Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 20

next part shona cant wait anymore 😉 😃

Shona a little busy today so she will be updating a little later than usual 😊

awesome.You could have made Veer sing Kabutar Ja...Ja...Ja..(kidding yaar)YOur story is really worth its wait.

yup shona is a little busy but she told me that she would be updating soon so pls. wait patiently.... 😆

hey shona i luv our ff it is simply awesome

i also liked the saanvi part it reminded me of jwala she also sacrificed her life for prithvi

hamara rt hai hi aisa ki kiska bhi aa jata hai us par

**TEJASVI**

Rajat tokas-token of love & friendship

ur smile makes my day .......keep smiling rajat

u r so cuteeeeeee rajat

i generally try and group 4-5 parts so that i feel like nothing comes in between the story... i feel like im reading a lovely tale... 😍

this time your ff made me laugh and cry.. 😭

Charusena was lost somewhere and the only people Veer cod make out

when i read this i was laughing out loud....😆 as usual charusena was always lost.. 😆

The war scene of Saanvi and Vishwa was amazing absolutely mindblowing

👏 i think it seemed professional to me.. lovely idea.. 👏

Saanvi was silenced forever in Veer's arm. She looked so incrediably beautiful even though there was no life left in her...her face seemed to be full of a glow of life. she had made a homeless Vishva into a princess
Sanvi sumaiya ke liye acha he karti...uske paas maangne ko toh bohat kuch tha par usne Vishva ko he maanga... hum Vishva mein he Sanvi ko dhund lenge....the letters from Saanvi..

all of the above really made me feel very very sad.. i was already sad as it was.. and reading the above made me even more sad.. 😕

Vishva: bohat achi hai...sochti hoon ke agar is duniya ki har ek maa aise hai toh mujhe bhagwan ne ye sukh kyun nahin diya
this was a lovely lovely dialogue... amazing...

Veer: agar dekhenge tab he...baat ageh badeh gi.

Veer: ab jao...jahan tum jaogi mein tumhe dhoondh lunga..ye payal ki awaz mujh tak poonch jayegi...
i loved both the dialogues of Veer above..especially the bold one ... wow... waiting to see scenes like this in the serial too 😭

Dharam had not realised that the main Guruji had come to greet them..he was too busy staring at Siya...he looked at her smiling away choosing flowers...he smiled to himself. There was no response from Dharam...he was too busy examining Sia trying to catch a butterfly. Dharam still didnt respond...this time feeling happy at seeing Sia playing with the butterfly
Guru: Dhayan kahan hai apka...Shukar hai ke apki siksha abhi tak shuru nahin hui varna apko saaza zaruur milti

this scene was absolutely hilarious.. i really wonder how the boys are going to concentrate and complete their studies... 😆 the rate at which they seem to be proceeding...

the bird gives Veer a peck to indicate he understands

awwwww 😳

Precap: Vishva slaps Agni. Vishva: tumhari himmat kaise hui humme chune ki. Veer arrives at the scene...looking furious

😲 omg you seem to have left the story pretty much at tenterhooks... wonder what happened and why..

before replying to all ur comments which mean alot to me im gonnna end teh wait of the next part:

ok Raja the bird enters Shera n Sia's room n makes a noise due to which both princesses wake up

Sia: ye kya hai aur yahan kya kar raha hai...nikal pehko isse

Vishva: nahin...dekho yahan pe ye kapada bandha hua hai

Vishva takes the cloth, as soon as the cloth is detached from the Raja he takes off and out of the window on the way though gives Sia a fright as he closely misses her head when flying

Vishva opens it up and reads while Sia looks on
humari kal mulakat hogi
tab tak ke liye apni
kidki ke bahar dekho
tumhe tumhara Rajkumar mileh ga

Vishva: ye kisne likha hoga

Sia: tumhe sach mein nahin bata...soch ye kaun kar sakta hai

Vishva: tumhara matlab hai ke...

they both dash to the window and look out to teh window of the boys GK where they see 2 handsome prince smiling back at them

Vishva: humme Veer se aaj milna hai

Sia: tum kaise mil sakti ho...yahan se wahan jana...bina kapade jaana namumkin hai

Vishva smiles at her and says

Vishva: pyar mein kuch namumkin nahin...baas dekhti jao

She looks at Veer n with a few motions of sign language explains to him where to meet

in DV room

Veer: Dharam mein abhi aya...aur agar na aoun toh meri bistar pe gade laga dena

Dharam: par veer tum ja kaha rahe ho

Veer: woh mein aah ke bataunga

Veer leaves through the window carefully climbing down the trees and reaching the ground

Vishva on the other hand shows tremendous skill and talent of being a superwoman and also climbs down through the window and runs ahead

put is suddenly pushed against a tree...she trys to scream but is unable to for somebody puts a hand over her mouth

She looks into a pair of glowing eyes...they were filled with so much love and it was all for her at this moment in time....he took his hands down

Vishva: Veer tumne humme darahi diya tha...

Veer: Veer ki Premika ho kar daar gayi

Vishva: woh tumne kaat mein kya likha tha...kal ko mulakat

Veer: woh tumme kuch he gantoh mein paata chal jaye gaa...

Vishva: ek baat poonchu...tumhe kaise paata tha ke hum kab idhar se guzrenge aur iss he raaste se tumse milna abhi ahrahe hai

Veer: itni jaldi bhool gayi...tumhari payal ke awaz se mein tumhe kahin se bhi dhoondh lunga....

they hear a noise of footsteps coming this way

Vishva: Veer koi ah raha hai

Veer: toh

Vishva: toh matlab kya...jao yahan se aur subha milna humse...wahan us bageeche ke bagal mein....aur haan sia ke aur se Dharam ko

Veer: shhh...koi huma...

tehy hear a rustle of leaves and look to see who it is but the figure makes a run for it

veer n vishva follows to see who it is but they person escapes

Veer stop running near the gate of the GK

Veer: mein tumse kal subha milunga...tab tak ke liye...

he blows her a kiss n jumps over the fence and climbs back to his room

Vishva watches all this with a smile...back in her room later she wonders who that person was


in Agni's room a figure is shown removing a shawl...the persons'a face is revealed...its Agni himself 😆

Agni: mera shak sahi nikla...Veer Rajkumari Vishva ke peeche hai...par is baar mein usse jeetne nahin dunga...Vishva sirf meri hai...mein usse pyar karta hoon aur usse kisi aur ke nahin hone dunga....vishva sirf agni ki hai...sirf agni ki!!!!

the following morning while everyone is sleeping Vishva wakes up and gets ready before leaving to pick out flowers in the bageecha but above all she was going to meet Veer

she didnt know what it was but even the thought of meeting Veer bought a sense of happiness to her and she had this indescrible feeling in her stomach which she had never had before

Vishva saw some beautiful flowers up in a tree and so climbed up to reach out for them....but being knew to wearing heavy lehngas she slipped and fell...into somebody's arms...she had her eyes closed...she opened them slowly expecting to see Veer's face but she recieved a huge shock when she realised she had infact landed in Agni's arms who was smiling at her

She quickly got off and stood up

Vishva: TUM

Agni: aur kaun?

Vishva: tumhari himmat kaise hui humme chune ki

She gives Agni a tight slap

just then Veer arrives and looks at whats going on and looks furious

He goes over to agni and SLAP

Veer: agar ladkiyon ki izzat nahin kar sakte toh unka apmaan toh maat karo

Agni: veer!

Veer: chilao maat...varna mein ye bhool jaunga ke tumara aur meri koi bhi rishta hai

Agni looks at Vishva

Vishva: chale jao yahan se

Agni: chala toh jaunga...aur tumhe aaj ki pariksha mein dekh lunga Veer

Agni leaves...apparently he is scared of the look Veer had on his face...He knew never to mess with Veer when Veer has that look in his eyes

Veer and Vishva stand there looking on

Precap:
Arya,Jv and samar singh coem to meet the kids n agni says to them

Agni: ye koi rajkumari ya rajkumari ke dost nahin par ek dakoo hai dakoo....

Vishva is shocked and so are Arya n Samar singh


Enjoy

Shona

Great part shona.. worth the wait 😛 Loved the meeting of Veer n Vishwa 😳 The name vishwa suits her more than shera 😛

Thanks a lot for the update great piece of work lets see what reaction will JV, Arya & Samar singh give when they come to know that vishwa is a dakooo I hope sia dharam & veer save her 😃 😳

thanks a lot,its really nice 👏