My F@nfic Mystery of F/L/EUpdated part 3

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Introduction
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dharam-veer/884693/an-f-nfic-updated-all-introduction
Part one-
The story starts as
we see an beautful ladiess voice chanting om jay jagish hare(yes that time also the song is there)
and two of the queens where [raying to god
one is nivirathi and other is shamali
they both are doing puja in the puja room in front of shiva ji's big murti
all lamps litten and glow of there faces makes us feel that its still night with 2 moons on it
both are praying(after finshing pooja)
nivrathi(n)(in her mind);shiva ji apko pata hi hoga ki muhjey kis cheez sey bahut parishaani hey
mera veer mera hi hey. may usey kohna nahi chahata and pls uski raksha karna
Other lady in mind;mera dharam aur maharaj ko salamath rehey aur mera dharam ko koi problem may mat dalna
aur maharaj ko dharam key sikayath karni ki koi mauka na dey
just then an man comes there n its non other than the maharaj
both ladies turn back n smiles
shamali goes n touch the maharaj leg n she gets an sign of perfect day by doing that n maharaj takes sindhur from tali n
put it on shamali's forhead which makes nivirathi misses her husband soo much but she don't show it on face
she goes to her brother n takes his ashirwaad n brother gaves her ashirwaas
maharaj ;where is Dharam
shamali;still sleeping and why do u always ask for dharam not veer
Maharaj;because i know that Veer is shadow of dharam where ever dharam veer will be with him no matter where they are
but how many times should i tell that an rajkumar should be one who always wake up first
when will dharam wake at early morning???? after all he is future king of aryanagar
shamali; he will surly be a grt king like u but he is just a kid and pls don't start to scold him from the morning
N;yes bhaya u should not spoil there morning as our pitaji spoiled ur many mornings
then they all laugh and goes

then in same mahal an corner there is an larger room with 3 beds in side it
and we see a three beds with 3 charming young rajkumars sleeping in it
in first bed its decrated with blue silk cloths and we see a very neat bed and an rajkumar sleeping in t with his heads up in his cool nice blue pillow
he is very deep in sleep his sleeps like an kid sleeping with innocent face pure n charming n he is unaware of what his uncle n cousin way to kill him at any time
awarre of his responsbilty n he is sleeping with dignity
its non other than rajkumar dharam
and in second bed its decorated with pink(light)silk cloths and u can see aa messy no messiest bed u ever seen
u can see some dresses here and there some sticks and there is an bg talwaar n some books and in middle of that there is the charming prince sleeping innocently
doesn't know his destiny he doesn't know wat all trouble are ahead of him
he is none other than Rajkumar Veer
then moving on to next one its a bit messy not like the veer but messy with some cloths on the bed with some sticks to
in middle there is our cool guy sleeping with karakete he is very funny sleeping face is also funny with half open mouth with all noise still sleeping unaware of his
destiny or his family reaction when they know that he disbey there command n run away from the house
but sleeping very peacefully n enjoying his sleep
its none other than Nakul


Rajkumar was more responisble one
so he dedicded to go @sharp time n try to be puntcal
he wake up as the sunshine glow his face and he loves to hear birds singing n hears to see his fav flowe which is rose to be in front of him a vase he loved nature
he went n look at the other who was sleeping n laughed n he went for his usual fresh ups
then after comming back from there
he heard an bell
as he heard the breakfast bell he was shocked because it was already 8.35(breakfast timing at 9 his father was very striict abt punctcallilty whoever it is) and he don't want any reason for his father to scold him or his friends and decided to
wake the others
he reached veeer first then he started to shake him but no asar then he took some water n sparyed it on to his face
Dhaam;Veer utha bhi then veer wake up n smiles @dharam
and stated there pillow fight
in middle of fight
Veer;dharam tumney agni ki nayi plan ko suna
Dharam in an confuseed expersion
Dharam;kaunsi plan ki barey may baat kar rehey ho tum????????

as then(dharam) heard the breakfast bell he was shocked because it was already 8.30(breakfast timing at 9 his father was very striict abt punctcallilty whoever it is) and he don't want any reason for his father to scold him or his friends
then HE and Veer went to wake up nakul which was a diffcult job because
Naakul was a kumbakaran
veer n dharam tried every thing water trick then also no effect time was runnning out n then
after there 10 mintues hard wrking veer got an idea
And Veer immated nakul's father's voice
Veer;Nakul tumney yeh kya kiya hey
then nakul suddenly wake and started to say
Nakul;mayney kch nahi kiya hey pitaji woh (then he opened his eyes n sees veer n dharam standing n laughing)
NaKul;may tumay nahi chodogiiiiiiii tum na dharam bhi tumney muhjey dara diya tumney almost meri jaan leliiiiiiiiiiiiiii arghhhhh
Dharam;not now nakul its already 8.45 omg its 8.45 omggggg commonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn go n get ready


Nakul;tho dharam aur Veer aapp dono muhjey uthdeney may itni dheer kyun kar dhi??????
Veer n dharam both stare at him and with a quick bath n changed there dress
and then they reached the hall but all where there all except these 3 rajkumar's
Maharaj extremlyyyyy angry for late comers
ALll knows this
The 3 rajkumar strae each other and says
veer to dharam;hum to gaye kaam sey
dharam to nakul;hum to gaye kaam sey
nakul to Dv;ha pata hey agey dekthey hey hota hey kya
all scared
agni n jai very happyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

End of PaRt 1
Kya Punishment milega inn 3 rajkumaron ko
aur agni ki nayi plan kya heY????????
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Part 2
ARyavardyan(AR);Phir sey late when will all of u learn how to be puntucal
especially you dharam u knw that i m seeing an future king in u and do u think this behaviour makes me proud n makes u the future king?????????
dharam gets very said both veer n nakul gets and bad feeling that because of them dharam gets scolding
jaivardyan;(muttering to agni);and the dream of maharaj will never come true as i live you will be the only king future king and see you have all qualities for a king
then agni smiles n became happy at seeing maharaj being upset with dharam
agni exchange smiles with tasha who leaves with them in mahal
MAharj;always same when will u be punctcal u know all people depends upon king but if u are always late in everything no one will be happy
Shamali interpurt there converstation
shamali;maharaj maaf kar dijiye na future it won't happen i....
maharaj interputed her;how many times will u say same dialog shamali how many times will u able to help or support dharam for becaming late
dharam is stage of crying which sudeenly clicks an idea in veer's head
Veer;maharaj we didn't do it puroposfully actcally we where ready at 7 but then nakul told us that he have doubt that there is interuder;s or spying in our arya nagar who
gives information abt our countries maatter to other king so we throught to go and check them by our self so that we can get them and know wat are the others plan
when we reached there they had gone so we came running but still we couldn't reach here on time
it was all dharam's idea to captue them by us if u don't belive me ask nakul he saw them with his own eyes
Nakul whose mouth half opened by veer's lie was glancing veer with controlling his laughter n shock he repiled
NAkul;yea......yesh.maharaj i saw them and telled to dharam and he told us to go n see them and capture them

MAharaj was really shocked with veer's reason n was delighted to know that his son was really interseted in protecting aryanagar from the other kings
Agni n tasha was equally shocked as NAkul and they know that this incidence was a peck of rubbish and they straed hard at those 3 prince who was enjoying there
dharam was shocked but veer wrinkled an eye at him and dharam was controlling his laughter but felt bad in deep
Maharaj;what am i hearing it prperly u all went to capture introderes(spy) next time if u have information pls say to us we will take care of it
dharam i m sorri son i love u soo much well come and have some breakfast after all u did an grt job today n i m feeling very prud that u are my son pls and u two u are also the best
through u are not my sons but i love u as my sons
by all this words 3 princes was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo delighted but dharam was feeling guilty
so they all went took ashriwaad from maharaj,shamali,niviarath and hugges them,n they seltted down
NAkul oppsite to tasha
DHaram oppsite to Agni
VEer oppsite to jaivarydhan
Dharam was little dispressed both other noticed this
veer nugded dharam and asked;
In small voices but agni n tasha have sharp ears so they where listening to it

vEEr;dharam kya huva kyun itna udaas ho
dharam;veer u where lieing na we where really late because of our misbehaviour
veer;(with concered voice);dharam all is well in love and war n gaves his naughty smile
NAkul;waisey bhi kya kamal ka jhoot bhola tha it was nice one veer but it was true i truly saw some spY
Dv looked at him in surprise
NAkul;@my dreams
and there are some others who are really equal to intertuders(spys)
all laughed silently
Tasha n agni was burning with angry
after that they all had a very good lunch n agni n tasha had bad one
then after they where sitting in there usual garden and chatting abt the mela which will be conducted @shiv temple on comming frieday
Dharam ,veer,nakul
NAkul;i heard this mela will be more intersting because we can stay back there and see 24 hrs programms there
Veer;really wow that would be fun i mean full night with lot of masti but by the way how did u know abt this???????????
Nakul;that that i heard it from a sanik
but veer was very auspious Veer;nakul but sanikas don't know abt it then how tell me the truth
Dharam;ya ya saniks don't know abt this tell us the truth don't say that u meet some girl from there n told u this?????
Nakul;well u are right dharam i saw an beautful girl she and her innocence her way of talking and she behaves like a kid and her humour is good
Veer;kai tumay woh nahi ho gaya hey (with an really serious n concerned voice n expression as if something is bad will happen)
nakul in an confussed expression
NAkul;kya ho gaye hey muhjey batavo na veer muhjey daaravo mat
Veer nudge dharam and says
Veer; dharam he is defintly in it*(wrinkles at him)
dharam;what no ways nakul and that i don't think nakul but i never except u to be in this
Nakul;what are u guys talking abt????????????????
pls clear it to me pls veer pls dharam telll na plssss
Veer; says tumay pyaar ho gaya hey bachuuuuuuuuu
Nakul;kyaaa bakwaaas keh reha hey tu i mean wait wait i think u are right i think i m in love
she i mean she is like my sapion ka rajkumari
Veer n dharam excvahnge looks
Veer;dharam humara dost barbad ho agayaaaaaaaaa hey he is mad
Dharam;so trueeeeeeeee (they both start laughing)
nakul is also joined with laugh with them
VEer;anyways what her name????
NAkul;whose
Veer; ur dream rajkumari ki
Nakul;oh i don't know
Dharam; whattttttttttttttttttt
NAkul; ya dharam i don't know her name,her adress i don't even know her properly and i don't even know she is a rajkumari or not
Dharam;then what do u know abt her
Nakul;nothing just know i love her soo much
Veer was not listening to this converstation
he just noticed that some one was following them he felt someone was watching them or spying them
and then his views where divered from the feeling to agni tasha converstaion
Veer went near to bush so that he can hear agni tasha converstation
Agni;you know what that dharam and veer suck i hate them a lot they are such a loosers
Tasha;soo true and that nakul he was a damn lier how did he lie and how dare he insult us
Agni;leave it tasha we will soon get an revenage on them
Tasha;ya waiting for that moment then we will show who we are
Agni;hey my dad just now told that in that mela shera will come to steal money for sure
and we will catch him red handed and I will be or we will be famous n get credit to catch shera the dakooooo
and all arya sabh will apperciate n impressed with our work and poor dharam he won't get any credit
Tasha;wow shera i love to catch him after all he is an famous dako and we will also impress maharaj jaichand who reward 10000 for shera's head
Agni;by impressing Maharaj jaichand we can get an chance to meet Rajkumari Anannaya who is know to be very beautful princess
common lets play some chess
Tasha;sureeeeeeeee
Veer was totally shocked to hear alll this shera n mela and all there plans
he directly went to Dn(dharam and nakul)
Dharam;where were u veer we where searching for u for a long time
where were u
Nakul;i thought u also went to search for ur rajkumari
Dharam stoopped laughing as veer was in an serious n concerned look
Dharam;what happened
Veer told all abt Agni Tasha plan
Dharam;wow what an idea agni have found out i mean to catch shera is like conquering an country
Nakul;i agree all tried even my father tried to catch shera but no use
Veer;dharam we will ctach him we will ctach shera
Dharam;what???????????
Nakul; you are madddddddddddddddddddd
Veer; its ur prestiges matter just tink how will be maharaj's recation when u catch sheraaa
dharam;ya i can imagine but how??????//
Nakul;ya howwwwwwwww
Veer; shera will be comming to the mela and we will be also there
Dharam;do u think our parents will allow us to stay there u know we are rajkumar and there will be a lot of dako and all
if shera know that we rajkumar are there shera would definaltly doubt that we are there to catch him
Nakul;ya thats what shera is an chalak one
Veer; and we are more chalak we go as nt rajkumar but as simple people who visits mela
Dharam;are u sure????????/
Nakul;hmmm may be we should think once more
Veer; no i m sure common lets go n get ready



Thats all for the part
An danger is @ on mela for Veer ????? what will be that
Will they meet shera who will catch shera agni,tasha ya phir dharam,veer,nakul
who is sheraaa????? and who is that dreamgirl of nakul
chaneykeliya do read Mystery of love/friendship/enemity

do comment should i continue of not????????



here is the
Part 3
(in morning)
the story was on part of the country in aryanagar
now let me take u to another nagar
its known as the beautful nagar to be known
the Krishna nagar which is situated in left of aryanagar
in middle of many village we can see a huge mehel with decared engraving
we can see the sunshining in mehel which makes perfect clear that mehel is perfectly glowing his charms
inside the palace we can see an middle aged man walking by his style of walking we can
tell that he is the maharaj of that palace because all the saniks were respecting him and
he stopped in ffront of a hugeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee dooor he had a huge smile on his face
he opened the door gently so that the person inside it is not disturbed
he walkes towArds an huge bed which is decrated with full of silk cloths and
the room is arranged sach a way that there was at least 10 dasi's in room all where arranging red roses in that room everywhere
they where arranging flowers
he ask them all to go so that he can wish her daughter an very good morning
he reached the bed inside it was a beautful charming sleeping her charming face was not visible because she was covering her face with blanket
and then his father saw her head and understood she is a deep sleep and he don't like to distrub so he went to the side window remove the curtains
the morning breezeeeeeeeeee comming from outside reached the young princess blanket it was made of silk so with the effect of wind it blows down and now we can see a clear charming,preety
innocent,charmingggggggggg,girl sleepingggggggggg
her father was happy to see her face glowing soo much so blend n kissed her in forehead and
he was going back then an meldiouious voice called
Princess;pitaji humay ashriwaad nahi karogey
then maharaj turned to face her daughther who was standing with a huge,cute,nice smileeeeeeeee
maharaj opened his arms so that his daughter can hug him
as he opened his arm the daughther run from the postion and gave him a tight huggggggggggggg
she was stilll smiling n her father was also smiling
maharaj;rajkumari anannaya mera ashirwaad tho hamesha aapkey saath hi hey
rajkumari an;ha magar par apney muhjey galey nahi lagayi na isliyaaaaaaaa
aur yeha kya hey pitajiiiii aap itni sara phool yeha kyun lagvadiya hey
maharaj;muhjey pata hey ki tumey phool sey pyaar hey isliyaaaaa
rajkumari an;aap meraliya itney sarey phool humey bahut khushi huvi pitajiiii aap kitney achey hey

then an sanik comes to maharaj
sanik;maharaj jaichand ki jai ho
app ko milney keliya hariya singh aya hey
maharaj;tumney dekha nahiiiiiiiii hum apni beti sey kuch baatain kar rehi hey
sanik;par maharaj woh shera key bara may kuch kabber denekeliya aya hey
maharaj;acha may ata ho usey hall may beita denaaaaaa
Maharaj;anannaya beti muhjey janna hoga tumay tho pata hi hoga na ki muhjey shera ko kis haal may bhi
pakda na heyyyyyyyy
rajkumari an;ha aap jaye
with this maharaj goes
n rajkumari also follows him
in hall
hairya;maharaj humney suna ki waha mela may shera aney walla hey
waha kuwar agni aur tasha ney ak bahut hi bada khazana le aneye walla hey
aur humay pata hey ki woh khazana lee janey keliya shera suroor aney walla hey
aur uss waqt hum shera ko paklegeyyyy
maharaj;kya tumay pura yakiin hey ki shera waha ayegaaaaa
hairya;ha muhjey pura yakiin hey woh suroor ayegaaaaaaaa
maharaj;theek hey jaise shera mile usey hamrey samaney dal denaaa
hariya;theek heyy

then by that he goes n jaichand also goes
an person was hiding near a pillar who was hearing all there conversation
its none other than our rajkumari anannaya
rajkumari think herself;shera ko pakda na itna bhi asaan nahi magar ha agar shera ney khazana ney lootney ki yogana ki hey
tho khazana le kar hi wapass ayegiiiiii dek they hey kaun shera ko pakad saktha hey

then she goesssssssss

and later she was informed that all her friends are going for mela in evening and will be there till the end of mela
she is very jealous of them
so she dediced to ask her father that she also wants to go
maharaj;haa betiiiiiiii anaayaaaaaa avoooooooooo beitoooo kya aap hey aap yeha aur iss waqt may kya huva
koi parishani hey
rajkumari annnayaa;woh pitaji humari sari sehaliya mela may jaa rehey hey tho humney socha kyun na hum bhi
mela may ghumkar aye aur may iss mehel par reh reh kar thak chuki huuuu
pitajiiiiiiii muhjey jaana hey mela mayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy plssssssss
maharaj;par muhjey bahut kaam hey aur
rajkumari anannya;pitaji aap yeha reheya aur yehi baat humara khayal ka hum badi ho chuki hey
humay pata hey humahara khayal rekh ney keliyaaaaa
Maharaj;par waha dako bhi hogey aur aap ko kuch ho gaya tho .....
rajkumari is thinking then she replied;arey pitaji may thodi rajkumari ban kar jaa rehi ho may na ak zidi sadi ladki ki tarah jaa rehi ho mela may
maharaj with angry;yeh kabhiiiii nahi hooo sakthaaaaaaaaaa
rajkumari interpurts;pitaji agar may waha ak siddi saddii ladki ban kar gayi tho koi dako muhjey kuch nahi kar sakthaaaa
aur may mela may kuch masti bhi kar sakthi ho plssssssss pitajiiiiiiiii
maharaj;ha beti javo apna khayal rekhnaaaaaaaaaa
rajkumari she jumped with happiness hugged her father tightlyyyyyyn and said;yes pitaji i will look after my self bye pitaji i want to
to pack my things up




this was rajkumari Anannya ki kahanni
let me take u to another mahalllllllllllllll

its on shamanagar
its not at all suitable for shanthi because u can hear voicessssssss
from the mehel
Rajkumari ;humney kaha naaaaa humay abhi uth ney ki maan nahi kar reha javoooooo tum yeha sey muhjey sohney do
Dasi;par rajmata ney tho apko uth ney keliya kaha hey agar aap nahi aye tho apko mela may jaaney ki permission nahi milega
rajkumari who was under blanket was agruing with her dasi to wake up @ such a morning(@9am)that she wants to sleep
suddenly jumped out the bed her beautful face but yet naughty face and she was charming tooo her hair was blowing with wind she jumped out of bed and runnied fast
and had her early programms and got ready and went down to meet her mom or her mom will cancel her plan to enter in mela and have fun
in hall her mom was waiting for her
when she reached the hall her mom was angry
Rajkumari's mother(Rm);rajkumari siaaaaa aap
aap itni jaldi aa gayiiiii kaisey
waisey bhi aap itni raat may yeha kya kar rehi hey javo jakey apney kamarey may sooh javo


Sia;maa aap bhi na
may thodi dheer sey ayiiiii ho i m sorri mom i won't reapeat it again
she goes to her mom and hugs her with a sweet smile
her mother's mamta is also grt she smiled and hugged her back
Mom;sia i want to tell u something seriously ur father is busy with some work so we all have to go to mela without him we got our tent there but
we are not going there as maharani or rajkumari because there are a lot of dako's through there are securities provided but
Sia;but what mom whats thissssss i won't be going there as an normal girl its reallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy bad idea it means u have to walk n i can't imagine a life like that
mom;then we have to cancell mela plan completelyyyyyyyyyyy
sia;nooooo i will go as an ordinary girllllllll and when should we go there????????
mom;today evening and pls sia behave properly thereeeeeeee
sia;sure mom love
and she went to pack her things up


in next side of corner of india
in other mahalllllllll
an Man who is middle aged is doing KAli pooja with very crualityyyyy
in his face he is doing an aarti
then after he finshed his aarti he goes out where bichu the proffestional killer is standing
him;bichu why u want to meet me?????
bichu;i have a good news for u maharaj
Him;good news what????
Bichu;i think u heard abt the mela maharaj
Maharaj;yes i heard abt it whats new abt it
Bichu;one of my source told that in that mela all boys will be comming from across this state
Maharaj; oh i understood u know how to find him
Bichu;yes maharaj bhimdev he have a surya devatha ki nishani hey
Maharaj;ha correct and pls take him straight to me
bichu;yes sure may i leave now
Mharaj;yes sure and one more thing i will come there in mela tooo
Bichu;sure maharaj jaisey apki eccha
maharaj;you may leave now
bichu goes


in other mehel which is hugest with alll decorate works and tight security
we can see soo many saniks running here and there in garden there are a lot of daasi running
Rajkumariiiiiiiii anushkaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
rajkumariiiiiiiiii anushkaaaaaaaaa
kaho hoooooo aapppppppppp
?????
rajkumari anushkaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
but no answer an young lad comes to garden
Man;i told u to take care of her don't i?
Dasi;yes she was there till morning but
Man;but what??????????
Dasi;on morning she said she want to drink some rose milk and asked her to get her some rose milk
so we where busy making her rose milk
Man;what rubbishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
sanikion take these dasi to jail and put them in
DDasi;no no pls kuwar rajkumar samarat jii pls forgive ussss plssssss
Man;sanik take them put them in
the man is none other than rajkumar samarat
he is asking everybody that where she is??????????
no ones knowssss
sanik;rajkumar ji woh kahi nahi nazar aa rehi hey humay chapa chapa chaan mara
kahi nahi heyyyyyyyyyyy
Rajkumar samarat;tho muhjey pata hey woh kaha mileygi chaloooooooo ready hoo javooo mela may jaaney keliyaaaaaa
sanik shocked;but maharaj?
Rajkumar samarat;maharaj sey hum shamal leyegey
they all went to pack


in west of aryanagar there is Kamayabhi nagar
inside mahal
one man is reallyyyyy tensedddddddddddd and he is sooo much tensedddddddd
he is walking here and thereeeeeeeee




who is this man and who is samarat and all searching for
will shera will be caught
will veer will be spared by bichu
too see pls read mystery of friendship/love/enemity


pls comment should i continue or notttttttttttttttttt





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well thanku ji...... 😛
will read n let u know soon 😳
i know it must be awsome..so in advance from me 👏
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Thanks for the update pls. do continue 😉
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thanks its awesome 😆
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wow,it is realy nice
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Originally posted by: Rash2cool

well thanku ji...... 😛
will read n let u know soon 😳
i know it must be awsome..so in advance from me 👏


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Thanks for the update pls. do continue 😉


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thanks its awesome 😆
will read 2nd and 3rd part soon
and plz do continue, u dont need to ask it 😳


thanks for reading and it and commenting it
i don't have enough comments thats why i asked i should continue or notttttttt
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ***yashu***

wow,it is realy nice
thanks 👏 👏


😳😳😳 thanks for ur appericaition
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow Ash!mind-blowing! 👏 👏 👏
Really liking it vry much,kya script hai!Wah wah! 😃
Edited by anjali83192 - 17 years ago

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