DevMeera ff-Tera Mera Rishta- part 4,Pg-5 (17/1/18) - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice - well written! you've captured the emotions and action well.

Please do write more I am sure many of us would like to read.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Nice waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT WAS AWESOME! EAGERLY AWAITING THE NEXT PART

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: velvetscarf

Very nice - well written! you've captured the emotions and action well.

Please do write more I am sure many of us would like to read.


Glad u loved it dear...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: deveera

Nice waiting for next part

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alexlovestoread

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT WAS AWESOME! EAGERLY AWAITING THE NEXT PART

Glad u loved it dear..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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here is Part 2

PART 2

Dev was sitting on the bed silently. And only he was having flashes of losing Meera. But suddenly he remembered what the policeman Samar said. He immediately called out for Zohra aapa who was cutting fruits for him. Zohra aapa immediately went to him.

Zohra aapa-"kya ho Gaya Dev"

Dev-"mujhe Samar se baat Karni hai...usko phone kijiye"zohra aapa dialled Samar's no. and she put the phone on Dev's ear.

Samar-"hello.."

Dev-"Meera ke baare mein kya pata Chala tha.."

Samar-" actually sir Ma'am ke dead body and unke body ke koi bhi traces Nahi mile"

Dev immediately moved his ear away from the phone.

Dev-" zohra aapa abhi ke abhi Abdul ko phone lijiye"

Zohra aapa-" kya ho Gaya Dev"

Dev-" aap pehle Abdul ko phone kijiye" zohra aapa immediately called Abdul.

Abdul-" haanji aapa...kaise Yaad Kiya"

Zohra aapa-" beta, Dev ko tujhse baat Karni hai"

Abdul-" maaf kijiyega aapa par Jo hua Uske baad main Dev se bilkul bhi baat Nahi Karna Chahta..."

Zohra aapa-"beta sun..."Abdul was about to disconnect the call but he heard Dev shouting

Dev-" Meera zinda hai" listening this zohra aapa was literally shocked. And suddenly she realised that Abdul was saying something on other side.

Zohra aapa-"he...hello..."

Abdul-" aapa Dev ko phone dijiye.." zohra aapa immediately put the phone on Dev's ear and dev held the phone with his hand instead of having severe pain in his arms.

Dev-" hello...Abdul...Meera shayad zinda hai..."

Abdul-" tumhe kaise pata??"

Dev-" Police ne bataya ki Meera ki body nahi milli hai..

Abdul-"par ho sakta.. but before he could complete

Dev-"abdul tum hospital aa jao phir main batata hun.. and he disconnected the call and gave the phone to zohra aapa

Zohra aapa-"dev tum ye kya keh rahe thein?

Dev-"main jaanta hun aap iss baat pe bharosa nahi kar pa rahi hai...par jahan tak meri samajh keh rahi hai...aur mera dil bhi...ki Meera Zinda hai.. Zohra Aapa put her palm on dev's shoulder and gave him a weak smile.

Zohra aapa(in her mind)-"kaash Meera zinda ho...Meera ne tujhe jeena sikha diya tha phir se...bas allah se yahi dua hai..ki iss baar tera dil na tootey... and she she looked up in the air and prayed to god.

After sometime, Abdul came to the hospital and entered in dev's room and stood there for sometime seeing the condition of dev, he was in. Abdul went towards dev

Abdul-"tum vo kya keh rahe thein dev...

Dev-"main batata hun... then he told about what police said

Abdul-"par ho sakta hai na ki meera...

Dev-"aesa kuch nahi hua hai...main jaanta hun...meera zinda hai...aur main usse dhoondh ke rahunga...aur iss kaam mein mujhe tumhari zaroorat hai... abdul looked at dev and then at zohra aapa.

Abdul-"theek hai main tumhari madad karunga...

Dev-"amod ko kho diya hai maine ab Meera ko nahi kho sakta...(he looked at Zohra aapa) aapa...mera discharge papers ready karwaiye...main aur time nahi waste karna chahta...

Zohra aapa-"beta abhi teri halat aesi nahi h...

Dev-"main nahi jaanta... and tried to get off the bed but he stumbled and abdul held him

Abdul-"khud theek rahoge toh na Meera ko dhundh paoge..

Dev-"abdul tum samjh kyu nahi rahe ho...mere paas wakt nahi hai..mujhe dar hai ki kahin...vo log Meera ko kuch kar na de..

Abdul-"kon vo log? then dev told him how Mahek and Munim ji escaped.

Abdul-"phir bhi tumhe theek hona hoga...

Dev-"main ghar par reh kar theek ho jaunga..

Abdul-"theek hai main discharge ke liye dr. Se baat karta hun..

Dev-"hmm abdul was about to go but he turned back

Abdul-"dev..(dev looked at abdul)..tumne Avi ko kuch bataya... dev took a deep breath

Dev-"nahi...aur abhi Avi ek camp ke liye gaya hai..

Abdul-"theek kiya...main dr. Se baat karke aata hun and abdul went from there. And dev started planning.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow I loved the way you are proceeding with the story.
Well done
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chit15

Wow I loved the way you are proceeding with the story.

Well done

Glad u loved it dear so far..
Thank you😳

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