My story of DV ending..(veer shera scenes)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey DV k end me i think yun hota k veer shera k paas jaata or pehle he wud praised her beauty..k tum bohot khubsurat lag rahi ho..just to divert her from anger. shera would say muje tumse baat nahi karni dil to chahta he k is chaaku se tumhari jaan leloon.then veer wud smile HAAI...meree liye isse zyada khushkismati ki baat kya hosakti he to theek he mein tayaar hoon kyun k me tumhare liye kuch bhi karsakta hun,mein tumse dewaano ki tarha mohobbat karta hoon..tum meri zindagi ho or is liye jaan bhi desakta hun,lo mardo.shera wud have been surprized then veer wud have taken the knife n knealed down presenting her the knife in a royal way,n then shera wud say utho shera ka yeh matlab waqai me nai tha,to kya meri zindagi mujhe maaf kia.shera wud have said haan baba kia ab utho bhi.he wud hve said muje to yakeen nhi hota k jis ladki se kabhi me larta tha usse me pyar kar bethunga.she wud have blushed n then he wud have said ankhein band karo and wud have carried her up shera wud have said shera ko neeche utharo agar tumhara paun pisal gaya to..he wud say nahi shera wud say kisi ne dekh liya to,he wud say dekhne do,mujhe sirf itna dikhai deraha he k tum aaj such me aik rajkumari lagti ho. shera tum se aakhri baar kehrahi he neeche utaro.he wud put her down.then shera wud push veer on one side of bridge n say shera tumse ik pal bhi door nahi rehsakti,she wud hug him tightly n say shera tumhare bahon mein khojana chahti he n close her eyes.veer wud pass his hand thru her long hair n thenhum dono ko aik dusre se koi alag nahin karsakta n kiss on her forehead n wud say calmly ab chalein,she wud say nahi jaane ka man nahi kar raha.he wud smile n say itna lagao acha nahi he socho agar me is duniya se chalagaya tum kese rahogi mere bina she wud quickly put her hand on his lips n say khabardar aesi baat ki to warna shera tumse dur chali jaygi, she wud b leaving but veer wud hold her arm n wud slow pull her towards him n wud keep his hands around her waist itna pyar karti ho mujse, shud wud say haan n feel shy as he wud b so close to her n wud hug him again n rest her head in his chest,he wud say ab jab tum meri ho to tumhe ik tohfa dena chahta hun he wd give a ring to her she wud ask yeh kya he he'll say hamare pyar ki nishani,or jab b tumhe meri yaad aaigi ise dekh lena or aankhe bnd kr k mera naam lena aap ka ye aashiq aap k saamne aa jaiga..😊 .................hows that plz comment..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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woooohhhoooooo..
kya baat hai yaar
mar javan...
haila..kitna kitna cuuutuuuu romantic scene tha..mein toh faint hote hote bachi..
Gosh mere dill mein toh guitar baaj rahe hai..goshhhhhhh
Hey do u mind if everyone writes the scene they wanna cont here..
coz i dooo...
Keep up the g88888 wrk.....awesum, fab..brilliant..soooooo romantic yyaar...
u left me red..like after blushin...lololllzzzzz
Love ya loads.....t.ccccccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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šŸ¤—awwwwwwwww.........so chweet
man they shud have u as a dialogue writer for the romantic scenes btween them
you no i was kinda dissapointed at da end that shera itni asaani se maan gai.
i was kinda pissed but readin dis scene made me feel all bettašŸ˜³šŸ¤—

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