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outstanding ff SHONA👏
Edited by **Rekha** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: **Shona**

next part:

Back in the boys Vidyale they learn that the main Guruji's health is really bad and his assistant is out of station so their parikesha was cancelled for a few days -awww poor boys...😭

Dharam: ab hum Sia se kaise milenge

Veer: kuch humme he karna hoga


they boys go to meet the main Guruji

Dharam: Pranam guruji

Guru: jite raho

Veer: guruji ab apki tabiyat kaisi hai

Guru:pehle se behtar

Dharam: umm guruji hum...hum woh samne gurukul kiska hai

Guru: arre mein toh bhool gaya tha tum logo ko Ambika Ma ke Gurukul ke bare mein baata na...woh Ambika maa ka gurukul hai aur wahan Rajkumari ati hai siksha lene...suna hai iss bar do rajkumariya hai...

Veer: guruji...kya humme wahan Ambika maa se milne jane ki ijazat hai 😆😆😆...VEER is always excited to meet

Guru: haan...hum chahte hai ke jab tak hum teekh nahin ho jate app teeno wahan ja kar unka updesh sune...Rajya ke bare mein....

Veer: haan ye toh bohat achi baat hai...hum kab ja sakte hai

Guru coughs

Guru: aaj hi kuch deer badh


a servant comes in followed by a messenger

Messenger hands the message to Dharam who reads it aloud

Rajkumar,Dharam,Veer aur Agni

umeed hai app khushal hai aur swast bhi
hum apse aaj milne ah rahe hai


Maharaj Aryavardhan

The boys are told to go and prepare for the "guests"


on the otherhand Agni is in his room

Agni: Uss Veer ke itni himmat ke usne humme,Maharaj Agni ko...aur us Vishva ke itni himmat....Vishva...usse

He recalls her face being so close to him for the first time....

Agni: uska chehra kuch jana pehchana lag ta hai...


on the otherhand in the girl's gurukul Sia and Vishva are shown making malas(garlands) of flowers when Ambika Maa comes in

AM: sia,vishva apka aaj ka updesh deeri se shuru hoga...aaj aryanagar ke teeno rajkumar apke saath updesh sunne ayenge

sia n Vishva's face lighten with smiles

AM: arre Rajkumar Vishva hum toh batahna he bhool gaye apke pitahji apse milne ah rrahe hai

Vishva: sach! -😆..she's more excited den VEER...

later that day Arya, Jv n Nivi came along with Samar singh whom they had met up on the way

all the kids come outside to greet their respective parents

Nivi: Rajkumari Vishva app kaisi hai

Agni comes forward

Agni: ye koi Rajkumari ya Rajkumari ki dost nahin balke ek dakoo hai dakoo

Nivi: kya

Agni: haan ye dakoo hai aur... this agni....😡😡😡

a tear drops out of Vishva's eye as she thinks abt her past and what agni is accusing her off...and the thought of now losing both Samar's support and Nivi's love -poor vishwa😕😭

DV come up with something

Dharam: agni kya tumhare paas koi sabhot hai...

Agni: woh...

Veer: aur Agni ye sab tumhe kaise paata

Agni thinks of teh time wen he went to meet Shera to tell her what Dharam looks like n all

JV: ye kya keh rahe ho beta...jo jante ho woh sab keh do agni

Agni was silenced for he didnt know what to cook up

Veer: ye kya kahe ga Jai mama...hum paata te hai apko....Maharaj Aryanagar ke ek ilake mein jab lutere aye teh tab Rajkumar Vishva behs(get-up) badal ke sab dakoo ko bagah diya tha-VEER is too intelligent🤗😳

Dharam: aur pitahji shayad tab Agni ne usse dekha tha aur Aryanagar ke logon ki madat karne ke jaga...is ne Vishva par he Shak kar liya

Vishva was crying and Samar singh looked anger and annoyed

Arya: humme maaf kardijiye Samar aur Vishva beti...Agni se galti ho gayi

Samar: hum is bar maaf karte hai par bar bar apni bachi ka upmaan hum nahin sahenge...Vishva

Vishva hugs him tightly

Veer: Maharaj Samar singh undar chaliye...kahana tayaar hai

Samar along with Vishva,Nivi,Veer and Agni n Jv go in

Dharam remains with Sia

Sia: humme tumhare pitahji se kab milwa rahe ho

Dharam: aaj hi...par pehle humme bua se bhi baat karni hogi

Sia: agar tumhare pitahji nahin maane toh

Dharam: woh maan jayenge

Sia: par phir bhi nahin maane toh kya mujhe choodh doge

Dharam: tum ye pehle bhi dekh chuki ho...Vishva ne paata ya toh hoga...Saanvi ke bare mein

Sia: haan

Dharam: Saanvi mein kuch buraye nahin thi par hum phir bhi usse nahin pyar karte teh kyunki hum tumhe chate hai...Sia meri zindagi mein sirf tum ho aur tumhe rahogi...aur koi nahin...phir jise jo karna woh karle -oohhh...but dharam doesnt knws sanvi was much better den always confused....sia😳

Sia gives him a hug

Sia: hum tumse bohat pyar karte hai

Dharam: accha humme toh pata he nahin tha 😆😆😆

Sia: joothe...

they play around for a bit before going inside


Precap: Vishva is standing under a tree and shaking the branches to make the flowers fall on her....Veer is watching this from behind a tree and nivi sees this😳
😛😛😛


Enjoy

Shona


shona plzzzz post the next part soon....😛am eagerly waiting and u hav increased my curiosity after reading da percap...😛😃😃cant wait now...😭
and ur FF is simply too gud...i read da full 30 pgs today only 😉as before i didnt knew dat u r posting the next part over here only...and once i started reading i didnt stopped...and read all 30pgs of ur FF...😆😛
a big hand of applause to u n ur FF👏....am toh pakka sure u gonna be an excellent script writer in future..😛plz post da next part soon...heyy include 2-3 pics in ur next part...hmmm...atleast VEER's pic...😛😳



living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever
😍😍😍
Edited by vinisha_RAJAT - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: **Shona**

ok next update:

All Sanvi's death rites had been done...the chooth was gone and now Samar Singh was going to leave for Sumaiya.
Samar Singh and Aryavardhan were tlking about Vishva

Arya: abb Vishva ka kya hoga

Samar: hum usse godh lenge...humari maharani bohat saal pehle humme choodh kar chali gayi(she died) aur humare jeene ki vaja thi Sanvi...humari ekloti bachi....humne issi liye dusari shaadi nahin ki...ke Sanvi ko maa ka sukh koi aur na de paata...Sanvi ki har ek icha ko humne swikara hai aur ye toh uski akiri icha thi

Arya: par Samar zara socho...tum uss ladki ko jaan teh tak nahin

Samar: par sanvi janti thi...Sanvi sumaiya ke liye acha he karti...uske paas maangne ko toh bohat kuch tha par usne Vishva ko he maanga...iski vaja sirf Sanvi jaanti hai aur humme pura yakeen hai ke uska faisala sahi hoga...hum Vishva mein he Sanvi ko dhund lenge....

Arya: teekh hai jaisi apki marzi...waise bhi Vishva ache sanskaro wali lagti hai...Samar usse ek bar mil lenna


on the other hand Niviriti was talking to Vishva:

nivi: beti tumhare kandan mein kaun kaun hai?

Vishva: koi nahin...hum choote teh tab maa guzar gayi aur kuch dino pehle pitahji bhi...hum akele hai

Nivi: nahin aisa maat kaho...hum toh hai

A dasi comes in

Dasi: Rani ma ke jai ho...Rani maa Maharaj Samar singh ne Rajkumari Vishva ko bulaya hai

Vishva: hum ate hai

Vishva takes Nivriti's leave and goes to Samar

Vishva: Maharaj apne humme bulaya

Samar: haan beti...hum tumse kuch poochna chahte hai?

Vishva: ji poochye

Samar: app sanvi ki akari icha ke bare mein toh janti hai...aur hum bhi yahi chahte hai ke app Sanvi ki jaga le...kya app Sumaiya ki Rajkumari aur humari beti banegi

Vishva hesitates but then on seeing Samar's tears agrees

Vishva: teekh hai pi..pitahji

She touches Samar's feet and takes blessings

Samar: hum chahte hai ke app Rajkumari ban ne ke tor tarike sikhe...hum chahte hai ke app Ambika maa ke gurukul ja kar unki sishya bane...kya app jayengi

Vishva: haan hum jayenge

Samar: toh hum apko kal Sumaiya le jayenge...praja se milne aur uske badh apke jaane ka intazam karenge

Vishva: shukriya

Vishva leaves from there

Dharam was too busy being nursed by the vaidji

Veer on the other hand is in his room a little upset still when Prabhali(sanvi's maid)comes in

Prabhali: kya mein undar ah sakti hoon

Veer: haan..aye...

Prabhali: Rajkumar veer

Veer: sirf Veer

Prabhali: veer...Sanvi meri bachi ki tara thi...woh yudh pe anese pehle teen khat mujhe de gayi thi...ek mere liye aur do tumhare liye...mein woh khat tumhe dene ayi hoon

Veer takes the letters from her hand

She exits from there quickly..hiding her tears

Veer looks at the first letter

ok i've written it in english

Veer
What can i say to u
i dont want to hurt your feelings but
i want to also tell u mine
i love u and will do til my last breath
i know ur destiny is with someone else
which is fine by me
i only want to meet the fortunate girl once -👏👏👏...i really like luv quotes and dis letter is superb...great👏👏👏
and if i cant then u atleast give a letter which
is enclosed with this one
i know that i wont survive much
because when my real kundali was made
by the priest...he told me
how little time i have
i have tried to do everything i can
before my life draws to an end but 😭😭😭
i have a few more wishes
my first wish is u and Shera get married -wow...dats true luv
as soon as possible
i also want u to help my father in every
problem he has...he has no one with him
and
one last thing....i dont know how
much of importance i am to u
but for me ur my whole world...
and for the sake of friendship Veer

dont forget me...Veer i was jking
i know bad joke but i've never been gd at
comedy...it was always u

now the time has come for a final farewell

Yours Truely

Sanvi



a tear drops out of Veer's eye as he recalls Sanvi smiling


Precap:

Arya: DV tum dono aur Agni ko Rajya vidyale beja jayega...Ambika Maa ke Gurukul ke paas


Enjoy
n do comment

Shona

i just luvd this part...so emotional...specially dat letter...was really gud👏
Edited by vinisha_RAJAT - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ hiri,ekta.megha,rekha,spandita-Thank u...heres a big hug for all of u 🤗

@ Vinisha
thank u for ur comments and im glad u read it...yh i only update here
aww...u think i'll make a gd script writer 🤗 i think u'd make a gd wife 4 rajjy 😳 😆

will try to add pics n make it look better-see im too lazy to find pix and all but will try to include pix

*****Update coming soon*****

shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
shona... did you read the name that i had suggested for your FF... vishwaas.. ive put up the explanations in the sticky thread.. do let me know if its all right 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: **Shona**

@ hiri,ekta.megha,rekha,spandita-Thank u...heres a big hug for all of u 🤗

@ Vinisha
thank u for ur comments and im glad u read it...yh i only update here
aww...u think i'll make a gd script writer 🤗 i think u'd make a gd wife 4 rajjy 😳 😆

will try to add pics n make it look better-see im too lazy to find pix and all but will try to include pix

*****Update coming soon*****

shona

awww...☺️☺️☺️thankyouuuu shona...🤗🤗🤗



living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever
😍😍😍
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Posted: 17 years ago
**Shona** wrote:
@ hiri,ekta.megha,rekha,spandita-Thank u...heres a big hug for all of u

@ Vinisha
thank u for ur comments and im glad u read it...yh i only update here
aww...u think i'll make a gd script writer i think u'd make a gd wife 4 rajjy

will try to add pics n make it look better-see im too lazy to find pix and all but will try to include pix

*****Update coming soon*****

shona


awwww thanx shona for giving jadoo ki jhappi it was so cutti.


❤️hiri❤️
Edited by hiri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hiri

**Shona** wrote:
@ hiri,ekta.megha,rekha,spandita-Thank u...heres a big hug for all of u

@ Vinisha
thank u for ur comments and im glad u read it...yh i only update here
aww...u think i'll make a gd script writer i think u'd make a gd wife 4 rajjy

will try to add pics n make it look better-see im too lazy to find pix and all but will try to include pix

*****Update coming soon*****

shona


awwww thanx shona for giving jadoo ki jhappi it was so cutti.


❤️hiri❤️

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Posted: 17 years ago
ok heres the next bit:

im trying something new-adding Pix
Credit for pix goes to Vinisha_RAJAT 🤗-thanks


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All are eating and after having lunch the parents and the kids and teacher catch up

Samar singh is about to take leave

SS: beti tumhe yahan koi taklif toh nahin naa? tum yahan khush toh hona?

Vishva: haan pitahji...hum yahan bohat khush hai

SS: vishva hum apke liye kuch dasiyan aur Prabhali ko kal behj denge...woh apka maan behlayengi...woh Sanvi ka bohat khyal rakti ti

Vishva: pitahji ap humare liye itna kuch kyun karte hai

SS: kyun hum ap mein sanvi ko paate hai...ap humare liye Sanvi jaisi he hai aur jitna pyar hum unse karte teh utna he apse karte hai

Vishva gives him a hug and he leaves

Vishva turns to go back in when on of her payal comes off...she gets down to put it back on....ahe looks at the payal recalling every moment she had spent with veer, and thinking how lucky she is that Veer loves her when he had so many other princess whom he cud have chosen over her....she remembers the night she went to Veer's bedroom and when ever he meets her...she recalls veer telling her how much he loves her and when he kissed her

Vishva felt so happy...she wanted to run and fly and tell the world how happy and lucky she was with Veer


Vishva runs through the garden and throws all the flowers about...she goes under a tree and shakes the branches so the flowers fall on her....


Veer is standing behind a tree looking at her but she cannot see him

Niviriti on the otherhand shes this and stays looking at this for a while
She sees Vishva smiling away under the flowers looking more beautiful than ever then she shes veer...smiling to himself...unable to take his eyes of Vishva...


Niviriti thinks to herself Vishva is the best girl for Veer and she is also the best bahu for her....she will find Samar now and ask him rite away...

She leaves to ask for samar but finds that he has left...but thinks to herself

Nivi: Veer ki shaadi mein Vishva se he karakar rahungi


on the otherhand Vishva sees that Veer is looking at her but acts as though she does know....Veer on the otherhand picks up a handful of flowers and goes behind Vishva

Veer: Vishva

Vishva turns and Veer throws the flowers on her both smile

Veer: bohat khoobsurat lag rahi ho

Vishva blushs

somebody shouts "rajkumari Vishva"

Vishva still blushing is about to leave when Veer grabs her hand...he pulls her back against him

Veer: maa bhi yahan hai...maharaj bhi aur tumhare pitahji bhi hai...mein soch raha hoon ke sabko aaj bata dehte hai

Vishva turns around so nows she facing him

Vishva: aaj kyun...kuch dino badh baata denge

Veer: aaj kyun nahin

Vishva: tumhe hum kaise samjaye

Veer: mein

a dasi comes n shouting for Vishva...

Vishva: Veer tum jald he samaj jao ge....

Veer pulls her closer and pushes her aginst the tree

Veer: agar teekh se samjao gi to samjonga....tum abhi kyun Veer ki Vishva nahin baan na chahti

Vishva: veer choodo koi ah raha hai...

Veer: sawal ka jawab ye nahin

Vishva: hum tumme kal tak bata dehnge...veer ye humara tumse vaada hai...abb jane do

Veer: roko...he moves closer and picks out a few petals of flowers from her hair

he lets go of her

Vishva: ab jao

she smiles and goes off

Veer: hai bhagwan ye kaunsi nayi musibat hai...ye abhi shaadi kyun nahin karna chahti

on the otherhand Dharam finds Sia

Dharam: Sia chalo...pitahji se baat karne


Sia: paar hum toh teekh se tayaar bhi nahin hue

Dharam: koi baat nahin...dekho woh aur bua nikal rahe hai...chalo

Sia: teekh hai


They both get as far as the door where Arya n nivi n co are leaving


Arya: accha beta hum nikaal teh hai...

Dharam: par pitahji

Arya: beta rajyasabha ne abhi bulaya hai...is liye Jv nikal gaye hai aur humme bhi jana hai

Nivi: Dharam kya baat hai

Dharam: woh

nivi goes over to him and whispers

Nivi: hum jaante hai ap Sia se pyar karte hai par ap pehle is riste ko mazbut banaye phir shaadi ki baat mein bhaiya se karungi

Dharam is shocked but manages to smile at her

Sia n Dharam say bye to everyone

Precap:

Sia: hum kya kare

Vishva: ye waqt soch ne ka nahin...roothe rajkumaron ko manane ka hai


Enjoy

Shona


Edited by **Shona** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh shona.. this was lovely.. I loved every scene..
Veer wants to marry her asap n she wants to put it off 😕 Why ?
n ur precap.. Rajkumars angry ? 😳

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