Lashy your commentator is back. ๐๐ค๐ค
๐ค Wow, gobsmacked, outstanding part you have written. ๐I cannot seem to find a word in the dictionary to describe how brilliant this part is. ๐
It totally took me by surprise, ๐I did not expect the sad scenes between veer, his mum and mami ๐๐ญ๐ญ that bought tears to my eyes, agni (langoor kahi ka) trying to hit shera๐ก , the fight between veer and bhimdev and veer getting injured and lying on the street ๐ญ๐ญand shera finds him. Dharam remembering his moments with veer, his father. ๐ญ
Kya twist maara hai story main ๐, I dont think any of us expected this to happen in part 19. Hosh udaa diya humara ๐๐๐ค๐ค
What I loved :
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Noticing the figure to be a blood-stained rain-soaked cold body strewn aside on a street, Shera protectively closes the eyes of the frightened children with her chilly hands to shield them from the ghastly sight ๐ญ brave veer is all alone lying on a street ๐ญ๐ญ and shera recognises that it is veer and saying that he is dead. I feel like going up to her and telling her that he is not going to die ๐ญ
Pretending to be horrified; Veer reacts by grabbing Sanajaya by his wrist and starts dragging the objecting commander away from his remaining group hastily. kya drama karta hai veer, he is so natural at it as well and needs no training๐๐
"Off late; my horse has not been galloping as fast...would you be able to ride it...check it for me..."
Instantly aghast by the trivial issue of a seemingly obstinate prince, Sanjaya queries him "Amidst all these problems, you are worried about the speed of your horse...Rajkumar Veer ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ I love the excuse he comes up with that his horse does not gallop very fast. Sanjaya is so shocked after veers answer that he does not know whether to strangle him or laugh ๐
Veer folds his hand and glares at Sanjaya, feigning anger "How am I supposed to fight on horseback, if my horse is ill or doesn't function to the best of its ability..." he pauses "If something happens to me on the battlefield...you will be to blame...Sanjaya ji..." kya nautanki karta hai veer. ๐ talk about giving the guilt trip to sanjaya.
"Sanjaya ji listen to me...I am not abducting you, so stop screaming like a helpless girl โฆI am just taking you to the military chambers at Aryanagarโฆwe need your help for something very urgentโฆplease don't interrupt me and allow me to explain everything โฆ I shall tell you everything on the wayโฆeverything about Gadhwar...Chatarpur... the revolutionaries...but you must trust me...please..." ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ Veer kidnapping sanjaya. If veer was not a prince, i bet sanjaya would have beaten him for saying that he screams like a helpless girl. I do love the way you have described how veer takes sanjaya and asks his support. Anyway its not his fault, he is just following his older brothers orders ๐
Aww veer explaining to sanjaya what has happened so far and to help him. I like his character and the way you have described his character as he is trusting veer and giving him a chance. ๐such a wise man unlike the king.
the way he reassures swati mami is so touching ๐.
the dialogue Since all guards are going to be busy with the revolts, I have managed to post only two here." Finding himself becoming increasingly emotional, he points towards the large bundle on the floor and continues "I pray you might never have to...but don't hesitate to use the weapons if needed. Everything is there in the bundle...sheets to keep you warm...wood, lamp and oil... some dry food to last for about two days..." This scene bought tears to my eyes, it is so sad the way veer is trying to tell them not to trust anyone and that he cannot post any more guards for their safety. He feels so helpless that he cannot even have an army to protect his loved ones.๐ญ ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
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lashy ๐ญ, this scene brough out the tears and i am sure everyone will cry after reading this scene. I can imagine veer's pain when he asks them to ration the supplies and them remembers all the love they have given him ๐ญ He must be feeling so bad asking his mum and mami to do that. Also at the same time the women are unsure as to what is going to happen to them.๐ญ
I like how nivritti understands veer's dilemma and pain and reassures him. Me want to see these scenes. So touching to see nivritti giving her son strength to fight on even though she is worried about him and their safety. ๐๐
Bending down to give his family an affectionate farewell hug; he flashes them an assuring smile that displays numerous silent promises and then exits the cellar, simultaneously ordering the soldiers to bolt the door behind him. I can just imagine this scene, its like he is giving them an hug but at the same time is feeling as to whether or not he will come back, see them again or not. I found these scenes so touching and so real than what they show at the moment. ๐ ๐Each scene you have described makes us realise how we fould feel if we were in that situation . ๐ญ ๐ญ
Rubbing his eyes to clarify his vision, his pleasant visage turns to one of horror, Me so want to see the shock on agni's face when he sees lots of soldiers and thinking how did this all happen. ๐He obviously does not know the cleverness, bravery of dharam and veer. How can he kill his own countrymen? ๐ก
The spy shera has entered to give information, how dare he show his annoyance to her when his plans are failings.?๐ก How could he shove her aside and disrespecting the prashad. ๐ก
He is calling her a slave, when previously he was thanking her for all the information she found and could not take his eyes of her.๐ก I like shera's answer as if it not for her information their plan would have been found out ages ago.๐๐
Then he had the nerve to get angry ๐ก when she said the truth. How dare he raise his hand at her, me was going red and purple on this side when I was reading it.๐ Little does agni know that shera can harm him if she wanted to.
"Play around with fire much as you want Rajkumar Agnivardhan...continue to do so and you will end up being burnt one day..." I love this dialogue, the fie will consume him and his sick father one day.๐๐๐
Agni steps back in horror, thinking to himself "Bhimsen...here...so soon...the foolish revolutionaries have already raided the assembly...where are the remaining palace guards...I better get out of here..." Agni is such a coward, he likes to cause trouble but when it goes wrong he cannot face it and runs. ๐ Good the shramik hit him on the head, he deserves it, ๐๐. I just want to see Jai's reaction when agni tells him what happened and how he got knocked out so soon. Maybe jai will strangle his own son after this ๐๐
the way you are describing the war ๐๐
Dhananjeya is rubbing salt into the wounds, he does not know what important business sanjaya has gone for. ๐ When he does find out it will be him who will be running away and so will jai ๐
I love the way dharam is keeping his calm and the faith he is in veer being successful. ๐๐๐
"Maharaj! for that matter, even Veer is not around. While we are braving such a serious situation here, I am sure he has gone off on his usual strollsโฆabandoning his regiment!"
Frowning at his uncle irately, Dharam objects "ChachaโฆVeer knows his duties far more than one thinks of himโฆ and in that case even Agni is not here yetโฆ" this jai ๐ก is always stirring and causing problems. Kya Jawab diya dharam ne ๐๐ to defend his brother.
how the king is asking his own son if Gadhwar will attack them, why did he not listen to his own son. I liked how dharam told his father the truth and what veer has gone to do. ๐๐
the king instead of praising and thanking dharam for all that he is doing is demanding that he was not told about it. ๐ก when dharam and veer tried to tell him, he did not believe them
Still in disbelief about the astounding information provided by his son, the surprised father prods on to interrupt Dharam's thoughts "I cannot believe that you have taken such important decisions without letting even me, the king know...how did you know about all this in the first place...about Chatarpur...about the revolutionaries storming the palace..." the king should be proud that dharam is taking his own decisions and is capable of protecting the kingdom and royal family.
Not wanting to reveal anything about his association with the princess of Niphaud or her personal letter, awww so sweet, ๐ณhe did not tell the king of his future biw๐
Gradually pondering on how the princes' well made plans seemed comprehensible solutions for Aryanagar's dire situations, Aryavardhan becomes moved at how fastidiously his son and nephew had taken charge of all matters by themselves Finally the king has realised that his son and nephew have grown up ๐ and can look after the kingdom. I like how the king feels bad about suspecting dharam, how they were insulted and now feels very proud to have a son like dharam. ๐๐
the brave way veers fights with the revolutionaries. ๐ ๐
The effects of trying to defend his forte solitarily for two entire days starts becoming apparent on the young prince , as he endeavours with great difficulty to overcome the fatigue in his shivering legs and regularly pauses to catch up on his breath. he must be mentally and phhysically exhausted ๐ญ๐ญ with so much to worry about from dharam, his family, the kingdom and protecting what is right.
the soldiers worried how they are going to win the war against and whether or not help will arrive ๐ญ
love the dialogue of dharam, very commendable ๐ . He is trying to motivate the soldiers spirit to fight "Dear soldiers...we are facing war now...I know we are challenging a large army...however, if you consider yourself an Aryanagari...if this is where you were born... if this is where your children live...then you will defend your home proudly...even if it would mean you had to lay your life for it...never underestimate the power of miracles..." this is just what the soldiers need to hear to reassure and make them realsie how important it is this war and why they are figthing. ๐
Jaivardhan marks Dharam's magnificence on the battlefield and begins to worry about Agni's long absence. I would have so loved to see dharam fighting in the battlefield. ๐๐ Good that jai isrealising how brave and skilled dharam is. ๐
For most part of the day; the brave prince and his commanders endure many injuries and continue to perform brilliantly on the fields, astonishing everyone around them. oh no dharam and soldiers getting injured ๐ญbut still fighting very bravely ๐However; as the fateful day eventually wanes, the brave Aryanagar soldiers discover that skills alone are no match for a denser Gadhwar army, and the vulnerable Aryanagar army find their forces becoming overwhelmed and conquered, over time. I was at the edge of my seat when I was reading about the war scenes, i can just imagine how worried the soldiers must be feeling as they see big the Gadhwar army ๐ญ๐ญ
Veer pushes his tired self to pursue the culprits and strives to grab one of the men running ahead of him, till a voice behind him catches his attention "I have never come across such a tenacious fighter like you... you have fought for two days with no rest at allโฆare you really an Aryavrat?" nahiii veer is getting tired ๐ญ as he has fought non stop for 2 days. Good that bhimsen has realised how strong veer is and will not be overpowerd easily. ๐ ๐
"How silly of you to underestimate an Aryavratโฆone of the strongest armies everโฆ never lost a single war in the last two centuries!" i like veers answer on ๐๐ and how bhimsen is dishonestly fighting the war and wanting to attack harmless women.
Bhimsen laughs out loud and then speaks up in a callous tone "Rajkumar Veerโฆexactly...you put up such a difficult fight and killed so many of our menโฆhence, in order to protect ourselves...and take our own sweet revengeโฆwe had to trick you into thisโฆ.I am sorry...but, who says war is always fair!" sick sick bhimsen ๐ก๐ก and while reading this part it made me realise that something bad is going to happen to veer ๐ญ๐ญ
Veer suddenly realizes that he was trapped in a dead end of a Shramik street, surrounded on all sides by fresh faces of menacing revolutionaries. The disgusted Veer glares at the men around him and then grips his weapon and takes his stance, unwilling to give up. Wasting no time; the group of inconsiderate men start inflicting blows on the deserted prince with their weapons from all directions simultaneously, which Veer assays to defend for a while Oh nooo, veer is trapped ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ and the cowards start attacking him together ๐ญ from all directions. ๐ญ
Veer
finds himself unable to block one of the men from running a large knife into his torso. I was shocked when i read this as I was totally not expecting this ๐ญ ๐ญOverwhelmed with the fatigue and throbbing pain, Veer looks at the knife deeply embedded into him with a blank gaze, while his vision begins to blur. Helplessly watching the final sights of the horrified men scampering around him in panic; the prince finally shuts his eyes and drops unconscious to the ground, forced to bring his heroic saga to a premature end. oh no, he is injured very badly and there is no one around to take him to safety and tend to his wounds. ๐ญ๐ญthe nearly defeated Dharam looks up to the skies uncaring of the sweat and blood flowing down his brow to reprimand the Lord for testing him so severely. this is so sad as everyone is losing hope ๐ญ๐ญ makes me realise how deadly war and its consequences. ๐ญStanding amidst the bloody grounds; the lifeless prince closes his eyes to recall the memorable scenes from his life for a last time - his lovely days at the Gurukul, his mother's smile, his father's blessing, Veer's mischievous frowns, the princess of Niphaud and his Aryanagar home. Constantly battling with repeated premonitions for his brother's safety; aww ๐ญ he is remembering all the times he spent with veer and family and thinking about veers safety. I dont even want to imagine how dharam will feel when he finds out that veer is badly injured ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
The deafening sounds of the war ground come to a terrifying silence, as everyone stares at the source of the tremors - hundreds of thousands of Aryanagar regiments pouring in veins towards both the eastern and western borders of Aryanagar, led by the proud Sanjaya. Watching his full force of commanders, foot soldiers and cartloads of weaponry; Aryavardhan and the remaining handful of Aryanagar soldiers break into a smile of instant relief, while a tear of gratitude flows from the overjoyed Dharam's eye, washing the blood off his cheek. this scene is so b gripping and beautifully written, everyone has lost hope and the minute they see the regiments from east and west, they all feel glorious like they have come back to life. ๐๐ Yey, i felt like dancing and jumping up and down when i read this
Dhananjeya and Jaivardhan stare dumbfounded, unable to comprehend how Sanjaya had arrived with the entire Aryanagar army on time. Sensing Aryanagar's definite victory, Jaivardhan becomes immediately mad with rage and fury at how all his plans seemed to be collapsing. ๐๐ me so want to see their expressions and scream out "losers" to both jai and dhananjeya . Yey aryanagar won and dharam and his army will now defeat all the others.
Lashy, such a gripping part with so many emotions from happiness, sadness to horror. ๐ I loved how you showed the victory of dharam and on the other hand veer being injured.๐๐๐. It shows the struggle brave warriors go through and the pain they go through to protect the people, family. The scenes are very realistic as normally you always see the main warriors never getting injured badly but here you have shown that which is brilliant. ๐๐๐
me sooooo looking forward to the next part.๐