serves him right. Although I have to say as Annoying as Veer is being right now He looks Hot when hes angry๐Ÿ˜‰ And hes obviously worried about her nah?๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Veer then notices that Ananyas hand is hurt and he reaches out to her and says: Ananya! Your hand! And he looks worried๐Ÿ˜Š but Ananya decides that shes not having it! *sighs wearily* One stops being angry and its the other ones turn.... *shakes head*
Ananya pulls her hand away and says: Theres no need! You said the right thing! I shouldnt have stopped here! If I went outside at least I wouldnt have to hear your horrible words!
Ad then she storms away leaving Veer looking guilty and upset.
Good for you Girl!๐Ÿ‘ I mean you came to help him and he just yells at you? Well done!๐Ÿ‘
Becharee Shera... she sounded like she was going to cry... *sighs* Yeh ishq nahin ahsaan... baas itna samaj lee jeyay... Aag ka daryah hain! Aur doob kay janah hain!

Anyway over to Nivriti. Ah crap. Shes crying and remembering Veer as she sits down on his bed and Pari comes. Great. Pari asks What shes doing? The vaid told her to rest.
Nivriti answers The peace I get from this room I wont get from my own room. Aww. The whole room reminds her of Veer. And then we see a memory where Veer is playing Blindmans buff with Nivriti๐Ÿ˜Š and she tells Pari that now her Veer has grown up and is no longer a child and she has lost him๐Ÿ˜ญ He never used to stay away from her but now he has no need of her๐Ÿ˜ญ Ah Nivriti! Veer will always need you!๐Ÿ˜ญ
Pari tells her that๐Ÿ˜Š and Nivriti asks If Pari has a son? Pari says Yes Hes very far from me and I am waiting for his return
Ah damn it.

Back to Veer๐Ÿ˜‰ who is making lape๐Ÿ˜ƒ and gets up and goes to Ananya with it. Ananya is ignoring him๐Ÿ˜› but her hand is hurting. Veer sits down beside her and reaches for her hand๐Ÿ˜›
Veer: Here give me your hand
OHMYGOD HES PROPOSING?! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ananya: Theres no need!
ANANYA!!!! ARE YOU NUTS???? INKAAR MAAT KARO!!!!!!!!!!
Ananya: Ananya will do it herself!
What? How can you get married by yourself? Oh. Its not a proposal. Damn Sagars. Got my hopes up! *Takes a long drink of Pepsi sadly*
Veer however doesnt let her hand go๐Ÿ˜‰ YAY! And says: Youre angry with me why take it out on your hand? Look let me put lape on it otherwise it will keep bleeding
Ananya looks annoyed but lets him put the lape on๐Ÿ˜› The background music is nice...๐Ÿ˜Š and when Veer puts the lape on and Ananya cries out in pain Veer looks at her worried and then blows on her hand AWWW!!!!! SO SWEET!!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ

Veer while taking care of her hand (so sweet! Chocolates everyone!!!) says: You didnt answer my question.
They look at each other.
Uh what question? If that was really a proposal then its a YES!!! YESYESYES!!!! Ahem. *looks around awkwardly*
Ananya is confused like me too and asks: What question?
Veer starts bandaging her hand๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ and says: That when you could have run and saved yourself why did you come back for me?
....
Wow. What do you SAY to something like that?! Actually Veer its cause I LOVE YOU??? YOU CANT SAY THAT!!!
Ananya is like Ah-Damn-What-Do-I-Say?! and Veer is just LOOKING at her! God any girl would be nervous if he was looking at her like that!๐Ÿ˜‰
Veer: Give me an answer.
*Aisha fans herself feeling hot and waits nervously for reply* Veer is so .... ARROGANT nah? Well he IS a rajkumar I suppose but the way he said that was so..... PROUD like he expects an answer!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜†
Ananya is stalling for time!
Veer: Why did you put yourself in danger for me? Why did you come back?
Ananya: Because you were hurt and...
Veer: And?
Ananya: And? And what? And nothing ๐Ÿ˜† Yeah right Shera!๐Ÿ˜‰
Veer: Nothing? (Wow hes really not letting this go!) I know
He knows???? REALLY????๐Ÿ˜›
Ananya: What do you know???๐Ÿ˜ฒ


Veer: You couldnt leave me alone and go.

Oh. Okay.... Not what I thought he was going to say but close enough๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

Ananya looks shy๐Ÿ˜ณ and Veer is smiling at her!๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰

Veer: Because you were afraid that if you went then the half of the Khazana thats yours would be lost! Right?
*HITS HEAD ON WALL AND THROWS SHOE AT TV*
Ananya: *annoyed* YES! absolutely right! You know everything right? So then why do you ask?
Veer: You could at least say Thank you for the bandage!
Ananya: Did I tell you to put the bandage on? WHOOO! GO SHERA!!! (Im sorry guys Im on Ananyas side right now๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰)
Veer looks surprised/annoyed ๐Ÿ˜† and says: Ziddi!
๐Ÿ˜† Veer thats like the Pot calling the Kettle black!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Ananya replies: Ghamandi!
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And Veer looks soooo angry!!!!๐Ÿ˜† Ananya just tosses her head!
and then ah damn.๐Ÿคข
SHERAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Hits head on wall*
God yeh phir say shooroo ho gaya kya?๐Ÿคข
Veer looks towards the sound of the voice and Shera is like Damnit!๐Ÿ˜•
And then we see Baba looking for Shera and then Veer looks at Ananya! Ah damn.
then-
Baba: DONT WORRY SHERA!!! VERY SOON WE WILL GET THE KHAZANA AND GET OUT OF HERE!!!
God! Koi isse chup karvai!!!๐Ÿคข๐Ÿ˜ก
Shera is like God-Dad-Shut-Up! and Veer is just like What-The-Hell?
Baba: SHERA ARE YOU LSITENING???!
YES DAMN IT! SHUT UP!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก
Veer looks annoyed and says: We thought only we knew about the khazana but now we know that Shera is after it too!
Crap.
Ananya decided to play dumb. (๐Ÿ‘๐ŸผGood idea!) Kaun Shera?
Veer looks at her: That girl! who has no wajood! Who can do anything for money! I hate her!
Ah damn. Okay maybe that wasnt such a good idea...๐Ÿ˜• Poor shera.... Thats a bit harsh....
Veer: If she evr comes before me I will kill her!
Woah! What happened to not hitting girls Veer?!๐Ÿ˜•
Shera looks really upset! God! This is gonna be bad guys.... When he finds out!๐Ÿ˜•
Veer: Dont know where Dharam is....

Dharam is wandering through a jungle ๐Ÿ˜† Well at least he looks like hes having more fun!He stops cause a tree is blocking his way and so he decides to move it himself What hes superman now?๐Ÿ˜• Bloody Sagars....๐Ÿคข And then RamJaane comes to help!!!!๐Ÿ‘ Dharam is surprised to see him๐Ÿ˜†
Dharam: where did you disappear to?
Ramjaane: I got scared thats why I ran away๐Ÿ˜† Then I remembered that if I leave without Rajkumaree Ananya then her father will kill me!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Thats why scared I came back!
Dharam is like Humph! Coward! ๐Ÿ˜† So to save your life you came back!
Ramjaane: YES! I mean to save Rajkumaree Ananya I came back!๐Ÿ˜† Where is she?
Dharam: Veer and Ananya are in danger you idiot! We have to go get help! Help me move this tree!

What they cant go around it? Or over it? *shakes head disappointed*

Meanwhile Veer and Shera are still in the cave and Veer is doing something on the ground and Shera is remembering what he said about Shera Becharee.... *Gives Shera chocolate* Arre Shera who cares? Chocolate is better than any guy! Chocolate never disappoints you!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
God that poor girl is in such a horrible situation.... way worse than Laila majnu or Heer ranja or RomeoJuliet.... God...

Back to Dharam and RamJaane who have moved the tree or maybe they just went around it and they are wandering onwards looking for help and Dharams hurt his leg (God knows how) and Ramjaane tells him Maybe we should rest?
Dharam says: No we cant stop! keep moving!
then they see ah crap they see Malik and Agni.๐Ÿ˜• This cant end well. Not if Dharam is involved....
Dharam says to Ramjaane we'll ask them for help!
OH DEAR GOD NO! RAMJAANE STOP HIM!
DAMN YOU SAGARS๐Ÿ˜ก

They go up to them and when they turn around! Dharam is like What the hell are they doing here???
Agni then starts acting cocky๐Ÿคข and asking Wheres the Khazana and your rakshat VEER? Malik gets a knife out! Oh God๐Ÿ˜• Dharam kicks him!๐Ÿ‘ and they start fighting RAMJAANE RUNS AWAY! WHAT?!
*THROWS SHOE AT RAMJAANE*
Basically Dharam fights well but two against one is not good odds and they beat him up and take him away. For the love of God.... Ramjaane comes back but he goes with them. Damn it! All idiots!

Back to Veer Shera.๐Ÿ˜›
Veer has finished making a ... what is that? a bed? I think....
Veer: Ayay Rajkumaree ji๐Ÿ˜† Rest for a while
Ananya looks... slightly sad. No wonder.
Veer looks at her and says: What is it? Do you still not need my help? Then fine you can make your own bed
Oof Veer!๐Ÿ˜ก Stop being so touchy!
Shera gets up and stands before him๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰ and says: Can I ask something?
Veer smiles๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ƒ and says: When you ask so nicely how can I refuse you?๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†
Ananya: Why do you hate Shera so much?
Veer looks surprised and then angry. Damn.
Veer: Those people who think themselves greater than others who using their strength rule over others I hate those people. For money they even sell themselves!
Ooooooooo.........kay.......
Hmm.
Ananya: But... But maybe they have some problems some reason why they are on the wrong path!
Veer: No Ananya what majboree can there be that makes a person bad?

Maybe a nutty evil greedy for money father. What about that?

Veer: No the people who steal from others have no majboree
Ananya: Veer you were born in a good place Common people what problems they have what do you know?
Ah Shera. Wow. That was beautiful.๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ‘
Veer: Meaning? What do you mean?
Ananya looks so sad๐Ÿ˜ญ and says: Meaning where we are born where we are raised where we grow up has a big effect on us Look at you, you where born in Royalty and Shera amongst Dakoos But what is Sheras fault in this? Whatever she is taught she will do

Veer looks at a pleading Ananya and it looks like shes made him think...๐Ÿ˜Š
Veer: Why do feel so sympathetic to Shera? Looks like you have something important to do with Dakoos
*Hits head in despair again*
Ananya: talking to you is useless!
Veer: Your talking is outside my understanding
Veer goes back to the bed and says to himself: Dharam come back quickly I dont get this girl!
And Ananya stands there remembering all their moments together and all the things Veer said about Shera....๐Ÿ˜ญ

WHAT A DEPRESSING END!

GOD
IM GONNA GO STUFF MYSELF WITH CHOCOLATE GUYS....
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Aisha xxx๐Ÿ˜ญ

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank you dear for the written update..... i love the way you wrote the update.... you made it so amusing for us to read....
Do contineu such work ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Ps. this written update of yours is of 21th July episodes and not 18th July ๐Ÿ˜†... do correct it soon ๐Ÿ˜‰
Edited by aandhanika - 17 years ago

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