DV IN 21st CENTURY PLZ READ

😊Hi FRENZ,

I m 1 of the member of dis form,I m Krazy for DV ,I keep on thinkin of it so in my dreams also i see dv n in 1 of my dream i saw dat dv had came into 21st century .i.e ., in our world n dey r wondering, after dat my mom woke me up.After dis i kept thinking WAT WUD HV HAPPENED AFTER DAT?? so i wrote story . I m not so professinal abt story writting, dis is my first story So plz forgive me if it is Rubbish as its totally fictitious n imaginary

Story consist of all the characters as we saw it in the show, but the difference is dat everything is setteled now and dharamveer both hv got their princess sia n shera resp. they all live in Aryanagars's mahal.they r going to mela.dis mela is so special as it comes after a long period of 4 yrs .i.e.,in leap year.sia n shera r so excited abt it.

Early in the morning everything is so fresh, all the members of the mahal had already woke up n all r busy intheir work only dharamveer r sleepin. Dharam's bedroom sia awaking dharam

SIA : Dharam, uthiye!! dekhiye kitni subhah ho gayi hai aur hume mele ke liye bhi toh nikalana hai

DHARAM : MELA !!!!!!!!!! Hum to bhool hi gaye the, Kal raat ko baut der ho gayi

SIA : ha hum aap se puchana chahte the ki kal aap aur veer itni der kaha chale gaye the? hum toh ghabra hi gaye the !!!!!!!

DHARAM : Aapko humari itni fikra hai ?

SIA : ha, aur ho bhi kyo na?? agar aap nahi hote hai to humari saans hi ruk jaati hai.😊

DHARAM : Yeh aap kya keh rahi hai aise koi baat nahi hai darsal hum aur veer jungle mein rehne waale shramiko ki suraksha vyavasth dekhane k liye gaye the.

SIA : Achha ab aap jaldi se tyaar ho jaiye .

Sia smiles n went out to chek out dat all things r ready or not n in the another room veer was sleepin shera was trying to wake him up

SHERA : Veer, utho!uthooo!!! kya tumhe mele mein nahi jana ?

VEER : Kya tum mujhe pyaar se nahi utha sakti, Subhah subhah tum itne gusse mei kyo ho ??

SHERA : Shera, gusse mein nahi hai!!

VEER: Wo to dikh raha hai

SHERA: " Pyaar se" koi kisi ko aur kaise utha sakta hai ?Aadhe ghante se main timhe utha rahi hu!

Sia enters in the room n smiles

SIA : aap dono subha se shuru ho gaye chaliye jaldi se tyaar hokar niche a jaiye

all of dem get ready n they all standin in rajmahal's gallery.Nivriti with pooja ki thali n aryavardhan also satnding there

NIVRITI: Vivah k baad aap sab pehli baar kahi bahar ja rahe hai ,Bhagwan kare aap sabki yatra mangalmaye ho

SIA : achha hota agar aap bhi humare saath chalti

SHERA : Ha maa, aap ko humare saath chalna chahiye,varna ye veer hume tang karke pareshan kar dega

VEER : Kuan kise parshan karta hai??

NIVRITI : Veer,!!!! Agar Pari ki tabiyat kharab nahi hoti to mein jarur aati , aur shera tum chinta mat karo dharam hai na,wo veer ko tumhe pareshaan nahi karne dega

ARYAVARDHAN : Aap sabki yatra mangalmaye ho !!

DHARAM : Aagya pitaji

THEY all enjoyed th whole jorney in between they were also remembering th old memorise wen they all 1st met in mahashivratri mela n afte sometime wen they all reached to mela they freshen up n enjoyed mela...............n veer saw somthing n said

VEER : Dharam wo dekho !!!

Hope u all liked it, if not plz tell me i will not continue it, plz tell me the weak points where i shud do the corrections,again shud i continue it or not???

PLZ REPLY😊😭😊

i liked it 😃 ... its well shweet! keep it up! il b waitin for da next part...
xxx

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no yaar, i wanted to do this
actually i got this idea some days before, and was thinking on put it on my ff 😭 😭
plz tell me u wudnt mind if u see dv in 21st century in another ff, after some months 😭 😭

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

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no yaar, i wanted to do this
actually i got this idea some days before, and was thinking on put it on my ff 😭 😭
plz tell me u wudnt mind if u see dv in 21st century in another ff, after some months 😭 😭

No baby no need to cry if u want o use dis u can but ek shart hai aur vo yeh hai ki u can use dis but only after my story 's end , i hope u will understand it ,plz don't misunderstand me

Originally posted by: dharamdeewani

No baby no need to cry if u want o use dis u can but ek shart hai aur vo yeh hai ki u can use dis but only after my story 's end , i hope u will understand it ,plz don't misunderstand me

all right!

actually these idea can come in so many minds..😛

btw how much long are u planning to make ur story?? plz tell me so that i can adjust mine also😳.

all dem were so cute!!!!!!
keep going 👏 👏 👏

👏 👏 👏 w8ting for the next part realii good

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nice yaar........... 😳
loved it
waiting for next part 😛

THANX for appreciation guys soon i will be back with the next part

very nice 😛 😛 😛
love it 😉 😉