DV IN 1st CENTURY: PART 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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HelloFRENZ !!!!!

Howz life????? I m backk with the 2nd part of d DV IN 21ST CENTURY , SORRY to keep u waiting guys, I was offline for many days actually I m very busy these days. Hope u all will enjoy these part...................

RECAP: DV, Sia n Shera all came to mela n enjoyed it n veer saw sth n tel it to dharam. for full recap

VEER:Dharam wo dekho, kitni bhavya dukaan hai!

Dharam: ha veer, lekin itni door, alag thalak kyo hai?????

VEER: chalo chal k dekhe

Shera : shera kobhi wo dukaan bahut bhavya dikh rahi hai

SIA : ha , hum jana chahenge.

Dharam: thik hai aap dono bhi saath chal sakte hai.

All of dem entered the shop,the shop contains thing which we hv today, it was like small mall, they all were astonished by seeing all the strange thingsn they find it intersting

SIA: shera , yeh dekho bolne wali gudhiya, lekin yeh shirf ek i baat doharati hai

Shera : ha, aur yeh dekho yeh chaku, is lal nishaan ko dabate hi yeh lambi ho kar talwar ban jati hai.

dharam n veer both r also amazed with all these things

Veer: koi hai, is dukaan ka maalik kuan hai , hume kuch kharidna chahenge

Dharam:: Veer yaha ki har chiz ajeeb hai dekho yeh kapdhe, hathiyar aur baaki sab kuch

veer saw shera busy with sthn , she was tryin to understandin its techniqe n veer get worried as she had gun type material , veer understood dat its some kind of weapon

SHERA( murmurin) : yeh kaisa hatiyaar yeh chalta kaise hoga?

VEER : shera tum ya kar rahi ho tumhe pata hai ki tumne apne haath menkya pakdha hai?,TUMHE APNA ZARA BHI KHAYAL NAHI HAI yeh khatarnak bhi ho sakta hai, tumhe kuch bhi ho sakta tha

Shera : achha ,thik hai shera in hatiyaaro ko door s hi dekhegi kyuki hume apna khayal nahi tumhara khayal hai

both were looking each other(eyelock),it broke wen sia said

SIA: Dharam dekho is chitra ko kitn sundar hai.

Sia saw a vary large n big painting , which is a paintin of metro city {big buildings,homes lights,, road ,cars bikes etc a view of country frm out side)

Dharam : par aapse zyada sundar nahi

SIA(smiles n said): Hume bachpan se chitra kala mein bahut dilchaspi thi aur yeh chitra toh alag hi hai isme bani imaratien , yeh yantra aur yaha manushyon ne bhi azeeb kapdhe pahne hai

VEER : kuch chize jo yaha hai vo tashvir ki chizon se milti hai

SHERA: yeh to kisi aur hi duniya ki tasvir lagti hai

everybody thikin bt d painting n sia as shehad a spaecial interst in it so she was touchi it n feeling the strokes meanwhile sh observe a whole in it n wen she touchedit was becmin big n it was pulling her inside she screamed

"Dharam"

Dharam got worried n he hold her hand but the pullin force was so strong he also get in into it veer also screamed n hold dharam's hand n sheera hold veer 's hand all of dem got in into it AFTER somtime they found themselves in a strange place

SIA : dharam hum kaha aa gaye hai??? hume ye bahut ajeeb jagah lag rahi hai?

DHARAM : hume bhi ahi pata , lekin tum ghabrao mat hum tuhare saath hai

VEER : Tum sab thik to ho na?

Shera: tum sab ko ander khichata dekh shera ki to jaan hi nikal gayi thi

SIA: hum sab ko dekh kar ya veer ko dekh kar

Veer n shera both blushes n smiles n dharam sia also smiles

Veer : sia

ALL of dem thinkin where we r ? standin at raodside dharam came at tha center of the road wonderin abt the place but...........

VEER(screamed) : " Dharam BACHO"

HOPE U all ll like dis also.plz rply.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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where is part one i havent read it but part two is really good 👏 wating for 3 part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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well dear...i missed ur first part....
could u plz give me the link of first part 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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its superb but where were these guys pulled into?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 loool reali gd...btw wers the 1st part? i missd it... 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was reali good. 👏 ..but wehr the 1st part 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😛Hi Frenz,
thanks for reading it , n frm the above replies its clear dat many of u hv didn't read its 1 st part😭😭 but its ok here is the link
HOPE u all will njoy it.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it seems quite interesting.do continue👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey! Cool FF! I just read it. I didn't know u were writing one.
Check out the Fanfic sticky. There are some rules there, I think.
And u can also post the link in that thread so Lashy di can inclide it in the FF list.
Hope I helped 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was too good. eagerly waiting for next update

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