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Posted: 12 years ago

#1031

😳resBy DivyaDaya13

Mohit Raina aka Shiv and Mouni Roy aka Sati Still image from Devon ke dev.Mahadev.

Mohit (thinking) She is so beautiful, want to hug her back. Mouni meri jaan itne paas hai aur main yun buth banke khada hoon, this is not fair. Ye director chance hi nahi de raha.

Mouni-(blushing and thinking)- Such broad shoulders, he is so strong. Ji chahta hai saari umar, yun hi hug karti rahoon. pata nahi Mohit ka dhyaan kahan hai. Maine use itni zor se pakda hai, aur ye expressionless kyun hai. Par jo bhi ho, ye scene karne main bada accha lag raha hai. Kaash iss scene ka phir se retake ho.

Mohit (thinking)- Main use wapas hug to nahin kar sakta, par jaan bhujkar galati to kar sakta hoon. Director iss scene ka phir se retake lega aur isi bahane meri pyaari Mouni phir se mere gale lag jayegi (mohit is so busy thinking and is so happy with his idea that he smiles, instead of keeping a harsh face)

Director- Arre Mohit Mouni kya kar rahe ho, Dhyan kahan hai, aaj kya ho gaya hai tum dono ko. Chalo phir se retake lete hain.

(That's it Rimi, I am not good in ff. Sorry for the delay dear).

By Vabs
Mohit finding it difficult to control himself talking to himself saying Mouni please stop running towards.

Mouni my love you are here and slams into his chest and hugs him tightly

Mohit no why did you hug me I can't hug you back even if i want to as I have not been asked to.

Mohit you are too beautiful mouni but I am sorry

Mouni my love just stand there and let me feel you to my heart's content.

By Mrmrfrevr
Inspired by all Divya didi and Vab's work I am trying too to write .😊
Mohit Raina aka Shiv and Mouni Roy aka Sati Still image from Devon ke dev.Mahadev.

Mohit and Mouni shoot a scene where Sati has to hug Shiv but Shiv has to stay expressoinless and wordless.
Mohit:(thinking)I can't control myself.She hugs me so tightly and I am affraid that she also listens my heart beat .😳😳😳Oh God!She is smiling.(whishpering to Mouni)Why are you smiling??😳
Mouni:Hmm..Please don't disturb me.I am hearing my name right now.☺️Your heartbeat tells everything which you can't.☺️
Mohit:😊😳tumhe chhodne ka mann nahi kar raha...
Mouni:par tumne mujhe pakda kahan hai??😆Okay I will do something...Suddenly she starts singing..."you are my honeybun sweetie cutie pie/you are my strawberrie cake,Chocolate moose..."
Mohit:Huh...yeh kya bol rahi ho??😕
Director:Mouni kya kar rahi hai aap??
Mouni:Sorry actually when I hugged him I thought that I hug my teddie😛.And whenever I hug him I sing this song for my teddie...😊so.
Director:Okay...Retake..
The scene being retaken..
Mohit:I am a teddie for you??😡
Mouni:Okay 😊You are my sweety pie...😊
Mohit: Noo...
Mouni:Okay baba...You are my Mohit...😳 Happy?
Mohit:Yeah😃By the way you sing so well.aur tumhari awaz v bohot meethi hai...😳Please ek aur gana gao na.Issi bahane yeh scene v retake ho jayega...😊
Mouni:Okay...By the way kya gayoon??
Mohit:Wohi jo kal ga rahi thi...that bengali song...Amar Ogo Bodhu Sundari...
Mouni:You know benali😊
Mohit:Thoda sa...
Mouni:Okay..."Amar ja kichu ache sob tumi he/tumi bina e mon morubhumi je/Hero r Heroine/tumi ami chirodin/ Dhora dao e bahute he kinnori/Jani tomar e chol chaturi..."☺️(Whatever I have, my everything is you.Without you my life is as empty as dessert.We like as hero and heroine will stay forever together and keep embracing each other☺️.Then the girl will say to the boy I know you trick me☺️)
Mohit:And woh "Bodhu Sundari" wala line aur uske pehle jo tarifwala line hai woh v gao na...😳
Mouni:"eki salaj hasi/kajal chahni/amar bon palashi/mor mon mohini/amar hriday sagare tumi sonar tori...Amar Ogo Bodhu Sundari"(Your sweet and shy smile,your deep, dark eyes are awesome.You look like a flame of forest(Palash or Kimshuk pushpa refers in scriptures as flame of forest.I don't know its english term. Sorry) You look like a enchantress. You are the golden boat in my heart's Ocean...You are my beautiful bride...dear)
Mohit:hmm...Don't worry soon the day will come...😉☺️
Mouni:Huh!😕
Mohit:Nothing😆
Director:What happen to you guys??Mouni You sing so well but we don't need this here...Okay Retak again..And you two...I give you a 15mins break...Jitna gaana gana hai ga lo...has lo...blush kar lo...uske bad...Please do the shoot yaaar.
Mohit and Mouni:(together)Okay...😃😳

By Mrmrfrevr

Originally posted by foram
guys time for an ff

the ff must be the most romantic one

Today is 28th Sept...😊Mouni's birthday. She wore a beautiful white dress and looks dead drop gorgeous and beautiful. Everyone come and wish her for happiness and prosperity and success in her life.But she expects someone else to come and wish her:>)
Mouni:Thank you Suhanna Ma'm and Thank you Nikhil Sir. Thanks for coming.Please enjoy the party.😃.(Thinking)Yeh smile jis ke liye hai woh to ab tak nahi aya😔.
Suddenly Rishina comes behind from her and hugs her so tightly...
Rishina: My sweet, lil sister Many Happy returns of the day.😃Bhagwan kare tujhe woh sab kuch mile jo tujhe chahiye...😉😛
Mouni:Thanks😳(and her eyes are still searching someone...😉Someone who is very very special for her.Without his wish,without his presence her birthday will not be completed.😉)
Rishina:😆tu v na...entrance pe kab se khadi hai???
Mouni:matlab??tum sab k liye yehi intezar kar rahi thi...😡By the way why all you are so late???
Rishina:Sorry meri gadi kharab ho gayi thi raste mein...to..😛But tu khadi hai entrance mein phir v mujhe nahi dekh payi...😆Kis ke dhyan mein khoyi huyee hai??😉
Mouni:😲Woh main...
Rishina:jiske dhyan pe khoyi huyee hai woh back door se aa k kab se tujhe dekhe ja raha hai...😆Abhi udhar bar counter k pass khada hai...😆Tu v na...
Mouni:😳Main abhi...
Rishina: Ha ha ja...😆
Mouni comes to Mohit but suddenly she lost her words...she can't find what to tell or not...and looks at him with teary eyes.
Mohit:hey don't you dare to cry today(he says with a false anger)otherwise your make up will be spoilt.
Mouni:Oh!If my make up will spoil you won't love me any more.
Mohit:No dear...when you will be 60 I will still only love to you.I really care for you and want to spent my rest of life with you and want to stay together with you forever...for all eternity.😊
Mouni:Your these sweet words are my best ever birthday gift 😳.I love you too and want to be with you and want to be mother of kids 😳too.
Mohit:😊😊Happy birthday dear.And hug her tightly.They both are smiling then and in background this music is played"baby come stand by my side/come and be my glad in life/wanna be,which you wanted to be me/I give you all my love in full of my life...Baby..."They are just lost in each other...Suddenly a photographer ask them for a photo..
Mohit and Mouni(together):Sure😃. And they give this shot.
Hey foram di I wrote this. I hope you and other guys will like it. I don't know whether it is the most romantic one or not.But I will be waiting for your reaction.😊

By Divyadaya13

Originally posted by foram
guys time for an ff

the ff must be the most romantic one

Ye photo dekhkar main itni mantramugdh ho jaati hoon, ke kuch soch hi nahi pati hoon. Such a romantic pose. Kya FF likhoon samajh main nahi aa raha. You start the FF dear Rimi, this time i want to take inspiration from you. Par ye photo dekhkar ek Advt. yaad aa gaya-

"Ye Fevicol ka majboot jod hai tootega nahin"😉😆

And

Originally posted by divyadaya13

😃

Photographer-Come on Bday gal and Mohit, aap dono ka bhi ek photo ho jaye.

Mohit thinking- Wow yahi mauka hai, ise haath se nahi jaane doonga.

Mohit and Mouni shyly come and stand together.

Photographer- Are yaar kya kar rahe ho dono, koi accha pose do yaar, aap ke fans bhi photos dekhenge.

Mohit- thinking Yahi mauka hai, apne dil ki baat ko bina kuch kahe batane ka.

Mouni ( comes near and stands very close to Mohit) eveh she is thinking- How

handsome he is looking today, but a bit tired too, poor guy he is such a perfectionist. I hope he is fine and fit. Kaash ke main kuch kar paati. I luv him so much.

Mohit- Taking the chance immediately holds her close. and all his tiredness goes away and he starts giving his dimpled smile. Even Mouni feels so happy and leans on his strong and broad chest.

Photographer- Say cheese. (click)

and when we fans saw the pic the next day🤬. Hum sabne ye saare expressions diye😃

By Vabs

Mouni is wondering where Mohit is

Mohit walks in at that moment

Photographer is taking no chances as he wants to capture this moment

He calls Mouni and says can you stand next to Mahadev

Mohit walks up and says someone call

Mouni says I did and stands close to him

Photographer wants to take some cozy pics of the two of them

Mohit puts his arms around her waist and pullls her close to him seeing this Mouni puts her hand on his chest and both smile for the camera.

Mohit wishpers you look ravishing tonight

Mouni you look dashing yourself.

Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago

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Foram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1032

Dont do it right nw.
Do it in new At.
Double kaam mat kar.

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divyadaya13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1033

Originally posted by: foram.

yeah wiki pedia mentioned her as sati/parvati so even i imagined her as parvati

Mujhe bhi aisa hi laga tha, aur main bahut khush bhi thi, par.😭

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divyadaya13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1034

Rimi tumhara ff main padh nahi payi abhi tak, sirf intro hi dikhaye deeta hai, pls help kar. Aur aaj maine bhi do teen ff likhe hain, tumne padha kya dear.

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divyadaya13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1035

😭2 days main thodi busy rahoongi family ke saath, to jyaada aa nahi paoongi. u all pls be in this AT friends.

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divyadaya13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1036

God night and lots of luv to my dearest Mohit Mouni and all my friends. see u all soon.

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Paramita Ray

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1037

Originally posted by DivyaDaya13
Rimi tumhara ff main padh nahi payi abhi tak, sirf intro hi dikhaye deeta hai, pls help kar. Aur aaj maine bhi do teen ff likhe hain, tumne padha kya dear.

Yes didi. I read your ffs and those are superb.👏Right now I am trying to merge all your works along with others.
About my ff thread wala ff Didi it will be a long story.I have just given the introductions of the character and and character sketch, Soon will update it. Remember once you have told me to write something on MRs. So I try to do through this. Hope you like this. And please do comment there and tell about my flaws and mistakes.I hope that I can clear your doubts.😊

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Paramita Ray

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1038

😊@Foram di actually the ffs are spreaded in all over this AT. So I need to gather them in one place .Otherwise at next AT it will be a huge problem to me . So I am starting this from here. By the way you wrote some really beautiful ffs di. Hats off to you.👏