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Posted: 17 years ago
aaawwwwwwwwwwwwww loved veer and vishva's scene it was really romantic thanx shona keep it up


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

oh shona.. this was lovely.. I loved every scene..thank u bhuvi...im glad u liek my work 🤗
Veer wants to marry her asap n she wants to put it off 😕 Why ? aww...u'll have to wait n see
n ur precap.. Rajkumars angry ? 😳they are...n u'll see why 2moro...Vishva n Sia's strategy to cheer em up

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hiri

aaawwwwwwwwwwwwww loved veer and vishva's scene it was really romantic thanx shona keep it up


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thank u hiri 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

shona... did you read the name that i had suggested for your FF... vishwaas.. ive put up the explanations in the sticky thread.. do let me know if its all right 😳



Yh Shradhha di i checked it...awesome name...i love it...its absolutely fine
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: **Shona**

ok heres the next bit:

im trying something new-adding Pix
Credit for pix goes to Vinisha_RAJAT 🤗-thanks

ur welcum shona...😉

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All are eating and after having lunch the parents and the kids and teacher catch up

Samar singh is about to take leave

SS: beti tumhe yahan koi taklif toh nahin naa? tum yahan khush toh hona?

Vishva: haan pitahji...hum yahan bohat khush hai -obviously she wud be...VEER is there na...😆

SS: vishva hum apke liye kuch dasiyan aur Prabhali ko kal behj denge...woh apka maan behlayengi...woh Sanvi ka bohat khyal rakti ti ...-no need...she is being entertained by slapping agni...and by dat v r also entertained..😆

Vishva: pitahji ap humare liye itna kuch kyun karte hai

SS: kyun hum ap mein sanvi ko paate hai...ap humare liye Sanvi jaisi he hai aur jitna pyar hum unse karte teh utna he apse karte hai 😛😛😛

Vishva gives him a hug and he leaves

Vishva turns to go back in when one of her payal comes off...she gets down to put it back on....ahe looks at the payal recalling every moment she had spent with veer, and thinking how lucky she is that Veer loves her when he had so many other princess whom he cud have chosen over her....she remembers the night she went to Veer's bedroom and when ever he meets her...she recalls veer telling her how much he loves her and when he kissed her 😳😳😳

Vishva felt so happy...she wanted to run and fly and tell the world how happy and lucky she was with Veer


Vishva runs through the garden and throws all the flowers about...she goes under a tree and shakes the branches so the flowers fall on her....


Veer is standing behind a tree looking at her but she cannot see him 😳😳😳...so sweet...VEER has fully fallen oh her😆...vishwa is lucky😳😳😳

Niviriti on the otherhand shes this and stays looking at this for a while
She sees Vishva smiling away under the flowers looking more beautiful than ever then she shes veer...smiling to himself...unable to take his eyes of Vishva... ooo...wat a twist..finally VEER is caught by his mom😆😳

Niviriti thinks to herself Vishva is the best girl for Veer and she is also the best bahu for her....she will find Samar now and ask him rite away... yayy finally...👏no probs till nao in da luv story 😛😛😛

She leaves to ask for samar but finds that he has left...but thinks to herself

Nivi: Veer ki shaadi mein Vishva se he karakar rahungi -good going nivi...am wid u😆😆😆

on the otherhand Vishva sees that Veer is looking at her but acts as though she does know....Veer on the otherhand picks up a handful of flowers and goes behind Vishva -vishva is soo clever😆

Veer: Vishva

Vishva turns and Veer throws the flowers on her both smile 😳😳😳

Veer: bohat khoobsurat lag rahi ho -she wud be...as she's VEER's gf..😆

Vishva blushs

somebody shouts "rajkumari Vishva"

Vishva still blushing is about to leave when Veer grabs her hand...he pulls her back against him 😳

Veer: maa bhi yahan hai...maharaj bhi aur tumhare pitahji bhi hai...mein soch raha hoon ke sabko aaj bata dehte hai -VEER is soo eager to get married😆😆😆

Vishva turns around so nows she facing him

Vishva: aaj kyun...kuch dino badh baata denge

Veer: aaj kyun nahin

Vishva: tumhe hum kaise samjaye

Veer: mein

a dasi comes n shouting for Vishva... dasis always cums in between😆😆😆

Vishva: Veer tum jald he samaj jao ge....

Veer pulls her closer and pushes her aginst the tree

Veer: agar teekh se samjao gi to samjonga....tum abhi kyun Veer ki Vishva nahin baan na chahti

Vishva: veer choodo koi ah raha hai...

Veer: sawal ka jawab ye nahin

Vishva: hum tumme kal tak bata dehnge...veer ye humara tumse vaada hai...abb jane do -wat wud be da reson...am curious 2 knw...

Veer: roko...he moves closer and picks out a few petals of flowers from her hair 😳😃

he lets go of her

Vishva: ab jao

she smiles and goes off

Veer: hai bhagwan ye kaunsi nayi musibat hai...ye abhi shaadi kyun nahin karna chahti 😆😆😆

on the otherhand Dharam finds Sia

Dharam: Sia chalo...pitahji se baat karne

Sia: paar hum toh teekh se tayaar bhi nahin hue

Dharam: koi baat nahin...dekho woh aur bua nikal rahe hai...chalo

Sia: teekh hai

They both get as far as the door where Arya n nivi n co are leaving


Arya: accha beta hum nikaal teh hai...

Dharam: par pitahji

Arya: beta rajyasabha ne abhi bulaya hai...is liye Jv nikal gaye hai aur humme bhi jana hai

Nivi: Dharam kya baat hai

Dharam: woh

nivi goes over to him and whispers

Nivi: hum jaante hai ap Sia se pyar karte hai par ap pehle is riste ko mazbut banaye phir shaadi ki baat mein bhaiya se karungi -nivi is too intelligent👏...hats off to her intelligence👏😆

Dharam is shocked but manages to smile at her

Sia n Dharam say bye to everyone

Precap:

Sia: hum kya kare -sia never uses her own mind😆😆😆

Vishva: ye waqt soch ne ka nahin...roothe rajkumaron ko manane ka hai now wat is she going to do...watever its gonna be...it wud be really interesting to knw..😛


Enjoy

Shona


as usual shona...this part was awesome...👏....cant wait for da next part...hope u post dat soon...!!!!😛😛😛


living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever
😍😍😍


Edited by vinisha_RAJAT - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowwwwwwww what a pretty part.. i was blushing with the veer-vishwa scenes.. 😳 i think it was so cute... well atleast nivritti is on the right track... i am glad... cos ladies ko manaana hi mushkil hai....guys jaldi maan jaate hain.. 😆

but you know whats happened..

since you have put the PRC pictures + sanyogita pictures... now when i started imagining veer...mujhe immediately prithvi hi aar rahaa hai 😕 😆 in that scene that you scripted....

yayy so the rajkumars are angry with them are they... achi baat hai.. dekhthe hain kyaa hota hai.. and im happy vishwa said no to marriage.. 😛 abhi abhi tho mile hain.. bache 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanx Vinisha
yh nivi is very clever-she doesnt waste time thinking abt veer's birth truth leaking...instead thinks of how to improve their love lives 😆

as for the precap...well wait n watch(read)...it will be for the better of bothy couples 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: **Shona**

Thanx Vinisha
yh nivi is very clever-she doesnt waste time thinking abt veer's birth truth leaking...instead thinks of how to improve their love lives 😆

as for the precap...well wait n watch(read)...it will be for the better of bothy couples 😳


pheww...that their r no shramiks in this...👏...and nivi shall continue wid her work😆


living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever
😍😍😍
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

wowwwwwwww what a pretty part..thank u Shraddha di i was blushing with the veer-vishwa scenes.. 😳 i think it was so cute...me too blushed while writing it well atleast nivritti is on the right track...shes not exactly a love guru but yh she supports both couples i am glad... cos ladies ko manaana hi mushkil hai....guys jaldi maan jaate hain.. 😆

but you know whats happened..

since you have put the PRC pictures + sanyogita pictures... now when i started imagining veer...mujhe immediately prithvi hi aar rahaa hai 😕 😆 in that scene that you scripted....i wanted to add pix n then i thought of sanyo's entry...shes doing the sme as what vishva is doing n also its mugda so i used the pic
actually im still gonna add a couple more pix...of veer this time...i guess it does bring memories of prc


yayy so the rajkumars are angry with them are they... achi baat hai.. dekhthe hain kyaa hota hai..it will be a gd twist hopefully u guys will like it and im happy vishwa said no to marriage.. 😛 abhi abhi tho mile hain.. bache 😆lol thats true...but actually the reason why she refuses is very cute n sweet

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Posted: 17 years ago
nw u making me more curious...😆😆😆post da next part soon...😛😛😛


living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever
😍😍😍

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