Samyukta Pt 7-Dharam..Siya -first glances - Page 3

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

loved Part VII Lashy I was waiting patiently for it all day 😛 I loved ur rich detail of description, the funny exchanges between Sia n her friends.. n the way u show the innocence n generosity of Veer n Dharam... You have such a beautiful mind to have such a beautiful imagination. 😳

awwww thank you sooooo much 🤗 i valu your comments so much... 😳 honey...

This part was a little short compared to others ,was'nt it or is it that we cannot possibly have enough of it ?😳

no according to my MS word it was the same size as others - 4 pages.. 😳

Below are the scenes that I LOVED !! - The unfolding sights only confirm Niphaud's reputation for its tranquil life and outstanding natural beauty 👏

2) Covering her face with both her delicate hands and adorned in the finest jewellery, the stones embedded in her deep purple skirt dazzle in the sun's rays......hypnotized by her perfect fair features and angelic aura. .. ⭐️
3) Frightened by her question, he places the leaves back on her hair Chooo chuweet of Dharam.. How innocent😆 😳

awwww thank you soooooooo much hun.....😳

Originally posted by: shimmer

ooooo.......ahah....sorry i'm late....actually i saw the topic bfore buh i read it now.....tis awesome as always...........dharam advising veer about ego and pride.......the brother and sister scene.......and then dharam taking out leaves from sia's hair and then sticking them back...oooo......that was so sooo cute......i already knew aaj aapka update aaega......cause it's saturday...... 😳 and and and....wat else.....it was really really cute.........and bhalla......oh my gosh uski to baat hi mat karo....

Glad you liked the above scenes khushi… am so happy you guys are pleased… I get to know what you guys like… with your comments and can try and improvise on them 😳

hey di btw I loved the part where Dharam replaces leaves he had picked up from Sia's head 😆 you made that scene romantic yet phunny 😆 😆

Minzyy at this point of time.. let me just say I am overwhelmed with all your comments.. I can feel your genuine wishes through your messages and you have touched me.. I will be ever grateful…
😭

Arshit thank you so much.. I actually didn't imagine you would enjoy it as it has taken on its romantic roop now…. But I am glad you did imagine things too… and I totally agree with you that the DV siya is not this siya at all…
😳 thank you so much bud!!!!

Pari will wait for your comments via pm…
😛 😛 Thank you all…

Awww abhy thank you for mentioning that scene… hee hee… I generally get stuff and ideas like this while doing odd things.. I think I got that idea while doing the dishes… 😆

👏 👏 superb lashy 👏
i read all the parts yesd...and i must say u have written it brilliantly
loved the way u have potrayed each & every character 😊
dharam & siya's first meeting is so cute 😳

aww di!! 😆 😆 so you're very concerned about how to make us happpyyy....Love you sooo much for your efforts!! 🤗 I sooo badly hope like hell that Vikrant reads all these 😳 he will really feel very happy that someone is tending his (Dharam's) character so tenderly and giving much prominence unlike the Sagars ☺️

wow!!lovely way of describing each and every character.Very good indeed,even a small boy is being portrayed so beautifully....but I am so late in reading this...sorry 😭

hee hee abhy... to you too.. 🤗

thank you so much ashoooo dont know how i left you out... sowwie 😭 and you are so sweet with your comments.... 😳 always

nishu i like transporting people...🤗
😛 kitna mazaa aataa hai na.. 😛

Hats off to u Shradhha,,,,,,, 👏 Sach mein kya likhti ho yaar tum.......

Just amazing description....... 😃 and the words and vocab used is simply wow...😛

It is wonderful, beautiful, super cool......... what should I say??😃 This is much much better than the actual DV🤢 on tv . Keep it up dear.😊

Shraddy dear....... I like how you make each and every character endearing to us. You spend time on each one of them and then we(readers) get an unbiased view of all characters. Then we get to see them as if from a balcony 😉 i know I repeat this same praise every time(worded differently 😆 )....... but it is an amazing quality(that u have) and it leaves me impressed 👏 👍🏼
Sorry..........me late in reading and replying.
I loooooooved D-S first meet 😳

Hey shradhs its wonderful wow… the way siya acts and the veer and dharam's convo are just wow.. I could literally imagine the actors doing it and also siya doing those acts hehe… tooooo good yaar totally entertaining…. Now I wonder what is this blacksmith wala chakkar… hmmm…. Chalo dekhte hai kya hai… and this agni ufff yeh ladka 😆 😛

I'll wait for your next part shradhs….
N u know what u should actually right a novel u write is so well yaar…. Hats off to you 👏 👏 👏
Loads of Love
-Pari 😳