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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello forum waalos 🤗
allz well? 😛
I have seen yesterdays epi for nth time but my heart says "ONCE MORE" 😆
k so in this occasion wanna write and OS 😛
As we have read the spoilers and there it was said that when Jata asks sati to imagine shatabish she imagines Shiv 😍...so am modifying it a little 😳

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Sati sat on one of the stones while Jata was preparing to make the Statue.,her presence was merely being felt as she was sitting still without saying a word.Sati was remembering all those days when she had met shiv and also the way he would sent her back with disappointment and sadness."Sati close your eyes",Jata's musical tone broke her reverie and she looked up with surprise.Jata was standing near her and was smiling at her.She stood up and said in fretful voice,"What?".Jata said in quizzical tone,"Questioning people is your hobby I think,I said you to close your eyes,it seemed as if you were thinking about someone", he paused a little and then said in a playful tone,"Was it Shiv?",Sati became furious and retorted,"How dare you ask such question and why swill I close my eyes?",Jata chuckled and said,"Devi again you are asking question instead of answering.Okay let it be now close your eyes and think a beutiful face of your to-be-husband",he paused a little and said,"Shatabish".
Sati became thoughtful while Jata kept looking at her mischieviously.Then she said in the same angry tone,"Okay fine".She slowly closed her eyes and Jata's smile slowly faded.He thought that the eyes that used to search for shiv was now refusing to even look at him,the lips that used curve into a smile seeing him was now serious,Jata thought that shiv yearns to be with her,to make her understand why she should go away from him but alas this was making her retreat into a world of sorrow and pain.
Sati had closed her eyes but the picture that came in her mind was not of shatabish but of Shiv,all those memories came like gushing water into her mind and finally she saw the image of Ardhanarishwar.Jata was smiling again as he knew what statue he was going to make.He started making the statue,but before he could complete the female part of the statue sati's eyes snapped open.She looked bewildered,her eyes travelled from Jata to the statue and back again at him.Jata was about to say something when sati cried,"This si not right,you shouldn't have made this ",her eyes were full of fear ,Jata came near her and said,"So I was right you haven't forgotten Shiv.",Sati glared at him,tears rolling down her cheeks,"Why din't you tell me?why did you make it?",she sounded dreadful,Jata was quite,Sati said,"If my father comes to know about this he will be very hurt,this is not right.",and before Jata could say any furthur,she turned on her heels and ran from there,Jata cried,"Sati stop! Sati...",but the sound of her anklets had already faded away and Jata stood grimly beside the unfinished statue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wooowww.
It is sooo nice yaar i wish that the same happens... bt i don't want Sati to leave Jataa like this...

U noe wat the best part was???? it was this:
.She slowly closed her eyes and Jata's smile slowly faded.He thought that the eyes that used to search for shiv was now refusing to even look at him,the lips that used curve into a smile seeing him was now serious,Jata thought that shiv yearns to be with her,to make her understand why she should go away from him but alas this was making her retreat into a world of sorrow and pain.

And even this:
"This si not right,you shouldn't have made this ",her eyes were full of fear ,Jata came near her and said,"So I was right you haven't forgotten Shiv.",Sati glared at him,tears rolling down her cheeks,"Why din't you tell me?why did make it?",she sounded dreadful,Jata was quite,ati said,"If my father comes to know about this he will be very hurt,this is not right.",and before Jata could say any furthur,she turned on her heels and ran from there,Jata cried,"Sati stop! Sati...",but the sound of her anklets had already faded away

plzzz
keep writing this was just soo good...
u nnoe i was deeply mesmerized only by reading it... but wat if it happens... i will surely start crying to to there immense luv 4 each other...
gr8 job...
luved it...


thanx alooot 4 sharing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So sad About ...Daksh ...🤣

what ever he can do he cant erase shiv from sati's heart...

he always think that "see putri what are all iam doing for u" lekin kya faida hai prajapati...ur efforts are in vein

ur ss is fantastic easily portrayed what exactly going on ...
in all our minds ...Thumbs up👍🏼asmi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh what a great story 🤗it's FANTASTIC!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolfizzy

wooowww.

It is sooo nice yaar i wish that the same happens... bt i don't want Sati to leave Jataa like this...

U noe wat the best part was???? it was this:
.She slowly closed her eyes and Jata's smile slowly faded.He thought that the eyes that used to search for shiv was now refusing to even look at him,the lips that used curve into a smile seeing him was now serious,Jata thought that shiv yearns to be with her,to make her understand why she should go away from him but alas this was making her retreat into a world of sorrow and pain.

And even this:
"This si not right,you shouldn't have made this ",her eyes were full of fear ,Jata came near her and said,"So I was right you haven't forgotten Shiv.",Sati glared at him,tears rolling down her cheeks,"Why din't you tell me?why did make it?",she sounded dreadful,Jata was quite,ati said,"If my father comes to know about this he will be very hurt,this is not right.",and before Jata could say any furthur,she turned on her heels and ran from there,Jata cried,"Sati stop! Sati...",but the sound of her anklets had already faded away

plzzz
keep writing this was just soo good...
u nnoe i was deeply mesmerized only by reading it... but wat if it happens... i will surely start crying to to there immense luv 4 each other...
gr8 job...
luved it...


thanx alooot 4 sharing...

thnx alot fizzy...😛 I was so mesmerized with Jata that couldn't help myself 😆
I don't think any such thing is goin to happen but still wanted to do sm fortune telling 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vanadhi

So sad About ...Daksh ...🤣


what ever he can do he cant erase shiv from sati's heart...

he always think that "see putri what are all iam doing for u" lekin kya faida hai prajapati...ur efforts are in vein

ur ss is fantastic easily portrayed what exactly going on ...
in all our minds ...Thumbs up👍🏼asmi

yeah poor Dakshu 🤣 noa ctually I feel happy seeing him suffer like this 😆
thnx for liking it dear 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: NST1983

Oh what a great story 🤗it's FANTASTIC!👏

thnx alot sweety 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You made me have tears in my eyes😭..🤗seriously I coudl picturise every scene what you described..yaar awesome..& for all you knwo this is what may happen actually dear..awesome asmita.👏.keep doing it..I just loved it..YOU ARE TOO TOO GOOD>.🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@hema di-thnx di 🤗...thnk u 4 luving it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...superb OS dear...its beautifully written...👏👏


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