Samyukta Pt19 - Victory for Aryanagar!!! - Page 2

Shradu, do you mind editing your post and removing those ugly lines about my beloved script "inferior, less grasping, rushed" How could you?😭

It was my 7 course meal......... and everything cooked to perfection😃. Need I say, I love my chef.😳

It'll be so easy to comment if you wrote something that was not so gripping all through. I loved the whole platter. How do I select my fav parts. 😕

1. DV's farewell , dread and turmoil over the aleatory. Reading through, I felt it all in me.

2. OMG, its so lovely how these boys complement each other. One fills the void left by another.😊 Veer has this knack of getting done the toughest things with his prankish stunts.😆 And, I loved how his sense of humour remains intact even with the horror of situation around.😊

3. *sniff* *sniff*..........thanks to the mother son duo, now I have to make a second trip to the store to replenish my supply of tissues. I loved, how the boy suddenly became man 😳 to take care of needs of the ladies of his family.....right from the bare necessities to emotional assurance in the traumatic times.👏

4. What I will give to see Agni's evil smile being wiped off from his face to witness his sweet dream turning to a nightmare.😡

5. And I know my Shera well.......... she couldn't help let go off the pleasure of seeing Agni's dumbfounded face. .......... Praying for him.......... no ways🤢........... she was there to taunt and torment him, to add some fuel to the fire.... and that she did well...hmmm.....right? 😳

6. Loved how you described Veer's counter-attacks to the outlaws in the palace. I could see it happening, with the lavishly described intricate details.👍🏼

7. It is so like Arya Uncle to not know the ticking timebomb under his rocking chair.😆 Now he will understand his boy is not a child to be chided anymore, though the hard way.😛

8. Jai and his Dhanno basking in their evilness........🤢

9. The war-stricken streets of AryaNagar, the chaos, panic and grief.😔

10. Dharam's inspiring words, provoking and instigating, yet, genuine, without drama.👏

11. Veer braving the attack from Bhimsen.👏 But how did he recognise Bhimsen........... He took his name........while attacking him?😕

12. sniff * sniff* again at Dharam's grief, at the wargrounds and his memories of happy days.😭 Awww..... he included princess of Niphaud there..... why not...... she is family now! Almost!!😉

13. Oh no........ how long did Veer lie there on the streets? 'blood-stained, rainsoaked' .......... and he was so badly injured that Shera had to shield the kids eyes. But I liked how she was so protective and caring of them.😳

Now I badly want to know the thoughts that raced through Shera's mind on finding Veer like this. ......... And you know why Lash☺️

Hey and I liked how AryaNagar is not a complete Andher Nagari........ that there are rules and laws and protocols and the enevitable red tape followed......... And no prince can order the forces to start or stop without the permission of commander or the king.

@ rashi

sorry dear me have to reply to your pm... will do so today... 😳 thank you so much... let me know when you get bored..😆 parts 1 -6 are slightly heavy... parts 6 - 12 are lighter... 13 - 18 a mixture of everything... 😳 nice to see you here... 🤗

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

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🤣 rashoo... everytime i see this i start laughing... they have reserved their places for their comments... which they edit and add later.. i dont know ye trend kaise chaaloo huaa... par 😆 your question was so funny..

@ neeri

awwww thank you neeri...🤗 am i so glad this part was well received.. partly one of the reasons i was late in posting it.. finally i steeled myself and said.. dont care if no one likes it... they will probably like the future parts 😆

awww thank you about the Veer-Sanjaya bit.. i guess it is very Veer... when comparing other things in Samyukta i guess that scene need a bit of dramatic license...but i guess chalta hai kabhi kabhi.. 😆 and btw he took his *brother's* advice - abduct sanjaya if you have to 😉

"Oh Lord! You wake me up with a glass of almond milk in your hand everyday, while your unfortunate son is rationing even basic food and water to you now!" that was the most touching line ever... 😭

looks like that was everyone's favourite scene - it definitely was mine too... i guess it was realistic😳.. and till bhuvana pointed out about nivs doing aarti etc.. i didnt realize that it was hatke from the norm.. but writing that line did bring a tear to my eye... 😭 truly...

neeri me must say after reading your comments that you have understood agni- shera perfectly... he is ungrateful... not that she doesnt know and not that she is the least bit bothered about him.. it's just that she is helpless *oops- revealing the plot here* and yes ironically Agni got injured by the very revolutionaries who he hired.. 😆 before he could set out to do anything.. 😆

Dharam spoke like a true leader and patriot... 👏 *sigh* my noble and brave dharam... 😳

hee hee he so is...😳 i love them both -dharam and veer... 😡 unlike in the serial...chee am so angry and still cant get over it..

as always i could picture the battle scenes as u described it... 😃

thankoooo 😳

Standing amidst the bloody grounds; the lifeless prince closes his eyes to recall the memorable scenes from his life for a last time - his lovely days at the Gurukul, his mother's smile, his father's blessing, Veer's mischievous frowns, the princess of Niphaud and his Aryanagar home. this is my fav scene.... all the emotions that dharam's goin through can be felt in these few lines... 😳

yes he thought he was going to die...so he wanted to remember his last memories... i should have added a phrase there *neeri's naughty smiles😆*

oh these so called 'revolutionaries' are such a cowardly lot... its a shame to even call them by that name.... 😡 😭😭😭 i had a feeling shera will be the one to help out veer in the end... 😉hmmmn i wonder whats goin on inside her mind at that instance... 😳

it was very mean what they did to Veer...😕 but i guess that goes to show how many different kind of people there are... revols think one way.. agni and his co think one way, dhruv-type of people think one way.. and shera helping veer...😛 hee hee...

thank god u are updating today chech... i cant wait to read the next part... i wanna see dharam battling his way to victory... 😳

ayooooo i sat last night neeri but i hardly managed to complete 2 pages...i have 4 more pages to go😆 writing takes so much time, effort and energy 😆 i am sure i will complete the next part sooner than usual.. but i wonder if i should post it next saturday😕 warnaa sabko bahut zyaadaa ho jaayega na..

🤗 thankoo jee

@ minzy

hiiiiiiiiiii 🤗 yes veer managed to kheench sanjaya 😳 aakhir veer jo hai..

and veer locked up his family in cellar warna the revolutionaries would have killed them... he has kept the weapons just in case...but its more about survival...😭 its not very pleasant... par wahaan jai kyun aayega.. 😕 he is at the border na..

Shera went to pray for agni? 😆 goshhhh!!!!! 😆Shera is a shrmik? i liked tis line "Play around with fire much as you want Rajkumar Agnivardhan...continue to do so and you will end up being burnt one day..."hehe! 😆
shramik only means worker.. so anyone who is not the royal/ruling class i refer to as shramik 😊 shera went to pray that 'their' plans become successful... being agni's slave, she had helped him out plan stuff right so knowing agni was leaving for war...all she did was pray their plans are successful... at this point of time.. she doesnt feel anything for dharam/veer no one...😊 and she definitely does not like agni... he was just (selfishly) sweet to her last time they met so all she did was return the favour...

Noww to the much awaited wAr scene! 😃 i was waiting for this one so badlyyy!!!!! 😃Veer!!! as a hero!!! sAviour of Aryanagar! 😛 I can imagine the entryyy ooopzzz sorryy grand entryy of Veer! 😳 Such a well plann'd.....I will givv nethin to see tat scene on air!! with soldiers marchin into frm pillar's all of a sudden overpowerin the revolutionaries!!! 👏
agni kuch karne se pehle hi.. it was ironical that he fell to the very people he hired.. 😛 awwww thankyou so much the rest of the comments😳

I liked all dialogues Dahram used while talkin to Arya Raja! 😳 Were all so powerful weapons!!..hehe!!! 😳 Good,noww Raja has sent down his Regiment! 😛 less worrries...cozz all are readyy now!!..yaayyee!!! kudoos to Veer n Dahram! 'Jai mama has to stnd n rejoice for his enemies win'..haha! 😆

thank you 😳

God!!! Goshh!!!! WAt bhimu darin to put knife onto Veer? Goshh1!!!!! Goshhh!!!! Goshhh!!!! WAt will Veer do now??....will he rise up to finish of all around?....or will his mom or sis cum for savin? Wattzzz gonna hapen?..
no my veer is not medicine man.. or superman.. 😆😭 he is genuinely injured.. but anyway most of Aryanagar problems have been taken care of... so need not worry.. kuch nahin hoga veer ko bhi..

Sanjaya!!...i am a fan of this person nowww!!! 😆 is he Charusena? ...hehe!!! i am picturisin Charu here!!!! 😆Risht momnt as saviour for Dahram at the border!! 😃 wayy to goo!!!! wow!!! u rokk Sanjaya jiiiii... 🤗

actually i dont know if it was co-incidental 🤔 but sanjaya was there in part 3 itself... i wanted atleast one nice friendly commander amidst all the corrupt people...he trusts dharam and veer more than agni and co even in that part... then after a few episodes when i saw charu on TV i was like ooo... looks like sanjaya.. 😛

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!! 😃 Thnkkkuuuuuuu!!!! end i am releived!!! 😛🤗🤗 so Shera has taken Veer....yaaye!! she'll take care of him n bring him bk to life!!..wow!! this is itnerestin! 😃

hee hee abhi tak take nahin kiyaa.. but hee hee dekhna anyway... thankyou soooo much pumpkin... 🤗

Originally posted by: lashy

@ minzy

hiiiiiiiiiii 🤗 yes veer managed to kheench sanjaya 😳 aakhir veer jo hai..

and veer locked up his family in cellar warna the revolutionaries would have killed them... he has kept the weapons just in case...but its more about survival...😭 its not very pleasant... par wahaan jai kyun aayega.. 😕 he is at the border na..I was juss bein crazyy..thinkin of all possible odds!!...howw sillyy f me!!.. 😆

Shera went to pray for agni? 😆 goshhhh!!!!! 😆Shera is a shrmik? i liked tis line "Play around with fire much as you want Rajkumar Agnivardhan...continue to do so and you will end up being burnt one day..."hehe! 😆
shramik only means worker.. so anyone who is not the royal/ruling class i refer to as shramik 😊 shera went to pray that 'their' plans become successful... being agni's slave, she had helped him out plan stuff right so knowing agni was leaving for war...all she did was pray their plans are successful... at this point of time.. she doesnt feel anything for dharam/veer no one...😊 and she definitely does not like agni... he was just (selfishly) sweet to her last time they met so all she did was return the favour...MM....i see! 😳 thnxx Lashh chech for describin so well! 😛

Noww to the much awaited wAr scene! 😃 i was waiting for this one so badlyyy!!!!! 😃Veer!!! as a hero!!! sAviour of Aryanagar! 😛 I can imagine the entryyy ooopzzz sorryy grand entryy of Veer! 😳 Such a well plann'd.....I will givv nethin to see tat scene on air!! with soldiers marchin into frm pillar's all of a sudden overpowerin the revolutionaries!!! 👏
agni kuch karne se pehle hi.. it was ironical that he fell to the very people he hired.. 😛 awwww thankyou so much the rest of the comments😳hehe!!!! i liked tat part so much! Tamasha dekne bhi nahi mila bechara ko! 😆

I liked all dialogues Dahram used while talkin to Arya Raja! 😳 Were all so powerful weapons!!..hehe!!! 😳 Good,noww Raja has sent down his Regiment! 😛 less worrries...cozz all are readyy now!!..yaayyee!!! kudoos to Veer n Dahram! 'Jai mama has to stnd n rejoice for his enemies win'..haha! 😆

thank you 😳ur Script forced me to write thm!😃i liked it sooooo much! 😛

God!!! Goshh!!!! WAt bhimu darin to put knife onto Veer? Goshh1!!!!! Goshhh!!!! Goshhh!!!! WAt will Veer do now??....will he rise up to finish of all around?....or will his mom or sis cum for savin? Wattzzz gonna hapen?..
no my veer is not medicine man.. or superman.. 😆😭 he is genuinely injured.. but anyway most of Aryanagar problems have been taken care of... so need not worry.. kuch nahin hoga veer ko bhi..tat remindss me of Iron Man!!!! 😆

Sanjaya!!...i am a fan of this person nowww!!! 😆 is he Charusena? ...hehe!!! i am picturisin Charu here!!!! 😆Risht momnt as saviour for Dahram at the border!! 😃 wayy to goo!!!! wow!!! u rokk Sanjaya jiiiii... 🤗

actually i dont know if it was co-incidental 🤔 but sanjaya was there in part 3 itself... i wanted atleast one nice friendly commander amidst all the corrupt people...he trusts dharam and veer more than agni and co even in that part... then after a few episodes when i saw charu on TV i was like ooo... looks like sanjaya.. 😛hehe!!!....myy Gawdd tatss so nice! 😆 We can sayy...Sanjaya n Charuu r brotherss....nopess Twinnee's!!!! 😆

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!! 😃 Thnkkkuuuuuuu!!!! end i am releived!!! 😛🤗🤗 so Shera has taken Veer....yaaye!! she'll take care of him n bring him bk to life!!..wow!! this is itnerestin! 😃

hee hee abhi tak take nahin kiyaa.. but hee hee dekhna anyway... thankyou soooo much pumpkin... 🤗

yess yess!!!!! aww!!!! 😳 🤗cant wait for SAt!!!...😆yesterdayy mom was askin me 'wat r u readin with this much concentration! 😆'hehe!! howw is she to knoww!!!! 😆 😉

lovv ya!!!!🤗

@ nima

awwwww thank you so much... nimu 🤗am so glad you liked it... mujhe lagaa sabko pasand nahi aayegaa 😕

I like the scene in which veer really abducteed Sanjay😆 n try to convince him that he is not abducting him so stop sceming like helpless girls!! it was so funny. i was like pls Sanjaya maan bhi jao veer is saying the truth😆 but thank god finally he gave in to veer's request👏 n give some relief to veer😊

yes.. it is a very big thing that veer is asking for.. so for sanjaya to be a reasonable commander, he would need atleast some prodding to be convinced na... isliye..but yes Veer is such a badmaash... he literally followed his brother's advice 😆 "abduct Sanjaya if you have to"

The scene between veer, his mom n his mami was very touchy n emotional. It touched directly to my heart😭 it expressed veer's character correctly n proved that how much emotional n lovable person he is!!!n also explain all about goods like sheets, water,food,wood, oil, lamp which shud last for about 2-3 days 😭 he was realy worried for them!!!

yes its war-survival...😭 they were literally reduced to temporary refugees... it was an emotional scene for me to write too.. and i guess i havent seen it in other historical-war serials on TV... 🤔 though it must be a common occurence...

as for your shera waali doubts.. me answered your's minoo's and bhuvana's doubts all together in the preview post on page 1.. put a note there... hmmm maybe i ended up confusing my dear readers slightly😕 continues to be an enigma...this young girl...😆

yes both veer and dharam are heroes.. in their own ways.. both patriotic and brave in their own ways.. 😃 thank you so much about the veer's entry scene... mujhe lagaa sabko ye sab bahut bore lagegi 😆 but im glad you liked it.. 😳 agni kuch karne se pehle hi tapak gayaa..

and yes aryavardhan trusts his son and nephew are not playful brats anymore.. though he still doesnt completely distrust his brother.. atleast he can see the genuine efforts in dharam...

That bhimsen😡 tricked veer😭 woh akele nahi lad paya to veer ko trick karkr apne ilake me le aaya!! darpok kahi ka😡

haan...battameez... they tricked the young prince...

the way dharam find defeated himself n recalling all the happiest moments of his life with his mim,dad n veer was sooo emotional.n finally sanjaya had reached at time👏 n i felt...haaaashhhhhh...😆n dharam got emotinal n" tear of gratitude flowed from his overjoyed eyes"!!😭

awww you liked that scene... it would be nice to see something like this in DV na... we'd feel very senti ... shaayad aise kuch aayega bhi ab DV main.. jis tarah se dikhaa rahe hain..

n the last scene shera hs taken veer😕. what did u do with him shradhha??😭 hope he is alright😕 hopefully shera will take care him n story get more interesting😳😳😳...???

arre baba i didnt do anything to him, the revols did... 😭😆 everyone has taken it for granted that shera has taken veer now.. like in the serial.. 😆

bahot suspense create kar diya hai tumne to...cant wait for the next part😉.pls update soon😊 overall this part was fantastic,awesome n mindblowing👏👏👏

thank youuuuuuuuuuuuu so much nimu 🤗 your lamba lamba comments are so encouraging and wants to keep me going..

@ bubs

I loved this part 19 lash 😛 .. I dunno why you felt that we will not like it… 😕 u seriously underestimated the taste of ur intelligent readers just because we watch DV ? 😆

no.. i thought maybe it had so many things happening in it that no one would be able to relate to one particular incident...

My favourite scene in this one was the emotional scene between Veer n the queens 😳 .. Veers dialogue abt almond milk… made me miss my momma n almond milk 😭 it was a beautiful scene n bhuvi became emotional n had to grab a tissue 😭 thank god u did not habe any Nivs taking aarti of Veer scene this one was soo practical n touching 👏 .This scene was BEAUTIFUL 😳

omg you are right... it didnt even strike me to have an aarti scene.. but how can they when the situation is so dire and they have lack of time.. 😆 nivs and swathi were in complete shock.. the poor ladies and yes that scene was very emotional for me too.. 😕

I loved the way u described the way Veer fights with those shramiks 😛 .. I could see him jumping over rosewood tables n vases… 😍

veer's favourite passtime killing villains.. 😆

I loved the comic kidnapping of Sanjaya by Veer the way he tricks the innocent man with his overacting as if he witnessed something horrific so very veer like even in this situation 😆 .. "I am not abducting you, so stop screaming like a helpless girl" 🤣

badmaash Veer... yes he literarlly abducted that poor old man.. had no other go.. it was comical - dont know how practical (thodaa dramatic license chaahiye😆).. but i guess not many other options due to lack of time.. 😆

I loved the way that even ur Dharam n Veer are not invincible n Dharam almost accepts defeat.. I liked the way you showed veer being exhausted after 2 days of continuous fighting… I like it that your heros are very very brave n strong warriors but are humans who get injured,exhausted n make mistakes not super heros. I was senti whn he recollects all happy memories "the memorable scenes from his life for a last time - his lovely days at the Gurukul, his mother's smile, his father's blessing, Veer's mischievous frowns, the princess of Niphaud and his Aryanagar home" 😭 whn yaaaaaaaaaayyyy the troups arrive.. I was jumping out in joy … 🥳
awww thank you for the superhero comment 😳one can almost root for Aryanagar here cant they? feel like its your own kingdom/nation or something 😆

N I loved the way Bhim tricks Veer .. 😛 I like it that your villain if not a clown but a clever and dangerous enemy 👏 n tht dialogue abt war n battles was ironically true …

thanks hun😳

I am upset over veer being hurt "the prince finally drops unconscious to the ground, forced to bring his heroic saga to an end." 😭 bhuvi had to blow nose here again..waaaaahhhhhhh .... 😭

i felt very sad when i typed those words about veer myself 😭

but I know he will be fit as a big pumpkin in part 20… 😆 maybe with Anus loving care… 😍 but I know u wont be as predictable as tht, will you ??

no i wouldnt 😆

I liked the obstinate Maharaj understanding tht his son n nephew had been right all along.. 😳 I liked shera taking care of those little kids.. 😳 This girl is soo perfect ..my darling she is 🤗 I liked the way you described the streets of aryanagar after riots

thank you thank you for noticing all these small points... it really really made my day.. 🤗🤗🤗

as for your shera waali doubts.. me answered your's minoo's and bhuvana's doubts all together in the preview post.. put a note there... hmmm maybe i ended up confusing my dear readers slightly😕 continues to be an enigma...this young girl...😆

i havent been able to do any picture work as writing part 18 and 19 itself have been so difficult with my health (apart from the scroll).. i should try and bring in new photo stuff..

before I forget to be nice to u... Loads of huuuuugssssssss for lovely lovely part 19 🤗you can understand the reasons for my extra impatience and eagerness for part 20 cant u ? 😉 my reasons are (☺️❤️😳)

hee hee i know but this is still anjaan shera and anjaan veer bubs.. 😆

You were too splendid this time! How could you say this was the inferior part of all? To be truthful this was the most superior part of all! you've outdid yourself! I'm glad that all my waiting has been so fruitful.It was very very engorsing.I loved the fight part and how you explained the trap of Shramiks!! OMG!! it was too marvellous!! I could actually smell rain and feel the surprise of Shera myself!! I got so involved in this part!and it's a strange coincidence that it started raining here too while I was reading the last part.I don't know why I was very intrigued by the last scene where Shera sees Veer lying unconcious...that image refuses to budge from my mind.I'm super excited to learn about the sweet moments Veer and Shera would spend later *sigh*

I also loved Veer's small talk with his mami and ma sooo chweett and touching...I want to hug him for that 🤗 and you've sketched him amazingly!! the fight at the palace was to die for!his attitude throughout the battle was amazing! and I loved Dharam in one particular scene...where he sadly looks up and thinks about God,the moment when the regiments arrive and he regains his energy to fight.The scene where his tears of gratitude washes the blood strains...they were all too refreshing and had me awed for a long time.

You have made pt 19 an array of emotions di.A humble and proud bow to you for presenting such a highly entertaining,involving and surpassing all your other parts.

and now 'm on my journey to dream land deaming about the next part

😍

and you've chosen Kashmir as Aryanagar's location? perfect choice! 😳

Originally posted by: lashy

🤣 rashoo... everytime i see this i start laughing... they have reserved their places for their comments... which they edit and add later.. i dont know ye trend kaise chaaloo huaa... par 😆 your question was so funny..

hee hee... 😆😆😆

@ neeri

awwww thank you neeri...🤗 am i so glad this part was well received.. partly one of the reasons i was late in posting it.. finally i steeled myself and said.. dont care if no one likes it... they will probably like the future parts 😆 oy chech ki bacchi!!!! how could u ever think that we wont like this?????? 😲 bhuvana's right... u're underestimating ur readers' intelligence.... 😛

awww thank you about the Veer-Sanjaya bit.. i guess it is very Veer... when comparing other things in Samyukta i guess that scene need a bit of dramatic license...but i guess chalta hai kabhi kabhi.. 😆 and btw he took his *brother's* advice - abduct sanjaya if you have to 😉 isse kehte hain bhai-vritaness ki bimari... 😆

"Oh Lord! You wake me up with a glass of almond milk in your hand everyday, while your unfortunate son is rationing even basic food and water to you now!" that was the most touching line ever... 😭

looks like that was everyone's favourite scene - it definitely was mine too... i guess it was realistic😳.. and till bhuvana pointed out about nivs doing aarti etc.. i didnt realize that it was hatke from the norm.. but writing that line did bring a tear to my eye... 😭 truly... and reading that line brought tears to mine... 😭

neeri me must say after reading your comments that you have understood agni- shera perfectly... he is ungrateful... not that she doesnt know and not that she is the least bit bothered about him.. it's just that she is helpless *oops- revealing the plot here* and yes ironically Agni got injured by the very revolutionaries who he hired.. 😆 before he could set out to do anything.. 😆 hmmmn shera 'helpless'???🤔 interesting.... 😉

Dharam spoke like a true leader and patriot... 👏 *sigh* my noble and brave dharam... 😳

hee hee he so is...😳 i love them both -dharam and veer... 😡 unlike in the serial...chee am so angry and still cant get over it.. u know how angry i am chech..... 😡 but i'm bearing it... i dunno for how long though... 😕

as always i could picture the battle scenes as u described it... 😃

thankoooo 😳

Standing amidst the bloody grounds; the lifeless prince closes his eyes to recall the memorable scenes from his life for a last time - his lovely days at the Gurukul, his mother's smile, his father's blessing, Veer's mischievous frowns, the princess of Niphaud and his Aryanagar home. this is my fav scene.... all the emotions that dharam's goin through can be felt in these few lines... 😳

yes he thought he was going to die...so he wanted to remember his last memories... i should have added a phrase there *neeri's naughty smiles😆* no no... 😆😆😆 *neeri's sweet and innocent smiles* 😳

oh these so called 'revolutionaries' are such a cowardly lot... its a shame to even call them by that name.... 😡 😭😭😭 i had a feeling shera will be the one to help out veer in the end... 😉hmmmn i wonder whats goin on inside her mind at that instance... 😳

it was very mean what they did to Veer...😕 but i guess that goes to show how many different kind of people there are... revols think one way.. agni and his co think one way, dhruv-type of people think one way.. and shera helping veer...😛 hee hee...

thank god u are updating today chech... i cant wait to read the next part... i wanna see dharam battling his way to victory... 😳

ayooooo i sat last night neeri but i hardly managed to complete 2 pages...i have 4 more pages to go😆 writing takes so much time, effort and energy 😆 i am sure i will complete the next part sooner than usual.. but i wonder if i should post it next saturday😕 warnaa sabko bahut zyaadaa ho jaayega na.. bilkul zyaada nahi hoga... 😃 but u post whenever u get time to finish it... 😊 and when u feel satisfied enough with the part.... 😆

🤗 thankoo jee

Originally posted by: lashy

@ rashi

sorry dear me have to reply to your pm... will do so today... 😳 thank you so much... let me know when you get bored..😆 parts 1 -6 are slightly heavy... parts 6 - 12 are lighter... 13 - 18 a mixture of everything... 😳 nice to see you here... 🤗

🤣 rashoo... everytime i see this i start laughing... they have reserved their places for their comments... which they edit and add later.. i dont know ye trend kaise chaaloo huaa... par 😆 your question was so funny..

i thought why this word reserved 😆

well thanks for letting me know abt it 😳 😉 i'll hopefully reserve my place for next part.......

but i have to read ll 19 parts first 😕 n i doub't when willl i complete them 😛

Originally posted by: crazy_kiran

What is this lashy, u can understand me taking so long to reply is coz I just don't know how to reply, RAJKUMAR VEER IS DEAD, after reading this I just forgot the whole update I had read and had to read it again and again, but nothing is registering now

I loved veer preparing for the war, it was so moving and touching, but his this dia was the best

"Oh Lord! You wake me up with a glass of almond milk in your hand everyday, while your unfortunate son is rationing even basic food and water to you now!"

And this is my fav attitude of veer which I am really going to miss in the coming epi if the synopsis of the coming epi is true "Winking his eye, Veer replies candidly to cheer her up "Ma...have you forgotten that your son is a warrior?"

But I just loved the war both at the border and the city, it was so fast moving and thrilling, each and every second I was waiting for the next thing to strike, u really bought the war to life, veers bravery, dharams bravery, maharajs helplessness and then pride at this son and his nephew, jaiwardhan growing suspicion that something is going wrong with his plans, and then the aryanagars troops arriving just in time to save the day, all very very brillilant.

I just hope that rajkumar veer is not dead but just very badly injured and has his lady love to take care of him

i read your comments over and over again... kirannnnnn either this is a joke...😆 or you are extremely seriously immersed into the story 😕 but either way how could you think that veer would be dead? dont be so upset hun... mujhe lag hi rahaa thaa tum dukhi hogi...

i am so happy that you enjoyed the war scenes... 🤗

there are too many people in samyukta who love veer to not take care of him.. 😊 if its of any reconciliation to you, i will post part 20 earlier than usual..

Originally posted by: lashy

i read your comments over and over again... kirannnnnn either this is a joke...😆 or you are extremely seriously immersed into the story 😕 but either way how could you think that veer would be dead? dont be so upset hun... mujhe lag hi rahaa thaa tum dukhi hogi..................more than dukhi i was shocked, i thought reading sagars ka synopsis u thinkgin of wrapping up ur story too😆😆

i am so happy that you enjoyed the war scenes... 🤗................yeah they were brilliant

there are too many people in samyukta who love veer to not take care of him.. 😊 if its of any reconciliation to you, i will post part 20 earlier than usual.. ..................that will be the best, now i have a good idea to get story early from u, i just pretend to be dukhi😆😆😆