Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 21

@ megha-thank u so much for ur compliments-im flattered 🤗

@ bhuvi-thank u so much-it means alot to me that my script is ur bedtime story-lol-im glad u like it n yh sorry for making u wait

@archana-thank u so much dear- i never forgot its just i was busy

@spandita-lol i shud have added a song-thanks for liking my FF

@teju-thank u-yh sanvi's charecter was slightly influenced by jwala as well

@yashu-thank u 😊

sorry if i've missed everyone n thank u to all of u who read n like or dislike my work

Shona

Thanks shraddha di-so gd to have u read my script-btw i love pt 13 of Samyukta

Originally posted by: lashy

i generally try and group 4-5 parts so that i feel like nothing comes in between the story... i feel like im reading a lovely tale... gd strategy...aww thank u

this time your ff made me laugh and cry..aww i'm glad it made u laugh...didnt mean to make u cry but i guess with all teh emotional drama yh..even i did



Charusena was lost somewhere and the only people Veer cod make out

when i read this i was laughing out loud.... as usual charusena was always lost.. 😆 he is really a confused and lost soul...poor guy needs a map urgently



The war scene of Saanvi and Vishwa was amazing absolutely mindblowing

i think it seemed professional to me.. lovely idea.. i wanted a confrontation between the two but not for long...onli short where they got to know a bit...also for getting ready for Sanvi's death scene

Saanvi was silenced forever in Veer's arm. She looked so incrediably beautiful even though there was no life left in her...her face seemed to be full of a glow of life. she had made a homeless Vishva into a princess
Sanvi sumaiya ke liye acha he karti...uske paas maangne ko toh bohat kuch tha par usne Vishva ko he maanga... hum Vishva mein he Sanvi ko dhund lenge....the letters from Saanvi..



all of the above really made me feel very very sad.. i was already sad as it was.. and reading the above made me even more sad.. aww...i didnt mean to make u sad di but i guess those few parts were depressing or more emotional i guess...i felt sad after writing it...if i saw this on TV i wud cry for sure

Vishva: bohat achi hai...sochti hoon ke agar is duniya ki har ek maa aise hai toh mujhe bhagwan ne ye sukh kyun nahin diya
this was a lovely lovely dialogue... amazing... thank u...there will be a strong bond between Vishva and Niviriti...here is where Vishva will really find her mum


Veer: agar dekhenge tab he...baat ageh badeh gi.

Veer: ab jao...jahan tum jaogi mein tumhe dhoondh lunga..ye payal ki awaz mujh tak poonch jayegi...
i loved both the dialogues of Veer above..especially the bold one ... wow... waiting to see scenes like this in the serial too me too wanna see something like this on screen...Veer is getting confident in love...not so shy as Dharam...n is a very romantic guy only at times i guess


Dharam had not realised that the main Guruji had come to greet them..he was too busy staring at Siya...he looked at her smiling away choosing flowers...he smiled to himself. There was no response from Dharam...he was too busy examining Sia trying to catch a butterfly. Dharam still didnt respond...this time feeling happy at seeing Sia playing with the butterfly
Guru: Dhayan kahan hai apka...Shukar hai ke apki siksha abhi tak shuru nahin hui varna apko saaza zaruur milti

this scene was absolutely hilarious.. i really wonder how the boys are going to concentrate and complete their studies... the rate at which they seem to be proceeding...Dharam is completely lost in Sia...that makes me laugh...yh the boys will find it hard in lectures but i guess in practicals they will be fine 😆

the bird gives Veer a peck to indicate he understands



awwwww



Precap: Vishva slaps Agni. Vishva: tumhari himmat kaise hui humme chune ki. Veer arrives at the scene...looking furious



omg you seem to have left the story pretty much at tenterhooks... wonder what happened and why.. yep it was on a tenterhooks....but theres a bigger surprise in the latest part-PT30-agni's in love 😆

me in bold

nways thanks agen Shraddha di...ur comments mean alot to me

Enjoy the following parts and im waiting for saturday for u to update ur FF 😳

Shona

o o her dakoopan is revealed to the parents... shucks.. but... i have a feeling nivritti will suport her .. hai na.. 😳
nice part.. i see that you have started making the parts longer and more descriptive... and thank you for your comments on 13... 😳

who deslikes your work shona it's fabulous part loved verr and vishva's scene thanx.

hiri

wow! great part shona! 👏 👏 👏 (just like always 😛 )
a dakoo.. i guess shera hits agni again and he scared so acusses her of being a dakoo 😆

I liked this part........ and I generally accumulate 2-3 parts before reading 😃
Poor Agni..... he actually saved Vishwa from falling and got slapped not once but twice.......... and knowing Veer and Vishwa, they must have been hard blows 😆 Neki ka to zamana hi nahi hai 😛

@shivani-thank u
@shradhha di-yh the parts are getting longer for sure
@hiri- aww thank u
@archana-thank u-lol gd theory
@minnie-thx-tru blows cuming from veer n vish are definately gonna be hard...tru neki ka toh zamana hi nahin

update coming up!

shona

Me waiting eagerly Shona 😳 Update as soon as u can 😛

next part:

Back in the boys Vidyale they learn that the main Guruji's health is really bad and his assistant is out of station so their parikesha was cancelled for a few days

Dharam: ab hum Sia se kaise milenge

Veer: kuch humme he karna hoga


they boys go to meet the main Guruji

Dharam: Pranam guruji

Guru: jite raho

Veer: guruji ab apki tabiyat kaisi hai

Guru:pehle se behtar

Dharam: umm guruji hum...hum woh samne gurukul kiska hai

Guru: arre mein toh bhool gaya tha tum logo ko Ambika Ma ke Gurukul ke bare mein baata na...woh Ambika maa ka gurukul hai aur wahan Rajkumari ati hai siksha lene...suna hai iss bar do rajkumariya hai...

Veer: guruji...kya humme wahan Ambika maa se milne jane ki ijazat hai

Guru: haan...hum chahte hai ke jab tak hum teekh nahin ho jate app teeno wahan ja kar unka updesh sune...Rajya ke bare mein....

Veer: haan ye toh bohat achi baat hai...hum kab ja sakte hai

Guru coughs

Guru: aaj hi kuch deer badh


a servant comes in followed by a messenger

Messenger hands the message to Dharam who reads it aloud

Rajkumar,Dharam,Veer aur Agni

umeed hai app khushal hai aur swast bhi
hum apse aaj milne ah rahe hai


Maharaj Aryavardhan

The boys are told to go and prepare for the "guests"


on the otherhand Agni is in his room

Agni: Uss Veer ke itni himmat ke usne humme,Maharaj Agni ko...aur us Vishva ke itni himmat....Vishva...usse

He recalls her face being so close to him for the first time....

Agni: uska chehra kuch jana pehchana lag ta hai...


on the otherhand in the girl's gurukul Sia and Vishva are shown making malas(garlands) of flowers when Ambika Maa comes in

AM: sia,vishva apka aaj ka updesh deeri se shuru hoga...aaj aryanagar ke teeno rajkumar apke saath updesh sunne ayenge

sia n Vishva's face lighten with smiles

AM: arre Rajkumar Vishva hum toh batahna he bhool gaye apke pitahji apse milne ah rrahe hai

Vishva: sach!

later that day Arya, Jv n Nivi came along with Samar singh whom they had met up on the way

all the kids come outside to greet their respective parents

Nivi: Rajkumari Vishva app kaisi hai

Agni comes forward

Agni: ye koi Rajkumari ya Rajkumari ki dost nahin balke ek dakoo hai dakoo

Nivi: kya

Agni: haan ye dakoo hai aur...

a tear drops out of Vishva's eye as she thinks abt her past and what agni is accusing her off...and the thought of now losing both Samar's support and Nivi's love

DV come up with something

Dharam: agni kya tumhare paas koi sabhot hai...

Agni: woh...

Veer: aur Agni ye sab tumhe kaise paata

Agni thinks of teh time wen he went to meet Shera to tell her what Dharam looks like n all

JV: ye kya keh rahe ho beta...jo jante ho woh sab keh do agni

Agni was silenced for he didnt know what to cook up

Veer: ye kya kahe ga Jai mama...hum paata te hai apko....Maharaj Aryanagar ke ek ilake mein jab lutere aye teh tab Rajkumar Vishva behs(get-up) badal ke sab dakoo ko bagah diya tha

Dharam: aur pitahji shayad tab Agni ne usse dekha tha aur Aryanagar ke logon ki madat karne ke jaga...is ne Vishva par he Shak kar liya

Vishva was crying and Samar singh looked anger and annoyed

Arya: humme maaf kardijiye Samar aur Vishva beti...Agni se galti ho gayi

Samar: hum is bar maaf karte hai par bar bar apni bachi ka upmaan hum nahin sahenge...Vishva

Vishva hugs him tightly

Veer: Maharaj Samar singh undar chaliye...kahana tayaar hai

Samar along with Vishva,Nivi,Veer and Agni n Jv go in

Dharam remains with Sia

Sia: humme tumhare pitahji se kab milwa rahe ho

Dharam: aaj hi...par pehle humme bua se bhi baat karni hogi

Sia: agar tumhare pitahji nahin maane toh

Dharam: woh maan jayenge

Sia: par phir bhi nahin maane toh kya mujhe choodh doge

Dharam: tum ye pehle bhi dekh chuki ho...Vishva ne paata ya toh hoga...Saanvi ke bare mein

Sia: haan

Dharam: Saanvi mein kuch buraye nahin thi par hum phir bhi usse nahin pyar karte teh kyunki hum tumhe chate hai...Sia meri zindagi mein sirf tum ho aur tumhe rahogi...aur koi nahin...phir jise jo karna woh karle

Sia gives him a hug

Sia: hum tumse bohat pyar karte hai

Dharam: accha humme toh pata he nahin tha

Sia: joothe...

they play around for a bit before going inside


Precap: Vishva is standing under a tree and shaking the branches to make the flowers fall on her....Veer is watching this from behind a tree and nivi sees this😳


Enjoy

Shona

I loved it Shona.. I liked Agni becoming a fool n gettin scolded.. 😆
Precap: Vishva is standing under a tree and shaking the branches to make the flowers fall on her....Veer is watching this from behind a tree and nivi sees this 😳 awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... I cant wait until tomorrow..