Shiv Gauri:one word at one breath

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The gurgling sound of the brook echoed through the vast mountains as it rebelliously made its way through the strong pines flowing above the gigantic rocks. There was a dip in the foams by a delicate white hand soon the fragile fingers clutched itself together with a single drop of tear...the sobbing grew louder as the hand continued to remain inside the water till a strong masculine palm slowly supported the fragile fist and led it outside the water. His calm face slowly turned towards her and all his smile was swept away when her eyes were red with tears before he could say something she walked passed him and could only go as far as his arms length for his large palms clasped her small wrist. He the Mahadev father of the universe had more than one way to deal with a young human girl who happened to be the sole owner of his magnamous heart. " The deer in the woods would not be too pleased with you" came his soothing voice she shot an angry glance at him was this all the Trikaldarshi could say? her silence questioned him, a confusing phrase? Detecting her puzzlement he further added " you have been gifted with the eyes of those lovely animals and all you do is make them turn red?" She could not take it any further and tried to escape his clutches in the process he loosened her fist discovering a single rudraksh inside it. He the lord of the universe did not have to think in order to know that all his beloved ever wanted to do was undo the past and the past began from a single rudraksh found in the brook. "Gauri we are one and whatever happened in the past has nothing to do with our future" were the only words needed for him to utter and she was sobbing in his chest. She wanted to ask for forgiveness through her silent weeping and secretly wished to know how much he missed her, "i missed you more than eternity Gauri but above all i missed your dance."

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG you are back! You are the 1 na who use to write frm shivji point of view. The last post i read of you was premi shiv and vairagee shiv. You are the same person na. And dis post is also superb.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi! Love your work...this one is too good...hope cvs read ths and add some of it to their narrative...simply beautiful!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: foram.

OMG you are back! You are the 1 na who use to write frm shivji point of view. The last post i read of you was premi shiv and vairagee shiv. You are the same person na. And dis post is also superb.

yes forum..now I remember the name..she wrote those posts...n I must say Gunakesri is 1 of a fine writer..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so passionately written keep write more love to read it again n again 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg dijju u r back??!!
Completely lost contact over the past few months!
So happy to see something written by u!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This Was Something Speechless...Beyond Comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u dear friends for such lovely comments luv u all...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pls do write some more na
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wow, you are back, always loved your OS.

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