Samyukta Pt 7-Dharam..Siya -first glances - Page 2

Lashy 👏 👏 👏 ,

A big hug to you, 🤗 🤗you have written so beautifully that I am speechless. 👏I am still in dreamland after reading about dharma and sia's meeting. ]" src="http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley42.gif">]" src="http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley42.gif">]" src="http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley42.gif">]" src="http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley42.gif">

What I loved :

• Daksha saying how veer had serving after serving of sweet. 😆

• Looooo siya's anger when she finds out that the princess were fasting and then daksha saying that they did eat little at first and when nanda says that they thought the food was edible. I am surprised sia does not have them whipped for saying that. 😆😆😆

• How daksha jumps to save her hero veer saying that they were tired and how she daksha wants to go and talk to them again to find out if they have a message for siya. Me thinks daksha has a hidden agenda of seeing veer.

• Dharam and veer hungry as they have never fasted below and enjoying the beautiful scenery 👏

• The scene about a small boy using all his force to carry his younger sister and how it reminds them of sonu 😭

• Bhalla dozing off and at the same time holding on to the three scrolls and then both veer and dharam's comments 😆

• How the guards wont let nanda and daksha go to meet the princes and daksha trying to user her wit and charm 😆😆😆

• Daksha saying how will it be personal if you deliver it – 🤣🤣🤣

• Nanda's message to the guards about requesting the princes to grant them audience like it their own palace they are at. 🤣🤣

• Love the picture of the garden and the way you have described it 👏👏👏

• Dharma oblivious to the tiny ruffles he hears and then sees a beautiful princess huddled in the twigs.

• Wow they meet and me love the way you have described siya and how she has her face covered, then she lowers her hand and dharma is admiring her eyes, feature. So romantic when she is brushing off dried leaves from her hair and Dharam has gone absoulately speechless. Yeh to gaya kaam se 👏😆 😍

• She has to ask him for help as he is stunned by her beauty and how he hesitantly removes leaves from her hair ]" src="http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley42.gif">]" src="http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley42.gif">  ; ; ;so romantic scene and when she asks him what he is doing he puts all the leaves back on her hair. 😆 😆

• Her asking him to hide her and dharma still not recovered from seeing siya 😆

• Queen becoming embarrassed when siya explains that they were playing hide and seek.

• The way dharma stands there smitten like he has found his dream princess. ]" src="http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley42.gif">]" src="http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley42.gif">]" src="http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley42.gif">

• The way daksha and nanda start apologizing to siya whereas she is smiling to herself and waves the scroll to her friends. ]" src="http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley42.gif">😆

• How sia tortures her nanda and daksha by unfolding the scroll inch by inch and once they see sia's expression they both peep over to read the message. 😆😆😆

• Sia becomes nervous when she reads blacksmiths and saying she can't go alone. Little does she know that the scroll is not for her.

• All the three girls waiting to for bhalla, bechara and then asking him abut why dharma wants to meet sia in the noon. Bhalla's is totally confused and is not sure what is going on at all 😆😆😆

• When nanda mentions blacksmiths, he starts telling them about their uniquness and realizes his mistake. Siya on the other hand is shocked thinking dharma has also told him about their meeting. 😆😆😆

• Bhalla pushes daksha and nanda aside and going away quickly while the girls are laughing at him. 😆😆😆

Me very looking forward to seeing what happens at the blacksmiths and also what agni and harsh have planned. ]" src="http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley42.gif">]" src="http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley42.gif">]" src="http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley42.gif">]" src="http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley42.gif">  ; ;

To everyone,

i will reply tomorrow individually... but i just wanted to add.. 😳

thank God i was wondering if the Dharam Siya bit was able to catch that cuteness and yet not go overboard cheesy... i am happy you all are enjoying it... but this script thingy has started making me very restless once thursday comes thinking oh my what am i going to write this week....😆 as some enjoy the comical aspects some the romance and some the emotional aspects.. so .... but the comments keep me going... the keep me going 🤗

Originally posted by: divareena

• Bhalla dozing off and at the same time holding on to the three scrolls and then both veer and dharam's comments 😆

• Daksha saying how will it be personal if you deliver it – 🤣🤣🤣

• Nanda's message to the guards about requesting the princes to grant them audience like it their own palace they are at. 🤣🤣

hee heee

• Wow they meet and me love the way you have described siya and how she has her face covered, then she lowers her hand and dharma is admiring her eyes, feature. So romantic when she is brushing off dried leaves from her hair and Dharam has gone absoulately speechless. Yeh to gaya kaam se 👏😆 😍  ; She has to ask him for help as he is stunned by her beauty and how he hesitantly removes leaves from her hair ]" src="http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley42.gif">]" src="http://www.india-forums.com/smileys/smiley42.gif">  ; ; ; ;so romantic scene and when she asks him what he is doing he puts all the leaves back on her hair. 😆 😆

🤣 i dont know why i enjoyed your comments here a lot

• How sia tortures her nanda and daksha by unfolding the scroll inch by inch and once they see sia's expression they both peep over to read the message. 😆😆😆

hee hee that was the devil inside me 😛

• Sia becomes nervous when she reads blacksmiths and saying she can't go alone. Little does she know that the scroll is not for her. All the three girls waiting to for bhalla, bechara and then asking him abut why dharma wants to meet sia in the noon. Bhalla's is totally confused and is not sure what is going on at all 😆😆😆

😆 true true

oooo ma reenie.... your comments are becoming like rapunzel's hair part by part.. 😆 i.e. growing longer and longer.. awww how sweet of you to type the whole thing my God.... i dont know if i would ever be this patient when analyzing anyone else's post.. 😳

you are amazing.. you are indeed.. 👏 thank you so muchhhhhh for doing this and i really appreciate it honey..

ooooo.......ahah....sorry i'm late....actually i saw the topic bfore buh i read it now.....tis awesome as always...........dharam advising veer about ego and pride.......the brother and sister scene.......and then dharam taking out leaves from sia's hair and then sticking them back...oooo......that was so sooo cute......i already knew aaj aapka update aaega......cause it's saturday...... 😳 and and and....wat else.....it was really really cute.........and bhalla......oh my gosh uski to baat hi mat karo.... 👏 abhi main itna hi keh sakti hoon.....aur kuchh dimaag mein nahi aa raha.........i'll wait for the next part now.... 😳 thankooo 🤗 weekend pe maza aa jaata hai mujhe .........

no probs take as much time as u want lashy di even this dharam and sia track I am enjoying very much, I just want veers track so that I can start day dreaming abt it 😆

Actually i get HP flow in ur Samyukta!! 😛
Tat Jadoo!..😳Same Jaadoo which makes me read the whole part at one strech!!...😛

Thnxx For yet another Lovly Part!!🤗

I have heard or read sumwere,the best quality of a good writer is to give the description of the place! 😳 Which U have in such great Quality!! 😳

Each scene u make so easy to dream and imagine that i just love it! 😳

I read a line then imagine it in my Great Mind and then only proceed! 😆

I am loving This Agni and Harsh frndship!!... 😛🤗Lemme see wat wickedness they have in mind! 😳

Waiting for the Blacksmith's scene!

Ur each each line is becomiing so important for me! Cant dare imagine of those days,wen i wont be able to read them 😭

Lovlyy One Lashyy dii!!!...Lovlyyyy!!!!🤗

*Apology*

How did i forget to write about Dharam and Sia😆I guess ab se mere sir ko books ki tension hooin!!...😆

Dharam and Sia!!....Lovvd the way u made the jodi meet! So romantic the way her face wz hidden,and then Dharam becomes stunned by Sia's eye beuty (remmberin about Veer's dialogue in DV real,boori aanko waali Rajkumari..😆)
Brushing of dried leaves,and then going speechless!!..woow!!..wat a scene!!...😳 Must say Lashy di u play with ur words!👏👏so well!!!😛

thn Rani maa coming and our Dharam stnding tere as though he is being smitten😆

U potray Sia's funny details with her frinds so well! 😳

yup..cant forget...Dharam is frightened of her too....the wayy he placed the leaves bakk on her hair!!...😆

thn....Balla!!...M loving this charecter to the core!!..Such livlyy person!...Myy Bhalla!!!...😆

sorry Lashyy dii didnt comment much on the scenes in the first post,thoda emotional ho gayi thi,and has no idea wt all i wrote!

Ab thoda human senses mai waapas aayi hoo!!..Annd tere u see my Sia Dharam description!!😛

Originally posted by: *Jr.Nancy_drew*

Marvellous!! extraordinary!! brilliant!! amazing!!exquisite!!enchanting!!

there I'm short of adjectives to describe your masterpiece 😳 I love it di!! you're the bestest writer ever.I love the way you describe each and every scene with intense details keeping in my mind the pace of the story which is neither too fast nor too slow.Who could describe nature with intricate factors with such ease. I bet even a camera man would find it hard to capture all the things you have mentioned.Your story nah I must say a classic is much more than entertaining!! And the small scenes in the regular,local life of the subjects is soo stunningly brought out by you!! Their simplicity,innocence enjoyed by the princes is even more adorable!! Now I just can't wait for next Saturday ... how wonderful a cliff hanger it is! 😳

hee hee i saw your place reserved for a while 😆 and was wondering what you'd come up with 😆 wow you have extolled it so high.. i wonder if i would ever be able to praise anything i love so much 😭 and you do it so well every week 😭

how can i thank you... 😭 abhy...

Originally posted by: kunataanya

lashyyyyyyyy............. u've made us wait long enough.. but this is worth the wait.. brilliant as usual.. no actually u are getting better every time..
i really love the way u describe every detail so perfectly.. and sia and dharam's first meeting was so cute.. much better than the original..
u r spoiling us u know.. ur story's so perfect that we expect the same amount of perfection from the show too..

awww thank you neeri.. you are making me completely blush now 😳 😆 ooo me spoiling you.. i hope i continue to spoil you for ever.. 🤗

thank you so much kiraaaaaaaaaaaaaan 🤗 chintaa mat karo tumhaaraa veer jaldi hi aayega.. i want to ensure the flow is right and no sudden shifts.. par woh definitely aayega... aur jald hi 😆

rashu and sara me will wait for you guys to finish your exams and be able to read it... dont worry.... at all.. 😳

hai lot mein itna peeche hu iss ff mein... bad bad pari 😡 chal pari shuru ho ja ...


sorry ... i was talking to myself.. lagta hai mere dimag me kuch chemical locha hai 😆 ... but back i m going ot read it soon and post my comments pakka... n shradhs dekho mein bhi aki ff padhti hu.. woh bhi tab kab aap meri jaan ke peche nahi padti haath dho kar taki mein aapki ff padhu aur apni comments du 😆 m i a gud n sweet bacha na 😉 .. so now u have to read my ff 😛 (which u always do 😳 but only when i m after u and ask u daily if u read it or not 😆 bad me 😛 )

Originally posted by: pari0706

hai lot mein itna peeche hu iss ff mein... bad bad pari 😡 chal pari shuru ho ja ...


sorry ... i was talking to myself.. lagta hai mere dimag me kuch chemical locha hai 😆 ... but back i m going ot read it soon and post my comments pakka... n shradhs dekho mein bhi aki ff padhti hu.. woh bhi tab kab aap meri jaan ke peche nahi padti haath dho kar taki mein aapki ff padhu aur apni comments du 😆 m i a gud n sweet bacha na 😉 .. so now u have to read my ff 😛 (which u always do 😳 but only when i m after u and ask u daily if u read it or not 😆 bad me 😛 )

me didnt even know you read it 😕 😆

Originally posted by: lashy

me didnt even know you read it 😕 😆

yeh lo sara kiya kara pani mein i was awake till 1 yesterday and read ur last 2 parts 😳n u didn't even know

gr8....awesome........keep it up....eagerly waiting for next part.....while i was reading this.....the scene where Dharam sees Siya in tht garden, i was imagining Vikranth as Dharam but tht cant imagine tht girl who plays the role of Sia in Dv, as Sia 🤢 ........ the sia u hv described is very much beautiful........ 👏 👏 👏
....loved each n every line 😛